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Unit 1 Penfriends
单元话题满分范文必背
一、讲稿
1．在我们成长过程中，朋友是不可或缺的一部分，友谊带给我们的快乐也是无可取代的。假设你正在参加本校的英语演讲比赛，请你以“friendship”为话题，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。内容包括：
1. What do you think of friends
2. How do friends get on with each other
3. What does friendship really mean
要求：
1、要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2、词数80个左右；
3、文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。
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【答案】例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
Friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that people can enjoy.
We should respect friends and be ready to help when they are in need. In this way, we can keep our friendship alive. True friends can share our sadness and double our joy. What’s more, they are always there to offer us advice, listen to our problems and try the best to give us a helping hand. It’s very important to choose friends wisely, so we should choose friends with good characters or the same interests.
Thanks for listening.
【详解】1.题干解读：这篇作文要求根据写作提示，写一篇关于朋友的演讲稿，谈一谈自己对朋友的认识，可适当增加细节。
2. 写作指导：本文应以第三人称和一般现在时为主，以第一人称为辅来叙述。写作时承接开头，分别阐述对朋友的看法、朋友之间如何相处以及真正的友谊意味着什么。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
二、话题作文
2．Writing(作文)
82. Write a letter of at least 60 words to your pen friend, introducing yourself (给你的笔友写一封信介绍你自己，不少于60词）
Dear _________,
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Sincerely yours,
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【答案】I am Helen, I live in Shanghai, China. I am 12 years old and my birthday is in November. I can speak Chinese and a little English, I can talk with foreigners. My hobbies are swimming and reading, reading can make our spirit clearer, swimming can make us keep healthy, I also like going to the movies with my friends and family. My favourite subject is English, it is so interesting. Can you write to me soon
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时，把邮件的姓名以及结尾的姓名写清楚。
例文分析：例文采用一段式；用第一人称来叙述自己的个人情况；时态采用一般现在时为主，介绍自己描写细致，整体条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：speak Chinese and a little English；talk with foreigners；keep healthy；write to me。
句型：My hobbies are swimming and reading, reading can make our spirit more clear, swimming can make us keep healthy；Can you write to me soon
3．在英语作文课上，老师让同学们写一篇作文，题目：How to make friends。可能用到的词汇：learn to share, respect, communicate with, help, smile, honest
要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
2.词数80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
How to make friends
As we know, it’s very important to have a friend in our life. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to make friends
As we know, it’s very important to have a friend in our life. So we must treasure our friendship when we make friends.
First, we should learn to share our happiness and sadness. Second, we should respect our friend all the time. Third, we should communicate with our friends as often as possible. Do not quarrel with each other when you have different opinions. If he or she has some trouble, please offer to help him or her at once. The most important thing is that you should smile at your friend. At last, please be honest to your friends.
I hope your friendship will last for long.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：以How to make friends为题展开叙述，不要偏离主题。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明朋友的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述如何交朋友；
第三步，最后表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
① all the time一直
② communicate with sb和某人交流
③ offer to do sth主动提出做某事
[高分句型]
①If he or she has some trouble, please offer to help him or her at once.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②The most important thing is that you should smile at your friend（that引导的表语从句）
三、电子邮件
4．假如你是李华，你的好朋友李静将在下周二举办生日聚会，她邀请你周日去帮忙制作邀请函，但你计划周末 为期末考试做准备。请你给笔友 Ted 写一封邮件，诉说你的苦恼，并寻求他的帮助。
要求：
1.语句通顺，语法正确， 行文连贯，书写整齐；
2.70 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
Dear Ted,
I need your help._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What should I do Can you give me some advice
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
例文
Dear Ted,
I need your help. My best friend Li Jing’s birthday is coming. She invited me to help make the invitation letter on Sunday. But there will be an important exam next Monday, and I need to study for it this weekend. If I go to help her, she will be very happy, but I may fail the exam. Then, I can’t go to my favorite high school. If I refuse, she will be angry with me. She is my best friend and trusts me so much. I don’t want to make her sad. I really don’t know what to do. It makes me upset.
What should I do Can you give me some advice
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。点出主题：寻求帮助；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细地陈述自己的苦恼，并寻求他的帮助；
第三步，书写结语。期望别人提供一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①study for备考
②be angry with生……气
[高分句型]
If I go to help her, she will be very happy, but I may fail the exam.（if引导的条件状语从句）
5．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友David不善于与人交谈，社交能力差，发来邮件寻求你的帮助，请你给他回一封词数为80左右的英文电子邮件(开头已为你写好，不计入总词数)，从使用肢体语言的角度给他一些建议。
要点如下：
1.保持微笑，友好待人；
2.说话时要看着对方的眼睛；
3.自由发挥(至少补充一点) 。
参考词汇：自信地confidently；姿势posture
要求：
1.词数80左右，已给出部分不计入总词数；
2.可围绕要点适当发挥，使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息
Dear David,
How are you recently I have got a solution to your problem with communication.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
How are you recently I have got a solution to your problem with communication.
In my opinion, you should trust yourself first. Besides, you should keep yourself in a relaxing posture when you are speaking. Just smile and be gentle to everyone around you. What’s more, you’d better look into others’ eyes when you speak in order to let others know you put your heart into your communication. Last but not the least, try to speak loudly and slow down. As you speak loudly and slowly, you will look more confident and it’s easier for others to listen.
All in all, the most important thing is that you should find someone and practice speaking to others more.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏细节，注意要自己发挥，增加至少一条建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候，并总说解决办法引出下文。
第二步，具体说明应该怎样与他人交流，结合要点给出建议。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己对朋友的信任，鼓励朋友勇敢和他人交流。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion在我看来
②had better最好
③Last but not the least最后
④try to do努力做
[高分句型]
①What’s more, you’d better look into others eyes when you speak in order to let others know you put your heart into your communication.（含有时间状语从句和宾语从句的主从复合句）
②All in all, the most important thing is that you should find someone and practice speaking to others more.（表语从句）
四、材料作文
6．以下是你的好朋友Mike 在外貌、性格和爱好方面的变化。请你根据表格内容介绍他的变化并谈谈你对他的变化的看法。写一篇不少于60词的短文。
In the past Now
Appearance thin, short tall, strong, wear glasses
Personality quiet outgoing
Hobbies watch TV play basketball, read books
My friend Mike has changed a lot in the last few years.
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【答案】One Version:
My friend Mike has changed a lot in the last few years. He used to be thin and short, but now he is tall and strong. Besides, he wears glasses now. As for personality, he used to be quiet, but now he is outgoing. I think the changes in his appearance and personality are because the changes of his hobbies. Mike used to watch TV and he seldom played outside. However, at present, he is interested in playing basketball and reading books. Exercising and reading make him more energetic and outgoing. I am so glad to see the good changes and I believe my friend Mike will be healthier and smarter.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍我的朋友改变了很多；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“长相、性格、爱好”等几个方面重点介绍朋友的变化；
第三步，书写结语，祝愿我的朋友健康、聪明。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②at present现在
③be interestd in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①Exercising and reading make him more energetic and outgoing.（动名词作主语）
②I am so glad to see the good changes and I believe my friend Mike will be healthier and smarter.（省略that的宾语从句）
7．亲爱的同学，在你三年的初中生活中，你总会与一些同学成为朋友。请以“My best friend and I”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：
1. Who is your best friend
2. How did you become friends
3. How are you the same as and different from your friend
4. What do you like about him/her
要求：
1. 如果你的朋友是女生，请用名字Mary；男生请用John，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
2. 要点齐全，表达清晰，可适当发挥；
3. 不少于80词。
My best friend and I
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【答案】例文
My best friend and I
I like to have friends who are different from me. My best friend is John. We have been friends for about three years. Three years ago, when I came into our school, he was my deskmate, so we became friends. In some ways we look the same, and in someways we look different. We both have black eyes and black hair. We are both thin, but John is much thinner. he is taller, more outgoing than me. And he is really more hard-working than me. I am good at English but he does well in math. We like playing basketball. Both he and I like sports show. But I like watching cartoon films, he likes watching talk show. I am lazier than him. He is never late for class, But I always get up late. I think differences are not important in a friendship. Although we have some differences, we are good friends. Our friendship will last forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍好朋友的基本信息及你们是如何成为好朋友的；
第二步，介绍你与好朋友的共同点、不同点；
第三步，谈谈你喜欢他的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①both…and…两者都……
②do well in…擅长……
③be good at…擅长……
④like doing sth喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①Beijing lies in the north of China, which has a long history.（定语从句）
②Although we have some differences, we are good friends. （让步状语从句）
8．作为一名学生，在和同学们的朝夕相处中，你们之间难免会有争执，你是如何处理和他/她的关系呢？请根据以下提示和要求，用英文写篇文章描述你的经历及感受。
内容提示问题：
1. Have you ever argued with your classmate
2. Why did you argue with him/her
3. What did you do to deal with the problem
4. What did you learn from this experience
5. How can you get on well with your classmates
写作要求：
1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥，书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现考生真实姓名和校名。
3. 字数：100词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
As a student, it is interesting for us to study together, play together, there are often some arguments among the classmates.
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【答案】例文
As a student, it is interesting for us to study together, play together, there are often some arguments among the classmates. And it is also meaningful to get along well with our classmates in the school.
However, there are often some arguments among the classmates. Lisa is my best friend. A month ago, I argued with her. It was Sunday, I went to the movies with her as usual. Then we went to a restaurant. I wanted to have a big meal. But Lisa thought I ordered too much. Her words made me very angry, so I left the restaurant alone. Later, I realized that what I did was wrong. We shouldn’t waste any food. So I called Lisa to say sorry to her. Lisa said it wasn’t a big deal and we became close friends again.
I was very happy. From this incident, I understand that if we want to get along well with others, we should communicate in time and take the initiative to admit our mistakes when we encounter problems.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏主要信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述自己的经历，重点从“起争执的原因以及如何解决问题”来讲述这样的一个经历；
第三步，表达自己吸取的经验以及如何跟朋友相处。
[亮点词汇]
①get along well with sb.与某人相处得好
②as usual通常
③incident事件
④communicate交流
[高分句型]
①And it is also meaningful to get along well with our c lassmates in the school.（it作形式主语）
②From this incident, I understand that if we want to get along well with others, we should communicate in time and take the initiative to admit our mistakes when we encounter problems.（when引导的时间状语从句）
9．根据表格中提供的信息写一篇短文，介绍你和你的好朋友琳达的相同之处和不同之处。80词左右。
不同点 相同点
琳达 ⑴比我高，比我文静； ⑵英语比我学得好； ⑶喜欢看电视。 ⑴黑眼睛，黑头发； ⑵喜欢运动； ⑶喜欢阅读，通常周末一起去图书馆。
我 ⑴性格外向； ⑵语文学得好； ⑶喜欢上网。
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【答案】例文：
Linda is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same. We both have black eyes and black hair. We both like sports and reading. On weekends we usually go to the library together. But in some ways we are different. She is taller and quieter than me. She is better at English than me. She likes watching TV. I’m a little more outgoing than her. I like going online in my free time. And I’m good at Chinese. We often help each other.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中琳达和我的不同的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图借用“简单介绍琳达和我的不同”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“外貌、性格、爱好等”几个方面重点介绍琳达和我的不同的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语：我们经常互相帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①on weekends在周末
②likes doing喜欢做某事
③be good at擅长
[高分句型]
①She is taller and quieter than me.（比较级+than句型）
五、书信作文
10．假设你是Li Lei，你的好朋友王硕刚刚转到了一所新学校，面对陌生的环境，他感到不适应。他给你写了一封信，想征求你的建议。请你用英语给他回一封80词左右的信，帮助他去解决一些心里困惑。
Dear Li Lei,
I have some trouble in the new school. So I often feel lonely and worried. I have no close friends and I don’t know how to get on well with my new classmates. What should I do then
Yours,
Wang Shuo
要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯，符合逻辑、书写规范；
2.可以适当增加细节。
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【答案】参考答案
Dear Wang Shuo,
Glad to receive your letter. In your letter, you said you often felt lonely and worried. Don’t worry about it. Here is some advice. First, you should be friendly to others. Whether you are at school or not, try to make friends with your classmates. Second, you should try to help them when they are in trouble. Third, remember to give everyone a smile every day. In fact, everyone likes a smiling face. If so, you will be happy and have more friends. I hope you can enjoy yourself.
Best wishes.
Yours, hope
Li Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信；
②时态：本文时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，友谊是人生中不可缺少的部分，有了友谊 ，你会开心快乐，学习，工作顺利。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。要对他人友好，帮助他人，经常对他人微笑。first，second，third 等衔接上下文。
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to sb对……友好
②try to do sth尽力做某事
③help sb in trouble帮助有困难的人
④best wishes最美好的祝愿
[高分句型]
①First, you should be friendly to others. （运用副词first，second等衔接全文）
②I hope you can enjoy yourself. （宾语从句）

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