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①I like staying overnight at my Gramma’s house—that is, until Gramma starts telling me how wonderful my cousin Maya is. Then it’s Maya this and Maya that until I don’t ever want to hear another word about her.
②That’s why I wasn’t too excited when Gramma called me on the phone to “come on over and bring your pajamas.” When I got there, it was worse than I’d expected. There, in Grandpa’s big leather rocker, sat Maya, all dressed up and formal-looking and wearing fancy shoes as if she’d just been a party.
③“Surprise, Kristen!”Gramma said. “Your cousin Maya and her parents have traveled in from the East Coast on business. Maya gets to stay with us this afternoon.” Gramma chattered away about how excited she’d been for this surprise get-together, and how cousins ought to get to know each other better.
④I hung my baseball cap in the closet and set my backpack by the stairway, all the time smiling and nodding as if I’d been waiting forever for this chance to spend an afternoon with Maya. Grandpa’s chair squawked (咯咯叫) as Maya rocked back and forth. It’s the chair I like best in the house, the one I usually sit in. I sat down on the sofa across from her.
⑤Shortly, Gramma went off to the kitchen to “see about some lunch,” she’d said. That left me stuck in the living room with rocking Maya.
⑥She was still small but taller than I’d remembered her from her last visit four years ago. She was good at small talk, though, and was chatting away about how nice it was to see me again. But I could tell that she didn’t really think so. The last time she was here, we’d had hours of fun together building caves out of Gramma’s sofa pillows.
⑦After that, I’d heard about her only through Gramma’s tales. Maya taking piano lessons.Maya learning math. Maya, Maya, Maya. Now Maya was here, looking great with the latest haircut and a fancy dress.
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1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Glancing down at my jeans and my old sneakers, I wished I hadn’t come.
“How do you know all these things about me ” I asked.
范文1
Glancing down at my jeans and my old sneakers, I wished I hadn’t come. The frustration kept mounting in my heart while the perfect “chatterbox” (话痨，体现心情) rocked and my favorite chair squawked noisily. But I had to force a smile, pretending to be enthusiastic. Seeming to notice my uneasiness, Maya stopped and cast a concerned look at me. Silence fell and I was nearly overwhelmed by enormous awkwardness. After a while, she broke the ice (破冰), talking about my school life. How could she know that I looked up to her in confusion. Surprisingly, she detailed my baseball match, weekend getaways and even my voluntary work in local nursery I attended that morning. (99 words)
“How do you know all these things about me ” I asked. A mixture of surprise and suspicion welled up in my mind. After all, we had never been in contact for four years. “Gramma always shares with me your life.” Her words floated into my ears as I met her knowing look. It was at that moment that the wall standing between us collapsed, instead, a bond was rebuilt, reminding me of the lost pieces of those sweet memories. During the afternoon, the living room was brimming with (充满；洋溢着) our laughters. I finally understood Gramma was right, and thanks to her, we indeed knew each other better. (97 words)
范文2
Glancing down at my jeans and my old sneakers, I wished I hadn’t come. Her nice haircut, trendy outfit and graceful manner all made me feel inferior. (原因：自惭形秽) How could she be so perfect I thought to myself, my head cluttered with (塞满) a mix of jealousy and embarrassment.(想法+情绪) Despite that, I still managed a smile and nodded every now and then as she was lecturing her experiences- what I had already heard of from Gramma for a thousand times! (互动+情绪体现) Time dragged, and the constant squawks of Grandpa’s rocker made it accumulatingly unbearable. (情绪升级) I was about to excuse myself off the living room when Maya said admiringly, “How does it feel winning the baseball match I’ve never claimed the top spot.” Ignoring the apparent astonishment on my face, she continued mentioning my recent improvement in math and other private trivia (琐事).(转折点+衔接下文) (130 words)
“How do you know all these things about me ” I asked. “It was Gramma!” she grumbled (咕哝，抱怨), “She talked a lot about you on the phone. I rather envy you.”(真相) Her words came as a heavy blow in my heart.(情绪) It turned out Gramma had always been the bridge between us, bonding us with her special attention, and more importantly, her “storytelling”. (成长：认知) Later that afternoon, both of us found back the lost delight we had had four years ago through chatting about more than “told” stories over the hot tea prepared by Gramma. (互动变化) After Maya left, I gave Gramma a bear hug and thanked her for giving us a place to reconnect and showering us with unspoken love. With a settled heart, I fell sound asleep early at night, enjoying a sweet dream of regaining a wonderful cousin.(成长：行为) (135 words)
范文3
Glancing down at my jeans and my old sneakers, I wished I hadn’t come. A rush of shame flooded over me as I compared myself to Maya – Gramma's favorite. She was smarter, prettier, and more talented than I could ever hope to be. The thought of being loved less by Gramma because of Maya was unbearable. “I hear you like to skate,” Maya's words crashed through my thoughts (打断思绪). What she announced was totally beyond my expectation. Astonished and speechless, I wondered how she knew about my skating. “I hear you are the captain of your baseball team. Even better, you are always competitive and aggressive in any sports activities,” she exclaimed, her eyes full of envy and admiration.
“How do you know all these things about me ” I asked. Shrugging and looking down, Maya told me that my Gramma wrote about me in her letters and that I was her favorite person to write about. Numb with shock, I stared at Maya's face, and the only thing that came to my mind was, “You won the first prize in the math competition, didn't you ” Maya looked up, confused. I explained that my Gramma talked about her all the time. We laughed, chatted about everything, and had fun building caves out of Gramma’s sofa pillows. Time flew by, and as Maya and her parents drove off, Gramma and I waved goodbye until they were out of sight. “Isn't Maya a lovely child!” Gramma grinned. “She's really nice,” I agreed, now understanding that Gramma had two favorites. （第一人称有限视角下的人物心情描写）
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When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest, I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did.
So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail His reply:“Because I love your stories. If you’re willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.”Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.
I chose Paul Revere’s horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse’s mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny, and unlikely to be anyone else choice.
What did the horse think, as sped through the night Did he get tired Have doubts Did he want to quit I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere’s horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I cheeked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them.
When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud and said, “Great. Now, write it again.”I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn’t win. I wouldn’t care.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1. A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the mews.
Para 2.I went to my teacher’ office after the award presentation.
读后续写是关于人与自我的主题，和第一考的人与自然主题有所区别，
范文：
Paragraph 1: A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. The moment I saw my name on the top of the first prize list, surprise and joy occupied my mind. Despite the obstacle and confusion on the road, the horse eventually reached his destination with determination. I was invited to deliver a speech on the award presentation. I explained why I chose this special subject and even acted out one-role play as Revere’s horse on the stage, which made the audience laugh out. In the end, I showed my gratitude to the horse rider---my social studies teacher.
Paragraph 2: I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. Bathed in the enjoyment, he waved at me and expressed his congratulations. With tears almost blurring my vision, I gave him a big hug. Without his encouragement, I couldn’t have won the prize. It was him that carved my writing path.Golden sunlight scattered through the office window, spreading he brightness and warmth. He patted my back and laughed out again. Then he pointed that my passion, devotion and persistence contributed to my success. “Just like the horse you wrote, he got tired and had doubts, but he kept going.”
读后续写-【不要被“命运”打倒，好心人帮助重拾希望】
中英文对照
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One day officer Jackson and Steve were discussing a serious case when they were informed of a disturbance in the nearby subway. So, they walked out of the station and got into their car. 有一天，Jackson警官和Steve警官在讨论一个严重的案件时，他们被告知附近的地铁站有些骚乱。于是，他们走出警局，上了车。
The two officers had expected they'd have to deal with an annoying beggar troubling the passers-by for money. But when they arrived at the crime scene, they were shocked at the beggar's appearance. The man had tears in his eyes and was sitting on the subway stairs, looking untidy and tired. 这两位警官原本以为他们要处理的是一个烦人的乞丐，骚扰过路人索要钱财。但当他们到达犯罪现场时，乞丐的样子让他们震惊。这个男人眼中含着泪水，坐在地铁的楼梯上，看起来邋遢而疲惫。
"Excuse me, sir,”Officer Jackson said. "You can't stay here, nor can you bother the people to give you money. You have to leave this place." “先生，不好意思，"Jackson警官说道。"你不能在这里待着，也不能骚扰人们给你钱。你必须离开这个地方。"
"Look, officers ,”the man sighed. "I'm sorry. I didn't mean to cause any trouble, okay I lost my cane, and I can't walk without it. I wanted a few cents so I could get myself something to eat. "看，警官们，"这个男人叹息道。"我很抱歉。我不是故意要制造麻烦的，好吗？我丢了我的拐杖，没有它我无法行走。我只是想要几分钱，这样我就可以买些东西吃。
The two officers exchanged looks , knowing the man wasn't a disturbance but someone who really needed their help. So they promised to get him food, buy him a cane, and drop him home. 这两个警官对视一眼，知道这个男人不是麻烦，而是真正需要他们帮助的人。所以他们答应给他买食物，买拐杖给他，并把他送回家。
After doing that, the officers drove to the beggar's home , only to discover he had no home at all. He was just wandering in the streets and living off the leftovers he managed to find. 做完这些后，警官们开车送乞丐回家，只是发现他根本就没有家。他只是在街头流浪，靠找到的剩饭剩菜生活。
The poor man said his name was Eugene. When he was working at a skyscraper construction site, he was injured and became disabled, losing his ability to walk. Unfortunately, his disability forbade him from doing physical labor, and he wasn't well-educated to find a desk job, so he remained jobless. Because he couldn't provide for his family , his wife and children left him. "I don't have any hopes of changing my destiny, officers,”the man said. 这个可怜的人说他的名字叫尤金。当他在一座摩天大楼的建筑工地上工作时，他受伤并且成为了残疾人，失去了行走的能力。不幸的是，他的残疾使他无法从事体力劳动，他又没有受过良好的教育，无法找到办公室的工作，因此他依然没有工作。因为他无法供养自己的家庭，他的妻子和孩子离开了他。"我没有任何改变命运的希望，警官们，"这个男人说。
But Officer Jackson wanted Eugene to change his life. "You're still young,” he said. "You can't lose hope so soon.” He brought him something warm to eat , helped him take a shower, and gave him his warm boots. After his work , Officer Jackson drove Eugene to a shelter for the homeless and left. 但是Jackson警官希望Eugene能改变他的生活。"你还年轻，"他说，"你不能这么早就失去希望。"他给他带来了一些热的食物，帮助他洗了一个澡，并给了他自己的暖和的靴子。工作结束后，Jackson警官把Eugene送到了一个为无家可归者提供的庇护所，然后离开了。
续写第一段： Since that day, Eugene had never expected to meet the two officers again. 续写第二段： A few months later, Eugene was a changed man. 续写第一段： 从那天起，Eugene再也没有期待过再次见到这两位警官。 续写第二段： 几个月后，Eugene已经是个变了样的人。
Since that day, Eugene had never expected to meet the two officers again.
A few months later, Eugene was a changed man.
原文提到：
He brought him something warm to eat吃饱饭才有能量与力气 , helped him take a shower,洗澡把过去的“摆烂”心态祛除，崭新面貌迎接新生活 and gave him his warm boots.温暖的靴子，穿鞋是为了站起来，人站起来，精神也站起来。
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续写第一段：
【警官持续帮助，授人以鱼不如授人以渔，得让Eugene学技能，才能立足】
Since that day, Eugene had never expected to meet the two officers again. To him, they were like angels who had appeared in his life at his lowest point. But to his surprise, the two officers checked on Eugene regularly at the shelter, making sure he had enough food and clothes. They encouraged Eugene to attend training classes at the shelter and apply for available job opportunities. Though Eugene struggled at first due to his disability and lack of confidence, The officers' persistence and compassion gave Eugene the hope and fueled his determination. The very boots that Officer Jackson had given him now filled his heart as a symbol of hope.
续写第二段：
A few months later, Eugene was a changed man. Through the shelter's job training programs, he learned some basic skills and got a job as a cashier at a local supermarket.(腿摔坏了，找个可以坐着的工作，而且得是非重体力活，对教育程度要求没那么高，且经过一段时间培训，可以上岗，所以想到了超市收银员---对这个岗位没有任何“有色眼镜看待”，真的只是能想到的契合文章的工作之一了) His life was still challenging, but now he had hope and some friends who cared for him. He had found purpose again thanks to Officer Jackson and Steve, who had shown him kindness when he needed it the most. Their actions had not just saved him from a night on the streets; they had saved his life, and their simple act of kindness had sparked a chain of positive changes in Eugene's life. Though his life was still challenging, Eugene was determined to keep trying his best and make progress every day.

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