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Share your opinions about a moral story
Book 3 Unit 2
Reading for Writing
The Race Between Tortoise And Hare
龟兔赛跑
the Fox and the Crow
狐狸和乌鸦
The stone was in the _____ of sb.
way
路上的石头
挡道的石头
The stone was in the ______ of the road.
middle
Prediction
What will you do if you come across a big stone in the middle of the road
walk across it
ignore it
trip over --- get angry
move it away
...
A Review of a Fable
Reading for Writing
Q:What do you think is the video about
a fable
The Stone in the Road
The passage is a fable about __________ who __________ in the road to test _____________ whether they would move it or not.
Exploring the main idea
a king
put a stone
his people
Learning
Reading
Thinking
Writing
Evaluating
Exploring the plot
Characters
Milkman
Women with water
Young girl
Experiences
crashed into
shouted
went away
picked ... up
tripped over
limped away
worked all day
pushed ... with all her might
Learning
Reading
Thinking
Writing
Evaluating
Emotions
angry
sad
surprised
Events
King’s Feelings
Exploring the king’s feelings
Events
Feelings
saw
the milkman
saw
the women
saw
the girl
Learning
Reading
Thinking
Writing
Evaluating
Exploring the theme
The Stone in the Road
The ______________ in our road to _________________
Learning
Reading
Thinking
Writing
Evaluating
danger
setback
barrier
a better life
As an individual
As a citizen
a better world
purpose
to comment/recommend
Learning for writing
Structure summary+analysis+opinion
A Review
Learning
Reading
Thinking
Writing
Evaluating
Writing
Learning for writing
What is the title of the story
What kind of story is it
What do you like/dislike about the story why (because)
Would you recommend this story to others
What are the main plots of the story
Are the details clear (feature)
What is the author’s purpose (lesson)
basic information
Your analysis
Your opinion
A Review
Learning
Reading
Thinking
Writing
Evaluating
Writing
Writing
The fable titled ... is a ...
The story is about...
The author describes ...
I strongly recommend it to you because .../From my perspective, the most attractive part is .../After reading the story, I have a better understanding of ...
I like this story very much, so I would like to recommend this story to the readers.
the main plots of the story are...
the language is
The fable mirrors/reflects/The author tries to tell/indicate us...
basic information
Your analysis
Your opinion
Your Review
Learning
Reading
Thinking
Writing
Evaluating
book review (书评）
para1：①故事的标题 ②故事的类型
（ 1句话 ）
para2：①故事的主要情节描述（3-4句）；
②语言风格（1句）；
③作者的写作意图（这篇故事主要是想传递给读者一个什么道理）（1句）
para3：①我喜欢/不喜欢这个故事？为什么？（1句）
②我是否会给读者推荐这个故事？（1句）
题材：议论文，故事评论
词数：80字
时态：一般过去、一般现在时
人称：第一人称（第三段）
第三人称（第一 、二段）
　　写作要求
　　假定你是李华，请你给学校英语校报写一篇关于《孔融让梨》的英文评论，内容包括：
　　1.故事主要介绍；
　　2.情节介绍；语言风格描述；作者意图；
　　3.个人观点；是否推荐
　　注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
　　审题谋篇 第一步：审题构思很关键
②文本标题③文本类型
①主要情节描述；②语言风格
②是否推荐；
①
3
①
第二步：补全句子雏形现
1．《孔融让梨》是一个关于美德的故事。
“Kong Rong Gives up the Biggest Pear” is __________________．
2．孔融四岁时，就能按长幼次序分梨了。
When Kong Rong was four years old, he could _______________________________________________．
a story of virtue
divide the pears according to the order of age
3．每个人都分到了自己应得的一份，唯独给自己的那份是最少的。
_______________________ ， but the one given to himself _____________．
4．他说尊重长辈是生活的原则。
He said _______________________________________．
5．作者希望我们要尊重长辈，懂得如何尊重，不要自私。
The author wishes us to ______________________ ， to know how to respect and __________________．
Everyone gets his share
is the least
respecting for the elderly is the principle of life
respect for the elderly
not to be selfish
6．故事短小精悍，思路清晰，达到了教育世人的目的。
The story is short, the thread is clear and it _______________________________________________．
7．我非常喜欢这个故事，所以我想把这个故事推荐给读者。
I like this story very much, so __________________________________
________________．
serves its purpose of educating the world well
I would like to recommend this story to the readers
One possible version：
　 “Kong Rong Gives up the Biggest Pear” is a story of virtue.
When Kong Rong was four years old, he could divide the pears according to the order of age. Everyone gets his share, but the one given to himself is the smallest. He said respecting the elderly is the principle of life. The language of the article is vivid and detailed, and the plot is complete.The author wishes us to respect the elderly, to know how to respect and not to be selfish．
I like this story very much, so I would like to recommend this story to the readers.
Assessment
Learning
Reading
Thinking
Writing
Evaluating
Homework
Required:
Polish your review based on the peer assessment.
Optional:
Search for another similar Chinese fable online and write a review based on the structure we have learned. Share it with us next period.
Thanks

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