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图表作文
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一）图表作文写作要求
图表作文就是把非文字信息（通常为各种图表表示的数字信息等）转换成文字信息的一种作文。它要求我们用文字来描述非文字性的图表或对图表显示的关系作解释说明。图表作文一般在题目中给出作文的标题和一个或几个统计表格、圆图形、曲线图或条形图，有时还用英文或中文提纲的形式给出提示，具体要求：
1. 用文字描述图表，客观解释图表中所传递的信息，并找出某种规律或趋势；
2. 就图表中所反映的某种趋势或问题分析其原因或后果。
图表作文着重说明事实，常常通过对图表中所反映的具体数据的说明、分析、比较，对某种事物或现象的事实或变化情况等加以说明，并提出结论或看法。因此，图表作文常常采用议论文的写作方法。
二）写作步骤
1.仔细阅读图表，了解图表所达的内容。首先，用一句话概括图标的内容。
2.描写图表所反映的问题或规律
3.结尾部分得出结论，表述自己的观点，结束全文。
(1)如果图表反映的是好的现象，首先要肯定、发表观点最后预测未来；
(2)如果图表反映的是不好的现象，首先要否定、提出解决办法或建议
三）写作实用表达
（一）点明主题
引用具体或粗略的数据，然后作出概括性分析，点名主题或引出需要论述的问题。
常用的词有：1.泛指一份数据图表：a data graph/chart/diagram/illustration/table
饼图：pie chart 表格图：table 柱形图：bar chart
趋势曲线图：line chart / curve diagram
2.describe, show, represent, illustrate, reveal等等。
3. figure, statistic, number, percentage, proportion
常用的开篇句型（即概述图表内容时常用的表达法）
1.The graph/chart/table above shows / describes / illustrates that.....
2. From the above graph/chart, it can be seen that…
3. As is shown in the graph…
4.The chart/table shows the differences between…
5. According to the table/pie chart/ graph/bar graph, we can see/conclude that …
（二）分析差异
描写变化及总趋势特征、分析差异：数据说明常用套语:
1.There was a great /slight increase /rise in…
2.The number /rate has nearly doubled, compared with that of last year.
3.The number is …times as much as that of….
原因说明常用套语:
1.The reason for…is that…
2.The change results from the fact that…
3.There are several causes for this significant growth in…. To begin with .... In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover,...
4. There are many factors that may account for...but the following are...
（三）得出结论
结尾常用套语
1. Personally/ as far as I’m concerned/ in short/ in brief/ in conclusion /in summary
2. It’s clear/evident from the chart that… / We can draw the conclusion that…
3. From what has been discussed above/Taking into account all these factors, we can draw the conclusion that…
4. There is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of...
5. It is high time that we put an end to the tendency of...
图表作文常用单词、词组和句型总结：
1）表示数据变化的单词或词组
rapid/ rapidly 迅速的，飞快的，
dramatic/ dramatically 急剧的
sharp /sharply 明显的，急剧的
significant/ significantly 重大的
sradual/ gradually 渐进的，逐渐的
steady / steadily 稳固的
stable / stably 稳定的
slow /slowly 缓慢的
slight / slightly 略微的
2）在描述中常用到的词汇
significant changes 图中一些较大变化
noticeable trend 明显趋势
distribute 分配
in terms of/ regarding/ with regard to/ as far as sth is concerned 关于，就...而言
3) 描述增减变化常用的句型
Compared with … is still increased by …
The number of … grew/rose from … to …
An increase is shown in …; then came a sharp increase of …
In … the number remains the same/drops to …
There was a very slight (small/slow/gradual) rise/increase in ......
There was a very steady (marked/sharp/rapid/sudden/dramatic) drop (decrease/decline/fall/reduction) in ....../ compared with that of last year).
4) 图表作文常用句型精选
1. The table shows the changes in the number of.....over the period from....to......该表格描述了在...年至...年间...数量的变化。
2.……（year）witnessed/saw a sharp/considerable rise in……
3. This is a curve graph which describes the trend of.... 这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。
4. As can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in.... 从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。
5. This table shows the changing proportion of a&b from ....to... 该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b 的比例关系。
6. The graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in....该图以圆形形式描述了。。。的总的趋势
图表作文的框架
As is shown by the figure/percentage in the graph, __________ has been on rise/ decrease obvious/ steadily from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand,　_______ is due to the fact that ________./Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that___________.The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that_____________.
From my perspective, I hold the point of view that _______. I am convinced that my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
课堂练习
Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为＂父母是否以子女为荣＂。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：
描述调研数据；
分析可能导致这一结果的原因。
范文1
Recently, I have been taking part in a research on “Whether Parents feel honoured of their children.” After asking both students and their parents in my school, I found that 80% of the parents thought they feel honoured of their children while 40% of the students remained unrealizing.
There must be some reasons accounting for the phenomenon. As far as I am concerned, parents’ silent love may be top to say. Usually, children may feel annoyed when their parents advise them to do something or simply help them to accomplish something. So children always turn a deaf ear and blind eyes to their parents, ignoring all of their voices and actions. It’s no surprise that they couldn’t find out their parents’ true feelings about them.
What’s more, many parents show their love in some strange ways and thus having no understandings with their children. Kids will only feel that they are not good enough when parents push them to get progress. However, in parents’ opinion, it’s a way to express their love and expression.
In addition, more and more children are becoming self-concerned, not only in school but also at homes.
In conclusion, either part of the relationship may result in the problem. In terms of the increased emergency of conflicts between parents and children, the research is truly a profound lessons for those unexperienced parents and the adult-to-be like us.
范文2
A survey conducted recently indicates that the parents who are proud of their children are twenty percent more than the children who consider themselves as prides of their parents.
There exist two reasons, which may account for this subtle difference. First, conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their kids. This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of self-confidence. Second, the current educational system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance, thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud. This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports, which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves.
Without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of exam-oriented educational methods, a kid would never end up with a positive grown-up.
假如你是某校学生会委员，在学校组织了一项有2000多名学生参与的“有烦恼向谁倾诉”的调查活动。请写一份调查报告，内容须包括下表内容以及你对调查结果的看法。
要求：题目自拟
字数：120—150
求助对象 比例 理由
同学、朋友 58% 年龄相仿、易于沟通、… …
老师、家长 33% 有经验、值得信任、… …
自己独立解决 9% 不愿交流沟通、 … …
范文
The chart above illustrates the result of the survey “To whom do you go when in trouble” conducted in high schools recently. It can be clearly seen that classmates and friends tops the list, adding up to 58%. Teachers and parents ranks second, making up 33%, while those who solve the problem on their own accounts for only 9%.The reasons for the phenomenon may be as follows:
The share of the similar experience mainly contributes to the tendency for us to complain to our classmates and friends instead of the older generation. Because of the identical feelings, we may find the solutions suggested by our friends to be more useful and advisable. On the contrary, owing to the unavoidable generation gap, we are sure to value the trouble or problems differently from teachers and parents, and the disagreement may even cause unnecessary argument, thus turning away many youngsters.
Secondly, the lack of self-confidence and independence may account for the 9% part. We have little courage to burden the consequence of our own life choice, thus habitually turning to others for help. The result of this situation is the less we try, the less mature we are.
To sum up, the process of growing may usually be painful, and young students may have to face various kinds of troubles. As long as they take optimistic views and proper methods, those troubles will no longer obstacles. Just open your heart and pick up your courage.
课后作业
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
以K是Talking Data移动数据研究中心提供的2016外:上海市迪斯尼乐阅入园人群年龄比 例，沾你描述该图表，并发表自己的看法。
上海迪士尼人群年龄比例
Since its grand opening in June 2016, Disneyland Park has attracted a great number of visitors of varied age groups. Based on the table provided by the Talking Data, a mobile data research center, 58.1% of visitors aged from 26-35 have been to the Disneyland Park, while the number of tourists aged above 45 only accounts for a small percentage.
Many remarkable factors contribute to the phenomenon as depicted in the table above. First of all, visitors of 26 to 35 years old have sufficient time and money to travel. Disneyland, such a wonderful amusement park as often shown in Disneyland movies has become an ideal choice for them. The charming design inside is so appealing to them that they may even come here several times. In addition, the reason why the number of people aged from 36 to 45 takes up more than one third of the total is that they enjoy taking their kids to have fun in such a famous amusement park. Lastly, as for the small number of middle aged and senior people visiting the park, the reason might be that they may be uninterested in viewing this tourist spot.
Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that Disneyland Park is especially popular among young people. As far as I am concerned, it is certain that Disneyland will attract more people of different ages from home and abroad in the future.
下面的饼状图（pie chat）显示了你对你校学生兴趣爱好的调查结果。请你用英语给English Weekly写一篇短文，报道你的调查结果，并对此结果发表你的看法或建议。字数120词左右。首句已给出（不计入词数）。
Recently, I have conducted a survey on what hobbies students prefer to have during their spare time. Doing sports, as 53% of them choose, takes the lead, while surfing the Internet follows closely behind, which is the choice of 36% of them. Only 8% and 3% of them do some reading and playing music instruments separately. On the basis of the conclusion of the survey, my points of view are as follows.
To my relief, more than half of the students are keen on doing sports regularly, which strongly fights back the argument that teenagers are taking the risk of obesity due to lack of movement. Teenagers nowadays have come to realize that sports serve as a kind of recreation after aday's hard work. Only when they have exercised regularly will they be more absorbed in their studies later on. Long and continuous study, however, can interfere withone's health and the efficiency may be reduced by half.
Nevertheless, despite the relieving 53%, a rapidly growing number of students tend to stick to the Internet for entertainment, which arouses my attention. Like a coin, Internet has two sides and what we can acquire from the Internet depends on how we use it. Some teenagers may be tempted to chat online and play video games, while leaving their academic studies untouched. The results of their studies are bound to be affected in the long run. It's high time that we were aware of the fact. Some departments concerned should further study the facts and take measures to prevent the present situation from worsening.
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
某互联网消费调研中心对网络购物进行了调查，结果如下，请根据图表1提供的信息描述人们选择网络购物的不同原因，并针对图表2 中任意一个数据反映的情况谈谈你的看法。
图一：网购的原因
图二：对于网购的担忧
作文范文一：
Recently, a survey has been conducted by an Internet Consumer Research Center to compare the reasons and worries for online shopping.
As it can be seen from the bar chart, 49 percent of people choose online shopping due to its abundant supply of commodities. It is almost three times as many as people who prefer online shopping because they believe the Internet can create a shopping environment free from limits of time and space. In addition, 38 percent of people maintain that compared with traditional form of purchasing, online shopping tends to have more advantages in price. That is the reason why they are fond of online shopping.
Different people have different reasons for choosing online shopping. Similarly, people’s concerns about online shopping also vary a lot. As is revealed in the pie chart, more than half of people claim that they are not sure if they will be satisfied with the quality of goods they are planning to buy. Indeed, though online shopping has become a popular consuming habit and lifestyle, there is no denying that online shopping does have some risks. You will be so annoyed if what you buy is totally different from what you want. And what’s worse is that if you want to exchange or refund, some extra money will be spent. All in all, in my opinion, despite these shortcomings, we should not give up eating for fear of choking. After all, the advantages of online shopping far outweigh its disadvantages.
作文范文二：
With the development of science and technology, online shopping has become an indispensable part of most people’s daily life. Folks choose to shop online due to various reasons and they have different concerns when it comes to this issue. Recently, a survey has been conducted by an Internet research center on consumers’ behavior of online shopping, which is shown in the two charts.
According to the first chart, people prefer to shop online because of three main reasons. First, online shopping provides consumers with a wide array of commodities. Nowadays, almost anything is available online, and even something that is not for sale in supermarkets can be found via . Second, the prices of the goods are generally lower in comparison to those in physical stores. As for a housewife, for example, a large amount of money can be saved on an annual basis if she decides to purchase online. Third, consumers can practically shop online whenever and wherever they like. As long as they have at hand a smartphone or a laptop with access to the Internet, they are free to enter a world where commodities can be delivered to their homes and all they have to do is just a few taps on the screen or a few clicks of the mouse.
However, apart from its merits, people surveyed did demonstrate their worries through the survey. As is shown in the second chart, the quality of the commodities is the primary concern of over half of the consumers. They claim that some items fail to live up to the advertisements online. Moreover, some even regard what they have bought online as completely worthless. In my opinion, consumers need to be more rational in terms of online shopping. They ought to review the comments of the commodity and consider its utility before they finally make up their minds to place the order.

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