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应用文写作之
图表类作文
以青岛一模卷为例
Review(B3U3 Integrated skills)
bar chart 柱状图
pie chart
饼状图
line chart
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青岛一模
学校英文报正在开展以Popular Books among students 为题的讨论。请依据图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
读书状况描述
简单评论
你的建议
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Step 1 Build the structure
Genre: a short essay
Structure:
Paragraph 1 A brief description
Paragraph 2 A short comment
Paragraph 3 Your suggestions
Step 2 Build the language (para.1)
如图所示：
The chart shows/indicates/illustrates….
According to the chart, …
As is shown in the chart,…
As can be seen from the chart,…
描述结果：
…percent of the students ..., while … percent of them ...
Students who choose...are … percent and Students who choose…are… percent respectively.
Your problems
There are most students reading science books. In contrast, there are least students reading classics.
I find 43% students read science books, 13% students read classics, 26% students read comic books and 18% students read sport &music books.
Tip: accurate & precise
Tip: use diverse expressions
Rewrite it
根据一次最近在我们学校进行的调查，43%的学生喜欢读科学书籍。另一方面，26%的学生喜欢读漫画书。
According to the survey conducted in our school, 43% of the students are fond of reading science books while 26% of the students like comics.
喜欢体育与音乐类书籍的学生和喜典文学作品的学生各占18%和13%。
Students who prefer sports and music books account for 18% and students who like classics are 13% respectively.
Step 2 Build the language (para.2)
评论现象：数字背后反映的现象或问题
It is a rewarding sight to see that…
However, the importance of .... can’t be ignored since....
分析原因：造成现象的原因
The reason why...is that
The change in...largely result from the fact that...
Your problems
In my opinion, it is better for us to read science books.
Tip: reasonable & objective
Rewrite it
看到这么多的学生经常阅读是一种有益的景象，因为阅读能够开拓学生的视野。
It is a rewarding sight to see so many students reading regularly because reading can broaden their horizons.
但是，阅读经典作品的重要性也不能忽视，因为这能启发我们的思想，帮助我们树立一个正确对待人生的态度。
However, the importance of reading classics can’t be ignored since they can enlighten our mind, helping us develop a proper attitude towards life.
Step 2 Build the language (para.3)
你的建议：
Moreover, never should we..
As far as I'm concerned, it would be wise...
It is necessary/ essential that (should)...
I hold the point of view that...
Your problems
Take action to improve us to create a better world.
Reading popular books is a hobby, which shouldn’t influence daily life.
Tip: practical & relevant
Rewrite it
我认为，学校可以组织一次读书节活动，旨在促进学生的阅读兴趣。
From my point of view, our school can hold a reading festival, aimed at arousing students’ passion for reading.
在此次读书节活动中，学生可以参加丰富多彩的活动，如加入读书俱乐部和参加阅读漂流活动。
During the festival, students can take part in a variety of activities, such as joining a reading club and participate in the book drifting.
Step 3 Appreciation
According to the survey conducted in our school, 43% of the students prefer to read science books, followed by comic readers, which accounts for 26%. 18% of the students enjoy reading sports and music books while 13% of the students like to read classical books.
It is encouraging to see so many students reading regularly, as reading can improve comprehension skills and cultivate imagination. However, we should also encourage students to read books outside their comfort zone to broaden their horizons and explore new perspectives.
From my point of view, I suggest our school organize book clubs or reading groups, where students can discuss and share their thoughts. It can stimulate their curiosity and critical thinking and enhance their social skills.
Step 4 Practice
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
学习活动状况描述；
简单评论；
你的建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in varies ways.
It can easily be seen that percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they are more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it is also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.

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