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writing
必修三
应用文写作
1、定题材，划要点
看一下具体题目要求写的是什么样的信件，比如说是感谢信，道歉信，建议信，求助信，倡议书，还是写申请信等等，它们书写的风格是不一样的， 然后针对题目给的一些要点进行罗列，不能漏掉其中任何一条。
2、添加具体句型和短语，衔接得当
一般分成三小段进行述写，分段述写后可以添加进去认为比较高级的句式或者短语，尤其在衔接词这块要做到新颖独特恰当，使得文章看起来有层次感。
3、检查要点和拼写，做到卷面美观
在要点都没有遗漏的情况下，要检查下具体的单词有没有拼写错误，标点符号也要确定一下用得可恰当。做到整体文章比较美观，赢得阅卷老师更高的卷面分。
本单元的主题语境是“人与社会”，话题是“科学家、科学发现和科学精神”，本单元的教学旨在帮助学生认识科学发现的巨大推动作用，理解科学家的责任担当和科学精神的价值所在。本单元的写作任务是：完成一个为学校科学节设计活动方案的任务
可能考察的题型：1. 科学相关的设计方案；
2. 科学家的介绍；
3. 计划与愿望类
U4 Scientists who changed the world
书本P51-52， 一个为学校科学节设计活动方案
Plan for the school Science Festival
Theme: Materials Physics
Does this sound a little bit removed from our daily lives Wrong. Think about smartphone touchscreens and the fibre optics used in telecommunications. In fact, we use these every day, and they were made real thanks to breakthroughs in materials physics.
U4 方案设计类
Events:
1. A lecture by Professor Wang
On Monday morning, Professor Wang will give a lecture about chemically strengthened glass, which is used as a cover for many portable devices. The lecture will be held in the school hall.
2. Science Workshop
There will be a Science Workshop on Tuesday. Students can try to make their own materials in our laboratories. We will provide many raw materials and lots of different equipment. Students will be able to find out what new materials they can make and what features their materials will have.
U4 方案设计类
如何写有关科学家的介绍？
【命题原则】：描写科学家,即通过文字间接地把人物的外貌、性格等呈现给读者。人物描写的特点是用语言描绘人物的外表、行为、心理活动等。
【写作要点】：
1.选好角度,顺序合理
角度：是指用第一人称还是第三人称来描写人物。
用第一人称时,主要是本人的经历或耳闻目睹之事;
用第三人称时,则主要是他人的经历。
顺序：是指以怎样的顺序描写人物,刻画人物的性格。
一般采用从外表到内心活动的叙述，把描写的重点放在与其他人物的不同之处。
U4 介绍类
2.突出重点,选材精当
发生在一个人物身上的事很多,写作时,我们要抓住其显著的、与众不同的方面,也要抓住体现人物性格的主要活动和事件。
3.稍加评论,画龙点睛
在描述和叙述中，要叙述与议论相结合,不要一味地叙述,要对人物进行评价,突出人物性格。
4.语言精练，时态准确：在人物描写中,语言要简短精练、生动感人。时态的使用要根据实际情况而定。
U4 介绍类
【常用话题表达】
1. He is not very strong but healthy and full of energy. 他不是很强壮，但很健康，精力充沛。
2. He is easy to get along with. 他很容易相处。
3. He is not only tall but also strong. 他不仅高而且强壮。
4. Her dream is to be a dancer. 她的梦想是成为一名舞蹈家。
5. She always smiles when she speaks to us. 她和我们说话时总是面带微笑。
6. Sometimes she is very strict with us. 有时候她对我们要求很严格。
7. Her behaviour makes everyone like having her class. 她的行为使每个人都喜欢上她的课。
U4 介绍类
请你根据下面的提示,用英语对钟南山做简单的介绍,写一篇英语作文。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
U4 介绍类
出生 1936年10月出生于南京.21世纪最出名的医学家之一。
教育背景 1953年就读于广东实验中学;1960年毕业于北京医学院。
主要成就 2003年和2020年,以钟南山为代表的医护工作者经过长期努力，抗击了非典(SARS)和新型冠状病毒性肺炎(COVID-19);2004 年,钟南山被评为“感动中国 2003年度”十大人物之一;2020 年被授予共和国勋章。
评价 他在医学领域工作60多年，取得了很多成就，是一位受国人尊敬的好医生。
【写作指导】： 第一段 总体评价； 第二段 简历介绍； 第三段 个人评价
【核心要点的不同表达】
1.面对不为人知的病毒,钟南山沉着无畏。(in the face of)
In the face of unknown viruses,Zhong Nanshan was calm and fearless.
2.当新型冠状病毒肺炎出现时,他仍奋战在与病毒抗争的第一线,寻找战胜病毒的良药。(fight against)
When COVID-19 appeared,he still fought against the virus in the first line of battle to find the best medicine to overcome the virus.
3.他日以继夜地努力工作,治疗病人。(现在分词)
.He worked hard day and night treating the patients.
U4 介绍类
Dr. Zhong Nanshan was born in October 1936 in Nanjing,Jiangsu Province.He is one of the famous medical scientists in the 21st century
He studied at Guangdong Experimental High School in 1953 and graduated from Beijing Medical College in 1960. In 2003 and 2020,Zhong Nanshan not only led but also took an active part in the battle against SARS and COVID-19.Through their hard work for several months,Zhong Nanshan and his workmates achieved remarkable results. Zhong Nanshan was awarded one of the top ten peopl moving China in 2003. In 2020,he was given the Medal of the Republic
He has been working in the medical field for over 60 years. He is a good doctor in the countrymen’s eyes and respected by all the people in China.
U4 介绍类---范文
根据下面提示,写一篇介绍屠呦呦的文章。
1.屠呦呦,著名女化学家、科学家,1930年12月30日出生于浙江宁波。
2.1955从北大学毕业后,她接受了两年半的中医培训,目在北京的中国中医研究工作。
3.1972年,她成功地发现并研制出中药青蒿素,治愈了世界各地的疟疾患者,并因此获得了许多大奖。
4.2015年10月5日,授予诺贝生物学或医学奖,成为第一位获得诺贝尔奖的中女性。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
U4 介绍类
Tu Youyou, a famous female chemist and scientist, was born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province on December 3th1930. After graduating from Beijing University in 1955, she was trained in traditional Chinese medicine for two years and a half and she has been working in China Academy of Traditional Chinese Medicine in Beijing.In 1972,she succeeded in discovering and developing qinghaosu out of a Chinese herb to cure those patients of malaria in different places of the world, for which she won many big awards. To our excitement and delight, she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Medicine on October 5th,2015,becoming the first Chinese woman to win the Nobel Prize. We are called on to learn from her and devote ourselves to scientific research.
U4 介绍类
1、文体特点：内容广泛
本单元写作为plan和wish写法。计划与愿望话题所包含的内容非常广泛，如:对学习、工作、班级活动、校级活动、团队活动、假期、节日、生日晚会、旅游、义工等社会活动的具体计划，还包括人生计划、奋斗目标或理想等长远打算，以及表达某种愿望和期待，如理想的大学、理想的专业、理想的生活、理想的工作等等。
2、审题谋篇：计划或愿望写作的正文通常有三部分组成:
第一部分: 话题，简明扼要地提出要实施的计划或所表达的愿望。
第二部分: 主体，计划或愿望的具体内容，包括时间、地点、活动内容、参与人群、活动方式等。
第三部分: 结尾，适当介绍活动的意义和作用，并寄予希望，表达决心。
U4 计划 & 愿望类
3、知识储备：
1.段首常用语
(1)When you are fed up with fast pace of life, why not... 当你厌倦了快节奏的生活，为何不..
(2)Now, I'd like to tell you something about the plan for... 现在，我想告诉你一些关于……的计划
(3)I'm writing to tell you the plan for the summer vacation. 我写信告诉你暑假的计划。
(4)With the holiday approaching, every student has a plan for it. 随着假期的临近，每个学生都对此有了计划。
U4 计划 & 愿望类
2.段中常用语
(1)In the morning, there will be a.
(2)The aim of this activity is to...
(3)During the activity, you are lucky to..
(4)It will last two weeks..
(5)We will have benefited a lot from.
U4 计划 & 愿望类
段尾常用语
(1)Finally, I'm glad to have your opinion about this plan.
最后，我很高兴听听你对这个计划的看法。
(2) Hope you will enjoy your summer vacation, too!
希望你也能享受你的暑假!
(3) I'm confident that every student will broaden the horizons.
我相信每个学生都会开阔眼界。
(4) It is certain that..have a better understanding of...
可以肯定的是，我们对……有了更好的理解。
U4 计划 & 愿望类
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自美国某中学的学生访问团，你受学校委托，负责安排当日的活动，请根据以下提示，用英文给该团的领队Smith先生写一份电子邮件，介绍活动计划并扼要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。
1.上午与我校学生座谈(话题如校园生活，文化差异等);
2.中午与我校学生共进午餐(饺子，面条等); 3.下午与我校学生游览海河。
注意: 1.词数 80左右; 2、可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯;
Dear Mr Smith,
I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Student Unionfrom Chenguang High School.
______________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
U4 计划 & 愿望类
[思路点拨]
一、审题定调： 1.体裁: 计划书信；2.人称: 第一人称为主；3.时态: 常用将来时。
二、基本结构
开头:介绍写信人的具体情况(一句话)，并叙述写信目的(一句话)。
主体:据介绍计划内容。
结尾：征求意见，期待回信
U4 计划 & 愿望类
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union from Chenguang High School.You will pay a visit to our school on June 26 and I was appointed to take charge of arranging all the activities on that day. My plan about these activities are as follows
On your arrival, we will show you around our school.Then a discussion will be held which may cover such topics as school life,cultural differences and so on,aiming to improve mutual understanding. At noon, we will prepare dumplings and noodles as main food in our school’s dining hall. In the afternoon, our guests together with some student representatives are going to visit the DaHuoQuan Park and enjoy the beautiful scenery there. After that, you will end your visit to our school.
What do you think of the plan I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
U4 计划 & 愿望类
叙事类记叙文以叙述事件为主，要通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言，使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。写作时要注意把记叙文的六要素(时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果)交代清楚。
[基本框架]
1．开头——点明文章主题。
2．主体——详细介绍经历。
3．结尾——简要归纳总结。
U4 叙事类记叙文
假如你是李华，请根据下面五幅图画写一篇短文介绍你和家人庆祝春节的经过。
年夜饭　　　看春晚　　 放鞭炮 吃饺子　　　大拜年
注意：1.词数80左右； 2．标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：春晚 the Spring Festival Gala；除夕夜 the Lunar New Year Eve
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival was really full of fun._____________________
________________________________________________________________
U4 叙事类记叙文
[常用词块]
1．wear special clothes 穿专门的衣服
2．eat special food 吃特殊的食物
3．gifts of toys for the children送给孩子们的玩具礼物
4．a family holiday合家度假
5．take part in a traditional ceremony 参加传统的仪式
6．dance and listen to music 听着音乐跳舞
7．enjoy yourself with friends or family 和朋友、家人一起玩得很开心
8．have a wonderful time过得愉快
9．a time of family reunion家庭团聚的日子
U4 叙事类记叙文
[常用词块]
10．in honour of the great poet向这位伟大的诗人表示敬意
11．go on holiday together一起去度假
12．cook delicious food做美食
13．the custom dating back thousands of years追溯到几千年前的习俗
14．look forward to the New Year盼着过新年
15．on special occasions在特殊场合
16．set off fireworks燃放烟火
17．our traditional foods我们的传统食品
U4 叙事类记叙文
精彩开头
1．The MidAutumn Festival，which falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month，is a festival with a history of about 2，000 years.
中秋节在农历八月的第十五天举行，是一个有着大约2 000年历史的节日。
2．As Teachers' Day was approaching，our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year. 随着教师节的临近，今年为了换一种方式来庆祝这个重要的日子，我们班决定举办一场晚会。
3．The MidAutumn Festival is a traditional festival of China，which is actually a day for family reunion. 中秋节是中国的传统节日，实际上是家人团聚的日子。
4．I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. 我想邀请你下周六和我们一起去附近的敬老院过重阳节。
5．I was pleased that one of my pen pals in China invited me to stay with her during the past Spring Festival. 很高兴，我的一个中国笔友邀请我和她一起度过了上一个春节。
U4 叙事类记叙文
1．On the Eve of the Spring Festival，firstly，family members get together and have big meals.Secondly，they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.除夕夜，首先，家庭成员聚在一起吃大餐。其次，他们在电视上看春节联欢晚会。
2．The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese families to get together，so we visited some of her families and relatives together. 在中国，春节是家庭团聚的特殊日子，所以我们一起拜访了她的一些家人和亲戚。
3．We'll also spend some time together singing，dancing and playing games，which we hope will make them happy.我们也会花一些时间在一起唱歌，跳舞和玩游戏，我们希望能让他们开心。
4．Besides，we tried some traditional foods，watched Dragon and Lion dance and participated in some other celebration activities，such as a temple fair.此外, 我们尝试了一些传统食品,看了舞龙舞狮，并参加了一些其他的庆祝活动，如庙会。
5.After the meal they watch TV until the clock strikes twelve. 饭后他们看电视,直到钟敲响12点
U4 叙事类记叙文 ---主体
余味结尾
1．In my point of view，it's indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture. 在我看来，探索外国文化确实值得。
2．This is a time for relaxation and celebration when people usually take this opportunity to reunite with their families or have a rest. 这是一个放松和庆祝的时间，人们通常利用这个机会与家人团聚或休息。
3．Although it happened three years ago，I never forget the evening party.
虽然那是三年前的事了，但我从未忘记那个晚会。
4．This will be an unforgettable experience.这将是一段难忘的经历。
5．Thus it can be seen that with the improvement of living standard，people begin to pursue a high quality of life.由此可见，随着生活水平的提高，人们开始追求高质量的生活。
U4 叙事类记叙文
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival was really full of fun.First，on the Lunar New Year Eve，we all gathered around having a big dinner.Then followed the Spring Festival Gala.As was reported，the Spring Festival Gala was really a hit.Many stars turned up on the stage，bringing us so much pleasure.The midnight saw us setting off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year.Then we ate dumplings.At dawn，we all dressed up and paid a visit door to door.We do hope we will have a good luck in the following new year.
U4 叙事类记叙文--范文

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