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高三新题型读后续写不同主题分析--人与人之间的信任
板块一--例文（陌生人的帮助）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
While driving, I sensed something wrong with my car. Pulling into the first parking lot I found, I stopped it and climbed out to assess the situation. My heart sank as I discovered that one of my rear(后面的) tires was flat.
I'd bought the secondhand car several months before, but it didn't include a spare tire. Although I knew I needed to purchase one, my schedule was so tight that I hadn't done it yet. Because I was working full-time in the emergency room at a local hospital and taking evening classes at a university fifty miles away.
Now here I was, alone forty miles from home. In those days, cell phones were a luxury. I had no way to call for assistance.
My spirits grew darker the minute I checked the place where I had pulled over. No one was around, except a rusty, red truck. It was getting dark. I had two options: stay in my car until morning or start walking in hopes of finding a convenience store with a pay phone. Neither option appealed to me.
I about to grab my purse and set off on foot when a man came out from what seemed to be a law office. Pulling a set of keys from his pocket, he locked the office door, and then turned and saw me standing next to my car. I must have looked scared and confused as he headed straight toward me.
"Can I help you with anything " he asked.
Judging from his appearance I decided I could trust him.
"I have a flat tire but don't have a spare," I said, relieved to see him.
"I can help you remove the flat and then drive you to a tire shop to get it fixed," he said.
I remembered the cautionary(告诫的) words my parents had drilled into my head: Never get in a car with a stranger.
"That's okay," I said. "Thanks anyway."
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The man shrugged, walked to his truck and drove away.
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Half an hour later, he was back.
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【答案】The man shrugged, walked to his truck and drove away. My heart sank as I watched him pull out of the parking lot and onto the street. Regretting bitterly, I set out on foot to find the nearest convenience store. I’d barely walked ten steps when the truck pulled back into the parking lot. The man got out and walked over to me. “I can’t leave you alone like this. I'll take the flat to the tire shop and get it fixed for you.”
Half an hour later, he was back. “The tire store was closing just as I pulled in,” he said, coming over to my car. “I told them you were alone, and they agreed to stay and fix it for you.” “Thank you so much,” I said, watching as he replaced the wheel. “How much do I owe you ” “It cost eighty-five dollars because they had to replace the tire itself. The hole was too big to repair.” Eighty-five dollars! That would put a serious burden on my budget. Yet I was grateful for all he’d done to help a stranger.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者独自在外车胎瘪了，几乎没有人，在天快黑时一个男人愿意帮助作者把车胎拆掉并且送他去轮胎店修理，这事作者想起来了父母和他说过不要和陌生人一起上车。
【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：那人耸耸肩，走到他的卡车前，开车走了……所以本段应该写这个男人开车走后作者的心情，以及之后男人还会做出怎么样的举动，是否会返回。第二段的开头是：半小时后，他回来了……所以本段应该写这个男人回来之后是如何帮助作者以及和作者之间关于修轮胎的对话，作者最后很感激这个人为帮助一个陌生人所做的一切。
续写时还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: 运用原因状语从句It cost eighty-five dollars because they had to replace the tire itself. 运用省略that引导的定语从句Yet I was grateful for all he’d done to help a stranger.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
版块二---读后续写精彩词句集锦
好句当威廉看到…时脸色苍白William’s face paled when he saw…
丽贝卡的脑子一片混乱，试图想出一种做某事的方法。Rebecca’s mind raced, trying to think of a way to do sth.
她突然想到一个主意。An idea popped into her head.
一道奇怪的光充满了他的眼睛。A strange light filled his eyes.
柜台后面是一位老太太，她帮我找到了我祖父的唱片。Behind the counter was an old woman, who helped me find my grandfather’s records.
我不知道这次旅行会是一次特别的旅行。Little did I know that this trip was going to be a special one.
我哭了，担心车子抛锚了，我们就困在这里了。I cried, fearing that the car had broken down and we’d stuck here.
好奇心驱使我问…。Curiosity drove me to ask….
我感到脸颊上的热气烧得通红。I felt the heat in my cheeks burning red.
如果不是我的粗心，这一切就不会发生了。（如果不是…，某人就不会做…）Had it not been for my carelessness, all this would not have happened.(Had it not been for….., sb wouldn’t have done..)
一想到晚上独自一人，他就发抖。The idea of being alone in the night made him tremble.
“要是我能找回那种好心情就好了，”她叹口气想。“If only I could get that good feeling back,” she thought, sighing.
熟悉的泥土的气味升起来迎接她。Familiar smells of the earth rose up to greet her.
我记得我的第一次钓鱼之旅，仿佛就在昨天…。I remember my first fishing tour, as if it were but yesterday….
那是初夏里静悄悄的，甜蜜的一天；路上午后的树荫很凉快；树叶比以前更绿了，花儿更鲜艳了，鸟儿比以前更快乐了。It was still, sweet day of early summer; the long afternoon shadows of the trees lay cool across our path; the leaves seemed greener, the flowers brighter, the birds merrier, than ever before.
我克服了巨大而痛苦的失望，坐了下来。Overcome with my great and bitter disappointment, I sat down.
几分钟焦急的搜寻结果是徒劳的。Several minutes of anxious searching turned out to be in vain.
他们笑着跑回树林。Laughing, they raced back to the woods.
他颤抖着嘴唇，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来，回答说，“…”With his lip shaking and a tear running down his cheek, he replied, “….”
他停了一会儿，仿佛在回忆中徘徊。He paused for a while, as if wandering in his memory.
通过这次旅行，我发现，尽管我偶尔会对她生气，但我确实为她感到骄傲。Through this trip, I discovered that, despite my occasional anger towards her, I actually felt proud of her.
听到这个坏消息，她感到一阵悲伤，忍不住痛哭起来。On hearing the bad news she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.
我怀着极大的悲伤和遗憾，坐在椅子上，为我不可饶恕的罪恶向上帝祈祷。With great sorrow and regret, I just sat there rooted in my chair, praying to God for my unforgivable guilt.
板块三--能力提升（现学现用）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。
I prided myself on being a good neighbor. My husband, Charles, and I knew everyone who lived along our rural road. Walking that road now, I thought about how we all relied on each other. We picked up mail for people on vacation, lent out tools, and watched each other's children. Each house I passed held a friendly association.
Except Kelly’s. It hadn’t always been this way. At one time, Kelly and I had a good relationship. Our children were close in age and often played together. Our husbands were playmates. I never went by her house without waving or stopping to chat if I saw her outside.
Not anymore. If Kelly was out in her yard when I walked or drove by, I acted as if I didn’t see her. As if there were a big wall between us. At first it felt satisfying to let Kelly know what I thought of her. Today the sight of her house just made me sad.
How did things go wrong It had all started with a cat. A stray (流浪猫) who turned up in my driveway. That wasn’t unusual. I already had two stray cats I had adopted as well as a dog. But this cat was violent. He drove my own cats away from their food bowls and hissed at me when I tried to drive him off.
Imagine my surprise a few days later when Kelly announced she was taking in the cat. “I think he’s sweet,” she said.
I didn’t even know that Kelly liked cats. She’d never had one before as far as I knew. Living with Kelly didn’t make the cat any friendlier. He constantly showed up on our porch, stealing our cats’ food and picking fights. “That cat’s out of control,” I said to Kelly angrily over the phone one day. “I’ve had enough of it.”
“He’s always perfectly sweet with us!” Kelly said, getting defensive. “I had no idea you disliked him so much.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
That was the first brick in the wall between us.
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One day, when I was walking on that road again, I saw Kelly smiling at me.
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【答案】That was the first brick in the wall between us. On a sunny day, I was bathed in the beautiful sunshine when suddenly the cat jumped on my laps. It seemed to come out of nowhere so my hair almost stood on end. Bouncing up from my chair, I dropped the cat hard on the ground and ran after it. While this was going on, Kelly was just standing on her balcony glaring at me. “That was how you treat my cat ” she shouted. A brick turned into a wall from then on.
One day, when I was walking on that road again，I saw Kelly smiling at me. I smiled back, saying: “I was sorry for the cat the other day!” She admitted the cat was not friendly sometimes and her husband had sent it the “Stray Cats Shelter”. “Our relationship is not that easy to break, isn’t it ” She looked at me in the eye. We burst into laughter immediately and gone was the wall.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，作者和邻居们都相处融洽，但是凯利除外。之前有一段时间，作者和凯利的关系很好，但后来因为一只流浪猫，两人的关系开始交恶。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：那是我们之间墙上的第一块砖。本段应该写在一个阳光明媚的日子里，我沐浴在美丽的阳光下，突然一只猫跳到我的膝盖上。不知从哪里冒出来的，我的头发都竖起来了。我从椅子上跳起来，把猫重重地摔在地上，然后追了过去。当这一切发生的时候，凯利正站在阳台上瞪着我。“你就是这样对待我的猫的？””她喊道。从那时起，一块砖变成了一堵墙。第二段开头是：有一天，当我再次走在那条路上时，我看见凯利对我微笑。本段应该写我笑着回答说：“那天我为猫感到难过！她承认这只猫有时候不太友好，她的丈夫把它送到了“流浪猫收容所”。“我们的关系不那么容易破裂，不是吗？”她看着我的眼睛。我们立刻大笑起来，墙不见了。
续写时要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写的内容要与原文保持一致。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了短语和高级句子。如：stand on end，bounce up，run after，from then on，burst into laughter等短语；时间状语从句While this was going on, Kelly was just standing on her balcony glaring at me.非谓语结构Bouncing up from my chair, I dropped the cat hard on the ground and ran after it.等高级句式。

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