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Reading for Writing
Unit 2 Travelling Around
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Have you ever been to Xi’an
西安城楼
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What is Xi’an famous for
Terracotta Army
大明宫
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陕西历史博物馆
西安城墙
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大雁塔
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Paragraph Main idea detail
1 Main purpose for the trip
2 Other plans for the trip
3 transpot
4 Final thoughts
Reading
Read Richard’s email and fill in the table.
go to Xi’ an to see the Terracotta Army
go to the Shaanxi History Museum，the Xi’an City Wall, other famous sights
train
write soon again and send photos
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It is an amazing sight. → It (The sight) is _____.
It's amazing that ...→ I am _______ that...
… is almost unbelievable.→
I can’t believe it
It's hard ____________.
It's an _______________ story.
amazing
to believe
unbelievable
Underline the words and phrases used to express emotion in the email. Then complete the sentences below. (Page 31, Ex. 2)
amazed
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At the last of Richard’s email, he said “……Do you have any plans for the coming holiday Hope to hear from you soon.”
Writing task
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To write a travel plan
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（1）一、审题：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁: 应用文----告知信
主题：给Richard回信，告诉他自己的假期旅行计划。
（2）二、确定时态和人称
时态：一般将来时
一般现在时
人称：第一人称、第二人称
【写作指导】
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（3）三、明确写作要点
①对Richard的来信做出评价和反馈
②具体的旅游计划（旅行的目的、交通方式、活动等）
③旅游的心得体会
（4）四、布局
第一段：写信目的；
第二段：主体部分，详细介绍旅游计划；
第三段：体会+期待回复
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描写景点: be known/famous as, place of interest, famous sights, amazing, unbelievable, interesting,
a beautiful city with a long history
描写感受: excited, amazed, be impressed by, be interested in
交通方式: take the train/plane/bus/car/ship/subway, by train/plane/bus/car/ship/subway
活动安排: take photos, buy presents,experience
their life and learn more about... culture, taste various kinds of delicious food
1.词汇
计划:
I 'm' planning to...
I'm looking forward to...
Do you have any plans for...
During the summer vacation, I'm planning to visit ..., which is famous/known for...
准备:
How are you getting ready for...
I'd like to buy a plane ticket for ...
观光：
After reaching my destination, I will admire local architecture and enjoy...
2.句型
It is amazing that I will visit unique architecture in such an amazing place.
It is for this reason that I want to visit ...
Lying in the south of ... ,it is famous for ...and has many places of interest worth a visit.
Hangzhou, which is famous for the West Lake, is worth a visit.
Tasting the local food and experiencing the local customs can help you have a better understanding of...
It is necessary for tourists to have a taste of local food and experience the local traditions and customs.
（1）谢谢你写信告诉我你在西安的旅行,这真是特别令人惊奇的旅行。(非限制定从)
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（2）我们选择海南岛旅游，因为它的风景优美。
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Thank you for your letter about your trip to Xi'an, which is amazing.
We choose to travel to Hainan Island because it has beautiful scenery.
【写作提示】
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（3） 依我看，旅游不仅可以让我增长知识，
而且还可以拓宽视野。(enrich my knowledge; broaden my horizons)
In my opinion, travel can not only enrich my knowledge, but also broaden my horizons.
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开篇句：
I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming holiday.
篇中句：
1. The National Day is coming, and I am going to travel to Shanghai to see its beautiful scenery.
2. I am planning to go there by train and come back by coach.
结尾句
Look forward to your early reply.
【写作佳句】
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Writing （15 minutes）
假定你是李华，十月假期你和家人要去海南岛旅游，请你给Richard写一封回信，告诉他你的安排。
目的地 中国第二大岛--- 海南岛
时间 10月1日--- 10月6日
活动 岛上远足，海上冲浪，岛上宿营
感想 增长知识，拓宽视野
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Exchange drafts
Is there a clear purpose for the trip
Does each paragraph have a clear main idea
Does the writer use the present continuous tense for future plans
Does the writer use commas, stops, and question marks correctly
Are all the words spelt correctly
Are all the proper nouns capitalised
assess each other’s work according to the checklist
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参考范文
Dear Richard,
Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xi'an, which is amazing. I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming holidays.
With the National Day coming, I am going to travel to Hainan Island to see its beautiful scenery with my family. We will spend 6 days there, from Oct. 1th to Oct. 6th . It’s because of its beautiful scenery that we choose to travel to Hainan Island. Other than hiking on the island, we have planed many other
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activities like surfing in the water, spending the nights in the tents. I am sure we will have a wonderful holiday.
In my opinion, travel can not only enrich my knowledge, but also broaden my horizons. Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
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Revise your draft according to your partner’s comments

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