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中考作文话题
人物介绍
回 归 教 材 好 句 仿 写
中 考 范 文 自 我 创 作
the wonderful story of the person and some good characters of the person 介绍人物的精彩故事和优秀品质
be one of the greatest people最伟大的人之一
be considered/famous/known as被认为/作为……而出名 [人教九(全)Unit 5 P34]
be ready to help others 乐于助人
never give up永不放弃 [人教九(全)Unit 14 P110]
make an effort 作出努力 [人教九(全)Unit 10 P75]
take...seriously 认真对待…… [人教八(上)Unit 4 P29]
回归教材 短语积累
the wonderful story of the person and some good characters of the person 介绍人物的精彩故事和优秀品质
be serious about 对……是认真的 [人教九(全)Unit 7 P54]
be responsible for 对……有责任；负责任 [人教九(全)Unit 14 P110]
sb. is welcomed by others as... 某人受欢迎是因为……
make a difference to/play a role in发挥作用；产生影响 [人教九(全)Unit 13 P98]
回归教材 短语积累
have an influence on.../want to be... 对自身的影响及想要成为的人
encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事 [人教八(下)Unit 9 P67]
keep on/stick to doing sth. 坚持做某事 [人教八(上)Unit 6 P42]
try one's best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事 [人教八(上)Unit 6 P42]
get lots of exercise 做大量的练习 [人教八(上)Unit 6 P44]
回归教材 短语积累
have an influence on.../want to be... 对自身的影响及想要成为的人
make up one's mind 下定决心
learn from sb. 向某人学习 [人教九(全)Unit 1 P7]
make great/much progress 取得很大进步
make oneself a better person 使某人自己成为更好的人 [人教八(上)Unit 6 P45]
回归教材 短语积累
中间句
①...is considered as a great person who always ...
②The reason why he/she is considered as a great man/woman is that...
原因1：
原因2：
①He/She made a great difference to...
②Under his/her leadership/ Because of his/her effort, great changes have taken place in...
开头句
①I'd like to have lunch with ..., he/she is...
②I'dlike to have lunch with ... who is...
回归教材 句型积累
结尾句
①I'm expecting this lunch already.
②I'm looking forward to this lunch already.
期许：
中间句
①Over the lunch, I will...Then I will ask him...
②Over the lunch, I will not only ... but also ask him...
谈论
内容1：
谈论
内容2：
①Besides, I'll ask him for some advice about...
②If I have enough time, I'll ask him for some advice about...
回归教材 句型积累
假如你有机会和任何一个名人共进午餐。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
①定主题:
②定人称:
③定时态:
与任何一个名人
共进午餐
第一人称
一般将来时
走进中考
④定文体:
⑤定要点:
1.要点:1)这个名人是谁;
2)你为什么想和他或她共进午餐;
3)你想和他或她谈论什么。
注意:“任何一个名人”为任何年代的任何一个出名的人
说明文
介绍你想共进午餐的人是谁;阐述你想与他或她共进午餐的原因;具体介绍你想与他或她说的内容
2.要求:1)文中不得出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2)词数100左右。
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开篇:引出
主题
想和谁共进晚餐，如任正非/武
大靖……(have lunch with)
谋布局 列要点 写句子
I'd like to have lunch with___
_________who is__________.
正文:介绍原因以及谈论内容
原因1
原因2
He/She is considered as a great person because_____________.
谈论内容1:了解他/她的故事
(learn about/listen to)
谈论内容2:向他/她请教经验
和建议(ask for advice about)
He/She___________________.
Over the lunch, I will________
__________________________.
I'll ask him/her for some advice about_______________.
写作技巧指导
谋布局 列要点 写句子
期待……如果……,我将……
(look forward to)
结尾:表达期许
I'm looking forward to______
________. I will____________
if I_______________________.
写作技巧指导
I'd like to have lunch with Ren Zhengfei who is the founder of the well known Chinese tech company Huawei.
Mr.Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. And under his leadership, Huawei has become a high tech giant worldwide. Over the lunch, I will not only listen to the stories of his success, but also ask him what is important to make it happen. If I have enough time, I'll ask him to give some advice to us teenagers today.
I'm looking forward to this lunch already.
【高分范文——亮点点拨】
句使用who引导的定语从句升格，使句子结构更加丰富，增加文章亮点；
句使用并列连词短语not only...but also...升格句式，连接两个简单句，使文章更加精炼，内容更加丰富；
句使用高级短语look forward to代替动词expect，使文章用词更丰富、高级。
随着神舟十三号载人飞船的胜利凯旋，“中国首位太空教师”王亚平受到了青少年的喜爱与欢迎。请你以“What can I learn from Wang Yaping”为题，写一篇演讲稿，介绍王亚平的事迹并分享向她学习的感悟。
1. 要点： 1)王亚平身上有哪些优秀品质；
2)你要向她学习什么； 3)你打算如何做。
2. 要求： 1)文中不得出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2)词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
自我创作
What can I learn from Wang Yaping
Hello, everyone!
It's my honor to introduce an astronaut hero—Wang Yaping.
Wang Yaping is a 43 year old woman who was born in a small village in Shandong Province. Doing sports is her hobby and she exercises every day.
As we all know, she is proud of China and loves our motherland very much. To achieve her astronaut dream, she always overcomes the difficulties in training and never gives up.
Wang is an example to us all. In the future, I will work for my country like her. I will run every day to have a strong body. Also, I'm going to make a weekly plan and study hard to improve myself. What's more, no matter how hard it is, I will stick to my dream!
Thank you!
Thank you

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