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书面表达最忌:
要点不全，内容不完整；
字(字迹潦草 ,字迹不清)；
不分段(分段是为了文章更清晰,至少要分成两段)；
低级错误(主谓不一致,时态不一致,词性变化不正确,单词拼写错误等)；
词汇堆砌(整篇几乎无完整句子,一塌糊涂,某个词汇过频重复使用)。
高 考 英 语 写 作 中
常 见 的 问 题（一）
1). 主谓不一致
误：Father and I am going to visit her.
正：Father and I are going to visit her.
误：There had many people on the bus.
正： There were many people on the bus.
2). 时态、语态混用
误：The meal is so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.
正：The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.
误：The old man knocked down by the car and injured badly.
正：The old man was knocked down by the car and injured badly.
3). 句子成分残缺
误：The young man running in the street fast.
正：The young man was running in the street fast.
误：They think whether go to college or not doesn’t matter.
正：They think it makes no difference whether they go to college or not
4). 中文式英语
误：Next month have a sports meeting.
正：Next month we will have a sports meeting.
误：Have some students think that college is so expensive that common families can’t afford it.
正：Have Some students think that the college tuition is so high that common families can’t afford it.
一、 作文的卷面与书写；
二、 语言表达的层次性与丰富性；
三、 行文的逻辑性与流畅性；
四、 文章的思想性与开放性；
整洁、规范的书写是写作得分的亮点[规范策略]
A. 词汇的选择灵活多样；[词汇策略]
B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;[句式策略]
突出文章段落中的主题句；
B.归纳各种功能的连词；[行文策略]
书面表达解题策略
不要总是以有生命的名词和人称代词开头
a) People have seen great changes in Shanghai in recent years.
b) Shanghai has witnessed great changes in recent years.
改变语态
a) Many people think birth control is quite necessary in China.
It is widely (commonly) thought /believed /held /(accepted) that birth control is quite necessary in China.
b) He has made rapid progress in English.
Rapid progress has been made in English.
c) We should make great efforts to prevent the environment from being destroyed.
Great efforts should be made to prevent the environment from being destroyed.
如要表达“越来越”，不要只使用more and more:
a) More and more students find learning English has become more and more difficult.
b) Students in growing numbers find learning English has become increasingly difficult.
a) More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years.
b) Teenage smoking is on the rise in recent years.
a) More and more teachers are demanded with the development of economy.
b) There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy.
如要表达“大多数”，不要一味用most:
a) Most students take a part-time job after class.
b) The majority of students take a part-time job after class.
a) Most people take part in sports of different kinds.
b) The considerable proportion of people take part in sports of different kinds.
a) Most college students take a negative attitude towards smoking.
b) The large percentage of college population take a negative attitude towards smoking.
如要表达“不仅……，而且……”不要只用not only... but also:
a) Taking a part-time job can not only earn a little money, but also have an opportunity to contact society.
b) Taking a part-time job means more than a little money you can earn. It also means an opportunity to contact society.
词汇策略
1、因为生病了他昨天没有参加会议。
He didn’t come to the meeting yesterday because he was ill.
He didn’t attend the meeting yesterday on account of his illness.
He was absent from the meeting yesterday owing to his illness.
His illness accounted for his absence from the meeting yesterday.
His illness prevented him from attending the meeting yesterday.
词汇策略
2、当他是孩童时，就喜爱学习。
When he was a child, he liked to learn everything.
As a child, he was fond of learning.
As a child, he took great pleasure in learning.
When he was a child, he was crazy about learning.
When he was a child, he had a strong desire for knowledge.
When he was a child, he had a strong appetite for knowledge.
3、我们将尽力按时完成任务。
We’ll do our best to finish our task in time.
We’ll do whatever we can to finish the task in time.
We’ll make great efforts to finish the task in time.
We’ll devote our efforts to finishing the task in time.
We’ll spare no efforts to finish the task in time.
词汇策略
词的讲究
简单词汇 建议使用词汇
About — concerning, involving, with regard to
be discussed/built — be under discussion/ construction/way/threat
Cause — bring about, give rise to, result in, lead to, contribute to
didn’t — failed to do
do — perform/ undertake/ conduct/ fulfill/ carry…out/ accomplish
explain — account for
Have — possess/be equipped with/be armed with
have no more… — run out of…
it is likely that… — chances are that…
keep, to be — remain
make sb. realize…— awaken sb to…
no matter what…— regardless of…
the purpose of …is to…— …is intended to do…
rapid growth — boom
take place — arise/occur
句子的丰富性
学会用一些常见句型
用不同形式表达同一句意
学会使用复杂句
掌握几种表达技巧
学会机智、巧妙地借鉴和运用试卷完形或阅读中的语言表达与观点
熟读好词好句，熟读乃至背诵书面表达题范文，所谓“它山之石，可以攻玉”。

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