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2022年广州市中考英语作文解析及范文
【题目】
你校将兴建新图书馆，学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你所设计（design）的绿色图书馆。
注意：
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2.词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
My Green School Library
I want to design a green school library. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【文题解析】
今年的英语书面表达为征文稿，此题目覆盖课本话题（七年级、九年级的）环保主题，（八年级的）校园生活主题、（八年级的）未来生活主题，难度适中。
从话题上看，今年的英语书面表达是关于“我的绿色图书馆”，话题来源于教材，情境设计合理，给予不同程度考生以不同层次的发挥空间。近年来，广州中考英语写作都属于介绍类话题，从写作内容来看，都渗透着积极的教育意义，正面引导学生的人生观与价值观，让青少年学会真正的成长。
从类型上看，提示作文是最近几年广州中考英语书面表达的主要题型，它具有题型灵活，简单易写但容易失分等特点。相比往年，今年对考生拓展写作能力要求更高，需要考生根据所提供的切入点进行发散写作。
总的来说，中考英语作文立足于学生生活，内容紧扣课内话题，对考生灵活组织语言能力要求高。
【参考范文】
基础版参考范文
I want to design a green school library.
The outside of library as well as everything inside of library is green. Because this color is beneficial to students' eyes. It looks like a planet. Most importantly, the library is made from recycled materials, and it uses solar power. So it won't cause too much pollution to the earth.
There are plenty of things students can do in the library. First, they can borrow books and read them in the reading area. Second, if they want to do the homework at library, they can take a seat in studying area. Third, there is an exhibition area, it's for students to hold different kinds of activities, such as favorite books exchange, reading comer.
In my opinion, everyone will enjoy themselves here.
高分版参考范文（一）
I want to design a green school library.
To begin with, its appearance is green. In order to protect students' eyes, the chairs and tables even the bookshelves inside library is also green. It looks like a planet. Besides, it's made from recycled materials as well as driven by solar power, which is environmentally friendly.
I divided the library into three areas. In reading area, students can borrow books with the help of the robot librarian. There is a studying area for students who need to do their homework in peace. The exhibition area is for students to hold different activities, such as favorite books exchange, reading corner.
I hope everyone will enjoy their time in the library.
高分版参考范文（二）
I want to design a green school library.
The library is green, and it is in the shape of a leaf. When the library is built, all recyclable things are used. For example, all desks and chairs are recycled from schools and offices. Book shelves are also recycled from other places. Apart from what is used to make the library green, energy is also environmentally friendly. The library uses solar power to provide electricity for readers. In toilets, water is also recycled for other uses.
We can do many things in the library. First of all, we can certainly read and borrow books. But different from other libraries, all books are donated from students and teachers in our school. Besides, readers can eat and drink in the library's canteen. Last but not least, we can hold different kinds of activities to raise awareness of reading. For example, we can hold a reading day to attract more students to come to the library and read.
I hope that this green library will come true in the future.
高分版参考范文（三）
I want to design a green school library.
Located in the middle in the campus, this library is shaped like a book with green exterior walls. What makes it a perfect building is that it is built in an environmentally friendly way. First, it is powered by solar power, so that we can make sure it won't cause any pollution to the environment. Furthermore, the furniture inside is made from recycled materials, which also helps to reduce the waste we creates.
We can do a variety of things in it. Above all, we students can read as many books as we like because it is open 24 hours a day. In addition, lectures given by our teachers on Chinese culture will be held in its hall. By attending the lectures, students can gain an insight into our culture and custom.
To sum up, this is a multifunctional library which would definitely help enrich our school life.
优秀表达
【要点1】写出图书馆的颜色和形状。
普通表达：The library is green and it looks like a planet.
优秀表达：Located in the middle in the campus, this library is shaped like a book with green exterior walls.
（升级：用非谓语增加信息丰富性）
【要点2】绿色对眼睛比较好。
普通表达：Because this color is beneficial to students' eyes.
优秀表达：It's green in order to protect students' eyes.
（升级句型：in order to do 表目的）
【要点3】写出材料和能源
普通表达：We use recyclable woods to build the library. We also use recyclable things to make desks, chairs and bookshelves in the library. For energy, we use solar power. Water will be recycled, too.
优秀表达：When the library is built, all recyclable things are used to build this green library. For example, all desks and chairs are recycled from schools and offices. Bookshelves are also recycled from other places. Apart from what is used to make the library green, energy is also environmentally friendly. The library uses solar power to provide electricity for readers. In toilets, water is also recycled for other uses.
（升级：通过举例说明来增加信息丰富性）
【要点4】介绍它的能源
普通表达：The library is made from recycled materials, and it uses solar power. So it won't cause too much pollution to the earth .
优秀表达：Besides, it's made from recycled materials as well as driven by solar power, which is environmental friendly .
（句型升级：定语从句）
亮点句型参考
比较级句型：The + 比较级 ..., the + 比较级...
倒装：Only when we / if we / by doing ..., can we...
BTOWN句型
B: because, but, by doing ...
T: There be, There's no doubt that（毫无疑问）, That's why I ...
O: On the one hand , ..., on the other hand ,...
W: What's more, When, What impresses me most is that ...
N: No one can deny that …（无可否认）
Nothing is more important than ...
... is a good way/choice to do ...; recommend that 虚拟语气句
It's + adj. for sb. to do...
As the saying goes, ...
定语从句，状语从句，宾语从句，被动句，强调句
连接词参考
Firstly, To begin with, First of all, First and foremost, In the first place, ...
Secondly, Besides, Also, What's more, In addition, Moreover, Furthermore, ...
Finally, Lastly, At last, Last but not least, ...
In my opinion, In my view, To my mind, As far as I'm concerned, As to/for me, From my point of view, From my perspective, From where I stand, ...
备考建议
一定要保持卷面整洁，书写清晰，阅卷老师的第一印象极为重要；
进行审﹣列﹣加﹣连﹣美的写作流程训练，特别注意时态、人称和要点分段；
模仿训练并改错，平常多模仿好的篇章结构和好词佳句进行撰写，并且在老师的指导下，要及时修改表达或者句型结构的错误。

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