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课题：如何写好感谢信
高三年级英语学科
通过who-why-what-how梳理感谢信的写作思路
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通过3篇范文赏析感谢信的语言，整理相关词汇句型
学以致用，写一封感谢信致敬奋战在抗击新冠病毒肺炎一线的医护人员
Thank-you letter requirements are concise, reasonably detailed, distinct. Choose your words carefully but not too carved, otherwise it will give a false feeling.
感谢信用语要求精炼简洁，详略得当，层次分明。遣词造句要把握好度，不可过分雕饰，否则会给人一种虚伪的感觉。
概述
Thank-you letter
Why
Who
What
Tone
To express thanks
Detailed
Open-minded
How to write
Expressions
Sentence patterns
（2019.6 浙江）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex
即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助；3.临别祝愿。
Li Hua
Alex
friendly&sincere
Learning that..., I'm writing to express my thanks for....
spoken English; English writing
English learning methods
English grammar
English pronunciation
English culture…
be poor/limited in
have trouble in
find it difficult to...
struggle to understand... while....
detailed explanation
inspirational instructions
patient guidance
continuous encouragements...
build up vocabulary
win a speech/writing contest
be confident in public speaking
broaden horizon...
Li Hua's problem
Alex's help
Dear Alex,
I am writing to express my gratitude for your help on my English study.
I still remember that my English was so poor when you reached our class one year before. It's you who told me lots of useful English learning skills and encouraged me to speak English out with great patience. But for your help, I couldn't have been able to communicate with others so fluently now. Furthermore, during the process of getting along with you, I have learned so much foreign culture, which benefitted me a lot.
Thanks for your help again and I hope everything goes well with you in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文赏析
运用具体事例增加细节表述，使文章内容更加丰满，使感谢意图更加真挚
强调句，虚拟语气，定语从句：丰富表达形式，强化感谢之情
语意递进，彰显文章内部逻辑
Be thankful when you don’t know something, for it gives you the opportunity to learn.
Dear Alex,
Learning that you're leaving for the United States soon, I'm eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it's so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It's indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文赏析
非谓语做状语，各类应用文常用开头
特殊句型承载感谢内容，浓浓的谢意贯穿书信始终
带有情感色彩的形容词
构词法
课本黑体，请背过！
高级动词短语，多积累！
作者通过现在完成时强调了Alex的帮助对自己产生的深远影响
Be thankful for your limitations, because they give you opportunities for improvement.
范文赏析
Dear Alex,
It's really tough to say “goodbye”. Words fail to say endless appreciation in this letter, as you've done so much for me.
Undoubtedly, it was your support and encouragement that lit me up when I was confronted with difficulties in English learning; it was your endeavor and extertions that motivated me to work harder. Whenever you had free time, you would help me practice my oral English by correcting my pronunciation, intonation and grammar. Had it not been for your selfless assistance, I couldn't have made such great progress in English.
Thanks again for your generous help in my English learning. Wish you a safe journey home and a happy life in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
强调句+排比修辞：丰富表达形式，加强感谢效果
“无论何时”引导的时间状语从句更好地体现了Alex的有求必应
高级句型：虚拟语气+倒装的应用使表达多样、地道，提升作文档次
Dear Alex,
It's really tough to say “goodbye”. Words fail to say endless appreciation in this letter, as you've done so much for me.
Undoubtedly, it was your support and encouragement that lit me up when I was confronted with difficulties in English learning; it was your endeavor and extertions that motivated me to work harder. Whenever you had free time, you would help me practice my oral English by correcting my pronunciation, intonation and grammar. Had it not been for your selfless assistance, I couldn't have made such great progress in English.
Thanks again for your generous help in my English learning. Wish you a safe journey home and a happy life in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
（2019.6 浙江）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex
即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助；3.临别祝愿。
开篇点题，表示感谢
详写Alex的帮助
再次感谢，临别祝愿
Tip1：要点与感谢内容紧密结合
Tip2：结合所给语境恰当拓展感谢内容
Summary
thank/thanks/thankful; grateful/gratitude appreciate/ appreciation/appreciative
thank sb for sth/doing sth;
express/convey/extend one’s (heartfelt)
thanks/gratitude/appreciation to sb for sth
On behalf of my whole family, I would like to extend my
great appreciation for your timely help.
It's so generous/nice of you to ...., which benefitted me a lot.
It is you/ your support that motivated/ encouraged me to....
But for your help, I couldn't have been able to ...
With/Under your assistance, I have made great progress in...
Each time/ Whenever I feel defeated, you would...
Thanks again for being such a good friend and keep in touch.
People fighting the virus
fighters
guardian angles
heroes/heroines
countermarching saviors
What do you want to say to them
假定你是李华，你所在的武汉国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致谢奋战在
抗击新冠病毒肺炎一线的医护人员。请根据以下要点写一封信用于投稿：1.表示感谢；
2.个人感受：3.表达信心。
Li Hua
Medical staff
formal&respectful
worried
moved/touched
encouraged/inspired
to convey appreciation
fight against the novel coronavirus
expose themselves to the virus
the risk of being infected the lack of protection suit
selflessness/devotion/sacrifice/patriotism
treat patients with unity and cooperation
work day and night on the front line exhausted
take the patients to do exercises
provide psychological support services
volunteer to do offer timely help
donate money and medical supplies
Dear Sir/Mandam,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，你所在的武汉国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致谢奋战在
抗击新冠病毒肺炎一线的医护人员。请根据以下要点写一封信用于投稿：1.表示感谢；
2.个人感受：3.表达信心。
Dear Sir/Mandam,
I'm Li Hua, a student from Wu Han International High School.On behalf of my school, I would like to convey my sincere gratitude to you for your generous devotion and selfless sacrifice in the battle against novel coronavirus.
With the epidemic increasingly serious, people are in extreme panic. Facing the urgent challenges, it is you who treat the sick patiently and bravely. At such a critical time, all of you are working day and night on the front line, regardless of the exhaustion and the risk of being infected, which deeply moves me to tears. In addition to the heavy daily workload, you not only take the patients to do exercises, but also provide them with psychological support service, bringing comfort and hope to them. But for your selflessness and patriotism, more people might have lost their lives. Inspired by your heroic deeds, I have made up my mind to be a volunteer, playing an active part in this outbreak by offering timely help and donating money and medical supplies.
Many thanks for all the things you have done. I have the confidence that with your effort and unity, our country will certainly get through the dark time and make a quick recovery. Good luck and stay well!
A possible version
Thanks！

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