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高三新题型读后续写不同主题分析--冒险类
板块一--例文
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Two months ago, my friend Lisa, Harry and I, planned to do something adventurous, so we decided to explore a deep cave in the outskirt of our city with some food, water, torches and most importantly our cell phones. But things were not going well. We could not find any vehicle to drop us there. At long last, we managed to find a taxi which took us to the outskirt of the city. Another evidence of bad luck was that Harry had left his cell phone at home.
After we got out of the taxi, some of the locals told us the way to the cave. The cave looked very attractive yet still mysterious: the cave was so dark, and the tiny sounds made by the insects and animals could be heard properly, pulling us into the cave with some unknown supernatural power. As we were moving forward we made marks on the rocks along our path to remind us of the exit of the cave. And we always kept our mobiles in switch on mode to contact each other in case we got separated and even worse, lost in the cave.
As we were moving forward, Harry felt that somebody was following our footsteps but he left his intuition to a joke. When we reached in the deep of the cave, we lost our way and gradually the fog spread everywhere and we were not able to see each other properly. All of us got very scared of what was happening around us. Suddenly, we noticed that Harry was not with us and then we vaguely heard a shout from the depth of the cave and we thought it was Harry, so we started searching for him. But our torches were left no use in such thick fog.
续写词数应为150左右
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So we groped our way towards the direction of the shout.
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After we reunited with Harry, we tried to find the way out.
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【答案】So we groped our way towards the direction of the shout. Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry. Hardly can we see anything in the completely dark situation, so we had to feel our way to search Harry with all strength. Slowly and cautiously moving forward, we held our hands tightly in order not to be separated. With the voice approaching, we realized we would meet Harry immediately. Fortunately, when finding Harry sitting on the ground, we sighed with a relief.
After we reunited with Harry, we tried to find the way out. Without hesitation, we decided to hunt for these marks which we had made before. “I get it!” Harry screamed. Looking up quickly, we found these clear marks easily. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit. When walking out of the cave, we knew we were saved. From this experience, what we learnt was that it was dangerous to explore the unknown word without a fully detailed plan.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者和小伙伴们一起去探索一个位于城市郊区的山洞。山洞里面太黑又有雾，所以Harry和我们走散了。当听到Harry的呼救后，我们一起找到了Harry，最终逃离了山洞。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“所以我们摸索着朝着呼喊的方向走去。”可知，第一段可描写我们是如何在山洞中寻找Harry的。
②由第二段首句内容“我们和Harry重逢后，我们试图找到出路。”可知，第二段可描写我们利用之前所做的记号逃离山洞的过程。
2.续写线索：听到声音——寻找Harry——找到Harry——寻找出口——逃离山洞——领悟感受
3. 词类激活
行为类
①寻找：hunt for/search for/ find
②大叫：scream/cry
③接近：approach/draw near
情感类
①小心：cautious/ careful
②害怕：scared/ frightened
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry.(运用了as引导让步状语从句时的倒装结构)
[高分句型2]. Without hesitation, we decided to hunt for these marks which we had made before(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit.(运用了强结构)
版块二---读后续写精彩词句集锦
喜悦
1. He is very happy and sweet. 他又高兴又甜蜜。2. They didn’t know what to do with themselves for joy. 他们高兴得不知道怎么办好。3. He jumped for fun. 他高兴得跳了起来。4. Her face brightened up. 她喜形于色。
More examples:
1. The smile on her face shone like a diamond.2. His eyes twinkled with pleasure.3. I was wild with joy.4. I was pleased beyond description.5. She wore a shining smile on her face.6. Her smile lit up the whole room.7. She shed tears of joy.8. She was overflowing with happiness.9. Her flushed face was shining with excitement.10. I was floating on air.
满意
1. The result is satisfactory. 结果令人满意。2. It is difficult to please everybody. 众口难调。3. There is always a smile of contentment on her face. 她脸上总是挂着心满意足的微笑。4. She belongs to those who are very difficult to satisfy. 她属于那种极难讨好的人。5. Seeing their task finished gives them a sense of satisfaction. 看到任务完成了，他们感到很满意。
板块三--能力提升（现学现用）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Lon was chasing his runaway horse when a goose went under his feet. And he fell into a thornbush (荆棘丛). “Why do I have such bad luck ”
Things never seemed to go Lon’s way. If there was a bee about, he was stung.
And if his horse ran away, it would run straight through a thornbush. Still, even bad luck might turn good if he could catch that goose for dinner.
He scanned the bushes, and found a nest with an egg. Just an egg, but even one egg might make a small meal.
He picked it up, but dropped it in surprise. The egg was unusually heavy, and it gleamed (发光) in the sunlight. It was made of gold!
Lon sighed. He’d nearly stepped on a goose that lays golden eggs. If he had captured the goose, he would have had golden egg after golden egg.
Then a thought exploded in his mind.
Perhaps he could take the egg and get it to hatch, and the new goose would lay golden eggs just as its mother did.
Lon smiled. His luck seemed to be changing.
Once home, Lon placed the egg into a bed of cotton next to the hearth. He turned it every hour for several days.
One morning, he heard a faint chk-chk-chk. A small golden beak poked its way through the shell.
It was an ugly little thing, but Lon didn’t care. All that mattered was the golden eggs it would soon lay.
The gosling demanded food. Lon happily kept its beak filled. He named the bird Goly and became fond of it, even though it was soon better fed than he was. Lon talked to his goose and taught it to play checkers (国际跳棋).
Time passed as Lon waited for the first golden egg. Goldy had grown quite fat, but there were no eggs. Lon finally took the goose to a farmer to see what the problem was.
The farmer took a closer look and laughed. “You’ll never get eggs from this goose. It’s a boy goose!
I might as well roast you for dinner,” Lon said. “At least then I’ll get a meal for all my work!”
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Alarmed，Goldy popped out of Lon’s arm and escaped into the forest.
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One morning, Lon awoke to Goldy’s familiar honking outside.
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【答案】Alarmed, Goldy popped out of Lon’s arm and escaped into the forest. Alone in the house, Lon paced restlessly, wondering whether he was destined for bad luck. There was a deathly stillness in the house. Without Goldy accompanying him and begging him for food, a strong sense of loss overwhelmed him. It was no fun playing checkers alone, even if he did win every game. Picturing the merry scene of playing checkers with Goldy, he felt the regret burning his heart. If only he hadn’t scared Goldy away!
One morning, Lon awoke to Goldy’s familiar honking outside. At the sight of Goldy, Lon was seized with a mixture of joy and relief. Seeing Goldy pecking and quacking around the lawn, Lon knew immediately Goldy was starving. As usual, Lon took some oatmeal out to serve his good old friend. Lon happily settled down and enjoyed a game of checkers with Goldy. To Lon, having a companion was the luckiest thing in life now.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Lon做事时从来都不顺心、运气差，追的马跑了，自己还掉进了荆棘丛里，但他看到了一个有蛋的巢，他捡起一颗蛋，发现蛋是金子做的，所以就拿回家养，想养出一只能天天下金蛋的鹅，但最后发现自己养的叫Goldy的动物是小雄鹅，下不了蛋，Lon说狠话要把Goldy当晚餐吃掉。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Goldy惊慌失措，从Lon的胳膊里跳出来，逃进了森林里。”可知，第一段可描写Goldy被Lon吓跑了，Lon很担忧，想起和Goldy在一起的日子，现在的Lon感到失落，后悔把Goldy吓跑了。
②由第二段首句内容“一天早晨，Lon醒来时，Goldy熟悉的叫声在外面响起。”可知，第二段可描写Goldy回来了，Lon既高兴又宽慰，像往常一样给Goldy喂食，最终发现有个伴侣是现在生活中最幸运的事。
2.续写线索：逃走——失落——后悔——回家——高兴——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①逃进森林：escaped into the forest / fled into the forest
②不安地踱步：paced restlessly / walked restlessly
③挨饿：starving / hungry
④平静：settled down / calmed down
情绪类
①遗憾：regret / pity
②高兴地：happily / gladly
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Alone in the house, Lon paced restlessly, wondering whether he was destined for bad luck.(用了whether引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]. Seeing Goldy pecking and quacking around the lawn, Lon knew immediately Goldy was starving.(用了现在分词短语作状语)

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