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高考英语读后续写语篇练习母亲鼓励孩子主动承认拼写错误，归还奖品题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文Magen double-checked the words on her spelling test. If she got 100 percent today, she’d win her class’ First-Quarter Spelling Challenge and a brand-new dictionary that came with videos and other cool stuff. Plus, Ms. McCormack had promised to do a handstand (手倒立) if anyone got a perfect score.Three more words to go. N-i-c-e-l-y. Q-u-i-c-k-l-y. H-o-n-e-s-t-y. Wait! She’d spelled honesty, not honestly! She erased ‘-ty’ and wrote ‘-ly’ before handing in her paper. Ms. McCormack graded the papers while the students were at rest.After a break, Magen hurried into the classroom, sitting in her seat nervously—Ms. McCormack walked to the front of the room and cleared her throat. “Congratulations, Magen! You did it!” Then, as if she were an Olympic gymnast, Ms. McCormack’s feet flipped into the air. The whole class erupted!续写原文Ms. McCormack presented Magen with her prize. A big smile spread across Magen’s face as she read the label on the box: To Magen Carter, for her perfect first-quarter score in spelling.“Everything OK ” Mom asked as Magen burst through the front door after school.“Everything’s perfect!” Magen shouted, showing Mom her spelling test and prize.Mom hugged her. “Well done, Magen”Magen scooped up (抱起) her cat. “Can you spell nicely, Casper And quickly and honestly, and…” It suddenly occurred to her that she had misspelled the word. Rooted to the spot, Magen reflected on how she could tell the whole class she shouldn’t have earned the prize at all. She dashed into her room and pulled out the test paper. “If I put the missing ‘t’ back in, no one would ever know,” she thought. Recalling the joyful moment, a mixture of guilt and unwillingness overwhelmed her.段首句Para 1：Aware that there was something wrong with Magen, Mom knocked on the door and entered her room.Para 2：The next day, arriving early at school, Magen pushed open the door of Ms. McCormack’s office.Part 2题目分析点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Magen在拼写测试中得了100分，赢得班级第一季度的拼写挑战，以及一本附有视频和其他很酷东西的全新词典。她的老师麦科马克还为她表演了倒立，她开心的回到家，却发现自己试卷上的诚实的单词拼写错误，思考该怎么办。续写思路分析Para 1：Aware that there was something wrong with Magen, Mom knocked on the door and entered her room.由第一段首句内容“妈妈意识到Magen有点不对劲，便敲了敲门，走进了她的房间。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈发现了Magen的拼写错误，并告诉Magen不应该得到这个奖品。续写思路分析Para 2：The next day, arriving early at school, Magen pushed open the door of Ms. McCormack’s office.由第二段首句内容“第二天，Magen早早来到学校，推开麦科马克办公室的门。”可知，第二段Magen向她的老师承认拼写错误，归还词典，麦科马克因为Magen的诚实又把词典给了Magen。续写思路分析续写线索妈妈发现拼写错误——觉得Magen不应该得到奖品——回应妈妈诚实的表现——向老师承认错误——老师因为Magen诚实奖励词典续写素材可用词汇：行为类①.凝视：gaze at/peer at/stare at②.拿出：take out/fetch out③.承认：confess/admit情绪类①.感到羞愧的：a pink flush spreading over her cheeks/feel shamefaced②.惊讶：surprise/amazement续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]. She soon understood what she should do. (由连接词what引导的宾语从句作understood的宾语)[高分句型2]. Even though Ms. McCormack tried to contain her emotions, surprise registered on her face. (由even though引导让步状语从句)Part 3范文呈现范文呈现Aware that there was something wrong with Magen, Mom knocked on the door and entered her room. “Where’s your spelling test paper, sweetheart ” Mom asked, gazing at her eagerly. Magen took out the paper and handed it unwillingly to her mom. When Mom spotted “honesly”, Mom frowned, “Probably you don’t deserve the prize.”After thinking for a while, she soon understood what she should do.范文呈现The next day, arriving early at school, Magen pushed open the door of Ms. McCormack’s office. Hands slightly trembling, Magen gave Ms. McCormack her test paper and the dictionary. Magen confessed her spelling mistake in the test, a pink flush spreading over her cheeks. “I see.” Even though Ms. McCormack tried to contain her emotions,surprise registered on her face（无灵主语）. Then she picked up a pen, crossed out the word “perfect” and wrote “honest” instead before handing the prize back to Magen. Magen’s jaw dropped. Ms. McCormack grinned. “For honesty.”范文译文妈妈意识到马根出了问题，敲了敲门，走进了她的房间。“亲爱的，你的拼写试卷在哪里？”妈妈急切地盯着她问道。马根拿出纸，不情愿地递给她妈妈。当妈妈发现“老实”时，她皱着眉头说：“也许你不配得到这个奖。”想了一会儿，她很快就明白了该怎么办。范文译文第二天，马根很早就到了学校，推开了麦科马克办公室的门。马根把试卷和字典递给麦科马克女士，双手微微颤抖。马根在考试中承认了自己的拼写错误，脸颊泛出粉红色的红晕。“我明白了。”尽管麦科马克试图克制自己的情绪，但她脸上还是流露出惊讶。然后，她拿起一支笔，划掉“完美”一词，改为“诚实”，然后把奖品还给马根。马根目瞪口呆。麦科马克笑了。“为了诚实。”Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）Thank you very much!

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