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高考英语读后续写语篇练习放下手机，陪父母过高质量的假期题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文Kathy’s family vacation to the beach was usually the highlight of her summer. This year, however, her parents announced a new rule: no phones for the entire week.“But my friends will be expecting updates about the trip,” Kathy complained. Kathy’s mom gave her a serious look. Unwillingly, Kathy handed her phone over and her mom locked it away.The drive to the beach house took most of the day. As they turned off the highway onto countryback roads, the clouds darkened. Rain started to pour. “Even more beautiful in the rain,” her mother said. “What do you think, Kathy ” Kathy glared at her mom. “Beautiful,” she muttered.That night after dinner, Kathy wandered into the kitchen, where her father was washing dishes. She gave her father a loving look and said in her sweetest voice, “Couldn’t I have my phone back, just for one second Just so I can tell everyone what an amazing time I’m having ”续写原文“Can’t,” he said. “It’s not here. Remember ” Kathy was very annoyed. Having nothing better to do, she examined the dusty bookcase in the living room. The books looked as dull as the weather. On the top shelf, however, she spotted a puzzle. She took it, emptied the pieces on the table, and began to sort them.After what seemed like a few minutes, she looked up. It was past ten o'clock. She had been working for almost two hours! She yawned. The puzzle was less than half done, but she was exhausted. So, she went to bed.段首句Para 1：After a quick breakfast, Kathy headed to the beach.Para 2：Appreciating the finished puzzle, she realized she hadn’t thought of her cellphone for hours.Part 2题目分析续写原文分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述Kathy一家去旅行，妈妈要求旅行中不用手机，开始Kathy十分不习惯但又不得不遵守规则。Kathy完成了拼图，并且欣赏到了平时看不到的美景，还尽情享受了和父母在一起的时间和温暖。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写思路分析Para 1：After a quick breakfast, Kathy headed to the beach.由第一段首句内容“Kathy快速吃完早饭后就跑去海边。”可知，第一段可描写Kathy在海边看到了美景，然后，回家完成昨晚没有完成的拼图。续写思路分析Para 2：Appreciating the finished puzzle, she realized she hadn’t thought of her cellphone for hours.由第二段首句内容“欣赏着自己完成的拼图，她意识到自己已经好几个小时没有想起手机这回事了。”可知，第二段可描写没有手机的打扰，一家人在这里度过的温馨生活，是在平时感受不到的，回到家后妈妈把手机还给Kathy后，她似乎已经不需要了。续写思路分析续写线索去海边欣赏到美景——回家完成拼图——在脑海保存拼图——和父母度过高质量的假期——渐渐地已经不需要手机续写素材可用词汇：行为类①回家：returned to the house/go back to the house②吸引注意力：catch her attention /draw her attention③保存：preserve/keep情绪类①激动的：excited/thrilled②十分高兴：be overwhelmed with happiness/be bathed in happiness续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]. With the sea wind blowing against her face, Kathy totally lost herself in the stunning views.（运用了with的复合结构）[高分句型2]. Every time the shapes met, Kathy was overwhelmed with happiness.（由every time引导的时间状语从句）Part 3范文呈现范文呈现After a quick breakfast, Kathy headed to the beach. Under no circumstances had Kathy expected the scenery to be so spectacular! With the sea wind blowing against her face, Kathy totallylost herself in the stunning views. After half an hour’s leisure walk along the beach, Kathy returned to the house. “How do I spend the rest of the day ” Kathymurmured to herself. Suddenly,the unfinished puzzle caught her attention. She felt a little excited and buried herself in it once again. Every time the shapes met, Kathy was overwhelmed with happiness. Soon, all that were left were a few gaps. She quickly put the remaining pieces into place. The puzzle was completed!范文呈现Appreciating the finished puzzle, she realized she hadn’t thought of her cellphone for hours.Trying to preserve the image in her mind, she quietly started taking it apart rather than taking pictures to update about the trip. That, she thought, was just for me.Without the distractions from her cellphone, she found herself engaged in story sharing session with mom and daddy willingly. They spent a high-quality family time together. On arriving home, mom gave her cellphone back. This time, however, she had no intention to share but to keep all the great memories in her mind.范文译文匆匆吃完早餐后，凯西前往海滩。凯西在任何情况下都没想到这里的景色会如此壮观！海风吹在她的脸上，凯西完全沉浸在迷人的景色中。凯西沿着海滩悠闲地走了半个小时后，回到了家里。“今天剩下的时间我该怎么度过？”凯西喃喃自语。突然，未完成的谜题引起了她的注意。她感到有点兴奋，又一次沉浸其中。每次形状相遇，凯西都会感到无比幸福。很快，只剩下几个缺口。她很快把剩下的部分放好。谜题完成了!范文译文欣赏着完成的谜题，她意识到自己已经好几个小时没有想到手机了。为了在脑海中保留这张照片，她悄悄地开始把它拆开，而不是拍照来更新这次旅行的最新情况。她认为这只是为了我。没有手机的干扰，她发现自己很乐意与父母分享故事。他们在一起度过了一段美好的家庭时光。一到家，妈妈就把手机还给了她。然而，这一次，她无意分享，而是把所有美好的回忆都记在心里。Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）Thank you!

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