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My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. It’s amazing to watch as they discover their world.
While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway. Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel.
We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother. But after a long wait – and looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother – we realized the tiny squirrel was lost.
Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick research, we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for milk and supplies was in order.
More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate his age, how and when to wean (断奶) him, and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own.
Our daughters and I took turns in feeding “Squirt.” Kaytlin took on the most responsibility. She taught him to eat from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds.
To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a few weeks he became more active. He would chatter (吱吱叫) for his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them for sleep. It wasn’t long before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild.
His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass some and then run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material.
One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels.
One night, Squirt didn’t come back to our house and it rained hard.
2023年黑龙江、吉林、安徽、云南四省联考
Step1: Find the clues
My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our
children. It’s amazing to watch as they discover their world.
While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine,
our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway.
Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel.
Step1: Find the clues
My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our
children. It’s amazing to watch as they discover their world.
While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine,
our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway.
Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel.
Step1: Find the clues
We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off
its mother. But after a long wait – and looking all around our house for
signs of a nest or a mother – we realized the tiny squirrel was lost.
Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an
expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed
that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick
research, we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting
chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for
milk and supplies was in order.
Step1: Find the clues
We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off
its mother. But after a long wait – and looking all around our house for
signs of a nest or a mother – we realized the tiny squirrel was lost.
Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an
expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed
that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick
research, we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting
chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for
milk and supplies was in order.
Step1: Find the clues
More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate
his age, how and when to wean (断奶) him, and that we should let
him go as soon as he could survive on his own.
Our daughters and I took turns in feeding “Squirt.” Kaytlin
took on the most responsibility. She taught him to eat from a bottle,
and she woke in the night for his feeds.
Step1: Find the clues
More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate
his age, how and when to wean (断奶) him, and that we should let
him go as soon as he could survive on his own.
Our daughters and I took turns in feeding “Squirt.” Kaytlin
took on the most responsibility. She taught him to eat from a bottle,
and she woke in the night for his feeds.
Step1 find the clues
To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a
few weeks he became more active. He would chatter (吱吱叫) for
his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them
for sleep. It wasn’t long before he was weaned onto solid food and
reintroduced to the wild.
His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a
child, he would play in the grass some and then run back to
Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding
nest material.
Step1 find the clues
To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a
few weeks he became more active. He would chatter (吱吱叫) for
his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them
for sleep. It wasn’t long before he was weaned onto solid food and
reintroduced to the wild.
His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a
child, he would play in the grass some and then run back to
Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding
nest material.
My husband and I 1. enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children
2. care for him ourselves
3. we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own
4. To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong
Kaytlin 1. Kaytlin took on the most responsibility
a baby red squirrel 1. was lost
2. Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry.
3. Within a few weeks he became more active.
4. It wasn’t long before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild
Step2 classify the clues
Characters Related information
Step3 decide on the theme
1. enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children
2. we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own
主题通过孩子来表达, 让松鼠回归自然
主题升华：动物值得被关爱，同时更值得放手，让其回归自然。
One day, while playing in the trees, Squirt met a family of gray squirrels.
1.衔接句1: Squirt和一群松鼠互动，加入他们玩耍
2.过渡句：……
3.衔接句2: Squirt 经常出去玩且晚归
One night, it rained heavily, and Squirt didn't come back home.
4.衔接句3：我们感到很担心
5.过渡句：...
6.主题句：孩子们看到Squirt离开很伤心，但是也为它高兴。
搭框架
Step4 predict the plot
One day, while playing in the trees, Squirt met a family of gray squirrels.
1.action: Squirt和一群松鼠互动，加入他们玩耍
2.response1: 我们感到很开心（emotion）
3.response2: Kaytlin 说话
4.action: Squirt经常出去玩且晚归
One night, it rained heavily, and Squirt didn't come back home.
5. response: 我们很担心它又丢了（呼应前文“be lost”）
6. action: Squirt 出现了，但是它最终会离开。
7. response: 孩子们的感受(emotion)
8. topic：孩子们看到Squirt离开很伤心，但是也为它高兴。
定细节 action - response (emotion )
Step4 predict the plot
One day, while playing in the trees, Squirt met a family of gray squirrels.
1.action: Squirt和一群松鼠互动，加入他们玩耍
At first, Squirt was hesitant, but he soon realized that they were friendly and he started to play with them.
2.response1: 我们感到很开心（emotion）
As we watched him chasing them up and down the tree trunks and branches, pleasure welled up in my heart.
3.response 2: Kaytlin 说话
Kaytlin leaned in and whispered to me ,“This must be where Squirt truly belongs.”
4. action: Squirt经常出去玩且晚归
From that day on, Squirt went outside to play with his new friends, and started coming home later and later.
One night, it rained heavily, and Squirt didn't come back home.
5. response: 我们很担心它丢了（呼应前文“be lost”）
A surge of anxiety swept over us when we thought that he might have got lost again.
6.action: Squirt 出现了，但是它最终会离开。
But the next day he appeared on the branch of a tree near our house, as if to say goodbye to us before he disappeared into the forest.
7.response: 孩子们的感受(emotion)
The girls felt a mix of joy and sadness.
8. topic：孩子们看到Squirt离开很伤心，但是也为它高兴。
They were sad to see Squirt go, but they were also delighted that he was finally back where he belonged --- in the wild.
完整：
One day, while playing in the trees, Squirt met a family of gray squirrels. At first, Squirt was hesitant, but he soon realized that they were friendly and he started to play with them. As we watched him chasing them up and down the tree trunks and branches, pleasure welled up in my heart. Kaytlin leaned in and whispered to me ,“This must be where Squirt truly belongs.” From that day on, Squirt went outside to play with his new friends, and started coming home later and later.
One night, it rained heavily, and Squirt didn't come back home. A sense of anxiety seized us when we thought that he might have got lost again. But the next day he appeared on the branch of a tree near our house, as if to say goodbye to us before he disappeared into the forest. The girls felt a mix of joy and sadness. They were sad to see Squirt go, but they were also delighted that he was finally back where he belonged - in the wild.
Fascinated /Intrigued by
came close
which
frightened
ran back to
Another possible version
Never mind
with affection
stroking
tenderly /gently
Seeming to
inspired
leaned his head out of Kaytlin’s arms
trotted towards
were exhilarated
arrival
(4)没过多久，他们就打成一片了。
It was not long before they mingled together.
From then on
hanged out
newly-made
increasingly late
Concerned about
creature
determined
search for
hunted
trace
complete
It occurred to/hit/struck
strode into
stride vt 大步走
scene
snuggled
breathe a sigh of relief
where
he belongs
in a choked voice

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