上海高考英语写作分类训练:开放性作文(含答案)

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开放性作文
1.Directions: Write an English essay in no less than 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的高一学生李华,你们学校就是否在高一阶段设置生涯规划(career planning)课程征求大家意见,有的同学表示欢迎,但有的同学则认为没有必要。请你谈谈你的看法并陈述理由。
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2.Directions: Write an English composition in about 120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
四中校园里,偶有流浪猫(homeless cats)出没,引起了同学间的激烈讨论。有同学认为流浪猫扰民,应该清理;有同学认为流浪猫也是生命,应该救助。对此谈谈你的看法。
你的文章必须包含以下内容:
1. 你对是否应该在校园内救助流浪猫的看法;
2. 你的理由。
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3.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你是李华,你所在的学校将于近期开展“职业一日体验”活动, 共有三个备选体验场所:快递驿站(delivery station);网络科技公司(network technology company);社区托儿所(community nursery)。写一篇日记,谈谈你的想法。日记中必须包括:
1. 你选择的体验场所;
2. 你选择该场所的理由;
3. 你准备在体验当天做什么。
(日记中不得出现考生姓名,学校等真实信息)
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4.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明,最近学生会对本校全体学生进行了一项关于“博物馆免费开放政策”的问卷调查,结果如下表所示,写一篇调查报告,内容须包括:
1)对调查结果的简单描述;
2)对数据的原因分析;
3)你的看法。
1 博物馆免费情况下会考虑 67.86%
2 免费才去 3.57%
3 持无所谓态度 28.57%
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5.Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你平时喜欢读小说吗 你喜欢读什么类型的小说,谈谈你对阅读小说的看法。
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6.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。 请以 My Favorite Teacher (我最喜爱的老师)为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 对该老师的简单介绍(含年龄、外貌、所教学科等);
2. 喜爱该老师的理由。
3. (文中不得出现考生姓名,学校等真实信息)
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7.Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
班级同学就“Is natural food better than prepackaged food ”展开了激烈的讨论。请就该主题发表你的看法,并简要阐述原因。
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8.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
不同的经历给人不一样的感受,也让人有不同的收获。
请以“一次________的经历” 为主题 (空格处可以填写一个形容词,如难忘的、尴尬的、愉快的,等等),描述你生活中的一件事情,并谈谈你的感受。
1. 建议选择两到三个方面的细节来支撑文章主旨;
2. 细节的选择需要包括感官细节和人物对话。
3. (文中不得出现考生姓名,学校等真实信息)
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9.假设你是明启中学高三学生李华,目前担任学校社团负责人。近期,你校被评为社团明星学校,为了在报纸上分享你校社团情况,请你以“Clubs in My School”为题,写一篇文章,内容须包含:
1. 对你校社团进行分类;
2. 具体描述每一类社团的特色。
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10.假设你是光明中学高三学生李明。近期,年级组正在策划18岁成人礼仪式,其中一个环节为“说说你的故事”,筹备组现面向本校全体高三学生征集真实故事案例。请给筹备组写一封邮件,内容须包括:
1) 你印象最深的一件事情;
2) 此事对你的启发和影响。
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1.As a high school student at Mingqi High School, I believe that setting up career planning courses for students in the first year of high school is a necessary measure. The importance of career planning lessons lies in the fact that students need to know what kind of skills they possess and what they want to accomplish in the future. With career planning courses, students will be able to gain knowledge about their chosen field, identify their strengths and weaknesses, and develop crucial life skills such as communication, time management, and problem-solving.
Additionally, career planning courses will help students make informed decisions about their future career choices. With the help of career planning courses, they will be able to choose suitable university programs or vocational training, leading to more successful and satisfying employment outcomes.
In conclusion, career planning courses are important for students in high school, and they should be offered as a necessary part of the curriculum. Students who take these courses will be better equipped to achieve their goals and succeed in their future careers.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考试就是否在高一设置生涯规划(career planning)课程谈谈自己的看法并陈述理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
相信:believe→ consider
完成:accomplish→ complete
合适:suitable→ proper
成功的:successful→ victorious
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:With career planning courses, students will be able to gain knowledge about their chosen field, identify their strengths and weaknesses, and develop crucial life skills such as communication, time management, and problem-solving.
同义句:Enrolling in career planning courses empowers students with comprehensive knowledge of their chosen profession, a solid grasp of their own strengths and limitations, and the cultivation of essential life skills including effective communication, adept time management, and analytical reasoning abilities.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As a high school student at Mingqi High School, I believe that setting up career planning courses for students in the first year of high school is a necessary measure.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Students who take these courses will be better equipped to achieve their goals and succeed in their future careers.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
2.Recently, an increasing number of stray cats have been hanging around our campus and many students are arguing over them. Some students believe that they may cause problems and therefore should be cleared out while others think that we should care and protect them. As far as I am concerned, feeding them now and then is not a wise way to protect them, whose reasons are as follows.
Feeding them encourages them to remain nearby to acquire easy food rather than seeking it for themselves. Cats will often mark a home where someone feeds them to warn off others. This means they will not seek better shelter, they will not seek aid elsewhere, and they may die because they are trying to remain near a source of food. Furthermore, this may create the possibility that these cats could be abused by neighbors who don’t want them around. They may grow weak and become the victim of other animals. They may be shunned by their own mates or families because they acquire a different smell from eating near humans.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文写作。题目要求考生就校园流浪猫问题提出自己的看法,需要明确是否应在校园内救助流浪猫,并给出自己的理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
越来越多的:an increasing number of→a growing number of, more and more
议论:argue→quarrel, debate, dispute
引起:cause→lead to, bring about
就我而言:as far as I am concerned→in my view, in my opinion, personally speaking
而且,此外:furthermore→moreover, what’s more
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Recently, an increasing number of stray cats have been hanging around our campus and many students are arguing over them.
拓展句:Recently, an increasing number of stray cats have been hanging around our campus, over which many students are arguing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As far as I am concerned, feeding them now and then is not a wise way to protect them, whose reasons are as follows.(运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Furthermore, this may create the possibility that these cats could be abused by neighbors who don’t want them around.(运用了that引导同位语从句、who引导定语从句)
3.A few days later, our school will carry out “Professional one-day experience” activity, which is a very good social practice experience. Out of love for children, I decided to go to a community nursery school to experience a day of volunteer work.
Because of their parents’ work, these children are sent to the community nursery, where they can get good care. As nursery teachers, their job requires a lot of patience and love. On the day of the experience, I decided to make the kids happy by playing games. Interacting with them as much as possible can strengthen the bond with children and make them feel comforted.
This job is sacred and glorious, and it requires plenty of love and care. I believe that through this “Professional one-day experience” activity, we can not only improve our extracurricular practice ability, but also make us more caring.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于你所在的学校将于近期开展“职业一日体验”活动,共有三个备选体验场所:快递驿站(delivery station);网络科技公司(network technology company);社区托儿所(community nursery)。写一篇日记,谈谈你的想法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开展:carry out→ launch
由于,出于:Out of→ Due to
需要:requires→ needs
提高,增强:improve→ enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This job is sacred and glorious, and it requires plenty of love and care.
拓展句:This job is sacred and glorious, which requires plenty of love and care.
【点睛】【高分句型1】A few days later, our school will carry out “Professional one-day experience” activity, which is a very good social practice experience.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe that through this “Professional one-day experience” activity, we can not only improve our extracurricular practice ability, but also make us more caring.(运用了not only…but also…的固定句型。)
4.Recently, I conducted a questionnaire survey on the "free admission policy of museums" among senior high school students.
As is shown in the picture, 67.86% of students would consider museums free of charge, which really surprises me. 3.57% of students went for free. 28.57% hold the indifferent attitude. But what accounts for the huge gap between students In my opinion, 67.86% of the students may like to study but the family conditions are not good, there is no such expenditure, so they will consider free of charge. 3.57% of students are not interested in museums because they do not love studying, so it is free for them to go. However, 28.57% of the students are indifferent because their family conditions are good and they like to go to museums to increase their knowledge. They will go there anyway.
Personally, under the condition of free, students should visit there regularly to learn some extracurricular knowledge, which will be of great help to enrich their experience, broaden our knowledge and make us a knowledgeable person.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是明启中学高三学生李明,最近学生会对本校全体学生进行了一项关于“博物馆免费开放政策”的问卷调查,结果如下表所示,写一篇调查报告,内容须包括:对调查结果的简单描述;对数据的原因分析;你的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
免费:free of charge→for free→for nothing
有益的:be of great help → be helpful
就个人而言:personally→in one’s opinion
拓宽:broaden→ widen
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Recently, I conducted a questionnaire survey on the “free admission policy of museums” among senior high school students.
拓展句:Recently, I conducted a questionnaire survey which is on the “free admission policy of museums” among senior high school students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As is shown in the picture, 67.86% of students would consider museums free of charge, which really surprises me.(运用了as和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】However, 28.57% of the students are indifferent because their family conditions are good and they like to go to museums to increase their knowledge.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
5. I like reading, especially for detective novel. I love recreating the scene from the novel in my mind, and I really fancy the bright detectives who are created by the writer. However, some people argue that reading detective novel is nothing but a waste of time, since you have the time to read, why don’t you read some books that could learn useful knowledge. But I cannot agree with it.
In the first place, reading detective novel is a good way to learn lots of new knowledge from books. For instance, almost all of the detective novel included the knowledge of investigation, psychology, behaviour analysis, and some even involved the aspect of physical and chemistry. The writer perfectly used that knowledge to write into the fiction, which make the reader learn it naturally. Hence, reading detective novel is not a bad thing, it will help you review your academic knowledge and learn something you don’t know before.
In the second place, reading detective novel is like some kind of brainstorming game. When you are reading a novel which is every exciting, your mind will follow the plot that will set your wits to work. In other words, reading a detective novel not only could make you feel relaxed but also could make you become smarter than before.
To sum up, there is of great benefit to read detective novel. You could totally enjoy the pleasure that the intelligent detective bring to you, and you could be smarter.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生描述自己喜欢的小说类型,并说明对阅读小说的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因为:since→because/now that
首先:in the first place→for one thing
包括:include→cover
明智的:smart→wise
2.句式拓展
陈述变倒装句
原句:In other words, reading a detective novel not only could make you feel relaxed but also could make you become smarter than before.
拓展句:In other words, not only could reading a detective novel make you feel relaxed but also could make you become smarter than before.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You could totally enjoy the pleasure that the intelligent detective bring to you, and you could be smarter.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】The writer perfectly used that knowledge to write into the fiction, which make the reader learn it naturally. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
6.[参考范文]
My favorite teacher is Mr. Tan. He is an English teacher in my high school. He is a strong man in his thirties. He is tall and handsome. He always wears a pair of glasses. And I think the glasses make him look wiser.
His classes are very interesting! He always shows funny pictures to us, which makes the school day no longer boring. We may all laugh out loud and remember that language point more clearly. Besides, Mr. Tan is friendly and kind. He cares about us very much. If some of us feel sick, no matter it’s physically or mentally, he would give us the help we just need. He is really different from our parents and knows when they should give us the space we are eager for. Last but not least, he is good at making his classes very lively, so we are all interested in English.
This is my favorite teacher. I like him very much! And I hope that you can also meet your favourite teachers every year!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求考生以My Favorite Teacher(我最喜爱的老师)为题,写一篇短文参赛。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
认为:think→consider/suppose
帮助:help→ assistance
渴望的:eager→ thirsty
擅长:be good at→ do well in
2. 句式拓展
合并句子
原句:He always wears a pair of glasses. And I think the glasses make him look wiser.
拓展句:He always wears a pair of glasses, which I think makes him look wiser.
【点睛】[高分句型1] He always shows funny pictures to us, which makes the school day no longer boring.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] And I hope that you can also meet your favourite teachers every year!(that引导的宾语从句)
7.When it comes to the selection of next meal, I believe that natural food is better than prepackaged food.
It is known to all that prepackaged food is food that has been prepared in advance and put in plastic or cardboard containers to be sold. While prepackaged food can be fast and convenient, it is often less healthy and nutritious. When processing and wrapping to have longer shelf life, manufacturers often use sodium, artificial colours, additives and other unhealthy ingredients.
In addition, prepackaged food is not environmentally friendly. Natural food is direct, fresh from the nature while prepackaged food has to use containers and coverings, which leads to waste in landfills and causes threats to ecosystem.
Prepackaged food is sometimes less safe. Prepackaged food may mislead the consumers by changing the due dates and claiming the wrong ingredients. Even some famous manufacturers and distributors are reported to have dishonest commercial behaviour.
Taking health, nutrition, environmentally-friendliness and safety into consideration, I believe that natural food is far better than prepackaged food.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇议论文。要求考生对你班同学就“Is natural food better than prepackaged food ”展开了激烈的讨论的问题,发表你的看法,并简要阐述原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
相信:believe→ have faith in
使用:use → apply
导致……结果:lead to→ result in
著名的:famous→ well-known
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Prepackaged food is sometimes less safe. Prepackaged food may mislead the consumers by changing the due dates and claiming the wrong ingredients.
拓展句:Prepackaged food that may mislead the consumers by changing the due dates and claiming the wrong ingredients is sometimes less safe.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is known to all that prepackaged food is food that has been prepared in advance and put in plastic or cardboard containers to be sold.(主语从句)
【高分句型2】Taking health, nutrition, environmentally-friendliness and safety into consideration, I believe that natural food is far better than prepackaged food(现在分词短语做状语)
8.One possible version:
Recently, I took part in an activity organized by my school and it was very educational, which made students more aware of the problems faced by people with physical disabilities.
We were asked to “take on a disability” for several hours. I chose to use a wheelchair while others wore sound-blocking earplugs or blindfolds.
I had never considered how difficult it would be to use a wheelchair before. As soon as I sat down, my weight made the chair roll, since the wheels were unlocked. It took me quite a while to control it, but my palms reddened and my wrist and forearm muscles ached. I was deeply touched. I couldn’t imagine how it was for those who had to use a wheelchair for good. I felt frustrated every time someone talked to me, because I had to strain my neck and looked up at him.
“We should put ourselves in others, shoes.” I said to my friend Tom after the activity.
“Yes, we ought to understand the disabled and help them if necessary,” responded Tom.
The experience has left a deep impression on me both physically and emotionally. I realize how little I know about the life of a disabled person and how much we should do for them. The experience is really instructive and meaningful.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生以“一次______的经历”为题,写一篇文章,描述生活中的一件事,并谈谈自己的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:take part in → participate in
一……就:as soon as →hardly…when / the minute
沮丧的:frustrated → upset / thwarted
了解:know about / learn about
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:I had never considered how difficult it would be to use a wheelchair before.
拓展句:Never had I considered how difficult it would be to use a wheelchair before.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, I took part in an activity organized by my school and it was very educational, which made students more aware of the problems faced by people with physical disabilities.(运用了and连接的并列句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】As soon as I sat down, my weight made the chair roll, since the wheels were unlocked.(运用了as soon as引导的时间状语从句和since引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型3】I couldn’t imagine how it was for those who had to use a wheelchair for good.(运用了how引导的宾语从句和who引导的定语从句)
9.One possible version:
Clubs in My School
To enrich students’ life, our school organizes a variety of clubs in my school. Almost every student in our school participates in a club, which makes their school life colorful. Generally speaking, the clubs in my school can be classified into two types: sports club and art club.
Sports club are popular among students. There are basketball club, football club, swimming club and so on, which are organized by students with the same interest. So students there can make friends. Besides, they can not only play sports in free time, but also they can learn some sports skills.
Art club including music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art. Also, it provides students some knowledge about art. Meanwhile, students there can have the access to the instrument, such as piano, Erhu and so on.
All the students in my school like the clubs. So I think the clubs are very significant.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以“Clubs in My School”为题,写一篇文章,内容须包含学生对校社团进行分类,并具体描述每一类社团的特色。
【详解】1.词汇积累
等等:and so on→and the like
此外:Besides→In addition
机会:chance→opportunity
同时:Meanwhile→At the same time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Art club including music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art.
拓展句:Art club which includes music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art.
【高分句型1】Almost every student in our school participates in a club, which makes their school life colorful. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】There are basketball club, football club, swimming club and so on, which are organized by students with the same interest. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
10.One possible version:
During the past three years in the Guangming senior high school, I have had many unforgettable experiences. One of the most unforgettable things was when our class prepared for a group singing competition. In order to win the competition, we all went for it. During the week before the competition, we practised singing in our free time. Although it was a hard job, every participant took it seriously and did their best. Thanks to our effort, we won the first prize. Hearing the exciting news, we were all wild with joy. The movement reminded me of an old saying-No pains, no gains. It was hard work, but during the course of preparation, we developed deep friendship, confidence as well as understanding!
【导语】本文是一篇开放作文。年级组正在策划18岁成人礼仪式,要求考生给筹备组写一封邮件说说自己印象最深刻的一件事,以及此事对自己的启发和影响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
难忘的:unforgettable→memorable
为了:in order to→in an effort to
困难的: hard→ tough
由于:thanks to→owing to
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句: Hearing the exciting news, we were all wild with joy.
拓展句: When we heard the exciting news, we were all wild with joy.
【高分句型1】One of the most unforgettable things was when our class prepared for a group singing competition. (运用了when引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】Although it was a hard job,every participant took it seriously and did their best. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句)

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