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高考英语读后续写语篇练习
绿色环保主题
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题目分析
读后续写
题目再现
范文呈现
努力方向
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Part 1
题目呈现
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续写原文
I didn’t see the thin plastic tape running across the bread bag when I put the bread in my shopping cart or when I checked out. It wasn’t until I unpacked the bread at home that I realized that I’d broken the rules again.
That stupid plastic tape joined the long list of mistakes I made in just one week of trying to eat plastic-free. Last month, I challenged myself to purchase a week’s worth of food without bringing home any plastic. That meant no yogurt containers or plastic packages.
I chose a budget of $115 (roughly half-way between the average weekly grocery bill for a family of two in Massachusetts). On Saturday afternoon, I pulled into the parking lot of a well-known zero-waste shopping center.
I started in the produce section, where I typically got a plastic bag of organic baby carrots. This time, I could not go there because every vegetable in the organic section was packed in plastic containers. But I found some beautiful carrots among the non-organic produce. Then I saw the plastic price labels hanging off their rubber bands. I rolled my cart past the green beans and grapes, all inside the plastic. I weighed loose apples, onions and sweet potatoes. My anxiety kicked in — a feeling that I wouldn’t have enough. So, I bought a head of cabbage.
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续写原文
I tapped prices into the calculator on my phone. Leaving the produce section, I was in good shape, at $32. It was time to search for protein.
I headed to the meat counter. Again, everything was prepackaged in plastic. But the man behind the glass kindly agreed to put some chicken and meat, separately, in paper bags. Together they were $21.
Tofu, cheese, yogurt and pretty much everything in the dairy section were prepackaged in plastic. Even the bottled milk had a plastic cap. But there were lots of eggs in those paper bags.
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段首句
Para 1：At checkout, I still had $62 left but I could not find anything else without plastic.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Para 2：At the moment, I realized that perhaps I shouldn’t have had aimed too high.
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Part 2
题目分析
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续写原文分析
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本文以购物为线索展开，讲述的是作者一开始想要尽量避免使用塑料，购物之后，最终明白不必苛求自己，量力而行就好。
点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；
点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；
点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；
点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。
情节构建的重点
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续写思路分析
Para 1：At checkout, I still had $62 left but I could not find anything else without plastic.
由第一段首句“结账时我还剩下62美元，但是我找不到其他没有用到塑料的东西。”可知，续写可以围绕作者面对这一情况的反应展开，包括描述作者的情绪，作者向购物中心的经理投诉的具体内容，以及经理的解释。
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续写思路分析
Para 2：At the moment, I realized that perhaps I shouldn’t have had aimed too high.
由第二段首句“那一刻我意识到，也许我不应该把限塑目标定得太高。”可知，续写内容可包括作者对许多商品都使用塑料包装这一情况表示理解，以及调整自己的限塑目标。
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续写思路分析
续写线索
因塑料包装过多而向经理投诉——经理解释——理解缘由——调整个人限塑目标
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续写素材
可用词汇：
行为类
①停业：close down/shut down
②决定做某事：decide to do sth./determine to do sth.
③减少：reduce/cut down
情绪类
①生气的：angry/mad
②快乐的：happy/pleased
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续写素材
可用句型：
【高分句型1】He also told me that it’s hard to add that cost to the price of food, and that paper bags for nuts, beans or snacks weren’t as attractive on shelves as plastic bags.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Thus, I decided to just reduce the plastic that I used once and threw away.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型3】Anyway, I was happy that I avoided using 27 plastic containers in the week.（系表结构后接宾语从句）
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Part 3
范文呈现
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范文呈现
At checkout, I still had $62 left but I could not find anything else without plastic. So I became a little bit angry and complained to the manager that there were too many things I couldn’t buy plastic-free. There was no dairy or juice. He said he’s interested in using more recyclable containers, but they were much more expensive. He also told me that it’s hard to add that cost to the price of food, and that paper bags for nuts, beans or snacks weren’t as attractive on shelves as plastic bags.
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范文呈现
At the moment, I realized that perhaps I shouldn’t have had aimed too high. After all, most customers had to shop with their eyes on their wallets. The major plastic producers could not be closed down immediately. Thus, I decided to just reduce the plastic that I used once and threw away. Anyway, I was happy that I avoided using 27 plastic containers in the week. Maybe I could do better.
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范文译文
他对2017年6月的一次例行检查中的一次雪崩记忆犹新。“我们正要爬上一个400米长、海拔约5500米的山口，这对我们来说是最危险的地方，地面积雪深度高达两米，风很大，”施说。突然，石听到雷鸣般的声音，一团雪从山上滚落下来。施某迅速扑向岩石并抓住岩石，幸免于难，但受伤了。
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范文译文
在保护野生动物方面有很多艰苦的工作，但也有一些惊喜。施对大熊猫情有独钟。尽管他在保护区巡逻了三十年，但他只见过熊猫两次。为了录制保护区野生大熊猫的视频，他们在森林里寻找了几天，但没有发现一只。当他们准备放弃时，后面的竹林里传来声音，他们转过身，看到大约六米外有一只胖熊猫躲在树林里。它跑得很快。看到一群人在野外追逐熊猫真是有趣。这一幕就像是永远不会被忘记的捉迷藏游戏。
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Part 4
努力方向
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高级结构
名词性从句
高级结构
三连动
虚拟语气
形容词做状语
无灵主语
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定语从句
状语从句
（包含倒装句）
强调句
副词做状语
非谓语
（包括独立主格）
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