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高考英语读后续写语篇练习在垃圾填埋场捡到了小猫题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文On a sunny afternoon in July, my husband Lenny decided to run our garbage. Living on a farm where no pick-up service was available, we burned what we could and took the rest to the town’s landfill(垃圾填埋场). After unloading, Lenny walked around to see what others had thrown away. Being a person who finds treasure in what others call trash, Lenny would sometimes bring home what he called “great finds”. He’d say, “You’ll never know when this will come in handy”or“Look at what someone threw away. I can fix and use that”. As a family on a tight budget, we appreciated his finds.As Lenny walked around that day, he picked up a few items and threw them on a large pile of garbage. Suddenly, he heard a “meow” and he looked around for what he thought would be a wild cat, but he saw nothing. Then he saw a shoebox in the garbage pile move slightly, and he heard the cries again. He picked up the box, which was sealed with tape. When Lenny cut the tape and cautiously tore open the shoebox, he found a black-and-white little cat, approximately eight weeks old. It was so frightened that it jumped into Lenny’s arms and clung on to him with its tiny claws. The little cat wasn’t afraid of him. The poor thing was very thin and had probably been taken away from its mother only recently.续写原文My husband wasn’t a great cat lover. He did not feel they should be household pets. Our two daughters had a different perspective as they had recently got another kitten from a local farmer. Even though he didn’t like cats, he knew he couldn’t leave this cat in the shoebox. It would probably be eaten by a fox.段首句Para 1：So he decided to bring it home.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Para 2：Later, Lenny and the cat became best friends, too.Part 2题目分析续写原文分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者丈夫莱尼到镇上的垃圾填埋场处理家里的垃圾时。在别人称之为垃圾的东西中发现宝藏的人，莱尼有时会把他所谓的“伟大的发现”带回家。对于一个预算紧张的家庭，我们很欣赏他的发现。有一天，作者丈夫发现一只被遗弃的6个月小猫，虽然不喜欢猫，但是担心这只猫可能会被狐狸吃掉，他决定带回家的故事。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写思路分析Para 1：So he decided to bring it home.由第一段首句内容“所以他决定把它带回家”可知，第一段可描写家人和小猫相处的过程。续写思路分析Para 2：Later, Lenny and the cat became best friends, too.由第二段首句内容“后来莱尼也和这只小猫成为最好的朋友”可知，第二段可描写莱尼和小猫关系融洽，对小猫接受。续写思路分析续写线索家人反应——小猫依赖——爸爸接受——和小猫相处——作者感悟续写素材可用词汇：行为类①寻求帮助：seek help /ask for help②走进：pace into /walk into情绪类①使惊讶：surprise /amaze②激动的：excited /thrilled续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1] When dad came home from work, the kitten would greet him at the door. . (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2] It was so lovely that my father laughed happily. (运用了so...that引导的状语从句)Part 3范文呈现范文呈现His mother allowed that puppy to stay with them. Surprised but overjoyed, Rohan thanked his mother and then found a warm place to settle him. About two hours later, the trembling puppyrecovered and became full of life. He lookedsocute and adorablethatRohan fell in deep love with him immediately. From then on, apart from feeding and walking him, Rohan played with him and even trained him to behave well every day after school. Gradually, hebecame attached toRohan and familiar with the whole family.范文呈现Later, Lenny and the cat became best friends, too. When dad came home from work, the kitten would greet him at the door. Whenever dad was not busy, he would play with the kitten and threw wool ball. For a while the kitten's small clawsscratched a ball, while holding the ball rolling. It wassolovelythatmy father would laugh happily. My father grew fond of the cat. We all felt it was a wonderful thing to have the cat in the house.范文译文所以他决定把它带回家。一进屋，莱尼的两个女儿就高兴地哭了，一个把小猫抱在怀里，另一个给她找食物和睡觉的地方。小猫发出轻柔的叫声，似乎是在感谢他们收留了它。每天早上，猫都会从床上叫起来，当看到家人时，它会用头摩擦他们。当人们看电视时，它会静静地躺在一边，享受着每个人的触摸，这种触摸的本质是非常可怜的。范文译文后来，莱尼和猫也成了最好的朋友。当爸爸下班回家时，小猫会在门口迎接他。每当爸爸不忙的时候，他就会和小猫一起玩，扔毛线球。有一段时间，小猫的小爪子抓着球滚动。它太可爱了，我爸爸会开心地笑。我父亲越来越喜欢这只猫了。我们都觉得家里有猫是一件很棒的事情。Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）Thank you!

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