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高考英语读后续写语篇练习父亲给孩子的宝贵经验：做人要保持诚信题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文Morty was checking out his library books when it caught his eye-a poster for Adventure Rocks Kids Camp. “Check this out!” Morty called to Ben and Fred as he grabbed three brochures and dashed to catch up with his best buddies. They all stopped, books in hands, to stare at the pictures of kids flying above canyons suspended from zip lines. They instantly believed the brochure’s headline: Summer won’t be complete until you Take it to the Limit at Adventure Rocks Kids Camp.Ben broke the silence, “We have less than two weeks until registration opens, and it says the camp fills up fast.” Then an idea popped into Morty’s head. “Why don’t we sell lemonade and snacks by the side of the road We can pool our allowance savings for the camp.” “That’s a great Idea,” Ben said.续写原文The sun had barely come up on Saturday morning when the kids set up their business. They chose a spot, asked permission from the homeowner, and then asked to use her garden hose for water to make lemonade.Their business went smoothly until Ben announced that they had a comparatively small stock of lemons shortly after noon. Morty decided to make their stock go further. “Fred, when the jug gets down to one-fourth full, just fill it to the top with the water hose.” Morty was thinking out loud, “I’ll change the sign and charge 30 more cents for each cup of lemonade.” Their business went on and the three were secretly proud of the little tricks they had done.Just as Morty finished refilling the jug with water for the third time, a vehicle rounded the comer. Morty saw the minivan with his father at the wheel and his family inside. They pulled up to the sidewalk, and his brothers and sisters jumped out, each clutching a coin or two. They were eager to support their brother’s bustling business. Morty’s family bought the last of the brownies and drank the last drop of watered-down lemonade.段首句Para 1：Morty’s father frowned at the sip of the lemonade.Para 2：They decided to fix their wrongdoings the next week.Part 2题目分析点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写思路分析本文以故事情节发展为线索，讲述了Morty，Ben和Fred三个孩子因为想去参加夏令营，在路边摆摊卖柠檬水赚报名费。随着柠檬越来越少，他们打起了歪主意：往柠檬汁里兑水并提价。后来，Morty的家人开心地来照顾生意。他的爸爸喝出了柠檬水的问题，不禁发出疑问。几个孩子沉默片刻，还是承认了错误。在Morty爸爸的鼓励下，他们决定第二周弥补错误。随后，他们用赚到的钱购买了足量的柠檬，降价，并主动声明给上周周六下午购买柠檬水的顾客免费送一杯柠檬水。可想而知，他们最终没有钱参加夏令营，但是他们懂得了珍贵的一课：做人要保持诚信。续写思路分析Para 1：Morty’s father frowned at the sip of the lemonade.由第一段首句内容“Morty的父亲喝了一口柠檬水，皱起了眉头”可知，第一段可描写Morty的爸爸发现了柠檬水的问题后，几个孩子很尴尬地承认错误的场景，以及Morty爸爸建议他们怎么做。续写思路分析Para 2：They decided to fix their wrongdoings the next week.由第二段首句内容“他们决定下周改正他们的错误”可知，第二段可描写他们如何改正自己的错误。续写思路分析续写线索发现夏令营传单——想参加——摆柠檬水摊赚报名费——柠檬水兑水被发现——承认错误——纠正错误——感悟续写素材可用词汇：行为类①纠正：correct/rectify②建议：suggest/recommend情绪类①疑惑：Overwhelmed with confusion/filled with confusion②尴尬地：awkwardly/embarrassedly续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1] The moment Morty heard his father’s doubt, he stood awkwardly, not sure what to say.（由连词the moment引导的时间状语从句）[高分句型2]We send a cup of lemonade to customers who bought it last Saturday afternoon for free.（由关系代词who引导限制性定语从句）Part 3范文呈现范文呈现Morty’s father frowned at the sip of the lemonade. As to him, it tasted more like water. Overwhelmed with confusion, he asked directly, “What’s wrong It tastes just like cold water.” The moment Morty heard his father’s doubt, he stoodawkwardly, not sure what to say. Fred and Ben were also speechless. A moment later, they admitted what they had done. Although Morty’s father was disappointed, he said, “You still have time to correct your wrongdoings.”Hearing this, they nodded immediately.范文呈现They decided to fix their wrongdoings the next week. Ben suggested to use the money earned to prepare enough lemons first and then reduce the price. They all agreed. When they restarted their business, they even stood a sign,saying, “We send a cup of lemonade to customers who bought it last Saturday afternoon for free.” They made over 50 cups of lemonade for a constant stream of customers with a low price and over 20 cups were for free. As you can imagine, they didn’t get enough money for the camp. But they learned a valuable lesson that one should always be honest.范文译文莫蒂的父亲一小口柠檬水就皱着眉头。对他来说，它尝起来更像水。他不知所措，直接问道：“怎么了？味道就像冷水。”当莫蒂听到父亲的怀疑时，他尴尬地站着，不知道该说什么。弗雷德和本也无言以对。过了一会儿，他们承认了自己的所作所为。虽然莫蒂的父亲很失望，但他说：“你还有时间改正你的错误。”听到这些，他们立即点了点头。范文译文他们决定在下周改正他们的错误。本建议先用赚来的钱准备足够的柠檬，然后再降价。他们都同意。当他们重新开始营业时，他们甚至立着一块牌子，上面写着：“我们免费送一杯柠檬水给上周六下午买的顾客。”他们以低廉的价格为源源不断的顾客制作了50多杯柠檬水，20多杯是免费的。正如你所能想象的，他们没有得到足够的钱来建造营地。但他们学到了一个宝贵的教训，那就是一个人应该永远诚实。Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）Thank you very much!

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