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(共22张PPT)
Unit 1 People of achievement
Using Language
Yongchuan Senior High
Isabelle
make contributions to 对---做贡献
the most well-known：最著名的
figure ：人身材，数字，理解 figure out
courageous：勇敢的
born in:出生于
due to:由于=because of
despite :尽管
exceptional：[ k sep nl]杰出的;
managed to：设法做某事
out of a strong passion for：出于对…的强烈热情
doctorate: [ d kt r t]博士学位
Extraordinary： [ k str rd neri] 杰出的
quit his job：辞职
full-time:全职
part-time：兼职
come to power：当权
as a consequence：因此
takek up a position：担任职务
encountered： [ n ka nt (r)]偶然碰到
It was reported that：据报道
pass away：去世
背诵词组，扫清障碍
1. He was a great physicist.
2. He was Jewish.
3. He founded the theory of relativity.
Alber Einstein
Imagination is more important than knowledge.
lead in
lead in
What do you know about Albert Einstein
a great scientist
one of the smartest men
a courageous and kind figure
a gentle genius
a strong passion for science
the general theory of relativity
a slightly odd looking but kind and funny man
Reading
— for the genre（体裁） & main idea
The text mainly talks about
Albert Einstein's ________ and ____________.
life story
What's the genre of the text
A. Exposition 说明文
B. Biography传记
C. Argumentation 议论文
D. Practical writing 应用文
achievements
Title
Para1: Brief Intriduction
Para 2: Educational experience
Para 3: Work experience & achievement
Para 4: Mid-life（[ kra s s] 危机）
Para 5: Appearance &Personality
Para 6: Death
beginning
Body
Ending
Reading
— for the structure
Albert Einstein ,who is perhaps the greatest scientist in modern physics ,is often considered one of the smartest men who ever lived. He made numerous contributions to the world , the most well-known being the general theory of relativity and the famous formula E= mc . Einstein was not only a genius ; he was a courageous and kind figure loved by many people.
beginning
Reading
— for the detail
Lead：
1. Introduce the topic of the passage.
2.General introduction of Albert Einstein and his great contributions.
The text mainly talks about Einstein’s _________ and ______________.
life story
achievements
body
Reading
— for the detail
How does the writer develop the text
In time order. (按时间次序)
Activity: Make a timeline of his life
Born in Germany
1879
1896
1955
1933
1895
Failed to enter university
Entered university
1900
Graduated from university
1902
1905
1922
1909
Took a job
as a clerk
Earned a doctorate in physics
Entered research full-time at a university
Awarded the Nobel Prize for Physics
Fled
Germany
Passed away
body
Reading
— for the language feature
What rhetorical devices(修辞手法) are used in the passage
Rhetorical Device Example
Analogy (类比)
Metaphor (暗喻)
Simile(明喻) Personification (拟人)
Euphemism [ ju f m z m] (委婉语）
Following this, he gradually became famous throughout the world ________________________ .
Einstein, who was Jewish, found _______________
___________________ closed to him.
Einstein ________________.
as the new Isaac Newton
the doors of
had just received an electric shock
stood on end
had passed away
academic institutions
as though he
He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes _________________ _____________
_____________________________________.
Writing after reading
如何写人物介绍
An introduction to someone you admire
人物简介的一般步骤可以概括为5个字:
概、貌、育、平、评
1. 概指概况: age, family background, identity
2. 貌指外貌: appearance, character, hobby
3. 育指教育: education background
4. 平指生平: big events, achievements & influence (in time order)
5. 评指评价: evaluation
Body
Ending
Beginning
Basic information
(Name, identity...)
Experience
Achievements
Impressive story
The reason why you
admire him/her.
Structure
引出人物---简要介绍基本信息如生平，教育，职业等
介绍人物主要经历---挑比较重要的事迹进行描写，贡献或成就等
人物评价及对作者的影响---人格，贡献，闪光点
注意：运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用 ，而描写人物的出生地、教育背景、经历、事迹时常用 ____________
一般现在时
一般过去时
人物介绍的写作要点可分为三部分：
可以先分解成两个句子。
袁隆平1930年9月7日出生于北京。
他刻苦学习，酷爱农业科学。
Yuan Longping was born in Beijing on 7th September 1930.
He studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science.
高级句式：
袁隆平1930年9月7日出生于北京，刻苦学习，酷爱农业科学。
Yuan Longping was born in Beijing on 7th September 1930, who studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science.(非限制性定语从句)
Born in Beijing on 7th September 1930, Yuan Longping studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science.（分词做状语）
出生于：___________________ 酷爱：_______________
在……方面有天赋：_______________从某大学毕业：__________
be born in
have/show a passion for
be talented in...
graduate from
1.引出人物：--- 简单介绍人物背景
语料积累
(出生日期/出生地+职业/兴趣)
2.介绍人物主要经历
做…工作：____________
把…奉献给…：___________________
起关键性作用：_______________ 坚定的决心___________________
在…获得巨大的成功：___________________
使某人能够做某事：_____________________
下定决心做某事：_____________________
work as
devote oneself/entire life to...
play a crucial role in
strong will and determination
achieve great success in...
enable sb to do sth
/ take up a position as
make up one’s mind to do
/ be determined to do sth
3.人物评价及对作者的影响---重要词汇
为某人赢得好名声：_______________ 高度评价__________________
做出巨大贡献：________________________ 被授予……：________________
作为……而闻名：__________________ 被尊称为________________________
树立好榜样：_________________
值得我们崇拜和尊重：_________________________________
earn sb a good reputation
make great contributions to
be awarded...
be known/famous as
be honored as
set a good example
deserve our admiration and respect
think highly of
1.Graduating from Peking University in 1993, he worked as a teacher in Wuhan University.
2.When he was a boy, he showed a passion formaths.
3.Born in Shanghai, on September 12th, 1980, Yao Ming is one of the best basketball players in China.
4.In order to ..., he made up his mind to do... 为了…，他决定做…..
5.With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in...
凭借坚强的意志和坚定的决心，他在……方面取得了巨大的成功……
功能句背诵
6.Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them.
尽管有许多困难，他/她还是设法克服了
7.He/She put his/her heart into …and made great contributions to…
他/她全心全意投入…, 并为…做出了巨大贡献…
8.As a great...，he/she will be remembered by us forever.
作为一个伟大的……，他/她将被我们永远铭记。
9.It is his determination that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning.
正是他的决心激励我在学习有困难时继续前进。
10.Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
他为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，是一个非常优秀的人，值得我们钦佩和尊重
Reading for writing
姓名： 袁隆平
出生： 1930年，北京
毕业院校： 西南农学院
职业： 科学家
工作经历： 大学毕业后，他从事农业教学何研究工作
在1975年，他成功培育出了杂交水稻，
成就： 提高了水稻产量，有助于消除世界饥饿
被誉为“杂交水稻之父”
西南农学院：
Southwest Agricultural College
他从事农业教学和研究工作
agricultural teaching
research
培育出了杂交水稻
breed hybrid rice
杂交水稻之父
the father of hybrid rice
提高了水稻产量，
有助于消除世界饥饿
improve the rice production and help rid the world of hunger
参考词汇
开头：
The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地点/时间）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(职业）, showed a passion for___________(方面）
The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. Born in Beijing in 1930 , Yuan Longping，who is one of the greatest scientist, showed a passion for researching rice.
After graduating from __________(学校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）.
中间：
After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College, he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in breeding hybrid rice, which improved the rice production and helped rid the world of hunger. So he is known as the father of hybrid rice.
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. Born in Beijing in 1930 , Yuan Longping , who is one of the greatest scientist, showed a passion for researching rice.
After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College, he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in breeding hybrid rice, which improved the rice production and helped rid the world of hunger. So he is known as the father of hybrid rice.
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
结尾：
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The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地点/时间）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(职业）, showed a passion for___________(方面）
After graduating from __________(学校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）.
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
我最崇拜的人是_______(人）. 出生于_______(地点/时间）, _______（人），是最伟大_______(职业）的人之一, 表现出对___________(方面）的热情。
在__________(学校）毕业后, 他/她大部分时间都花在做___________上。尽管有许多困难，他/她还是设法克服了。凭借坚强的意志和坚定的决心，他在_________取得了巨大的成功，这使他_____________(成就）.
为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，他是一个非常优秀的人，值得我们钦佩和尊重。
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