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Juggler
续 Prediction (4mins)
Para 1: After further discussion, I learned the juggler's mother lived three
minutes from my house.
Para 2: Once back home, I called the number on the crumpled (弄皱的)
piece of paper.
What did we discuss
What was the relationship between I and the juggler as well as his mom
What was the number
Why did I call the number
[1] Many years ago I visited Bern, the beautiful capital of Switzerland. One evening, I walked into the heart of the city. Old men played checkers at stone tables amid (在...中) musicians, jugglers (变戏法的人) and other street performers. I stopped to enjoy the sights and sounds.
[2] An American accent rang out① above the voices of the others. "One ... Two ...Three!" Hearty laughter② erupted(爆发) from the crowd around a juggler. After the quick-handed magic tricks, his attentive audience threw coins and moved on.
[3] As the juggler bent down(弯下) to collect the small change, I said, "I liked your act." The juggler looked up with a surprised expression, as if he didn't expect anyone to stay around. "Hey, thanks! You sound like an American.''
[4] I laughed, admitting that I'd been drawn to③ speak with him partly because of his American accent. I politely asked him what part of the States he was from.
读 Reading - Given Paragraphs (5mins+3mins)
发出响声
爽朗的笑声
被...所吸引
"California," the juggler replied. "And you " I responded in the same general way. “Pennsylvania. Outside Philadelphia." The juggler stopped picking up coins. "Oh ... where outside Philadelphia " I was slightly taken aback.④ Why did the name of the town matter if he was from California Feeling strange, I answered. "Haverford."
[5] The juggler was very surprised and his face softened. He spoke just above a whisper.⑤ "I went to Haverford High School." "But I thought you said you were from California " I said. The juggler drew in a breath⑥ and poured out⑦ a story he'd locked away for a long time.
[6] "I discovered I loved to perform while I was in high school. I wanted to study the arts in college but my father felt I should study a serious subject, like medicine. I felt I had no choice, so I went to college in California, but I couldn't study what I didn't love. Rather than go home and face my father, I left the States to achieve my dream in Europe.” With a quiet sigh(叹气), he concluded, "I haven't spoken with my mom in seven years.'
读 Reading - Given Paragraphs (5mins+3mins)
我有点吃惊。
低声说话
吸一口气
倾吐；倾诉
Key Expressions 动作描写 1 ring out
2 hearty laughter
3 be drawn to
5 speak just above a whisper
6 draw in a breath
7 pour out
心理描写 4 I was slightly taken aback.
读 Reading - Key Expressions
发出响声
爽朗的笑声
被...所吸引
低声说话
吸一口气
倾吐；倾诉
我有点吃惊。
读 Reading - 5W1H
WHO
WHERE
WHEN
WHY
WHAT/HOW
I
a juggler
“Bern, the beautiful capital of Switzerland” in Europe.
→ back home
Many years ago
seven years after leaving the college
American accent
“I left the States to achieve my dream in Europe.”
“I haven't spoken with my mom in seven years.”
the juggler’s mom
读 Reading - Analyse (4mins)
Plot Conflict
Emotion
Conflict
The juggle didn’t want to go home and face his father, so he left the States to achieve his dream in Europe. He hasn't spoken with his mom in seven years."
Miss his mom
didn’t obey his father’s words
Solution
The juggler gave me the number of his mom and I called to his mom to share his life.
Theme
dream and family
写 Writing
Para 1: After further discussion, I learned the juggler's mother lived three
minutes from my house.
Action:
Emotion:
Para 2: Once back home, I called the number on the crumpled (弄皱的)
piece of paper.
Action:
Emotion:
moved, in relief
asked and gave me the number of his mom
surprised, thankful
talked about the current life of the juggler
写 万能句型--动作描写
Without a second thought, 句子。
没有多想/毫不犹豫，....
Without a second thought, I nodded and hugged with him tightly.
1.没有多想，他捡起了地上的食物。
Without a second thought, he picked up the food on the ground.
2.我毫不犹豫地将我知道的告诉她。
Without a second thought, I poured out everything I knew to her.
3.没有多想，他追随自己的心去追求自己的梦想。
Without a second thought, he followed his heart to pursue his dream.
写 万能句型--情绪描写
A wave of + 情绪名词 + swept over 人.
谁感到一阵xx。
A wave of relief swept over him.
1. 他感到一阵惊喜。
A wave of surprise swept over him.
2. 我感到非常尴尬。
A wave of embarrassment swept over me.
3. Jenny感到非常失望。
A wave of disappointment swept over Jenny.
wave n.波浪
sweep - swept - swept v.扫
写 Homework
Finish the passage and hand in your work on Sunday.
G103作业反馈 -- 通病
单词：
1.n.感动
2.n.想念
句子：
1.他非常想念他的妈妈。
？He very missed his mom.
! He missed his mother very much.
2.我回家。
？ I back home.
! I went back home
moved adj.感动的 movement n.移动 moving n.感动
miss v.想念 missing adj.丢失的 longing n.思念
G103作业反馈 -- 通病
内容：
1.不能纯对话,不然就是剧本
2.对话里的动作不一定是过去时
细节：
1.弄皱的纸条一开始并不一定是皱的，第一次出现的要用a
2.纸条上有juggler的名字、纸条上对妈妈说的话
3.用了各种哭的短语
G103作业反馈 -- 精彩句子
1. 黄：“Thank you for your care. I think interest is the best teacher, I feel very moved” the juggler’s mother said. （2-对话描写）
2. 陈：Later, I saw tears running out from his eye.(1-动作描写) I sat on my sofa, just imagining that the juggler was showing on the street and his mom missed her son in her house.(2-升华主题）
3. 柯：To value this opportunity that let us meet in the amazing time, I promised him to help to solve his dilemma that he had argument with his father and didn’t connect with his mom.(1-升华主题)
4. 庄：In closing, she cried loudly and said that she had been waiting for this call for many years.
5. 李：Hope all longing can become reunion.(2-升华主题）
1. 郑： I left there with the paper filled with longing and love(1-上下文衔接)
2.郭：Fortunately, the other party answered.
3. 蔡： “my heart puts down at last”
4. 马：I miss him day and night.
5. 赵：When I nodded a tearful yes, he was happy like a 400-kilogram-heavy baby and gave me a piece of paper with number.
G103作业反馈 -- 精彩句子
After further discussion, I learned the juggler's mother lived three minutes from my house. In fact, I drove past her home every day on the way to work. We stood in silence. The juggler broke the silence. “If I give you my mom's number, would you call her for me when you get back home Would you tell her I'm okay ” I nodded a tearful yes and put the number away. The juggler and I parted, forever changed by our meeting thousands of miles from home.
Once back home, I called the number on the crumpled piece of paper. A woman answered the phone. She was the juggler's mom. I said, “Hello. You don't know me but ...” The story of my trip to Bern spilled out. As I relayed her son's greeting, the woman thanked me and cried. In a voice thick with emotion, she asked, “How did he look Is he okay ” I assured her that he was healthy and happy and seemed to be doing well. She cried even harder and said this was the call she had been waiting for.
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