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高考英语读后续写语篇练习个人成长——Be a true runner题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文For me, it was normal to feel lost at the inter-camp track. Four camps of kids were ready to lead their teams to a blue ribbon and win the day. Not me. I was too little to be the leader and too skinny to be an athlete. I knew this by the time I was twelve, because my camp counselors（辅导员）and the other kids reminded me of it every chance they got. So when our camp needed a fourth runner in the two-mile race around the lake, I knew I was no one’s first choice.I hid in the shade of a maple tree as they called the names of the runners, my body tensed as I heard a counselor call, “Fred! Where is Fred! He is in this race!” It was Barry. He spotted me under the tree. “Fred! We need a 12-year-old who hasn’t been in other events to run the two-mile!”He gave me a push towards the starting line. Having no confidence and trying to save myself from the shame of taking the last place as four camps watched, I pleaded with him.“But I don’t know the way around the lake!”“You’re in. Just follow Bill!” Barry smiled.续写原文Barry smiled.Bill was my friend and the fastest runner in our camp. And then Barry said, “When you make it to the last stretch（最后一程）on the field, just throw your head back and run.”At the starting line, I stood next to Bill and trembled.“On your mark… Get set...” The gun cracked and sixteen of us took off. I stayed close on Bill’s heels, a little too close for Bill, I guess. He shouted at me, “Back off!”I did. Two guys passed me, but I kept my eyes on Bill.It was tiring. The distance was widening between Bill and me. We made the turn from the dusty road onto the muddy, wooded trail that would go around the lake back to the field. Through the trees, I saw Bill trip over a tree root and fall. A runner from another camp passed him.段首句Para 1: In a moment, Bill was up again and running.Para 2: I didn’t know when I crossed the finish line.Part 2题目分析点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写思路分析本文以人物和时间为线索展开，讲述了Fred因个儿小人瘦弱而一直没有机会在赛道上为自己队争得荣誉，心生自卑，但是一次环湖2英里的比赛中，辅导员Barry选他当第四个参赛运动员，并指点他只要跟着他的朋友，跑得最快的Bill就行了；Fred照做了，尽管心里忐忑，疲惫不堪，但最终获得了团体冠军，也使他对自己充满了自信。续写思路分析Para 1: In a moment, Bill was up again and running.由第一段首句内容“不一会儿，比尔爬了起来，又开始跑”可知，第一段可描写Fred跟在Bill后面的状况，Barry的话鼓舞了Fred，在最后200处他全力冲向终点线。续写思路分析Para 2: I didn’t know when I crossed the finish line.由第二段首句内容“我不知道我什么时候越过了终点线。”可知，第二段可描写Fred的努力使小组赢得冠军，看着欢呼的老师和同学时Fred的心理变化。续写思路分析续写线索Bill爬起来后——Fred筋疲力尽时——最后200米时——越过终点线后——得知比赛结果后续写素材可用词汇：行为类①.疲惫不堪：be worn out/be tired out/be completely exhausted②.加速：accelerate/speed up③.发掘我的潜力：explore my potential/exploit my potential情绪类①.充满自信：be injected with confidence/be filled with confidence②.喝彩：cheer/applaud续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]. Injected with confidence, I headed for the finishing line.（运用了过去分词作状语）[高分句型2].it well proved that I was not a loser as an athlete and that I could further explore my potential.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）Part 3范文呈现范文呈现In a moment, Bill was up and running. I couldn’t think of anything but to follow him closely. I could even feel the air hitting my face and I was totally worn out. Naturally, my pace slowed down. Just at the moment, Barry’s words “Just follow Bill” called me back. Convinced that I was no longer a loser, I refreshed up again and accelerated and soon I was quite close to Bill again. Injected with confidence, I headed for the finishing line. The gun cracked again, announcing the last 200 meters. I closed my eyes, threw my head back and ran with my last ounce of strength, in the direction of the dream line.范文呈现I didn’t know when I crossed the line. I still kept running on when a thunderous applause burst, which signaled the birth of the champion. I stopped and opened my eyes and saw my camp of kids and the camp counsellor gathering around me. “We have won the race! We are the champion!” they shouted and cheered, throwing me in the air. Showered with hugs and applause and whistles, I felt a surge of gaiety sweeping over me. To me, the race meant more than a champion; it well proved that I was not a loser as an athlete and that I could further explore my potential. Just as Hemingway put it, “The true nobility is superior to your former self.”范文译文过了一会儿，比尔就跑了起来。我想不出别的办法，只能紧紧地跟着他。我甚至能感觉到空气打在我的脸上，我完全筋疲力尽了。我的步伐自然放慢了。就在这时，巴里的一句话“跟着比尔走”把我叫了回来。确信我不再是失败者，我再次振作起来，加速前进，很快我又接近了比尔。充满信心的我冲向终点线。枪声再次响起，宣告了最后200米。我闭上眼睛，把头往后仰，用尽最后一点力气，朝着梦线的方向跑去。范文译文我不知道我什么时候越界的。当雷鸣般的掌声响起，标志着冠军的诞生时，我仍在继续奔跑。我停下来睁开眼睛，看到我的孩子们和营地辅导员聚集在我周围。“我们赢了比赛！我们是冠军！”他们大声欢呼，把我抛向空中。在拥抱、掌声和口哨声中，我感到一阵欢乐席卷了我。对我来说，这场比赛不仅仅意味着冠军；这充分证明了作为一名运动员，我不是一个失败者，我可以进一步发掘自己的潜力。正如海明威所说：“真正的高贵胜过从前的自己。”Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）Thank you!

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