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救火英雄
浙江精诚联盟适应性联考
Nick had a difficult childhood, with neither mom nor dad giving him love because his parents died when he was ten. Now he was 27 years old. He had no friends around. As for his work, delivering newspapers couldn’t support his family. He had a wife, Kara Lewis, but he did not know exactly how to get along with her. His life was in a mess and he couldn’t see his future. That night, Nick had a quarrel with his wife and he’d stormed out of their apartment, leaving his phone behind so she couldn’t contact him. Then he drove the car and smoked in the parking lot; he liked to go there when he needed to be alone. Looking up at the stars, he sat in silence for 15 minutes or so. Then he decided to head home. He was on the way back to the apartment just after the midnight when he saw the house on fire. Flames were climbing up the front porch, lapping at the home’s walls. Hurrying out of the vehicle, he immediately regretted not having his phone. “Hey, help, the house is on fire!” he yelled into the night. Nobody responded. He ran around to the back door. To his amazement, it swung open. Without thinking about the danger, Nick dashed into the burning building.It was a two-story house where Walter family lived with two daughters, 18-year-old Kay and 2-year-old Sally. That night the parents were not at home, with their 18-year-old daughter taking care of Sally. The curtains were melting as Nick ran through the hallway of the burning house, peering into rooms that were in flames and searching to see if anyone was home. Just then, one face emerged from a room at the top of the stairs and peered down at him, her eyes wide. “Your house is on fire. You need to go!” Nick yelled, hurrying her out of the house. After they were out into the fresh air, Nick heard the girl kept screaming, “There’s a baby in there! I couldn’t find her in the bedroom.”
注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Without hesitating, Nick ran back inside again. _________________________________________ Outside, the firefighters had arrived.________________________________________
奇葩剧情大赏 （根据事实改编）
类型1（人物关系错乱）：
Nick 写着写着写成Dick;
Baby叫着叫着变成body
Kara& Kay 傻傻分不清楚；
Kay不知怎地变成Sally老妈；
类型2（超能力篇）：
Nick 好不容易进入房间，苦苦寻觅baby, 2岁能说会道也就算了，Kara 是怎么进入房间 顺便救了 Sally
Lead in 考试回顾
类型3 （目无法纪走后门篇）
Nick 成了救火英雄让消防员十分感动，二话不说就让Nick成为消防员并颁发奖章。
类型4（胡乱升华主题篇）
啊，我的小小一个举动居然对别人造成了这么大的影响，希望爱能够传递下去！
step 1 人物分析
Name
Basic information
Events (What happened )
Step 2 文章主旨
Nick had a difficult childhood, with neither mom nor dad giving him love because his parents died when he was ten. Now he was 27 years old. He had no friends around. As for his work, delivering newspapers couldn’t support his family. He had a wife, Kara Lewis, but he did not know exactly how to get along with her. His life was in a mess and he couldn’t see his future.
主题语境：人与自我
中心思想：热爱生活/找到生活的意义
Without hesitating, Nick ran back inside again. _
Outside, the firefighters had arrived.
Who called the firefighters
Could he find the baby -How could he find the baby (Emotion+Action)
How is the situation in the house (Environment)
What did the firefighter do and say
What did Kay or her parents do and say
What did Kara do and say (自然结尾、主题升华）
Step 3 构思剧情
(Action+Dialogue)
How is the situation in the house (Environment)
屋内，大火随风四处乱窜（rage），肆无忌惮地吞噬着一切,在黑暗中显得尤为突兀。（动作链）
Inside, the fire was raging in the wind, swallowing everything madly, appearing particularly distinct in the darkness.
Step 4 语言表达
How could he find the baby (Action+Emotion)
用湿抹布捂住口鼻，他匍匐前进。（With 结构）
With a damp cloth covered his mouth and nose, he crawled forward.
找遍了一楼，一点Sally的影子都没看到，他心如死灰。（比喻）
After searching all over the first floor, he didn't see any sign of Sally, and his heart turned to dead ashes.
突然，从二楼传来一声尖锐(也可以虚弱）的喊叫。Nick向二楼飞奔而去，在浴室发现了可怜的Sally. （感官描写）
Suddenly, a sharp shout came from the second floor. Nick ran towards the second floor and found poor Sally in the bathroom.
What did the firefighter do and say
用高压水枪灭火
high-pressure water gun
fight/extinguish/put out
What did Kay or her parents do and say
Nick一看到kara就猛地抱住她，抽泣不止，说：对，对不起，原来，我已经拥有了世界上最美好的东西，但是我总是沉溺于过去，我想说，我爱你。”
What did Kara do and say (自然结尾、主题升华）
Nick hugged Kara as soon as he saw her, sobbing uncontrollably, saying, 'I'm...I’m so sorry, I already have the most beautiful thing in the world, but I've always been addicted to the past. I want to say, I love you.”
Nick此刻明白了，......
从那之后的每一天，都能看到Nick和Kara总是挂着笑容，结伴出行。
THANKS!

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