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高考英语读后续写语篇练习改变生态，荒地变森林题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文I met the Man of the Trees in summer ten years ago, when I was visiting Uncle Jita.Those were difficult times. People were cutting down our forest, and there was often flooding. Sometimes our water supply was dirty. When our pump(水泵)did have clean water, we had to wait in line for ages. When the pump wasn’t working, we had to walk five kilometres to the closest stream.But I was happy. I was going to see my favorite uncle. When the day finally arrived, Dad drove me to Uncle Jita’s house and left. Once he saw me, Uncle Jita announced, “Tomorrow we’re going to explore a magical place. Here is my camera, Amy. You can take photos of what you see.”The following day, we woke up and left early on a boat. The trip was exciting. But when we got off, there was ... nothing in front of us. “I don’t want to take pictures of this,” I complained.Uncle laughed,“Start walking, Amy. I promise you’ll be surprised.” After some time, I could see the outline of a forest in the distance. A little closer, there was a man waving to us.续写原文“That’s Kabir. The forest you see is his. He planted every single tree.” As we walked towards Kabir, Uncle explained that thirty years ago, the whole area was a wasteland. But one day Kabir decided to change all that and started planting trees. Thanks to him, part of the wasteland is now a paradise(天堂).Uncle introduced me to Kabir, who had gray hair and a determined face. “Jita told me you like animals. Are you ready to see some ” he asked. “Of course!” I replied. We continued walking and soon were under the trees. I turned my head and was amazed at the difference between the two places. All because of the efforts of one man.Like Uncle said, Kabir’s forest was magical. We saw deer, rhinos, and even tigers. During lunchtime, Kabir explained how, by planting trees, it was possible to stop the land from eroding(侵蚀).段首句Para 1：Hearing this, I turned to my uncle, “I think we can plant trees too ”Para 2：In the years that followed, people in our village worked hard to carry out our plan.Part 2题目分析续写原文分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了十年前，吉塔叔叔带作者去探索一个神奇的地方。那里30年前一片荒地，卡比尔决定改变这一切，开始植树，最终变成了森林，并且带来生态环境改变的故事。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写思路分析Para 1：Hearing this, I turned to my uncle, “I think we can plant trees too ”由第一段首句内容“听了这话，我转向叔叔说：“我想我们也可以种树。””可知，第一段可描写作者通过宣传森林让更多人参与种树。续写思路分析Para 2：In the years that followed, people in our village worked hard to carry out our plan.由第二段首句内容“在接下来的几年里，我们村里的人努力工作来实施我们的计划。”可知，第二段可描写植树给村庄带来的变化。续写思路分析续写线索想到计划——分享计划——接受计划——实施计划——环境改变续写素材可用词汇：行为类①.抓住：grab/ take hold of②.返回：go back to/return③.展示：show/display情绪类①.鼓舞的：encouraging/inspiring②.兴奋：excitement/ thrill续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]. We then explained our tree-planting plan to the villagers, which was quickly accepted by all of them.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）[高分句型2]. Witnessing the gradual change of our village, we came to realize that only when we live in harmony with nature can we have a brighter future.（运用了现在分词作状语以及that引导的宾语从句）Part 3范文呈现范文呈现Hearing this, I turned to my uncle, “I think we can plant trees too.” Grabbing the camera in my hand, I added with excitement. “I’ve got a plan! I’ll show them the photos of Kabir’s magical forest! ”SeeingUncle and Kabir’s encouraging smile, I immediately set down to my work, busilypressing my shutterand capturing the amazing scenes in the forest. When Uncle and I went back to the village several days later and showed these wonderful pictures to my neighbour, theywere stunned bythe beauty of the forest. “It was the trees that turned the place into a paradise! ” We then explained our tree-planting plan to the villagers, which was quickly accepted by all of them.范文呈现In the years that followed, people in our village worked hard to carry out our plan. Instead of cutting down our forest, we started to plant trees, which has eventually helped protect the soil and stopped the land from eroding. Thanks to the trees, the water has been purified and we finally have clean and stable water supply.With our joint efforts, our village is now surrounded by small thriving forests with blooming flowers, lively animals and crystal-clear streams running through.Witnessingthe gradual change of our village,we came to realize thatonly when we live in harmony with nature can we have a brighter future.范文译文父亲独自一人继续前行，因为他需要自己知道：“我的儿子还活着还是死了？”他挖了八个小时。。。12小时。。。24小时。。。36小时。。。然后，在第38个小时，他扳回一块大石头，听到了儿子的声音。在尖叫着儿子的名字“ARMAND！”之后，他听到了回应：“爸爸？！是我，爸爸！”微弱但熟悉的声音让他热泪盈眶。“里面发生了什么？怎么样？”父亲焦急地问道，徒手更用力地挖掘。“我很好。爸爸，下面还有13个孩子。”丹尼尔回答。“我们又害怕、又饿又渴。当大楼倒塌时，它形成了一个三角形，救了我们。”父亲意识到这是一个棘手的情况。他不能冒险在下面造成另一次坍塌。幸运的是，消防队员就在附近。父亲向消防队长喊道，并示意他们过来。范文译文每个人都开始帮助他把孩子们从废墟中拉出来。然后，这位父亲帮助消防队员小心地清除岩石，并将孩子们一个接一个地拉出。当所有人都安然无恙时，丹尼尔扑到了父亲的怀里：“你做到了，爸爸！不管怎样，我知道你会在我身边的！”Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）Thank you!

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