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Module 1 写作指导
话题分析
本模块的话题是“世界奇观”，与此相关的写作任务是介绍自然或人造景观。写此类文章时，一般先点明该景观的位置和主要特点，然后介绍交通方式、游览时间及其主要景色，最后作总结式评价。介绍景观时多用一般现在时态，使用频率较高的单词和短语有visit，enjoy oneself，wonder，beautiful等。
常用句型
1．The Niagara Falls is one of the greatest natural wonders of the world.
2．The Great Wall is a manmade wonder.
3．It's more than 2，000 years old.
4．In my opinion / For me，manmade wonders are more exciting than natural ones.
5．I look down to the Colorado River，a silver stream nearly one mile below me.
6．Thousands of people walk along the Great Wall every year.
7．I'd like to visit the Giant's Causeway because I love wild places by the sea.
写作储备
1．Go there by bike/bus/train/plane...
2．There be (is/are/was/were)...
3．be known to.../be famous for...
4．One of the greatest wonders...
5．One of the most popular places of interest...
6．Every year thousands of people from home and abroad come to visit it.
典型示例一
黄山(Mount Huangshan)是中国最著名的自然奇观之一，位于安徽省南部。假如上周日你和朋友们游览了黄山，请用英语写一篇短文，记录你们的游览经历。
写作要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯，可适当发挥；
2．词数：90左右。
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写作思路
开篇点题 I visited Mount Huangshan…
具体介绍 It’s one of… It’s about…high. When we started, it… We looked at the sights… We were proud of…
表达感受 How beautiful… We were proud…
范文佳作
I visited Mount Huangshan with my friends last Sunday.
It is one of the most famous natural wonders in China. It is in the south of Anhui Province. Its tallest place is called Lianhua Peak and it is about 1，864 metres high. When we started，it was raining. Ten minutes later，the rain stopped and the clouds cleared. We began to climb. But after half an hour，one of my friends felt very tired and he wanted to stop. Then we had a short rest. At last，we got to the top of Mount Huangshan.
How beautiful it was when we looked at the sights from the top！We were proud of Mount Huangshan.
点评
①开篇点题，固定结构“It is one of＋the＋最高级＋可数名词复数”的运用。
②按时间顺序写出游览过程，如“...started...Ten minutes later...after half an hour...At last...”。
③用感叹句对黄山进行了评价，短语“be proud of”说明了自己的感受。
写作练习一
假如某中学生英语杂志正在征文，主题为“人造奇观”。请你根据下面的提示信息，写一篇90词左右的短文介绍埃菲尔铁塔(the Eiffel Tower)，并给该杂志投稿。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：1.位于法国首都巴黎，得名于它的设计师(designer) Gustave Eiffel；
2．1887年开始修建，1889年建成，高达300多米，是当时世界上最高的建筑物；
3．第一、二层设有餐厅，第三层建有观景台；
4．每年有大量的游客来参观，是法国文化的象征。
The Eiffel Tower is a great manmade wonder. _____________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
The Eiffel Tower is a great manmade wonder. It is in Paris，the capital of France. It got its
name from its designer Gustave Eiffel. People began to build it in 1887 and it took about two
years to finish it.It is more than 300 metres high and it was the tallest building in the world at
that time.
On the first and second floors of the tower，there are dining rooms. And you can enjoy the beautiful sights of Paris on the third floor.
A great number of tourists come to visit the Eiffel Tower every year. It is the sign of French culture.
写作练习二
上个星期天你和你的几个好朋友一起游览了世界奇观之一的中国长城。请根据下面提供的信息写一篇80词左右的游记。
1．乘公共汽车很早就到达了长城脚下；
2．站在长城上，感到很激动；
3．观察到长城有四到五米宽，供五匹马或十个人并排走过。
4．游客众多，来自世界各地。
Last Sunday my friends and I visited the Great Wall._____________________________
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参考答案
Last Sunday my friends and I visited the Great Wall. We got there early by bus and I felt
excited when I was standing on the Great Wall. There were lots of visitors. Some were Chinese and others were foreigners. The Great Wall is known to people all over the world. It is one of the greatest wonders of the world. It's about four to five metres wide. It's wide enough
for five horses or ten men to walk side by side.

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