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2023年新高考英语应用文写作提分技能(模板+素材+策略)
基础话题之科学与技术
【素材集锦】
1. simplify v. 简化
2. download v. 下载
3. explore v. 探索；探测；探究
4. accomplish v. 完成；达到；实现
5. switch v. 转换
6. technology n. 工艺；科技；技术
7. virus n. 病毒
8. digital adj. 数字化的；数码的
9. automatic adj. 自动的
10. intelligent adj. 智能的；聪明的
11. advanced adj.先进的；高级的
12. breakthrough n. 重大进展，突破
13. process n.& vt.过程；加工，处理
14. update vt.更新；使现代化
15. database　n. 数据库
16. password n. 密码　
科技的 technological
...an era of very rapid technological change.
科技发生迅猛变革的时代
Today, the pace of life is increasing with technological advancements.
当今， 随着科技进步，生活节奏不断增快。
Technological innovations have brought innumerable benefits.
技术革新已经带来了无穷的好处。
A successful company must keep up with the pace of technological change.
一家成功的公司必须得跟上技术变革的步伐。
尖端的 cutting-edge/sophisticated/advanced
What we are planning is cutting-edge technology never seen in Australia before...
我们正在开发的是一种在澳大利亚从未有过的尖端技术。
Without more training or advanced technical skills, they'll lose their jobs.
没有进一步的培训或高级技能的话，他们就会丢掉工作。
More investment spending implies the use of more sophisticated equipment and machinery.
更多的投资支出又意味着使用更加先进的机器和设备。
提高生产效率 augment/enhance/boost/increase/improve/heighten productivity
While searching for a way to augment the family income, she began making dolls.
为了想法子增加家庭收入，她开始制作洋娃娃。
This is an opportunity to enhance the reputation of the company.
这是提高公司声誉的机会。
It wants the government to take action to boost the economy...
它希望政府采取行动促进经济发展。
The third-quarter results reflect continued improvements in productivity...
第三季度的结果表明生产率持续上升。
A comfortable working environment will increase productivity.
舒适的工作环境能提高生产效率。
生产，制造 produce/manufacture
The manufacture of television sets is a case in point.
电视机的制造就是一个很好的实例。
The production process is now highly mechanized.
现在的生产过程高度机械化。
They can provide individualized products for customers who have grown weary of mass-produced goods.
他们可以为那些对大量生产的商品感到厌倦的顾客提供个人化的产品。
A manufacturer can amplify the demand of a product by advertising widely.
厂商能用大做广告的方法来扩大人们对产品的需求。
Manufacturing fell sharply under the impact of the recession.
受到经济萧条的影响，制造业急剧衰退。
信息爆炸 information explosion/overload
They're used to multi-tasking and have learned to handle the information overload.
他们习惯了多任务、学会了处理信息过载。
Information overload can lead some people to tune out messages altogether.
过量的信息可能会导致一些人干脆对全部信息都置之不理。
信息时代 information age/era
It's of important significance to develop digital library in information era.
在信息时代，数字图书馆的发展具有重要的意义。
The information age speeds up everything, even our heart rate!
信息时代使一切都变快了，甚至我们的心跳也快了。
虚拟世界 virtual world
Many young people are fascinated by the virtual world.
许多年轻人对电脑的虚拟世界着迷不已。
创新 innovation/invention/breakthrough
We must promote originality and encourage innovation.
我们必须提倡创意,鼓励革新。
A new age dawned with the invention of the radio.
随着无线电的发明，一个新时代开始了。
Scientists have made a breakthrough in their treatment of some diseases.
科学家在治疗一些疾病方面已有突破。
远程教育 distance learning
I'm doing a psychology degree by distance learning.
我正通过远程教育课程攻读心理学学位。
Many people choose distance learning for its convenience and speed.
很多人选择远程学习是因为其方便和迅速。
脱离现实的 be detached/disconnected from reality
对健康的担忧 health concerns
The move follows growing public concern over the spread of the disease...
针对公众对该疾病的不断蔓延日益担忧，从而出台了这一举措。
Academics and employers are deeply concerned that students are not sufficiently prepared mathematically for university courses.
学生掌握的数学知识不足以应付大学课程，这让大学老师和用人单位非常担心。
络诈骗 online fraud
Many computer users are leaving themselves open to online fraud, research shows.
研究表明：大量的电脑用户易受络诈骗。
转基因食品 Genetically modified food
Many people believe that GM food is not good for their health.
许多人认为基因改良食品对健康有害。
Top supermarkets are to ban many genetically modified foods.
大品牌超市即将下架许多转基因食品。
远程通讯 telecommunications
...the UK telecommunications industry.
英国电信业
实时的信息交流 real-time communication/instant messaging
...real-time language translations.
实时语言转换
... users of the instant-messaging services of Yahoo, Microsoft and other rivals.
雅虎、微软以及其他竞争对手的即时通信服务的用户
人工智能 artificial intelligence
There are drugs which artificially reduce heart rate.
有可以人为降低心率的药物。
太空探索 space exploration
These new discoveries have broken new ground in the exploration of the cosmos.
这些新的发现在宇宙探索方面开辟了新道路。
Humanity has made great progress in space exploration and medicine.
人类在太空研究和医学上取得了很大进展。
宇航员 astronaut
载人航天任务 manned space mission
气象卫星 meteorological satellite
Worldwide coverage beamed by satellite generates huge audiences accompanied by global advertising revenues.
通过卫星发射的信号覆盖全世界，从而产生了大量的观众并在全球范围内赚取不菲的广告费。
气象学 meteorology
Meteorologists have predicted mild rains for the next few days.
气象学家预测接下来的几天有小雨。
天气预报 weather forecast
Sometimes the weather forecast is accurate, sometimes not.
天气预报有的时候准，有的时候不准。
Now scientists can forecast the weather accurately.
现在科学家们能准确地预报天气。
满足人类的好奇心 satisfy human curiosity
Curiosity is part of the children's nature.
好奇是儿童的天性。
过度使用 excessive usage/use sth. excessively
The government says that local authority spending is excessive. 政府称地方当局开支过大。
Excessive smoking is harmful to one's health. 吸烟过多对身体有害处。
适度使用 moderate use/use sth. moderately
Both countries have called for a moderate approach to the use of force.
两国都呼吁不要滥用武力。
...moderate exercise. 适度的锻炼
While a moderate amount of stress can be beneficial, too much stress can exhaust you.
适度的压力是有好处的，但是压力太大会把人压垮。臼族险吏嘿洒勃殖霹淹籍唯轰泪禽取奇普浆饵呻拜谆贞亡笔纽拥缩抹典价渍【真题再现1】
（2018年，天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris
就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
（1）比赛的时间、地点；
（2）邀请他的原因；
（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。
注意：（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris
I have good news to tell you. There will be a month before the end of July. when the World Adolescent Robotics Competition is scheduled to be held in my city Tianjin. With my great enthusiasm about robotics and my progress, I'm made head of a team devoted to the competition.
When we re making preparations for the event it occurred to me that you once took a prize in a similar competition. Therefore, it can't be better if you can join my team and show your talent. Meanwhile, attached to this email is a training plan I have worked out for my team, which I hope you'll read and make some suggestions. After all you have 1ots of practical tricks which will be of great use to us.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】
本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：
一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请；2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。
二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【范文点评】
书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。
【真题再现2】
（2014年，湖南卷）学校正在组织科技创新大赛，你想为日常生活中某件物品（如钢笔、书包、鞋子……)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My Magic_______”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的创意。
内容：1.说明设计理由
2.介绍新功能。
注意:1.词数不少于120个字
2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
【参考范文】
My magic pen
It is a magic pen that I intend to design for the competition organized by the school.To make it easier and more convenient for students to take notes during every class, I want the pen to be equipped with a special function, which can help me record what the teacher say in class automatically. More importantly, what has been recorded can be easily transformed into text in a short time and the text will be shown within a minute. In this way, the time that we spend in taking
notes will be saved. We will be able to have more time to go over our lessons or engage in something else that we are interested in.It sounds so great, right
【解析】
本书面表达是一篇说明文。所给出的题材十分贴近学生生活，学生能够从日常生活中的熟悉的物品适当发挥想象。
要求写一篇说明文，所给的要点也很清楚：说明学生所选物品设计理由；介绍此物品新功能。写作的时候注意以下几点：1、切合题意。仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、简明扼要。此题材学生都有话可说，但要注意说明清楚：为什么要设计此物品？此物品有哪些新功能？要点要全面。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
【范文点评】
范文简明扼要的介绍了自己创新作品。使用了些高级句型，使得文章的水平更加高级。例如： It is a magic pen that I intend to design for the competition organized by the school.使用了that引导的定语从句；To make it easier and more convenient for students to take notes during every class, I want the pen to be equipped with a special function, which can help me record what the teacher say in class automatically.使用了不定式短语做目的状语，我which引导的非限制性定语从句，what引导的宾语从句，是典型的高分句型。More importantly, what has been recorded can be easily transformed into text in a short time and the text will be shown within a minute. 使用了主语从句。To make it easier and more convenient for students to take notes during every class；More importantly；In this way使得文章表达更加准确和到位，也为文章增添了活泼气氛。
【经典演练】
1
假如你是李华。某英文报社正在举行主题为“周六关闭智能手机”的活动，你很感兴趣。请你用英文给此报社发一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表明愿意参加活动，并给出原因；
2.关闭手机后，你准备在本周六安排哪些活动；
3.表示会向同学们介绍此项活动。
　　注意：词数100左右；
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am pleased to learn about your appeal to spend a Saturday without using smart phones. I’m
very glad to join in the activity. Smart phones are playing an important role nowadays. But at the same time, we seem to be losing the skills of face to face communication.
I will present my plans for this Saturday here. After getting up, I would like to invite my friends to go for a morning run in the park. It is a good idea to help my parents prepare a big meal at noon, after which my family will spend the whole afternoon enjoying the latest movie together. In the evening, we will stay home, reading books.
It is really a meaningful activity, so I am eager to share it with my classmates.
Yours,
Li Hua
2
鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。
鼠标的必要性 对多数人来说，操作计算机，上冲浪……
鼠标的便捷性 点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除…… 编辑文本，搜索信息……
收发邮件，选购商品……
点播音乐，下载电影……
如果过分依赖鼠标……(请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点)
注意：1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
词数100左右；开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.
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【参考范文】
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.
For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it not only enables us to edit text, browse web pages and download what we want, but also helps us email people, shop online and find friends around the world. A simple click can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.
A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse
clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.
3
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom听说在中国通过扫描二维码(scan QR codes)就可以轻松实现移动支付(mobile payment)，感到不可思议。请你写封邮件告知移动支付在中国的相关情况。内容包括：
1.在中国最流行，提供了便利；
2.快捷且强大的功能：如买早餐，买地铁票；
3.改变我们的生活，引领世界。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
How are you Glad to tell you something about mobile payment in China. Convenient though many payments are in China, mobile payment is the most popular. It has made people's daily life more and more convenient. Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes.
By mobile payment, we can pay easily wherever we go. We can buy breakfast on the street and pay by scanning with our smart phone. In the subway station, we can scan with our smart phone to purchase our ticket. This is a glimpse of most Chinese's life—allowing us to bid farewell to the wallets and bank cards.
Mobile payment has greatly changed people's lives in China.It seems that China is really leading in some ways and it is also sweeping other nations.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作宝典】
科学与技术类写作的核心表达
话题单词
1.advantage n.优点
2.complaint n.抱怨
3.virus n.病毒
4.function n.功能
5.information n.信息
6.download v.下载
7.update v.更新
8.chat v.聊天
9.communicate v.交流
10.explore v.探索
11.exchange v.交换
12.convenient adj.方便的
13.technological adj.科技的
14.widely adv.广泛地
15.online adv.在线地
16.effective adj.有效的
17.fictional adj.虚构的
18.artificial adj.人造的
19.convinced adj.坚信的
20.addicted adj.上瘾的
话题短语
1.rely on依赖
2.shop online上购物
3.surf the Internet上
4.make up for弥补
5.make the best of充分利用
6.click (on) sth.用鼠标点击
7.with the development of...随着……的发展
8.make contributions to society为社会做贡献
9.be faced with new opportunities and challenges面临新的机遇和挑战
10.take effective measures to do sth.采取有效措施来做某事
提分句式
1.As is known to us, smartphones have become an important part in our daily life.We need them to chat, to surf the Internet as well as entertain ourselves.　众所周知，智能手机已成为我们生活中重要的一部分。我们用手机聊天、上、娱乐。
2.But the problem is that a number of middle school students are growing increasingly addicted to phones.　但是问题是许多中学生沉溺于手机。
3.However, no matter how attractive the Internet is, we shouldn’t be separated from our loved ones.Therefore, we should stop surfing the Internet and spend time with our families, enjoying the time when we are together.
然而，无论络对我们的吸引力有多大，我们都不应该与我们所爱的人分开。因此，我们应该停止上，与家人在一起享受美好的时光。
4.It goes without saying that modern technology brings us convenience and comfort in life.
毫无疑问，现代科技给我们的生活带来方便和舒适。
5.A cellphone can make me keep in touch with my friends and family while the Internet can provide me with almost all information.
手机能让我与朋友和家人保持联系，同时络可以提供给我几乎所有的信息。
6.Most importantly, the wide use of the computer has brought us more convenience in our lives.
最重要的是，电脑的广泛应用已经给我们的生活带来了更多的便利。

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