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Unit4 A glimpse of the future Period5 Writing教案
Topic Continuing a sci-fi story Teacher
Teaching Aims: 1.Improve the students’ writing ability. 2.Guide students to use suitable tense、layout、sentences and linking words to write a continuation.
Teaching important Points: Lead students to understand and master the layout、sentences and linking words effectively. Lead students to master the way to use advanced and various sentence structures.
Teaching difficult points: 1.Training students to grasp the skills of writing. 2.Stimulate students’ writing interests of learning English by writing a continuation .
Teaching methods: 1.Process-focused writing approach 2.Group work cooperative learning.
Teaching type: writing 课 时 one
Teaching procedure: Teaching contents:
Step1: Pre-writing Step2: While-writing Step3: Post-writing Guide the students to review the use of foreshadowing writing techniques in the text. Task1:Let the students read the sample text independently and understand the general ideas. Task2:Let the students think about the three questions in the book.Then discuss in groups. What happened to the prison and what was the cause What kind of job do you think Carolyn has 3. Are there any sentences that might foreshadow what will happen next Underline them. Possible answers: 1.There was a prison breakout, caused by faulty robotics. 2. She might be a prison governor. 3. Students' own answers. Task3:Encourage the students to think about what will happen next, based on the examples of foreshadowing they have underlined. Activity1:Introduce some common sentence patterns for writing an continuation. I.Useful words and phrases. 1.表示人物喜乐 be fascinated by/with her beauty 被她的美貌所吸引 be delighted at…; be joyful over/about… 对……感到很高兴 feel inspired/encouraged受到鼓舞 be in high spirits 精神高涨 2.表示人物悲伤 a strong sense of loss 强烈的失落感 fall into despair陷人绝望 break one’s heart over one's death 因某人的离世而痛心 with a heavy/sinking heart 怀着沉重的/沮丧的心情 3.表示人物愤怒 be annoyed at…因为……而恼火 be speechless with anger气得说不出话来 get mad with sb.对某人勃然大怒 express/voice one’s complaint about….对……表示不满 4.表示天气 a rainy season多雨的季节 a stormy night暴风雨之夜 continuous rain 连绵不断的雨 in the warm spring sunshine 在春天温暖的阳光里 bathe in sunshine沐日光浴 II.Useful sentence patterns. (1)喜乐 ①The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。 ②She wore a shining smile on her face. 她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。 ③Her smile lit up the whole room. 她的笑容照亮了整个房间。 ④Her face was shining with excitement. 她满脸洋溢着兴奋的表情。 (2)愤怒 ①I was seized by anger. 我(内心)充满了愤怒。 ② His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。 ③ He gave me a look of burning anger. 他愤怒地看了我一眼。 ④He glared at me with burning eyes. 他用灼热的目光怒视着我。 (3)悲伤、烦恼 ①I tried to fight back tears./My eyes were filled with tears.我努力忍住眼泪。/我的眼里充满了泪水。 ② She burst into tears and ran out of the room. 她突然哭了,跑出了房间。 ③He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他静静地站着,眼泪顺着脸颊流了下来。 ④ I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. 我感觉像沉浸在悲伤中。 ⑤ Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine. 听到这个消息,他十分绝望,借酒消愁。 (4)害怕 ①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror. 他转向我,眼里充满了恐惧。 ② She was struck with horror. 她突然感到恐惧。 ③ A flood of fear welled up in him./ Fear flooded over him.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。 ④ Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly choked. 她的心跳动得厉害,她感觉几乎要窒息了。 (5)感动、感激 ①She was overwhelmingly moved/touched by his kindness.她被他的善良彻底感动了。 ② Tears filling her eyes, she expressed her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶,表达了衷心的感激之情。 ③ With tears streaming down her face, she…. 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来,她…… (6)吃惊 ①Ben seemed surprised to hear this. 本听到这个(消息)貌似很吃惊。 ② On learning the truth,I was totally shocked. 一得知真相,我完全震惊了。 ③When he was asked,he was shocked that he could not say what occurred when the attack took place. 当被问到的时候,他很震惊以至于竟然说不出袭击时发生了什么。 ④ Everyone looked at her in astonishment.每一个人惊讶地看着她。 (7)心理活动描写 ①All of a sudden,I remembered that I had left my bag.我突然想起来我的包落下了。 ② Jane paused and thought for a moment about what she would say.简停了下来,想了一会儿要说什么。 ③ Hearing this,Tom started to fear that… 一听到这儿，汤姆开始害怕…… ④ Without hesitation, we rushed into the rain and started working together. 我们毫不犹豫地冲进雨中，一起工作起来。 Activity2:Continue the sci-fi story and share it with the class. One possible version: Carolyn had a long commute to the prison, even by air car. When she arrived, everything seemed normal, except for a robot lying at the front gate, motionless. It’s an old model, she thought. They broke down now and again. She passed through the gate, noting that everything else was apparently in order. But just as she closed her office door behind her a loud alarm sounded. Carolyn's blood froze. She had only ever heard that sound during drills. It can’t be! she thought. A general systems failure! She looked out of the reinforced glass of her office window into the prison below. Sure enough, the robots were out of control. Most had stopped moving at all. Some spun aimlessly around and around. But others were randomly operating things, including the cell gates, and she could see prisoners rushing out to freedom“Grab the robots’ weapons and run!” shouted the prisoners. Carolyn opened her bag and reached for her emergency call device. Her heart sank as she realized she had left it at home. I need to call in the police, she thought. But how Without the device, she couldn’t communicate. Nothing in the prison would work properly now. There was a voice behind her.Looking for one of these " Carolyn gasped.“Julius!"There was her second- in-command,holding an emergency caller in his hand. "What are you doing in my office " “It should be my office!”snarled Julius.“I've worked here for forty years... and the City Commissioners gave you the job as prison governor! But now you'll pay. You'll all pay! I can make every robot in every prison in the city go crazy. The prisoners will escape, and the city will burn!" Then the door burst open, and the room was suddenly flooded with riot police.And there was... Todd! “I took the air car over here to bring you this," he said quietly, winking as he pushed the emergency call device secretly into her hands.“l could see there was trouble, so l activated it to call in the police." “It was Julius,” said Carolyn, watching the police bundle Julius out of the door.“He's gone mad.” “Sure," said Todd. “But now we know how easy it is to cause a mass robot breakdown. You'll have to write a report.Make some recommendations to upgrade the robots." “I know." Carolyn slid from Todd's hug and walked towards the door. She could see the police rounding up the prisoners.“But right now, I've got a prison to run." Guide the students to make improvements to their writing.
Homework 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,之成篇的短文。续写词数应为 150 左右。 My science fiction story One day, I was taking a walk in the park. Suddenly, something like a plate of light fell from the sky,low in the middle of the green light,like a pillar.It took me a while to realize that it was a UFO. I hid behind a big rock. I saw a ladder come out of the middle of the UFO. An alien,very short, only one meter or so, with a big head, big eyes, thin and long arms, came out from the UFO. “Come out, earth man. Don't hide behind a rock,” it said in a strange voice. “My radar hand has found you.I won't hurt you. Little by little I came out from behind the rock and ran The alien’s hand stretched out and caught me. I was so scared that I pulled his hand away. At last I conquered my fear and walked slowly towards it.I gave it a drink. It put the drink on the ground, and then a jet of water flew into his mouth. I was stunned. It said it had the power to suck.It could also lift the house. I asked it to take me into the UFO, and it took me into the UFO. Here came the voice: “There is a problem with the power system, whether to repair ” One possible version: I asked it to take me into the UFO, and it took me into the UFO. There are a lot of machines in it, including one that turns light into power, and a generator that flies back to base in a second, spinning 400 million revolutions per second. The spacecraft can also pick up signals from Mars, Jupiter, Venus, etc. Here came the voice: “There is a problem with the power system, whether to repair ” The alien replied,“Yes. ” Five seconds later,the spacecraft said,“The power system is repaired.”I couldn’t help but be greatly surprised,“Your technology is really advanced, able to repair the power system in a short time!”It listened with a look of triumph on its face. Then it said,“I’m going. My name is Ka Guang. I’m a Martian.” A hundred lights flashed and the ship was gone.I just stood there. Suddenly came Mother’s voice,“Time to get up!”Oh, it is a dream!
Blackboard design Continuing a sci-fi story I.Useful words and phrases: II.Useful sentence patterns:

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