上海高考英语写作分类训练:应用文(含答案)

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应用文
1.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
请就“Not in time, place, or circumstances, but in the man lies success.”这句名言谈谈你的看法。
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2.Nowadays more and more people stress the importance of music education. Some students suggest having one more music class every week. Suppose you were Li Hua from Senior One, write an essay to your school newspaper and express your opinions on the topic “Should students have one more music class every week ”
Dear editor,

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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
3.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青。你的学校即将举办“回眸五十年”纪念活动,你在学生会参与相关的准备工作,并负责向来宾介绍学校的变化,等等。请就此给你的英国好友Alan写封邮件交流你的想法。你的邮件必须包括:
1.介绍纪念活动的主要内容;
2.描述你所见闻的学校变化;
3.简述你对学校发展的期许。
(注:文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。)
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4.Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的学生李华,你们学校将组织一次高三学生参观大学的活动,学生可以从“专业及课程介绍 (Major and Course Descriptions)”; “参观图书馆、实验室 (Library & Laboratory Visiting)”; “随班学习体验 (On Spot Studying)” 和 “与教授面对面 (Dialogue with Professors)” 四个活动中选取两个作为主要活动,特此向高三学生征求意见。请你写一封邮件给活动组织者,内容须包括:
1.你最感兴趣的两个活动;
2.你对这两个活动感兴趣的理由。
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5.假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青,你校校刊上的“展望未来”栏目正在征文,请以“50年后的学校”为题写一篇文章投稿。你的稿件必须包括:
描述50年后的学校里的一个场景;谈谈现在的你置身其中的感受。
(注:文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。)
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6.假如你是明启中学高三学生李华,你校学生会正在征集志愿者活动方案,请在以下三项活动中选择一项:
一、深入社区宣传环保知识;
二、担任“奉贤博物馆”义务讲解员;
三、去孤儿院为孩子们上兴趣课。请你给学生会写封邮件,内容须包括:
1. 你的选择及理由;
2. 你准备如何做。
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7.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假期即将来临,你的朋友李华计划完成一篇调查报告,他对去公共图书馆还是去自习室(self-study room)写报告犹豫不决,现征求你的建议。请参考以下信息,写一封邮件,内容需包括:
1. 你的建议;
2. 你建议的理由。
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8.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华,你的朋友Jack邀请你一同制定毕业后的暑假计划,请从他提供的计划清单中选择你所心仪的一个。给他写封邮件,内容需包含:
1.你的选择
2.你的理由及如何执行该计划
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9.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华,你的班级将要组织高考倒计时100天的主题班会,班长正在征集主题班会活动方案,请你给班长写封邮件,内容须包括:
1.活动流程及理由;
2.需要做哪些准备。
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10.Directions: Please write an essay of about 100-120 words based on the following instructions in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊,你校为丰富学生课余生活,营造英语学习氛围,决定开展一次有关传统节日的英语征文活动。为积极响应学校号召,你准备写一个最让你难忘的节日,内容包括:
1) 该节日的简单介绍;
2) 你最难忘的场景。
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参考答案:
1. Recently I read an adage that “Not in time, place, or circumstances, but in the man lies success.” I couldn’t agree more with this saying.
Many people attribute the success of others to luck and think they can do the same in the circumstances. But is this really the case For example, when Jack Ma was working on Taobao, there were more than one e-commerce platform with him at the same time, but in the end, we only know Alibaba.
This example tells us that a person’s success does not depend on the time, place or environment, but on the quality of the person. Indomitable will, the spirit of never say die and other valuable qualities are the key to success.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用写作。要求考生就“Not in time, place, or circumstances, but in the man lies success.”这句名言谈谈看法。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
认为:think→consider
情况:circumstances→situation
最近:recently→lately
依靠:depend on→rely on
2. 句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:This example tells us that a person’s success does not depend on the time, place or environment, but on the quality of the person.
拓展句:This example tells us that a person’s success lies not in time, place, or environment, but in their own qualities.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Many people attribute the success of others to luck and think they can do the same in the circumstances.(省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]For example, when Jack Ma was working on Taobao, there were more than one e-commerce platform with him at the same time, but in the end, we only know Alibaba.(when引导的时间状语从句)
2.Dear editor,
Writing this letter, I am trying to express my standpoint on whether students should have one more music class every week. I am strongly for the proposal that students should have one more music class every week.
Since music education is a required subject and is helpful in developing students’ ability in appreciating beauty, It is advisable that the school open more than one music class every week for students to attend. Then, students are having too much stress from their study and they need an appropriate time to relax themselves. Singing or just enjoying music in a music class is a good way to free them from heavy study and be more concentrated in the following classes.
I hope my proposal will be helpful to you!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇投稿,要求考生给校报投稿,表明自己关于“学生是否应每周上一节以上的音乐课?”主题的观点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
培养:develop→ cultivate
试图:try to → attempt to
压力:stress→ pressure
有益的:be helpful→ be beneficial
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:Then, students are having too much stress from their study and they need an appropriate time to relax themselves.
拓展句:Having too much stress from their study, students need an appropriate time to relax themselves.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am strongly for the proposal that students should have one more music class every week.(同位语从句)
【高分句型2】Singing or just enjoying music in a music class is a good way to free them from heavy study and be more concentrated in the following classes.(动名词短语做主语)
3.Dear Alan,
My school is about to hold a commemorative event called “Looking Back on Fifty Years” at the end of this month. I will participate in the relevant preparations as a member of the student union and be responsible for introducing the changes in the school to guests. Because this event is so important, I need some advice from you.
This commemorative event consists of three parts: inviting the principal to give a speech, leading guests to visit the school achievement exhibition and holding a celebration party, which will be significant. As is known, our school has undergone tremendous changes in the past 50 years. State-of-the-art teaching equipment and even artificial intelligence devices to assist in teaching have been equipped in our school. Besides, there are various cultural clubs and communities to enrich our leisure life.
Hope my school will become better and better !
Yours,
Li Qing
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你的英国好友Alan写封邮件介绍你学校即将举办“回眸五十年”纪念活动,内容包括纪念活动的主要内容、你所见闻的学校变化和对学校发展的期许。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:participate in→join in
此外:besides→what’s more
希望:hope→wish
帮助:assist→ help
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My school is about to hold a commemorative event called “Looking Back on Fifty Years” at the end of this month.
拓展句:My school is about to hold a commemorative event which is called “Looking Back on Fifty Years” at the end of this month.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This commemorative event consists of three parts: inviting the principal to give a speech, leading guests to visit the school achievement exhibition and holding a celebration party, which will be significant.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Because this event is so important, I need some advice from you.(运用了because引导的原因状语)
4. Hearing that the school will organize an activity for senior three students to visit the university, I am very excited and happy. What I want to participate in are the two activities, Major and Course Descriptions and On Spot Studying.
First of all, I am fond of the activity Major and Course Descriptions, which can help me have a deeper understanding of the university's professional courses and clarify the direction for my future study.
Besides, I am deeply interested in the activity On Spot Studying. In the activity, I can truly experience the learning atmosphere of the university. Meanwhile,it offers me an good chance to know more about how the students in the university take courses every day,which will make me decide whether I should change the way that I learn in the middle school.
All in all, the activity of visiting the university is of great help to our future planning. I am looking forward to the arrival of that day.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给活动组织者写一封信,说明你对学校组织的高三学生参观大学的活动中感兴趣的两个活动以及对这两个活动感兴趣的理由
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢:be fond of→ enjoy
高兴的:happy→pleased→delighted
此外:besides → what’s more
机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Hearing that the school will organize an activity for senior three students to visit the university, I am very excited and happy.
拓展句:BecauseI hear that the school will organize an activity for senior three students to visit the university, I am very excited and happy.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What I want to participate in are the two activities, Major and Course Descriptions and On Spot Studying.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】Meanwhile, it offers me an good chance to know more about how the students in the university take courses every day,which will make me decide whether I should change the way that I learn in the middle school.(运用了how与whether引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句以及that引导的定语从句)
5.One possible version:
Schools in 50 years
50 years later, the school uses robots to teach students, and students sit in a transparent classroom on all sides to learn. Besides, students’ performance in class and learning feedback are all conducted by AI equipment. The construction of the school is no longer what it is now. The school 50 years later is very intelligent, and students’ needs can be met in an instant. The school has only a few technicians and teachers who manage machinery and equipment, so it is so convenient.
Imagine traveling through time and space to the future school 50 years later. It will be a fast and convenient school linked by the Internet. I will be shocked by all modern devices and intelligent functions. It’s great to feel the learning efficiency brought by the infinite power of modern science and technology, feel the friendship between classmates, and carefully taste the magic of knowledge.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“50年后的学校”为题为校刊上的“展望未来”栏目写一篇文章投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
用、利用:use→make use of
此外:besides→what’s more
智能的:intelligent→smart
震惊的:shocked→astonished
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Imagine traveling through time and space to the future school 50 years later. It will be a fast and convenient school linked by the Internet.
拓展句:Imagine traveling through time and space to the future school 50 years later, which will be a fast and convenient school linked by the Internet.
【高分句型1】The construction of the school is no longer what it is now.(运用了what引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】The school has only a few technicians and teachers who manage machinery and equipment, so everything is so convenient.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
6.One possible version:
Dear Sir/ Madam,
Our school will hold a volunteer activity, which may be chosen from the following three programmes: publicizing knowledge of environmental protection to communities, being a volunteer guide for the Fengxian Museum and conducting interesting lessons to kids in the orphanage. In my opinoin, being a volunteer guide for the Fengxian Museum is suitable for students.
There are two reasons why I choose the second activity. To start with, it’s a valuable opportunity for students to have a better knowledge of the Fengxian Museum, during which they can broaden their horizons. Besides, it’s beneficial for students to improve their communication skills especially English speaking because there are many foreigners visiting it.
If I’m lucky enough to be chosen as one guide, I will cherish the golden opportunity and make full preparations, such as searching materials on the Internet and asking teachers for help.
Sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校学生会写封邮件在三个志愿者活动策划中选择某一项活动,并阐述选择的理由和要如何做。
【详解】1.词汇积累
项目:programme→project
除此之外:besides→moreover
珍惜:cherish→treasure
寻求某人的帮助:ask sb for help→seek sb’s help
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:In my opinoin, being a volunteer guide for the Fengxian Museum is suitable for students.
拓展句:In my opinoin, being a volunteer guide for the Fengxian Museum is suitable for students, from which students can learn a lot.
【高分句型1】To start with, it’s a valuable opportunity for students to have a better knowledge of the Fengxian Museum, during which they can broaden their horizons.(运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If I’m lucky enough to be chosen as one guide, I will cherish the golden opportunity and make full preparations, such as searching materials on the Internet and asking teachers for help. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
7.Dear Li Hua,
Knowing that you are in two minds about whether to go to the public library or the self-study room to write your report, I suggest that you go to the public library for the following reasons:
First of all, the public library is free of charge, while going to the self-study room will cost you 20 yuan every 5 hours. Second, although the self-study room is open 24 hours a day, it is enough to write your report from 9 a.m. to 5 p.m. Third, it may take you more time to go to the public library than to the self-study room, but you can use the time on the bus to formulate your report. Last but not least, public libraries have a wealth of resources and these resources may be helpful to you in writing your report and they are free; however, you can only enjoy free refreshments in the self-study room.
Hope that my suggestions will be of use to you.
Yours,
...
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友李华写一封邮件,就寒假期间去公共图书馆还是去自习室写调查报告提出建议,并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
犹豫不决:in two minds→hesitant
建议:suggest→advise
丰富的:a wealth of→abundant
对……有帮助:be helpful to→be of help to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last but not least, public libraries have a wealth of resources and these resources may be helpful to you in writing your report and they are free.
拓展句:Last but not least, public libraries have a wealth of resources that may be helpful to you in writing your report, and they are free.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, although the self-study room is open 24 hours a day, it is enough to write your report from 9 a.m. to 5 p.m.(运用了although引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】Knowing that you are in two minds about whether to go to the public library or the self-study room to write your report, I suggest that you go to the public library for the following reasons.(运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
8.Dear jack,
I’m more than glad to hear from you. Yes, like you said, I have been longing for the upcoming summer vacation after the College Entrance Examination, during which I can do a lot of amazing things.
This three - month vacation will undoubtedly be my longest holiday ever. Therefore, I’d like to make it as meaningful as possible. Firstly, I’ll take a part-time job to earn some money to cover part of my college tuition. In the meanwhile, I can meet many interesting people and learn about society. Besides, I’m planning to enroll in a driving course and try to get my driver’s license as driving will be an important and necessary skill in modern society. If time permits, I’m going to learn some Musical Instruments, which is something I’ve always wanted to do. I have a strong interest in guitar, so I want to learn how to play guitar, which can enrich my hobby. I practice in my spare time in the evening, so that I can enjoy the peace of the guitar melody.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的朋友Jack邀请你一同制定毕业后的暑假计划这一情况,请从他提供的计划清单中选择你所心仪的一个,写封邮件给他。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→ happy
与此同时:In the meanwhile → At the same time
此外:Besides→ What’s more
重要的:important→ vital
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, I’ll take a part-time job to earn some money to cover part of my college tuition.
拓展句:Firstly, I’ll take a part-time job to earn some money, which can cover part of my college tuition.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Yes, like you said, I have been longing for the upcoming summer vacation after the College Entrance Examination, during which I can do a lot of amazing things.(运用了介词during +which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I practice in my spare time in the evening, so that I can enjoy the peace of the guitar melody.(运用了so that引导的的目的状语从句)
9.In order to stimulate students’ enthusiasm for learning and cultivate their self-confidence, our class will hold a class meeting with the theme of 100 days countdown to the College Entrance Examination. Now I would like to introduce my class meeting activity plan as follows.
First, our headteacher will give an opening speech, explaining the purpose and significance of the class meeting. After that, the song “My Future is not a Dream” is played to create a class atmosphere. Then it is arranged that the students will talk about their goals and how to spend the next 100 days. Finally, everyone will take a collective oath to stimulate the passion of learning.
In addition, before the class meeting, students should prepare the lyrics of “My future is not a dream” and the content of their speech.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一个以高考倒计时100天的主题的班会课活动方案,其中包括活动流程及原因以及需要做的准备。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激励:stimulate→motivate
方案:plan →scheme
目标:goal→aim
此外:in addition → what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to stimulate students’ enthusiasm for learning and cultivate their self-confidence, our class will hold a class meeting with the theme of 100 days countdown to the College Entrance Examination.
拓展句:In order to stimulate students’ enthusiasm for learning and cultivate their self-confidence, our class will hold a class meeting whose theme is 100 days countdown to the College Entrance Examination.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, our headteacher will give an opening speech, explaining the purpose and significance of the class meeting.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】Then it is arranged that the students will talk about their goals and how to spend the next 100 days.(运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句)
10. As is known to us, the Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the major Chinese traditional festivals, which family members spend together laughing and chatting.
The last Mid-Autumn festival is the most unforgettable one in my life. It seems that it had happened yesterday. On that day, led by our headmaster, we went to the Xiyang nursing home, which housed many elderly people. Their adult children, mostly migrant workers, couldn’t keep them company. First, we swept the floor, cleaned dinner tables with cloths. Then we instructed the elderly techniques involving how to order goods online and use smart phones skillfully. Finally we chatted cheerfully while eating mooncakes and admiring the moon together. As tired we were on that day, we were delighted at the sight of smiles on their faces.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生介绍一个最让你难忘的节日,内容包括:该节日的简单介绍;你最难忘的场景。
【详解】1.词汇积累
主要的:major→main
教;指导:guide→instruct
兴致勃勃地:excitedly→cheerfully
陪伴某人:accompany sb.→keep pany
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Their adult children, mostly migrant workers, couldn’t keep them company.
拓展句:Their adult children, mostly migrant workers who worked in big cities, couldn’t keep them company.
【点睛】[高分句型1] On that day, led by our headmaster, we went to the Xiyang nursing home, which housed many elderly people. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] As tired we were on that day, we were delighted at the sight of smiles on their faces. (运用了as引导的部分倒装语序的让步状语从句)

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