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浙江省历年中考真题分类汇编：书面表达（应用文写作）
一、书面表达
1．（2021·杭州）假定你是李平, 请阅读以下邮件, 接受邀请并回复。词数 80 左右, 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Hi Li Ping, How is everything going with you Next week my cousin Mike is staying with me We're having a party next Saturday. Please come! We'll have lots of drinks. But if you remember, can you bring some Chinese food The party will be starting at 6 pm. What time do you think you'll be coming Ill probably need one or two people to help me tidy up after the party. Do you think you'll be able to stay and help Anyway, hope you can make it. Please write back to tell me if you can come or not. All he best, Matt
Dear Matt,
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Li Ping
2．（2021·金华）假如你叫 Daming，本周六你们班要去浙江大学开展研学活动（study tour）。请根据下列表格中的内容，给外籍教师 Mike 发一份邮件，告知你们的计划，并邀请他一同前往。
注意∶
1）文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；
2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3）词数∶80～100；
4）邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
内容要点
内容要点 参考词汇
When and where to go Zhejiang University, this Saturday
How to go by train
What to do visit ...,talk with ... ,learn about ...
What to take passport
Others meet at the school gate, 7 :30 am,-….
Dear
Mike,
……
Yours,
Daming
3．（2021·丽水）
外教Steve爱好武术，喜欢运动。他想在任教期满前再体验一次中国文化。假设你是李华，请根据下面的要点，写一封邮件，邀请他到你家过周末。
weekend plan / activities 内容要点 参考词汇
sports (or music/ drawing) paint, play basketball, ….
experience of Chinese cultures make jiaozi, write with a. Chinese
brush, …
注意：
1）文中必须包含上表中的两个要点，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息；
3）词数∶80～100；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi. Steve! I'm Li Hua. I hear you'd like to experience some more Chinese cultures before going back. Yours, Li Hua
4．（2021·台州）假如你是李华，请给你的外国好友 Andrew写一封电子邮件，介绍你校美食文化节 (food festival) 的相关内容及举办目的，并邀请他参加此次美食节。邮件内容包括∶
Time 2: 00 p.m. Friday. June 25th
Place the school playground
Acclivities cook, have something delicious...
Aims experience Chinese food culture, raise money tor
charity.
注意∶
1）邮件必须包括表格中的所有信息, 可适当发挥;
2）邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
3）词数∶ 80-100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
To: Andrew
From Li Hua
Hi, Andrew How is it going ▲ Looking forward to your reply. Li Hua
5．（2020·杭州）假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。内容包括接受邀请并询问至少三个相关细节 (如具体地点……)
注意：
1）词数80左右；
2）可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Ping, We would like to invite you to give us a talk on Chinese folk music. The talk will be on the evening of Friday, July 10th at 7:00. If you're able to come, please reply in writing to this invitation by July 2nd. Hope you can make it! Larry Smith President of Foreign Students' Club
Dear Larry,
Yours,
Li Ping
6．（2020·嘉兴）假设你是 David，打算今年夏天去 Batsford Arboretum游玩。请给植物园写一封简短的邮件，询问你想了解的信息,如用餐、门票价格等。
注意：1）邮件中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
2）词数:30-50。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
David
7．（2020·湖州）假定你是李雷，请你对英国朋友Bruce的邮件进行同复。你可以根据邮件内容作适当发挥，邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和校名，词数：80-100；短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
To LiLei@
Subject Exchange Visit!
Hi there, Li Lei! I'm really
excited about going to be at your school for the exchange visit later this
year—hope you are too!! But the thing
is, I really don't want to do the wrong thing while I'm there and especially
at the school, so I'm wondering if you could tell me a bit about the rules,
about phones, clothes, food... Could you
send me a quick email I'd love to hear from you. Love, Bruce
To Bruce@
Subject Re:Exchange Visit!
Hi, Bruce! Thanks for your email. I'm looking forward to the
exchange too! Love, Li Lei
8．（2019·杭州）假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复，词数80左右。
9．（2019·嘉兴）假设你是李华。你在某英文网站上看到一则招募中国志愿者（volunteer）的广告。请根据该广告中所提供的两个志愿者项目，选择其中一个，结合自己的实际情况，给项目负责人写一封电子邮件，表达你希望参加这个项目的愿望，并阐述理由。
Project1 Place: A small village in the west of China Activities: ◆teach children English ◆visit the old people's
home ◆work on the farm Project2 Place: A primary school in the north of
Thailand Activities: ◆set up a small library ◆give Chinese lessons ◆play games with children
注意：①邮件中必须包含招募广告中的信息，可适当发挥。②文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。③词数：80~100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm
Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I want to be a volunteer
Looking
forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2019·衢州）假设你是Li Ming，以下是你的南非笔友Seb发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给Seb回一封邮件。
FROM: Seb
TO: Li Ming
SUBJECT: Moving to Quzhou
Hi, Li Ming, Good news! My father's company has sent him to work in Quzhou, so we'll move to the city in August. I'm excited but also a bit worried. I've learnt Chinese at a Confucius school in South Africa, but I'm not good at it. How can I improve it quickly What should I do to understand your culture better' I need your help. Wish you all the best. Yours, Seb
要求：①考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件。
②邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。
③词数：90~110。
11．（2019·台州）似如你是李华，一个英国游学团要来你们学校，学校需要一些志愿者，你想成为其中的一员。请读下面的招募启事，写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Some students from the UK will come to our school to have a study tour.
They are interested in Chinese culture. We' relooking for some volunteers to
help us.
"Can you introduce yourself (English ability and personality)
Can you plan an activity about Chinese culture and explain your purpose
If you are interested, please email us at Andrew@.
注意：①请回复招募启事中所提及的两个问题，可适当发挥；②应征邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；③词数：80~100；④邮件开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Andrew,
I'm Li Hua.
12．（2018·杭州）假定你是李平(TEL:1361234567).家住滨海市人民路1号.你在美国旅行期间,不慎遗失钱包,曾向宾馆咨询。以下是宾馆的答复邮件,请你阅读后进行回复,词数80左右.
From: Mr. Smith, hotel manager
Hi Li Ping, Thank you for your email about your lost wallet. Please sent me some more information. When did you stay in our hotel and what room were you in Please describe your wallet. What was in it Send me your address and phone number. All the best, Mr. Smith
To:Mr. Smith
Subject:Lost wallet
Dear Mr. Smith,
Yours, Li Ping
13．（2018·衢州）假设你是Li Hua，以下是你的美国笔友Alex发给你的一封电子邮件，谢你根据该邮件内容给Alex回一封邮件。
要求：①考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件；②邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；③字数90—110。
14．（2020·衢州）假设你是Daming, 以下是你的英国朋友Tony发给你的一封电子邮件, 请根据该邮件内容给他回一封邮件。
From: Daming
To: Tony
Subject: Life with family
Hi Daming, Long time no see. I've never spent so much time staying at home like this holiday. So I have more chances to stay with my family. I have a deep feeling of their love. And I want to do something for them, but I have no idea about it. What do you often do to show your love to your family And what's the best way to spend your time together Hope to get your reply soon! Yours, Tony
要求:1）考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件;
2）邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息;
3）词数:90～110。
From: 　
To: 　
Subject: 　
　
15．（2020·台州）假如你是李华, 最近收到外国好友Andrew的电子邮件, 请你根据该邮件内符给Andrew 回复。
Hi, Li Hua, I'm
going on holiday to your country next month with my family. What's
the weather like at that time I'm just planning what I need to take. What
clothes do you think I need to pack Could you tell me something about one kind
of traditional Chinese art, such as paper cutting, Chinese clay art… Thanks for your help. Andrew
注意：1）请回复邮件中所提及的问题, 可适当发挥;
2）邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
3）词数:80～100.
To: Andrew
From: Li Hua
Hi, Andrew, Li Hua
16．（2018·湖州）假定你是李蕾，请你对美国朋友Amy的邮件进行回复。你可以根据邮件内容作适当发挥；邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；词数：80-100；短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
From: amycali5000@aeim.cup Subject: school project
Hi there! How is it going Haven't heard from you for a long time. We are doing a project at school about how different teenagers in the world have fun. I'd really like you to help me if you can! So, can you tell me: ·what things you do to have a good time ·why you think having fun is important If you can think of anything else to write, please do! In return, I'll send you some great pictures of me and my friends in California. Thanks very much, and write soon! Amy
From: amycali5000@aeim.cup Subject: school project
Hi, Amy! Thanks for your email. Sorry I haven't written sooner. Anyway, you want to know how we have fun here. Li Lei
答案解析部分
1．【答案】范文：
Dear Matt
It's good to hear from you. Everything is fine with me here. Thanks for the invitation! I will definitely come! It will be good to meet Mike. Ill arrive at around 5:30 next Saturday and bring some traditional Chinese foods. like dumplings and zongz for you. I hope you would like them. Don't worry. I will stay after the party to help you clean up.
Thanks again for the invitation. I am really looking forward to it!
All the best,
Li Ping（80词）
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作，要求写一封邮件回复邀请。根据所给材料，可知文章时态为一般将来时，人称为第一人称。写作时注意保持语句的通顺和上下文的连贯。
【点评】这篇文章内容完整、表达准确、逻辑清晰，恰当地运用了连词、副词、固定搭配等。其中一些用法，如：It's good to；hear from；is fine with me；Thanks for；arrive at around 5:30；help you clean up；am really looking forward to等，都是可圈可点之处。
2．【答案】Dear Mike,
My classmates and I are going to Zhejiang University for a study tour this Saturday. It is one of the best universities in China and also my dream university. When we are there, we'll go around the campus visit the labs and libraries, and learn about is history. We will also talk with the teachers and students there.
Would you like to join us If yes, please remember to take your passport because we'll take the train. And we will meet at the school gate at 7:30 on Saturday morning.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours, Daming
【知识点】应用文写作；提纲作文；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提示性文章，要求发一封邮件给外籍教师 Mike告知研学活动计划，并并邀请他一同前往。所给内容要包含要点When and where to go；How to go；What to do；What to take等。时态以一般将来时为主，适当的连接词，固定搭配短语和句型，让文章意思更连贯、符合逻辑。
【点评】写作时，作文内容全面 ，涵盖要求信息，运用好词好句，如： one of the best universities； go around the campus ； learn about ；remember to do sth.；look forward to；高分句型（一）It is one of the best universities in China and also my dream university. 高分句型（二） If yes, please remember to take your passport because we'll take the train. 等等 。注意段落层次，符合英语思维逻辑，同时要使用好一般将来时，以及一些衔接词,如and, also，when，if，because，等，文章上下文逻辑关系更为紧密。
3．【答案】A possible version:
Hi, Steve!
I'm Li Hua. I hear you'd like to experience some more Chinese cultures before going back. So why not come to my home for the weekend I have a good plan!
As both of us like sports, let's play basketball in the gym around my home in the morning. After that, we can practice writing with a Chinese brush together. It's not easy but makes us peaceful. You can also sense the beauty of the Chinese characters. To experience more, we are going to make jiaozi, one of the most traditional foods in China, It must be meaningful to have jiaozi made by yourself. I am sure you will have great fun.
Wait for your reply!（100 词）
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】应用文写作；材料作文；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这篇作文要求按照表格所给的材料，以李华的身份给外教史蒂夫发封邮件，邀请他来家过周末，体验中国文化。时态用一般现在时。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。确定时态，注意动词的正确形式，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【点评】考查材料作文。文章内容完整、充实，层次清晰，主次分明，文意连贯，表达流畅。短文使用了使用了简单句，并列句和复合句，句式丰富。高分亮点：短语：both of us , practice doing sth, make sb +adj , one of +形容词的最高级+复数名词 ，be meaningful to , have great fun；句型： To experience more, we are going to make jiaozi, one of the most traditional foods in China, It must be meaningful to have jiaozi made by yourself. 等。
4．【答案】Hi Andrew,
How's it going Knowing that you are fond of food. I'm writing to invite you to attend our school food festival
The festival will begin at 2-00 on Friday afternoon, June 25th on the school playground. We are glad to have something delicious like dumplings and zongzi. We can also cook food and sell it to our schoolmates to raise money for charity. The festival will surely offer us a good chance to show and experience Chinese traditional food culture. Besides, it is a good time for us to share happiness. love and team spirit. It's a great pleasure to have you here with us.
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这篇作文要求你李华的身份，根据表格提供的材料，给 外国好友 Andrew写一封电子邮件，介绍你校美食文化节 (food festival) 的相关内容及举办目的，并邀请他参加此次美食节 。这是一篇邀请信，接轨浙江高考小作文比较热门的体裁，浙江高考邀请信在 2017年 6 月和 11 月一共考过两次，2020年 1 月考过1次，这篇文章的难点在于如何描述里面的活动，需要学生最好在平时有自己的经历并且展开描写。台州 2019 小作文考的是应聘和申请信，浙江高考在 2018 年6月考了申请信，中考作文总体趋势偏向于高考应用文。
【点评】考查应用文写作。内容完整、布局合理、思路清晰、行文连贯、语言丰富、表达准确。高分亮点：短语：be glad to，sell sth to sb，offer sb sth， it is a good time for sb to so sth；句型： We can also cook food and sell it to our schoolmates to raise money for charity. 等。
5．【答案】Dear Larry,
Thank you so much for your invitation. As a big fan of Chinese folk music, it's my great honor to share something interesting with all of you. I'm available on the Friday evening, July 10th and I'll be there on time. But I am still wondering more details about the talk. The first question I would like to know is where the talk will be held. Moreover, I will appreciate if you tell me how long the talk will last so that I can arrange the content of my talk. The last one is who will come to the talk. Thanks again for your invitation.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Ping
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这篇作文是回复邀请函，格式方面：文章为是书信类，根据已有的邮件进行回复，开头和结尾己经给出。审题方面：根据题目的信息可以看到，作文的要求是要根据邮件进行回复，所以需要我们对来信内容有很好地审核，提出自己的问题，从考察的内容看，这次的作文还是比较贴近生活实际和课本，平时这类的作文也有练习过，所以平时每个单元的作文练习还是要引起重视。结构方面：作文一定要注意格式和层次。感谢并接受邀请-询问细节-再次感谢邀请。
【点评】这篇文章内容丰富、表达准确，恰当地使用了连词、固定搭配等，使文章语意通顺、上下文连贯。其中一些用法，如Thank you so much for；As a big fan of；share something interesting with；on time；be held；Moreover；how long；so that；arrange the content of；Looking forward to等，都是可圈可点之处。
6．【答案】暂未更新
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作，要求给植物园写一封邮件，主要内容是询问用餐情况、门票等，根据所给材料可知时态为一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主。写作时注意语法表达的准确性和上下文的连贯性。
【点评】为了使文章内容丰富、表达准确，可以适当地运用连词和固定搭配等，可能用到的用法有：plan to do；think about；go on vacation；want to know；there be；for example；how to do；have a picnic；how much；the ticket to；together with；look forward to doing；hope to do等。
7．【答案】Hi, Bruce!
Thanks for your email. I'm looking forward to the exchange too!
You really don't have to worry a lot about the school rules here. But there are a few things you need to know.
We usually wear uniforms on school days, but you can wear what is suitable. And it'll be kind of cold when you are here so you'd better bring some warm clothes.
We are not allowed to use mobile phones at school. Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside during the break.
Hope this helps. Tell me if there's anything else you want to know.
Love,
Li Lei
【知识点】应用文写作；材料作文；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇电子邮件类作文。主要根据第一人称和一般现在时结合收到邮件的内容和提示，恰当回复并作适当的发挥。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。look forward to期盼 ; worry about为......担心 ; need to do sth需要做某事 ; be alowed to do sth被允许做某事。 We usually wear uniforms on school days, but you can wear what is suitable. （what引导的宾语从句）And It'll be kind of cold when you are here so you'd better bring some warm clothes.（so引导的并列句）Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside during the break.（if引导的条件状语从句） Tell me if there's anything else you want to know. （if引导的宾语从句）还运用了and，but 等使上下文衔接的更好。
8．【答案】Dear Linda,
Thank
you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you
something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and
humorous-we get along really well. He loves different cultures. He is
interested in museums and likes trying local food.
My
brother is also cute. He's of medium height with short straight black hair. He
is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.
Thanks
again for your help!
Yours,
Li Ping
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。首先认真阅读题目所给的电子邮件，了解收到的电子邮件的内容，然后根据要求做出回复。首先感谢Linda同意带着弟弟去罗马观光，接着介绍了自己弟弟的基本信息，最后对Linda表示感谢。
【点评】这篇作文行文连贯、要点齐全，利用了所学句式和一些短语，例如 He's of medium height with short straight black hair. we get along really well. 使文章增色不少。文章拼写正确，没有语法错误，逻辑通顺，是一篇优秀的作文。
9．【答案】暂未更新
【知识点】应用文写作；提纲作文；志愿服务与公共服务；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文作文。题目给了2个项目，写作时只需要选择一个项目进行写作，主要介绍自己应聘的项目及理由。根据材料内容可知，文章要用一般现在时，可以适当使用一些情态动词。写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
【点评】写此类作文，应该通读提纲，把握要点，确定正确的时态。另外，在写作时要表达清楚，信息完整，语言通顺，语意连贯。充分利用好提示语言，使作文结构完整。写作时，可以运用好词好句，如the reason why…is，such as，for example，so on，等，使文章链接自然，增加文章亮点。
10．【答案】
From:
LiMing
To:
Seb
Subject:
Learning Chinese in Quzhou
Hi, Seb,
I'm so glad that you'll come to live in
my city.
To improve your Chinese quickly, you can
go and take a course in a Chinese language school. It can always help you to
speak better and learn more.
Then, try to experience life here in
Quzhou. Of course, I'll take you around Quzhou. We can visit the Confucius
Temple. It's the best way to understand our culture. And you can practise
speaking Chinese at the same time. It's very helpful.
Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。要根据收到的电子邮件的主题：Seb的父亲的公司派他到中国衢州工作，他们将随父亲到中国来的心情和面临中国文化还是不擅长。针对这样的问题提供解决的建议。主要以第一人称和一般现在时。同时注意邮件的格式。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系。
【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。take sb around a place，带领某人参观某地，固定短语；practise doing sth.练习做某事；hope to do sth.希望做某事。 I'm so glad that you'll come to live in my city. （状语从句）； It's the best way to understand our culture. （不定式做主语）； To improve your Chinese quickly, you can go and take a course in a Chinese language school. （不定式做目的状语）。还运用了then，and，of course 等使上下文衔接的更好。
11．【答案】暂未更新
【知识点】应用文写作；志愿服务与公共服务；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用作文，主要介绍应征学校志愿者，注意电子邮件格式。时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍自己的英语水平和性格；然后介绍计划的关于中国文化的活动，并且解释目的；最后介绍总结。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
【点评】写作时注意作文内容要全面，可以运用好词好句，如：be good at；the ability to do；want to do；plan to do；like doing等。be going to do和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如： I'm going to hold a party to show Chinese culture. I think I am able to do it well等。连词first，next，then，finally，and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。注意语法和单词拼写不要出错，逻辑合理，行文流畅。
12．【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
Thank you so much for your reply. I stayed in your hotel on July 6 in Room 105 and I remember having left my new black wallet on the table. My ID card, two credit cards as well as a 100-dollar bill are in my wallet. Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet to No.1 Renmin Road, Binhai, China by mail if you find it
Please call me on my phone number 1361234567 if needed. Thanks again.
Yours,
Li Ping
【知识点】应用文写作；提纲作文；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇根据材料作文，根据题目所给的邮件可知要包含入住该宾馆的时间、房间、丢失的钱包的细节描述（颜色、形状和内里的的东西等）、自己的联系地址等。注意信件的格式，根据邮件的提示一一将要点包括即可。注意书写干净整洁、语句通顺、连贯。
【点评】这篇作文完美地答复了邮件的内容。回复了问的所有问题。语句通顺、连贯，一些短语的运用使文章增加了色彩，总之，是一篇成功的好作文。
13．【答案】One possible version:
From Li Hua
To Alex
Subject Can't wait meet you!
　 Hi Alex, Thanks for your last letter, and I can't tell you how excited I am now! I plan to fly America on July 10 and there for about three weeks. I will take an English course to improve my spoken English. If possible, I hope to visit some American families to experience their life and learn more about American culture. Also I'd like to take trips to Hollywood and Disneyland. That must be really interesting. Of course I need to buy some presents for my family and friends. Do you have any suggestions Can't wait to meet you!Yours,Li Hua
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】首先审题，确定要写的内容。写一份回复的邮件。因此要用认真读邮件内容，确定要回复的细节。要写清什么时候来，呆多长时间，希望在美国干什么，确保语句通顺、行文连贯，字数适当。
【点评】这篇作文完美地答复了邮件的内容。回复了问的所有问题。语句通顺、连贯，一些短语的运用使文章增加了色彩，总之，是一篇成功的好作文。
14．【答案】To: Tony
From: Daming
Subject: Living with family
Hi Tony,
I'm glad that we both have a wonderful family time these days. Deeply touched by their love, I try to do something to show my love, too. As you know, I'm a lazy boy. But now things change a lot. I often help Mom with housework, such as sweeping, washing and so on. Can you believe I can cook now My parents are proud to see I'm growing.
As for the common time with the family together, I think the best way is to │ do something alike. Last time Dad and I enjoyed a wonderful film together, and │then shared our feelings. What a brilliant time!
Hope this helps!
Yours,
Daming
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文作文。本文要求按照所给的题目结合提示内容给你的英国朋友Tony写一封电子邮件。写作中要包含如何和家人相处，并表达出自己的观点等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是意般现在时态，人称主要是第一人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
【点评】这篇短文详细、全面地阐明了自己对如何与家人相处的看法，井包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些非谓语动词，为文章增色不少。如 Deeply touched by their love, I try to do something to show my love, too. 和 I think the best way is to │ do something alike. 学习中注意总结并牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
15．【答案】Hi, Andrew,
Welcome to China. So glad you'll come and see me.
In July, it's quite hot for most of the day, but there is some rain, too. You'd better bring shorts and T-shirts. A light raincoat would be good.
Paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese arts with a history of around 1, 50 years. The art of paper cutting turns a simple thing into a beautiful piece of art. I sounds very easy but can be difficult to do. Paper cuttings are usually put on window and walls as symbols of good luck.
See you soon.
Li Hua
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。按照所给邮件给外国好友Andrew回复，写作包含三方面的内容，天气，所带衣服，中国传统艺术。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称用第二人称，注意上下文衔接连贯，符合英文表达习惯。
【点评】这篇短文根据信件内容，对 Andrew 的问题一一作了回复，内容完整。时态准确，人称能够灵活变换。一些固定短语turn into；put on以及一些表达You'd better bring shorts and T-shirts. A light raincoat would be good等表达较为得体，文章表达准确、流畅自然。
16．【答案】Hi, Amy! Thanks for your email. Sorry I haven't written sooner. You want to know how we have fun here in China, anyway, we teenagers have different ways to enjoy ourselves, like playing sports, playing video games, and watching movies or TV, etc. As a basketball fan since childhood, the most interesting thing for me is playing basketball with my friends after a day's study in the classroom. We almost play every day, competing, talking and laughing, making it the most enjoyable and relaxing moment. Besides, I often watch basketball games on TV. A close game between two teams always make me excited and sometimes wild with joy. I think it's helpful for both the body and mind. Expecting your great pictures!Li Lei
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作，根据邮件写一封回信。答题前先看懂所给的邮件，确定需要表达的要点，然写作时要紧扣要点，注意语言的准确性。
写作步骤：
一、阅读提示和邮件，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.在中国，青少年有很多不同的娱乐方式，如……。we teenagers have different ways to enjoy ourselves, like……
2.我最喜欢的娱乐方式是……As a……the most interesting thing for me is……
3.我的做法……We almost play every day, competing, talking and laughing, making it the most enjoyable and relaxing moment
4.我的看法……I think it's helpful for……
5.结束语。
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。
【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
1 / 1浙江省历年中考真题分类汇编：书面表达（应用文写作）
一、书面表达
1．（2021·杭州）假定你是李平, 请阅读以下邮件, 接受邀请并回复。词数 80 左右, 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Hi Li Ping, How is everything going with you Next week my cousin Mike is staying with me We're having a party next Saturday. Please come! We'll have lots of drinks. But if you remember, can you bring some Chinese food The party will be starting at 6 pm. What time do you think you'll be coming Ill probably need one or two people to help me tidy up after the party. Do you think you'll be able to stay and help Anyway, hope you can make it. Please write back to tell me if you can come or not. All he best, Matt
Dear Matt,
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Li Ping
【答案】范文：
Dear Matt
It's good to hear from you. Everything is fine with me here. Thanks for the invitation! I will definitely come! It will be good to meet Mike. Ill arrive at around 5:30 next Saturday and bring some traditional Chinese foods. like dumplings and zongz for you. I hope you would like them. Don't worry. I will stay after the party to help you clean up.
Thanks again for the invitation. I am really looking forward to it!
All the best,
Li Ping（80词）
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作，要求写一封邮件回复邀请。根据所给材料，可知文章时态为一般将来时，人称为第一人称。写作时注意保持语句的通顺和上下文的连贯。
【点评】这篇文章内容完整、表达准确、逻辑清晰，恰当地运用了连词、副词、固定搭配等。其中一些用法，如：It's good to；hear from；is fine with me；Thanks for；arrive at around 5:30；help you clean up；am really looking forward to等，都是可圈可点之处。
2．（2021·金华）假如你叫 Daming，本周六你们班要去浙江大学开展研学活动（study tour）。请根据下列表格中的内容，给外籍教师 Mike 发一份邮件，告知你们的计划，并邀请他一同前往。
注意∶
1）文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；
2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3）词数∶80～100；
4）邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
内容要点
内容要点 参考词汇
When and where to go Zhejiang University, this Saturday
How to go by train
What to do visit ...,talk with ... ,learn about ...
What to take passport
Others meet at the school gate, 7 :30 am,-….
Dear
Mike,
……
Yours,
Daming
【答案】Dear Mike,
My classmates and I are going to Zhejiang University for a study tour this Saturday. It is one of the best universities in China and also my dream university. When we are there, we'll go around the campus visit the labs and libraries, and learn about is history. We will also talk with the teachers and students there.
Would you like to join us If yes, please remember to take your passport because we'll take the train. And we will meet at the school gate at 7:30 on Saturday morning.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours, Daming
【知识点】应用文写作；提纲作文；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提示性文章，要求发一封邮件给外籍教师 Mike告知研学活动计划，并并邀请他一同前往。所给内容要包含要点When and where to go；How to go；What to do；What to take等。时态以一般将来时为主，适当的连接词，固定搭配短语和句型，让文章意思更连贯、符合逻辑。
【点评】写作时，作文内容全面 ，涵盖要求信息，运用好词好句，如： one of the best universities； go around the campus ； learn about ；remember to do sth.；look forward to；高分句型（一）It is one of the best universities in China and also my dream university. 高分句型（二） If yes, please remember to take your passport because we'll take the train. 等等 。注意段落层次，符合英语思维逻辑，同时要使用好一般将来时，以及一些衔接词,如and, also，when，if，because，等，文章上下文逻辑关系更为紧密。
3．（2021·丽水）
外教Steve爱好武术，喜欢运动。他想在任教期满前再体验一次中国文化。假设你是李华，请根据下面的要点，写一封邮件，邀请他到你家过周末。
weekend plan / activities 内容要点 参考词汇
sports (or music/ drawing) paint, play basketball, ….
experience of Chinese cultures make jiaozi, write with a. Chinese
brush, …
注意：
1）文中必须包含上表中的两个要点，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息；
3）词数∶80～100；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi. Steve! I'm Li Hua. I hear you'd like to experience some more Chinese cultures before going back. Yours, Li Hua
【答案】A possible version:
Hi, Steve!
I'm Li Hua. I hear you'd like to experience some more Chinese cultures before going back. So why not come to my home for the weekend I have a good plan!
As both of us like sports, let's play basketball in the gym around my home in the morning. After that, we can practice writing with a Chinese brush together. It's not easy but makes us peaceful. You can also sense the beauty of the Chinese characters. To experience more, we are going to make jiaozi, one of the most traditional foods in China, It must be meaningful to have jiaozi made by yourself. I am sure you will have great fun.
Wait for your reply!（100 词）
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】应用文写作；材料作文；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这篇作文要求按照表格所给的材料，以李华的身份给外教史蒂夫发封邮件，邀请他来家过周末，体验中国文化。时态用一般现在时。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。确定时态，注意动词的正确形式，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【点评】考查材料作文。文章内容完整、充实，层次清晰，主次分明，文意连贯，表达流畅。短文使用了使用了简单句，并列句和复合句，句式丰富。高分亮点：短语：both of us , practice doing sth, make sb +adj , one of +形容词的最高级+复数名词 ，be meaningful to , have great fun；句型： To experience more, we are going to make jiaozi, one of the most traditional foods in China, It must be meaningful to have jiaozi made by yourself. 等。
4．（2021·台州）假如你是李华，请给你的外国好友 Andrew写一封电子邮件，介绍你校美食文化节 (food festival) 的相关内容及举办目的，并邀请他参加此次美食节。邮件内容包括∶
Time 2: 00 p.m. Friday. June 25th
Place the school playground
Acclivities cook, have something delicious...
Aims experience Chinese food culture, raise money tor
charity.
注意∶
1）邮件必须包括表格中的所有信息, 可适当发挥;
2）邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
3）词数∶ 80-100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
To: Andrew
From Li Hua
Hi, Andrew How is it going ▲ Looking forward to your reply. Li Hua
【答案】Hi Andrew,
How's it going Knowing that you are fond of food. I'm writing to invite you to attend our school food festival
The festival will begin at 2-00 on Friday afternoon, June 25th on the school playground. We are glad to have something delicious like dumplings and zongzi. We can also cook food and sell it to our schoolmates to raise money for charity. The festival will surely offer us a good chance to show and experience Chinese traditional food culture. Besides, it is a good time for us to share happiness. love and team spirit. It's a great pleasure to have you here with us.
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这篇作文要求你李华的身份，根据表格提供的材料，给 外国好友 Andrew写一封电子邮件，介绍你校美食文化节 (food festival) 的相关内容及举办目的，并邀请他参加此次美食节 。这是一篇邀请信，接轨浙江高考小作文比较热门的体裁，浙江高考邀请信在 2017年 6 月和 11 月一共考过两次，2020年 1 月考过1次，这篇文章的难点在于如何描述里面的活动，需要学生最好在平时有自己的经历并且展开描写。台州 2019 小作文考的是应聘和申请信，浙江高考在 2018 年6月考了申请信，中考作文总体趋势偏向于高考应用文。
【点评】考查应用文写作。内容完整、布局合理、思路清晰、行文连贯、语言丰富、表达准确。高分亮点：短语：be glad to，sell sth to sb，offer sb sth， it is a good time for sb to so sth；句型： We can also cook food and sell it to our schoolmates to raise money for charity. 等。
5．（2020·杭州）假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。内容包括接受邀请并询问至少三个相关细节 (如具体地点……)
注意：
1）词数80左右；
2）可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Ping, We would like to invite you to give us a talk on Chinese folk music. The talk will be on the evening of Friday, July 10th at 7:00. If you're able to come, please reply in writing to this invitation by July 2nd. Hope you can make it! Larry Smith President of Foreign Students' Club
Dear Larry,
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】Dear Larry,
Thank you so much for your invitation. As a big fan of Chinese folk music, it's my great honor to share something interesting with all of you. I'm available on the Friday evening, July 10th and I'll be there on time. But I am still wondering more details about the talk. The first question I would like to know is where the talk will be held. Moreover, I will appreciate if you tell me how long the talk will last so that I can arrange the content of my talk. The last one is who will come to the talk. Thanks again for your invitation.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Ping
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这篇作文是回复邀请函，格式方面：文章为是书信类，根据已有的邮件进行回复，开头和结尾己经给出。审题方面：根据题目的信息可以看到，作文的要求是要根据邮件进行回复，所以需要我们对来信内容有很好地审核，提出自己的问题，从考察的内容看，这次的作文还是比较贴近生活实际和课本，平时这类的作文也有练习过，所以平时每个单元的作文练习还是要引起重视。结构方面：作文一定要注意格式和层次。感谢并接受邀请-询问细节-再次感谢邀请。
【点评】这篇文章内容丰富、表达准确，恰当地使用了连词、固定搭配等，使文章语意通顺、上下文连贯。其中一些用法，如Thank you so much for；As a big fan of；share something interesting with；on time；be held；Moreover；how long；so that；arrange the content of；Looking forward to等，都是可圈可点之处。
6．（2020·嘉兴）假设你是 David，打算今年夏天去 Batsford Arboretum游玩。请给植物园写一封简短的邮件，询问你想了解的信息,如用餐、门票价格等。
注意：1）邮件中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
2）词数:30-50。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
David
【答案】暂未更新
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作，要求给植物园写一封邮件，主要内容是询问用餐情况、门票等，根据所给材料可知时态为一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主。写作时注意语法表达的准确性和上下文的连贯性。
【点评】为了使文章内容丰富、表达准确，可以适当地运用连词和固定搭配等，可能用到的用法有：plan to do；think about；go on vacation；want to know；there be；for example；how to do；have a picnic；how much；the ticket to；together with；look forward to doing；hope to do等。
7．（2020·湖州）假定你是李雷，请你对英国朋友Bruce的邮件进行同复。你可以根据邮件内容作适当发挥，邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和校名，词数：80-100；短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
To LiLei@
Subject Exchange Visit!
Hi there, Li Lei! I'm really
excited about going to be at your school for the exchange visit later this
year—hope you are too!! But the thing
is, I really don't want to do the wrong thing while I'm there and especially
at the school, so I'm wondering if you could tell me a bit about the rules,
about phones, clothes, food... Could you
send me a quick email I'd love to hear from you. Love, Bruce
To Bruce@
Subject Re:Exchange Visit!
Hi, Bruce! Thanks for your email. I'm looking forward to the
exchange too! Love, Li Lei
【答案】Hi, Bruce!
Thanks for your email. I'm looking forward to the exchange too!
You really don't have to worry a lot about the school rules here. But there are a few things you need to know.
We usually wear uniforms on school days, but you can wear what is suitable. And it'll be kind of cold when you are here so you'd better bring some warm clothes.
We are not allowed to use mobile phones at school. Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside during the break.
Hope this helps. Tell me if there's anything else you want to know.
Love,
Li Lei
【知识点】应用文写作；材料作文；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇电子邮件类作文。主要根据第一人称和一般现在时结合收到邮件的内容和提示，恰当回复并作适当的发挥。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。look forward to期盼 ; worry about为......担心 ; need to do sth需要做某事 ; be alowed to do sth被允许做某事。 We usually wear uniforms on school days, but you can wear what is suitable. （what引导的宾语从句）And It'll be kind of cold when you are here so you'd better bring some warm clothes.（so引导的并列句）Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside during the break.（if引导的条件状语从句） Tell me if there's anything else you want to know. （if引导的宾语从句）还运用了and，but 等使上下文衔接的更好。
8．（2019·杭州）假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复，词数80左右。
【答案】Dear Linda,
Thank
you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you
something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and
humorous-we get along really well. He loves different cultures. He is
interested in museums and likes trying local food.
My
brother is also cute. He's of medium height with short straight black hair. He
is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.
Thanks
again for your help!
Yours,
Li Ping
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。首先认真阅读题目所给的电子邮件，了解收到的电子邮件的内容，然后根据要求做出回复。首先感谢Linda同意带着弟弟去罗马观光，接着介绍了自己弟弟的基本信息，最后对Linda表示感谢。
【点评】这篇作文行文连贯、要点齐全，利用了所学句式和一些短语，例如 He's of medium height with short straight black hair. we get along really well. 使文章增色不少。文章拼写正确，没有语法错误，逻辑通顺，是一篇优秀的作文。
9．（2019·嘉兴）假设你是李华。你在某英文网站上看到一则招募中国志愿者（volunteer）的广告。请根据该广告中所提供的两个志愿者项目，选择其中一个，结合自己的实际情况，给项目负责人写一封电子邮件，表达你希望参加这个项目的愿望，并阐述理由。
Project1 Place: A small village in the west of China Activities: ◆teach children English ◆visit the old people's
home ◆work on the farm Project2 Place: A primary school in the north of
Thailand Activities: ◆set up a small library ◆give Chinese lessons ◆play games with children
注意：①邮件中必须包含招募广告中的信息，可适当发挥。②文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。③词数：80~100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm
Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I want to be a volunteer
Looking
forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】暂未更新
【知识点】应用文写作；提纲作文；志愿服务与公共服务；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文作文。题目给了2个项目，写作时只需要选择一个项目进行写作，主要介绍自己应聘的项目及理由。根据材料内容可知，文章要用一般现在时，可以适当使用一些情态动词。写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
【点评】写此类作文，应该通读提纲，把握要点，确定正确的时态。另外，在写作时要表达清楚，信息完整，语言通顺，语意连贯。充分利用好提示语言，使作文结构完整。写作时，可以运用好词好句，如the reason why…is，such as，for example，so on，等，使文章链接自然，增加文章亮点。
10．（2019·衢州）假设你是Li Ming，以下是你的南非笔友Seb发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给Seb回一封邮件。
FROM: Seb
TO: Li Ming
SUBJECT: Moving to Quzhou
Hi, Li Ming, Good news! My father's company has sent him to work in Quzhou, so we'll move to the city in August. I'm excited but also a bit worried. I've learnt Chinese at a Confucius school in South Africa, but I'm not good at it. How can I improve it quickly What should I do to understand your culture better' I need your help. Wish you all the best. Yours, Seb
要求：①考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件。
②邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。
③词数：90~110。
【答案】
From:
LiMing
To:
Seb
Subject:
Learning Chinese in Quzhou
Hi, Seb,
I'm so glad that you'll come to live in
my city.
To improve your Chinese quickly, you can
go and take a course in a Chinese language school. It can always help you to
speak better and learn more.
Then, try to experience life here in
Quzhou. Of course, I'll take you around Quzhou. We can visit the Confucius
Temple. It's the best way to understand our culture. And you can practise
speaking Chinese at the same time. It's very helpful.
Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。要根据收到的电子邮件的主题：Seb的父亲的公司派他到中国衢州工作，他们将随父亲到中国来的心情和面临中国文化还是不擅长。针对这样的问题提供解决的建议。主要以第一人称和一般现在时。同时注意邮件的格式。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系。
【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。take sb around a place，带领某人参观某地，固定短语；practise doing sth.练习做某事；hope to do sth.希望做某事。 I'm so glad that you'll come to live in my city. （状语从句）； It's the best way to understand our culture. （不定式做主语）； To improve your Chinese quickly, you can go and take a course in a Chinese language school. （不定式做目的状语）。还运用了then，and，of course 等使上下文衔接的更好。
11．（2019·台州）似如你是李华，一个英国游学团要来你们学校，学校需要一些志愿者，你想成为其中的一员。请读下面的招募启事，写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Some students from the UK will come to our school to have a study tour.
They are interested in Chinese culture. We' relooking for some volunteers to
help us.
"Can you introduce yourself (English ability and personality)
Can you plan an activity about Chinese culture and explain your purpose
If you are interested, please email us at Andrew@.
注意：①请回复招募启事中所提及的两个问题，可适当发挥；②应征邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；③词数：80~100；④邮件开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Andrew,
I'm Li Hua.
【答案】暂未更新
【知识点】应用文写作；志愿服务与公共服务；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用作文，主要介绍应征学校志愿者，注意电子邮件格式。时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍自己的英语水平和性格；然后介绍计划的关于中国文化的活动，并且解释目的；最后介绍总结。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
【点评】写作时注意作文内容要全面，可以运用好词好句，如：be good at；the ability to do；want to do；plan to do；like doing等。be going to do和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如： I'm going to hold a party to show Chinese culture. I think I am able to do it well等。连词first，next，then，finally，and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。注意语法和单词拼写不要出错，逻辑合理，行文流畅。
12．（2018·杭州）假定你是李平(TEL:1361234567).家住滨海市人民路1号.你在美国旅行期间,不慎遗失钱包,曾向宾馆咨询。以下是宾馆的答复邮件,请你阅读后进行回复,词数80左右.
From: Mr. Smith, hotel manager
Hi Li Ping, Thank you for your email about your lost wallet. Please sent me some more information. When did you stay in our hotel and what room were you in Please describe your wallet. What was in it Send me your address and phone number. All the best, Mr. Smith
To:Mr. Smith
Subject:Lost wallet
Dear Mr. Smith,
Yours, Li Ping
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
Thank you so much for your reply. I stayed in your hotel on July 6 in Room 105 and I remember having left my new black wallet on the table. My ID card, two credit cards as well as a 100-dollar bill are in my wallet. Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet to No.1 Renmin Road, Binhai, China by mail if you find it
Please call me on my phone number 1361234567 if needed. Thanks again.
Yours,
Li Ping
【知识点】应用文写作；提纲作文；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇根据材料作文，根据题目所给的邮件可知要包含入住该宾馆的时间、房间、丢失的钱包的细节描述（颜色、形状和内里的的东西等）、自己的联系地址等。注意信件的格式，根据邮件的提示一一将要点包括即可。注意书写干净整洁、语句通顺、连贯。
【点评】这篇作文完美地答复了邮件的内容。回复了问的所有问题。语句通顺、连贯，一些短语的运用使文章增加了色彩，总之，是一篇成功的好作文。
13．（2018·衢州）假设你是Li Hua，以下是你的美国笔友Alex发给你的一封电子邮件，谢你根据该邮件内容给Alex回一封邮件。
要求：①考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件；②邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；③字数90—110。
【答案】One possible version:
From Li Hua
To Alex
Subject Can't wait meet you!
　 Hi Alex, Thanks for your last letter, and I can't tell you how excited I am now! I plan to fly America on July 10 and there for about three weeks. I will take an English course to improve my spoken English. If possible, I hope to visit some American families to experience their life and learn more about American culture. Also I'd like to take trips to Hollywood and Disneyland. That must be really interesting. Of course I need to buy some presents for my family and friends. Do you have any suggestions Can't wait to meet you!Yours,Li Hua
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】首先审题，确定要写的内容。写一份回复的邮件。因此要用认真读邮件内容，确定要回复的细节。要写清什么时候来，呆多长时间，希望在美国干什么，确保语句通顺、行文连贯，字数适当。
【点评】这篇作文完美地答复了邮件的内容。回复了问的所有问题。语句通顺、连贯，一些短语的运用使文章增加了色彩，总之，是一篇成功的好作文。
14．（2020·衢州）假设你是Daming, 以下是你的英国朋友Tony发给你的一封电子邮件, 请根据该邮件内容给他回一封邮件。
From: Daming
To: Tony
Subject: Life with family
Hi Daming, Long time no see. I've never spent so much time staying at home like this holiday. So I have more chances to stay with my family. I have a deep feeling of their love. And I want to do something for them, but I have no idea about it. What do you often do to show your love to your family And what's the best way to spend your time together Hope to get your reply soon! Yours, Tony
要求:1）考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件;
2）邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息;
3）词数:90～110。
From: 　
To: 　
Subject: 　
　
【答案】To: Tony
From: Daming
Subject: Living with family
Hi Tony,
I'm glad that we both have a wonderful family time these days. Deeply touched by their love, I try to do something to show my love, too. As you know, I'm a lazy boy. But now things change a lot. I often help Mom with housework, such as sweeping, washing and so on. Can you believe I can cook now My parents are proud to see I'm growing.
As for the common time with the family together, I think the best way is to │ do something alike. Last time Dad and I enjoyed a wonderful film together, and │then shared our feelings. What a brilliant time!
Hope this helps!
Yours,
Daming
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文作文。本文要求按照所给的题目结合提示内容给你的英国朋友Tony写一封电子邮件。写作中要包含如何和家人相处，并表达出自己的观点等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是意般现在时态，人称主要是第一人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
【点评】这篇短文详细、全面地阐明了自己对如何与家人相处的看法，井包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些非谓语动词，为文章增色不少。如 Deeply touched by their love, I try to do something to show my love, too. 和 I think the best way is to │ do something alike. 学习中注意总结并牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
15．（2020·台州）假如你是李华, 最近收到外国好友Andrew的电子邮件, 请你根据该邮件内符给Andrew 回复。
Hi, Li Hua, I'm
going on holiday to your country next month with my family. What's
the weather like at that time I'm just planning what I need to take. What
clothes do you think I need to pack Could you tell me something about one kind
of traditional Chinese art, such as paper cutting, Chinese clay art… Thanks for your help. Andrew
注意：1）请回复邮件中所提及的问题, 可适当发挥;
2）邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
3）词数:80～100.
To: Andrew
From: Li Hua
Hi, Andrew, Li Hua
【答案】Hi, Andrew,
Welcome to China. So glad you'll come and see me.
In July, it's quite hot for most of the day, but there is some rain, too. You'd better bring shorts and T-shirts. A light raincoat would be good.
Paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese arts with a history of around 1, 50 years. The art of paper cutting turns a simple thing into a beautiful piece of art. I sounds very easy but can be difficult to do. Paper cuttings are usually put on window and walls as symbols of good luck.
See you soon.
Li Hua
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。按照所给邮件给外国好友Andrew回复，写作包含三方面的内容，天气，所带衣服，中国传统艺术。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称用第二人称，注意上下文衔接连贯，符合英文表达习惯。
【点评】这篇短文根据信件内容，对 Andrew 的问题一一作了回复，内容完整。时态准确，人称能够灵活变换。一些固定短语turn into；put on以及一些表达You'd better bring shorts and T-shirts. A light raincoat would be good等表达较为得体，文章表达准确、流畅自然。
16．（2018·湖州）假定你是李蕾，请你对美国朋友Amy的邮件进行回复。你可以根据邮件内容作适当发挥；邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；词数：80-100；短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
From: amycali5000@aeim.cup Subject: school project
Hi there! How is it going Haven't heard from you for a long time. We are doing a project at school about how different teenagers in the world have fun. I'd really like you to help me if you can! So, can you tell me: ·what things you do to have a good time ·why you think having fun is important If you can think of anything else to write, please do! In return, I'll send you some great pictures of me and my friends in California. Thanks very much, and write soon! Amy
From: amycali5000@aeim.cup Subject: school project
Hi, Amy! Thanks for your email. Sorry I haven't written sooner. Anyway, you want to know how we have fun here. Li Lei
【答案】Hi, Amy! Thanks for your email. Sorry I haven't written sooner. You want to know how we have fun here in China, anyway, we teenagers have different ways to enjoy ourselves, like playing sports, playing video games, and watching movies or TV, etc. As a basketball fan since childhood, the most interesting thing for me is playing basketball with my friends after a day's study in the classroom. We almost play every day, competing, talking and laughing, making it the most enjoyable and relaxing moment. Besides, I often watch basketball games on TV. A close game between two teams always make me excited and sometimes wild with joy. I think it's helpful for both the body and mind. Expecting your great pictures!Li Lei
【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作，根据邮件写一封回信。答题前先看懂所给的邮件，确定需要表达的要点，然写作时要紧扣要点，注意语言的准确性。
写作步骤：
一、阅读提示和邮件，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.在中国，青少年有很多不同的娱乐方式，如……。we teenagers have different ways to enjoy ourselves, like……
2.我最喜欢的娱乐方式是……As a……the most interesting thing for me is……
3.我的做法……We almost play every day, competing, talking and laughing, making it the most enjoyable and relaxing moment
4.我的看法……I think it's helpful for……
5.结束语。
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。
【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
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