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2023年新高考英语应用文写作提分技能(模板+素材+策略)
基础话题之校园与交往
【素材集锦】
◆有关校园方面的词语
a sports ground运动场
campus校园
stadium体育场
canteen餐厅
be addicted to .对.....上瘾
dining room餐厅
deserve应得
cafeteria自助餐厅
get along进展
accommodations住宿
be on good terms关系好
dormitory学生宿舍
sociable好交际的
teaching building 教学楼
punctual准时的
lecture theatre阶梯教室
◆活动类词语
auditorium礼堂
sign up for报名参加
laboratory/lab实验室
quit drop a course 放弃- -门课程
students' union 学生会
pick up学会
society社团,协会
take notes记笔记
◆学习类词语
stay awake保持清醒
assignment工作，任务
cancel/call off 取消
semester/ term学期
postpone/put off推迟
mid-term exam期中考试
concentrate on集中注意力于.....
final exam期末考试
pay attention to注意
course课程，讲座
make progress 取得进步
curriculum全部课程
fail in the exam考试不及格
required compulsory courses必修课程
stay up late熬夜
optional/ elective/ selective courses选修课程
make up the exam补考
science courses理科课程
cheat in the exam考试作弊
arts courses文科课程
participate in/take part in参加
reference books参考书
make sense of理解,明白
◆描述类词语
review/go over复习
lack confidence in ....缺乏信心
take a break休息一下
be strict with/in 对....要求严格
come up with想出，提出
restless坐立不安的
extra-curricular activities课外活动
like a cat on hot bricks 像热锅上的蚂蚁
surf the Internet 上冲浪
have butterflies in one's stomach心慌,紧张
further study进修
get confused/ puzzled迷惑不解
a letter of recommendation推荐信
think highly of...高度评价
a high score/ 'mark高分
◆活动的意义
1. Extra curricular activities played a very significant role in my growth.
课外活动对我的成长起到了非常重要的作用。
2. Out-of class activities help cultivate students' social, communication and leadership skill.
课外活动有助于培养学生们社交、交流和领导技能。
3. Being part of the program as a team in the past year has made a big difference to my high school life.
过去一年内我是这项工程的一个成员,这对我的高中生活产生了巨大的影响。
4. We should not confine ourselves to the classroom. We ought to go out of the classroom, see the outside world and become a well-rounded student.
我们不应把自己束缚在教室内，我们应当走出教室，见-见外面的世界，成为一个全面发展的学生。
◆活动的内容
1. When they take part in an international camp, Chinese students are given the chance to go abroad, meet new people and get involved in all sorts of activities.
当中国学生参加国际夏令营，他们会得到出国的机会，见- 见新面孔，参与各种各样的活动。
2. The volunteer program provides us with a platform to practice and learn.
志愿者工程给我们提供了实践和学台。
3.Li Hua, aged 18, started the campaign to decorate the school with vivid paintings.
李华,18岁,发起了一项运动，用生动的绘画装饰学校。
◆学习生活中的困难和成绩
1. Every student, no matter how talented or hard-working, will come across difficulties in his or her study.每位学生，不管他或她有多么聪明,多么努力,在学习中总会遇到困难。
2. Every time before an examination, I am so upset. I'm afraid I may fail in the exam and can't live up to my teacher's expectations.每次考试前,我非常烦躁，害怕考不及格,辜负了老师的期望。
3.It has been many years since I started learning English, but only recently do I make some progress. 我学英语有许多年了,但是,最近我才取得了一些进步。
◆学习和实践的重要性
1. It's very important for us to acquire excellent English language skills.
获得精通英语的能力对我们来说非常重要。
2. Only by making good preparations may you succeed.
只有做好充分的准备你才可能会成功。
3. Slowly I built up my confidence to express myself during our group discussion.
慢慢地,我树立了自信,能够在我们的小组讨论中表达自己了。
【真题再现】
（2015年，全国卷I）假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：
1. 栏目介绍。
2. 稿件内容；
3. 稿件长度：约400词汇
4. 交稿日期：6月28日前天
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；
3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作分析】
本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息要求给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，内容是美国节日风俗和中学生生活。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：首先，简单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。2、建议Peter介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活。3、稿件的要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【范文点评】
本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.运用了过去分词作后置定语， And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be popular among, so long as,look forward to , hear from等。
【经典演练1】
近来你校举行的业务考试中，几位英语老师的英语作文虽然紧扣主题、无语法错误，但因书写不尽如人意仅仅得了不及格的分数(10 -12分)。此事在教师中引起极大的反响，请你结合这个现象谈谈英语书写的重要性。内容包括：
1.介绍背景；
2.书写的重要性；
3.书写对于学生的意义。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Recently, our school held a contest so as to examine teachers' English level. Surprisingly, although their compositions were strictly to the point and no grammar mistakes can be found, several teachers got unsatisfying grades( 10- -12) on account of their terrible handwriting.
What is reflected from the phenomenon is the importance of handwriting. I's a basic ability to a person, especially to us students. On the one hand, beautiful handwriting is easy to identify and creates a good impression on those who mark papers. On the other hand，we students can take advantage of good handwriting to get high marks in the College Entrance Examination.
In conclusion, handwriting is of so much significance that everyone should attach great importance to it.
用it作形式主语改写范文中划线的句子
It is surprising that although their compositions were strictly to the point and no grammar mistakes can be found, several teachers got unsatisfying grades( 10- -12) on account of their terrible handwriting.
佳句1 ：On the one hand，beautiful handwriting is easy to identify. .
临摹1：这个句子很难理解，因为有很多生词。
The sentence is hard to understand because there are many new words.
佳句2：In conclusion, handwriting is of 50 much significance that everyone should attach great importance to it.
临摹2：那个笑话太有趣了,听了真叫人忍俊不禁。
The joke is so interesting that you can’t help laughing after listening to it.
【经典演练2】
你班要举办以“After-class Activities”为主题的演讲活动，请你结合自己的认识呼吁同学们参与课外活动并为该活动写一篇英文稿件。
注意:1.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数;
2.词数100左右。
Good afternoon, everyone,
Thanks!
Good afternoon, everyone,
It's my great honour to have this chance to make a speech here. Nowadays, after-class activities are playing more and more important roles in our school life. For me, I have taken part in various kinds of activities such as sports, art, and reading, which benefit me a lot. These activities also free me from the heavy work of study. To encourage more students to join in the after-class activities, I think our school should organize more activities which can interest and suit students. What's more, the school should leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.
Come on, my dear friends. Let's take part in after-class activities. I'm sure they can make your school life more colourful.
Thanks!
用variety短语改写范文中划线的句子
For me,I have taken part in a large variety of activities such as sports, art, and reading.
佳句1：Nowadays, after class activities are playing more and more important roles in our school life.
临摹1：络在我们的日常生活中发挥着越来越重要的作用。
The Internet is playing more and more important roles in our daily life.
佳句2：These activities also free me from the heavy work of study.
临摹2：先进的教学方法把学生从繁重的作业负担中解脱出来了。
Advanced teaching methods have freed students from the heavy burden of homework.
【经典演练3】
自国家倡导构建和谐社会以来，和谐之风吹遍神州大地。校园也沐浴在和谐之风中，但校园寝室里时有不和谐现象。请你以一名高中生的身份，根据以下要点写一篇英语短文：
1.寝室里时有不和谐现象；
2.创建和谐寝室生活的重要性；
3.如何创造和谐寝室生活。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：和谐的harmonious 寝室dormitory
In my school sometimes harmony is disturbed in students' dormitories.
As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to us students. On the one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study. On the other hand, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together.
Luckily, there are several ways to create a harmonious dormitory life. Firstly, we should try to get rid of our bad habits, if there are any. Secondly, when an annoying situation appears, we'll just have to learn to put up with and understand each other.
In my opinion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for our study and life.
用effort短语改写范文中加彩的句子
In my opinion, we should make every effort to build a harmonious dormitory life for our study and life.
佳句1：On the one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study.
临摹1：他全身心投人到事业当中,忽略了家庭。
He puts all his heart into his career and ignores his family.
佳句2：Firstly, we should try to get rid of our bad habits, if there are any.
临摹2：如何清除这些东西是个大问题。
How to get rid of these things is a big problem.
【写作宝典】
谚语是洋溢着文化气息的哲理性语言, 是智慧的结晶。在应用文写作中，如果考生能够恰当地运用一两句, 可增强文章的表现力, 提升作文层次, 让阅卷老师眼前一亮。现辑录一些写作中常用的谚语, 以飨考生, 望熟读背诵之。
1. Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量。
2. Time is money. 时间就是金钱。(一寸光阴一寸金）
3. Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。
4. Time lost cannot be recalled. 光阴一去不复返。
5. Failure is the mother of success. 失败乃成功之母。
6. An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening. 一日之计在于晨。
7. It is the early bird that catches the worm. 早起的鸟儿吃到虫。(捷足先登)
8. Take time while time is, for time will be away. 机不可失, 时不再来。
9. Actions speak louder than words. 行动比言语更有说服力。(事实胜于雄辩)
10. Better late than never. 迟做总比不做好。
11. Honesty is the best policy. 诚实为上策。
12. One is never too old to learn. 活到老, 学到老。
13. It is love that makes the world go round. 爱使世界更美好。
14. Every man is his own worst enemy. 最大的敌人就是自己。
15.Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
16. Do nothing by halves. 凡事不可半途而废。
17. To stand still is to move back. 逆水行舟,不进则退。
18. If at first you don’t succeed, try, try, and try again. 再接再厉, 终会成功。
19. Haste makes waste. 欲速则不达。
20. When in Rome do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗。
21. Where there is life there is hope. 有生命就有希望。(留得青山在, 不怕没柴烧)
22. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难之交才是真正的朋友。
23. Health is better than wealth. 健康胜于财富。
24.Rome was not built in a day. 冰冻三尺非一日之寒。
25.Well begun is half done. 好的开端是成功的一半。
26.The longest journey begins with the first step.千里之行, 始于足下。
27.Industry is the parent of success. 成功源于勤奋。
28. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
29. Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. 世上无难事, 只怕有心人。
30. Details are the key to success. 细节决定成败。
31. Never put off until tomorrow what may be done today. 今日事今日毕。
32. You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success. 人必须有自信, 这是成功的秘密。
1. So if you want to learn English well, work harder. Just as the proverb says, “no pains, no gains”. 如果你想学好英语, 勤奋些, 正如谚语所说的, “一份耕耘, 一份收获”。
2.As the saying goes, “Everything has two sides”. On the one hand, physical exercise is good for your health. On the other hand, if you don’t deal with it properly, it will do harm to your health. So we should look at the matter from two sides. 常言道, “任何事物都是一分为二的”。一方面体育运动对身体有益; 另一方面, 如果处理不当, 就会对身体有害。因此, 我们应当一分为二地看待事物。

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