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高考英语读后续写语篇练习广东省东莞市第四高级中学2022-2023学年高二上学期期中考试芭蕾舞女孩之间的爱恨交织题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文Anna was the school's best dancer and this was what she told her parents everyday. “Mrs. Kelly says I am very gifted,” she said, “She says maybe I will be the best dancer in our ballet(芭蕾)team. ”Mrs. Kelly had said these things, but she had said so to a number of dancers in order to encourage them because she believed it’s important to get students inspired. Anna was also inspired by her words to be winner and beat everyone else. However, Mrs. Kelly actually preferred that Anna just liked to dance on the stage.“Students! Students!”Mr. Kelly called to the small group of girls around Anna. “I’d like to introduce to you our new student, Sally. She loves dancing as you do. I hope you all take time to say hi to her nicely.”续写原文Anna looked at Sally with dancing shoes in her hands. Sally did not have a dancer’s body: She was short, with legs that looked like they belonged to a frog instead of an eleven-year-old girl. Anna felt relaxed and was sure this girl would not dance well.In the following weeks, however, it turned out that Anna made a wrong guess about Sally’s dancing performance. In fact, Sally was not jut a good dancer, but an amazingly gifted dancer. She danced in beautiful ways that Anna thought was impossible for such a short girl.What’s more, Sally was a nice girl. She often helped girls with difficult dance moves. She was active, She was smart, and everyone liked her. It seemed that Sally was taking everything away from Anna.Anna was sad and mad. The school ballet team would pick out the best dancer in only two weeks. She worried that Sally would win the contest and become the best dancer.段首句Para 1：Anna felt upset and then she thought out a plan.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Para 2: Sally put on her dancing shoes, feeling something wrong with them.Part 2题目分析续写原文分析本文以人物线索展开，讲述了自傲的芭蕾舞者Anna接受不了转来的舞蹈生Sally，但是出乎意料的是，Sally不仅是一位很有天赋的舞者，而且活泼聪明，大家都很喜欢她。得知学校要在两周内挑选出最好的舞者，Anna担心Sally会赢得比赛。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写思路分析Para 1：Anna felt upset and then she thought out a plan.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　由第一段首句内容“Anna感到不安，然后她想出了一个计划。”可知，第一段可描写Anna的计划是如何生成和落实的。续写思路分析Para 2：Sally put on her dancing shoes, feeling something wrong with them.　由第二段首句内容“Sally穿上舞鞋，觉得有点不对劲。”可知，第二段可描写Sally坚持表演，Anna对自己的行为感到内疚。续写思路分析续写线索Anna计划的生成过程以及落实——Sally察觉不对劲但坚持表演——Anna感到内疚并退赛——Sally安慰——Anna深受感动续写素材可用词汇：行为类①留下印象：leave an impression on sb./impress sb.②坚持：insist on③退赛：withdraw from the competition情绪类①感到内疚：feel guilty/feel a sense of guilt②感动的：moved/touched续写素材可用句型：【高分句型1】Somehow, she even was a little excited about the plan when thinking that maybe she would be the best dancer. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略，宾语从句)【高分句型2】Looking at her insistence with pain, Anna felt a sense of guilt instead of the pleasure from success of the plan. (运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语)Part 3范文呈现范文呈现Somehow, she even was a little excited about the plan when thinking that maybe she would be the best dancer. She began to think of the plan carefully. Firstly, she thought Sally must perform badly andleave a terrible impression on audienceon the stage. Therefore, she decided to put something that couldn’t be found in Sally’s shoes.An idea hit her: sand, which seemed to be the most suitable thing for this plan. As a result,Anna put some sand in Sally’s shoes secretly（动作描写）.范文呈现However, she insisted on dancing with the smiling expression to present the perfect condition.All these things were caught by Annawho was standing on the wing.Looking at her insistence with pain,Anna felt a sense of guilt（心理描写）instead of the pleasure from success of the plan. So, Anna told the truth in shame and chose to withdraw from the competition after Sallylimped painfully off the stage（动作描写）. To her surprise, Sally smiled and said, “it’sthe friendship rather than the best dancerthatmatters（强调句）.” Anna was moved deeply and headed for the stage.范文译文不知怎么的，当她想到自己可能会成为最好的舞者时，她甚至对这个计划有点兴奋。她开始仔细考虑这个计划。首先，她认为萨莉的表演一定很糟糕，给舞台上的观众留下了糟糕的印象。因此，她决定在萨莉的鞋子里放一些找不到的东西。她想到了一个主意：沙子，这似乎是最适合这个计划的东西。结果，安娜偷偷地在莎莉的鞋子里放了一些沙子。范文译文然而，她坚持用微笑的表情跳舞，以呈现完美的状态。所有这些东西都被站在机翼上的安娜抓住了。看着安娜痛苦地坚持着，安娜感到内疚，而不是计划成功带来的快乐。因此，安娜羞愧地说出了真相，并在萨莉痛苦地一瘸一拐地走下舞台后选择退出比赛。令她惊讶的是，萨莉笑着说：“重要的是友谊，而不是最好的舞者。”安娜深受感动，走向舞台。Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）Big enough to accommodate the public, virtue enough to be far-reaching.大足以容众，德足以怀远。　　

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