北京高考英语书信写作分类训练:感谢信10篇(含解析)

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感谢信/祝贺信
1.假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校外教布朗先生在学校英语文化节中应邀给学生做了一场讲座。请你代表学生会给他写一封信,内容包括:
1.表达感谢;
2.告知讲座反响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Brown,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
2.假定你是李华,你的好友英国留学生Michael在China Daily举办的My China Story征文比赛中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示祝愿;
2. 获奖的意义;
3. 未来的期望。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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3.假定你是学生会主席李华。你校上周邀请Smith教授为同学们做了场有关科学研究的讲座。请你代表全校同学用英语给Smith教授写一封邮件,
内容包括:1.表示感谢:
2.感谢缘由:
3.你的期待。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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4.假定你是李华,上周参加了你市组织的英语话剧比赛 (English Drama Competition) 并取得了较好的成绩。你的外教Mr. White此前给予了你很多帮助和鼓励,请你给他写封电子邮件表达谢意。
内容包括:1. 告知好消息;2. 感谢他的帮助(如陪伴练习。指出应改进之处等)和鼓励;
3. 邀请他到你家做客。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:表演 perform;感激 gratitude;安慰 comfort
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5.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Philip送给你一本英语读物,你读后收获颇多。请你给他写一封email,内容包括:1. 表示感谢;
2. 分享阅读收获。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Philip,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你因为是新冠病毒的密接人员而居家隔离了一周,隔离期间,社区的外国志愿者Jim给予了你很多帮助,你打算给Jim写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1. 感谢所帮你做的事情;
2. 对你的意义和你的感受。
注意:新冠病毒的密接人员: a close contact with COVID-19;
隔离:quarantine v./n.
1. 词数100左右;
2. 信的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7.假定你是李华,现任所在中学学生会主席。近期学校邀请英国剑桥大学Lio教授来你校给学生作了有关AI(人工智能)的报告。请你代表你校学生会给Lio教授写一封邮件,表示感谢。内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 浅谈收获;
3. 期待对方再次来校作报告。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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8.假定你是李华,得知英国籍外教John因工作出色而受到学校表彰,为此请你给他写一封邮件表示祝贺,内容要点包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.对其工作的欣赏;
3.感谢其付出。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9.假定你是李华,不慎将Pride and Prejudice这本书落在了操场。你校外教Vincent捡到后交还于你。请给他写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.描述经过;
3.表达感谢。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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10.假定你是高一学生李华,父母都是英语老师。在感恩节来临之际,请你用英语给自己的家长写一封感谢信。要点如下:
1.感谢家长多年来无微不至的关心和照顾;
2.表达决心(努力学习,多帮家长做家务等)。
注意:(1)词数 100 左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Dad and Mum,
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1.Dear Mr. Brown,
First of all, on behalf of the Student Union, I am honored to express our most sincere thanks to you.
We benefited a lot from the lecture that you gave us during this year’s English Cultural Festival. The lecture left a deep impression on every student present. They showed great interest in the content of the lecture and enjoyed it very much. In the past few days, we have received a flood of emails from the audience telling us how your lecture has helped them correct the mistaken belief that English is only a tool.
It would be great if there were more lectures like this in the future! Finally, thank you again for your wonderful lecture!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校外教布朗先生在学校英语文化节中应邀给学生做了一场讲座。请你代表学生会给他写一封信表达感谢,并告知讲座反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表:on behalf of→ represent
荣幸的:honored →privileged
最后:Finally→ At last
喜欢:enjoy→ be fond of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:They showed great interest in the content of the lecture and enjoyed it very much.
拓展句:They showed great interest in the content of the lecture so that they enjoyed it very much.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We benefited a lot from the lecture that you gave us during this year’s English Cultural Festival.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It would be great if there were more lectures like this in the future!(运用了if引导的条件状语从句。)
2.Dear Michael,
I’m so happy to hear that you have won the first prize in the essay contest My China Story held by China Daily.
What a pleasant surprise you have given me! Your winning the prize shows not only your brilliant talent for writing but also your deep understanding of China, which means a great deal to you. Hopefully, you’ll work in China in the future and serve as a cultural ambassador, bridging the gap between China and the rest of the world.
I hope you will continue your exploration of China and make even greater achievements in the years to come.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定你是李华,你的好友英国留学生Michael在China Daily举办的My China Story征文比赛中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1. 表示祝愿;2. 获奖的意义;3. 未来的期望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy→glad
举办:hold→organise
很好的:brilliant→great
天赋:talent =gift
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Hopefully, you’ll work in China in the future and serve as a cultural ambassador, bridging the gap between China and the rest of the world.
拓展句:Hopefully, you’ll work in China in the future and serve as a cultural ambassador, which will bridge the gap between China and the rest of the world.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Your winning the prize shows not only your brilliant talent for writing but also your deep understanding of China, which means a great deal to you. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Hopefully, you’ll work in China in the future and serve as a cultural ambassador, bridging the gap between China and the rest of the world. (运用了现在分词作状语)
3.Dear Professor Smith,
Thank you for sharing your vast knowledge about scientific research at the lecture for us students last week.
Your presentation about topic selection will be extremely helpful to students who are completely new to research. Also, we appreciate your thoughtfulness in preparing and giving the presentation as well as helpful advice. What’s more, it’s very kind of you to be patient with students before and after your talk.
Thank you again for helping to create the next generation of research scholars. We hope to learn more from you.
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对史密斯教授上周做的一场有关科学研究的讲座表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
考虑:thoughtfulness →consideration
此外:what’s more →besides
完全地:completely →totally
感激:appreciate →be grateful for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Thank you for sharing your vast knowledge about scientific research at the lecture for us students last week.
拓展句:Thank you for sharing your vast knowledge about scientific research at the lecture for us students last week, which is very useful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Your presentation about topic selection will be extremely helpful to students who are completely new to research. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, it’s very kind of you to be patient with students before and after your talk.(运用了it作形式主语)
4.Dear Mr. White,
I’m glad to tell you that I performed well in the English Drama Competition held in our city last week. Undoubtedly, I should extend my sincere gratitude to you.
Honestly speaking, I couldn’t have done such a good job without your help and encouragement. Every time I practised my part, you accompanied me, pointed out where I could improve, and told me how to do it better. Feeling discouraged, I could get an encouraging hug, which inspired me a lot.
Thanks to you, I made my best performance. I’m wondering if it is convenient for you to come to my home so that I can cook authentic Chinese food for you as a treat. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。上周参加了考生所在市组织的英语话剧比赛(English Drama Competition)并取得了较好的成绩。考生的外教Mr. White此前给予了考生很多帮助和鼓励,请考生给他写封电子邮件表达谢意。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→ delighted
诚挚的:sincere→genuine
帮助:help→assist
表示:extend→express
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Honestly speaking, I couldn’t have done such a good job without your help and encouragement.
拓展句:Honestly speaking, I couldn’t have done such a good job if I didn't have your help and encouragement.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Every time I practised my part, you accompanied me, pointed out where I could improve, and told me how to do it better.(运用了every time引导的时间状语从句和where引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m wondering if it is convenient for you to come to my home so that I can cook authentic Chinese food for you as a treat.(运用了so that引导的状语从句)
5.Dear Philip,
I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for the English original novel you mailed to me. I benefited a lot from The Little Prince, which is a fairy tale for both children and adults. I was deeply moved by the prince’s attitude towards the world, which brought my inner sincerity and pure innocence back. Moreover, this book made me well acquainted with a splendid culture of English, which laid a solid foundation for my English learning.
Thank you again for your generous present.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Philip送给你一本英语读物,你读后收获颇多。请你给他写一封email,内容包括:1. 表示感谢;2. 分享阅读收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢:gratitude→appreciation
感动:move→touch
有益的:splendid→excellent
熟悉的:acquainted = conversant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Thank you again for your generous present.
拓展句:Thank you again for your generous present, from which I benefited a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I benefited a lot from The Little Prince, which is a fairy tale for both children and adults. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for the English original novel you mailed to me. (运用了省略关系代词that或者which的限定性定语从句)
6.Dear Jim,
I’m writing this letter to show my appreciation to you for your help during my quarantine.
As a close contact with COVID-19 ,I had to stay at home.As a student in Hongxing Middle school,I need study to keep up with other students,and you offered to help me with my study.Not only did you help me with my study,but you took good care of me.Without your help,I would fall behind others.
What you did means a lot for me.I determine to work hard and to be a person like you who help others as a volunteer.Thanks for your devotion again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,因新冠密接而居家隔离,社区志愿者Jim给予许多帮助,要求考生写一封感谢信,感谢他所做的事及这些事的意义及自身感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累建议:
感谢:appreciation→gratitude
照顾:take care of→look after
帮助:help →favor
表达:show→express
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:What you did means a lot for me.I determined to work hard and to be a person like you who helps others as a volunteer.
拓展句:What you did means a lot for me,so I determine to work hard and to be a person like you who helps others as a volunteer.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only did you help me with my study,but you took good care of me.(运用了not only的倒装句)
【高分句型2】What you did means a lot for me.I determine to work hard and to be a person like you who helps others as a volunteer. (运用了what引导的主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)
7.Dear Lio,
On behalf of the Students’ Union of our school, I’m writing to express our heartfelt thanks for your wonderful speech on AI.
We Chinese have a saying that listening to your words for an hour is more beneficial than reading for ten years. We have learned a lot from your speech indeed. Having heard your speech, we not only gain a better understanding of what AI is, but we’re also aware of what effects it might have on us human beings. We do hope you’ll come to our school to deliver more brilliant speeches in the near future.
Thanks again!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给Lio教授写一封邮件,感谢他来你校给学生作有关AI的报告,并谈谈收获和期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表:on behalf of→represent
表达:express→convey
有帮助的:beneficial→helpful
衷心的:heartfelt→sincere
2.句型拓展
陈述句变倒装句
原句:Having heard your speech, we not only gain a better understanding of what AI is, but we’re also aware of what effects it might have on us human beings.
拓展句:Having heard your speech, not only do we gain a better understanding of what AI is, but we’re also aware of what effects it might have on us human beings.
【点睛】[高分句型1]We Chinese have a saying that listening to your words for an hour is more beneficial than reading for ten years.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
[高分句型2]We do hope you’ll come to our school to deliver more brilliant speeches in the near future.(运用了that(已省)引导的宾语从句)
8.Dear John,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the award. As your student, I just want you to know how glad I am at your achievement.
For these years, you've shown great passion in teaching and kept on improving our English ability. It is your humorous and instructive teaching that makes English learning an entertaining and eye-opening experience for us. Without your selfless devotion, we couldn't have made such great progress. Thank you for your company.
I really hope that you can enjoy your stay here and make more achievements.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本文为应用文写作,要求考生给英国籍外教John写一封邮件表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
继续:keep on→ go on
赢得:winning→getting
喜欢:enjoy→ be fond of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Without your selfless devotion, we couldn't have made such great progress.
拓展句:If there was no your selfless devotion, we couldn't have made such great progress.
【点睛】【高分句型1】s your student, I just want you to know how glad I am at your achievement.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It is your humorous and instructive teaching that makes English learning an entertaining and eye-opening experience for us.(运用了强调句)
9.Dear Vincent,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class One, Senior Two. I’m writing to express my gratitude for your returning my book.
Last Sunday, I left my book Pride and Prejudice on the playground owing to my carelessness. I was worried because the book was a gift from my best friend, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my book was at the school’s Lost and Found Office and it was you who had found my book. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
I am deeply touched by your thoughtful kindness. Please accept my sincere thanks again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给捡到你丢失书的外教Vincent写一封感谢信,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.描述经过;3.表达感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激:gratitude→appreciation
由于:owing to→on account of
感动:touch→move
真诚的:sincere→genuine
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I am deeply touched by your thoughtful kindness. Please accept my sincere thanks again.
拓展句:I am so deeply touched by your thoughtful kindness that you must accept my sincere thanks again.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I was worried because the book was a gift from my best friend, which were very important to me.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my book was at the school’s Lost and Found Office and it was you who had found my book.(运用了that引导宾语从句以及强调句型)
10.Dear Dad and Mom,
I am writing to convey my sincere appreciation to you for your care. If it had not been for your care and help in every aspect of my life, I wouldn’t have gone far.
During these years, I shall never forget the delicious meals you’ve prepared for me. It is you who give me encouragement and strength when I am in great depression. Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping me overcome difficulties in study.
My appreciation is beyond any words. I will be more than pleased if I can help you do some housework in return for your care. And I will spare no effort to work harder.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在感恩节来临之际,用英语给父母写一封感谢信,感谢家长无微不至的关心并表达努力学习和多做家务的决心。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢:appreciation→gratitude
美味的:delicious→tasty
沮丧:depression→frustration
克服:overcome→get over
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:During these years, I shall never forget the delicious meals you’ve prepared for me.
拓展句:Never will I ever forget the delicious meals you’ve prepared for me during these years.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is you who give me encouragement and strength when I am in great depression.(使用了强调句型和when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】If it had not been for your care and help in every aspect of my life, I wouldn’t have gone far.(使用了虚拟语气)

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