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高考英语读后续写语篇练习
生活故事——暖心弟弟秘密地去参加姐姐的毕业典礼
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题目分析
读后续写
题目再现
范文呈现
努力方向
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Part 1
题目呈现
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续写原文
The Christmas Spirit Strikes Again
I always dreamed of making a big surprise of a lifetime. Thanks to a little determination, some luck, and a generous helping of Christmas Spirit, my dream became a reality.
My family is Canadian, although my sister moved down to Australia a few years ago to study. She was graduating just before Christmas, but due to my own scholarly schedule back home, I would be unable to make it down in time for her graduation. She was understandably disappointed, and I felt guilty that I wasn’t able to be there for her on this special occasions.
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续写原文
While I was talking to my professor the week before my sister’s graduation, she commented, “Well, if you want to go, just go ahead!" I couldn’t believe my luck! I nearly jumped for joy. “Just make sure you get permission from administrator (行政主管)，” she added. My heart sank. The administration at my school was infamous for denying any sort of time-off requests. I almost didn’t bother asking, because I knew it would be a waste of time. But something in me decided to try, just in case. Maybe it was the hope that the Christmas Spirit would somehow affects the administrator at this time of year. When I returned home to check the reply in my inbox, I steeled myself for disappointment. I held my breath, opened the e-mail, and started to read. And re-read, just to make sure I’d understood. Approval I couldn’t believe my luck!
Immediately, I called the airline. Unexpectedly, even during the busy Christmas season, I was able to change my ticket to arrive the day before my sister’s graduation. With news this fantastic, I was bursting to tell my sister. But, fingers on the dial((拨号盘), I paused. Wouldn’t it be much more fantastic if I could surprise her What a state of shock she would be in! Slowly a great idea came to my mind. I decided a much more dramatic arrival than just a ring of the doorbell. What if I couldn’t arrive in a box
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段首句
Para 1: I started to plot.
Para 2: I, hidden in the big box, heard the mailmen ringing my sister’s doorbell.
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Part 2
题目分析
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点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；
点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；
点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；
点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。
情节构建的重点
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续写思路分析
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的姐姐在加拿大，即将毕业，作者想请假去参加她的毕业典礼，作者忐忑地向自己的学校请假，令作者出乎意料的是居然被批准了，作者订好了机票，想要给姐姐一个惊喜。
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续写思路分析
Para 1: I started to plot.
由第一段首句内容“我开始策划。”可知，第一段可描写作者的计划。
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续写思路分析
Para 2: I, hidden in the big box, heard the mailmen ringing my sister’s doorbell.
由第二段首句内容“我躲在大箱子里，听见邮递员按我姐姐的门铃。”可知，第二段可描写作者的姐姐看到作者时的反应。
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续写思路分析
续写线索
想到好主意——联系邮件公司——打开箱子——感想
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续写素材
可用词汇：
行为类
①想到：occur to sb./strike sb.
②偶然遇见：come across/run into
③打开：open/unfold
④突然哭起来：burst into tears/burst out crying
情绪类
①疯狂地：frantically/insanely
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续写素材
可用句型：
[高分句型1]I knew if I pulled this off, my grand arrival would be the best Christmas present I could ever give my sister.(由关系代词that引导的定语从句，省略了that)
[高分句型2]It was such a gift to be able to attend my sister’s graduation to show her my love, and it was a memory that both of us would cherish forever.(由关系代词that引导的定语从句)
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Part 3
范文呈现
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范文呈现
I started to plot. Then, a great idea occurred to me: getting delivered in a box to my sister’s house! I knew if I pulled this off, my grand arrival would be the best Christmas present I could ever give my sister. I frantically started Googling mail companies. Fortunately, I came across a mail company named Couriers Please and to my great amazement their manager agreed to help me to fulfill my dream! The next day, they found a box big enough for me to hide in. The Christmas Spirit strikes again! (86词)
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范文呈现
I, hidden in the big box, heard the mailmen ringing my sister’s doorbell. They announced they had a delivery for her. When the box was opened and she saw me sitting inside smiling up at her, my sister was at a complete loss for words and burst into tears. I would never forget the look on her face. It was such a gift to be able to attend my sister’s graduation to show her my love, and it was a memory that both of us would cherish forever. So never underestimate the power of the Christmas Spirit (85词）
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范文译文
我开始策划。然后，我想到了一个好主意：装在盒子里送到我姐姐家！我知道如果我成功了，我的盛大到来将是我能送给妹妹的最好的圣诞礼物。我开始疯狂地在谷歌上搜索邮件公司。幸运的是，我遇到了一家名为Couriers Please的邮件公司，令我非常惊讶的是，他们的经理同意帮助我实现我的梦想！第二天，他们找到了一个大到可以让我藏起来的盒子。圣诞精神又来了！
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范文译文
藏在大箱子里，听到邮递员按我姐姐的门铃。他们宣布有人送她。当盒子打开时，她看到我坐在里面对她微笑，我姐姐完全无话可说，哭了起来。我永远不会忘记她脸上的表情。能够参加我姐姐的毕业典礼向她表达我的爱是一份礼物，这是我们俩将永远珍惜的记忆。所以永远不要低估圣诞精神的力量。
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Part 4
努力方向
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高级结构
名词性从句
高级结构
三连动
虚拟语气
形容词做状语
无灵主语
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定语从句
状语从句
（包含倒装句）
强调句
副词做状语
非谓语
（包括独立主格）
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