牛津译林版七年级上册Unit7Shopping 单元作文指导(含答案)

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Unit 7 shopping
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
购物
商品促销广告
本单元的话题是“购物”,要求我们能结合实际生活,用所学的词汇介绍商品的价格,能对所购买的物品进行评论,还要结合本单元所学的服装类名词,写商品促销广告。
在写商品促销广告时,可首先说明促销的商品; 其次介绍所售商品的价格、尺寸、颜色等基本信息; 最后回扣主题:欢迎顾客来购买。注意要多使用礼貌用语。
【词汇积累】
1. shopping n.购物
2. be different from
3. be interested in
4. change n.零钱, 找零
5. expensive adj.昂贵的
6. cheap adj.便宜的
7. sure adj.确信的
8. wallet n.钱包 (wallets)
9. maybe adv.或许, 可能 (放句首)
10. cost v.值多少钱 (主语为物)
11. collect v.收集 (collects/collecting)
12. poor adj.贫穷的, 可怜的
13. area n.地区(areas)
14. match v.与…相匹配
15. enough adj./pron 足够
【短语积累】
a clothes store 一家服装店
2. all colors 所有颜色
3. at a great sale 降价销售
4. at a good price 以优惠的价格
5. at one’s great sale 大甩卖; 大促销
6. at very good prices 以非常优惠的价格
7. a pair of 一双
8. how much 多少钱
9. trousers in purple 紫色的裤子
10. on sale 减价出售
11. sports shoes 运动鞋
【句型积累】
开头句:
1. Come and buy…at our great sale! 来买……吧, 我们的……特价销售!
2. Welcome to… 欢迎来……
中间句:
1. We sell…at very good prices. 我们以很优惠的价格出售……
2. We have... in... color(s). 我们有……颜色的……
3. For girls/boys, we have... for only... 对于女孩/男孩, 我们有……, 仅售……
4. You can buy…for only… 你只需花费……就能买到……
结尾句:
Come to…and buy clothes now! 现在就来……买衣服吧!
假如你是李华。请根据下面的提示,写一篇30-40词的英语短文,向你的同学介绍你的新书包和书包里的物品。开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
提示:
What color is it
Is it big or small
What’s in it
My name is Li Hua. This is
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【答案】范文
My name is Li Hua. This is my new schoolbag. It is big. It’s orange. What’s in the schoolbag A school box, some books, and a dictionary are in it. There is a ruler, a pencil and an eraser in the pencil box. It is blue and red. I want to take the schoolbag to school every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给的问题提示介绍你的新书包和书包里的物品。注意要点齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,直入主题介绍自己的新书包,颜色和书包里的东西;
第二步,以表达“自己的感受”结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①want to do想要做
②every day每天
[高分句型]
There is a ruler, a pencil and an eraser in the pencil box.(there be句型)
一、词形转换
写出下列动词的现在分词
1.do    eat    sing    study
2.dance make give have
3.sit get begin shop
4.chat run swim lie
【答案】1. doing eating singing studying 2.dancing  making giving having 3. sitting getting beginning shopping 4.chatting  running swimming lying
【解析】1.现在分词变化规则一般直接加ing。do—doing;eat—eating;sing—singing;study—studying。故填doing;eating;singing;studying。
2.e结尾的,去掉e,加ing。dance—dancing;make—making;give—giving;have—having。故填dancing;making;giving;having。
3.以一个辅音字母结尾的重读闭音节,双写最后一个辅音字母,再加ing。sit—sitting;get—getting;begin—beginning;shop—shopping。故填sitting;getting;beginning;shopping。
4.chat,run和swim都需要双写最后一个辅音字母,再加ing。chat—chatting;run—running; swim—swimming;以ie结尾的,把ie变成y再加ing。lie—lying。故填chatting;running;swimming;lying。
二、单项选择
1.Hurry up! The taxi ________ for us now.
A.will wait B.waited C.waits D.is waiting
2.What do you ________ this toy car
A.think of B.think about C.look after D.look for
3.—You look really ________ in that black T-shirt, John.
—Thank you.
A.short B.fat C.cool D.old
4.Look! Bill and Ben ________ at the pool.
A.are swimming B.swim C.swimming D.swims
5.We need a ________ in math class (数学课).
A.jacket B.cup C.ruler D.quilt
6.Listen! The bird ________ in the tree.
A.sing B.sings C.is singing D.to sing
7.—Look! Who ________ over there
—It must be Lisa. She is practicing for the underwater dance.
A.dance B.danced C.dances D.is dancing
8.They can’t go out to have a picnic because it is _________ now.
A.rains B.raining C.rain D.rained
9.Our class is ________ twenty girls and twenty boys. The number of the students in our class ________ forty.
A.made of; is B.made up of; is
C.made of; are D.made up of; are
10.—I need to write down the phone number. Who has a ________
—Here you are.
A.mask B.note C.bottle D.pen
1.【答案】D
【详解】句意:快点!出租车正在等我们。
考查时态。根据题干“Hurry up! ”以及now可知,句子的时态为现在进行时。现在进行时的构成是:主语+be+动词ing (现在分词) 形式,the taxi是主语,为单数,所以be动词用is,wait的现在分词为waiting。故选D。
2.【答案】A
【详解】句意:你认为这个玩具车怎么样?
考查动词短语。think of有……想法;think about考虑;look after照顾;look for寻找。What do you think of sth. 为固定句型,表示“你认为……怎么样?”故选A。
3.【答案】C
【详解】句意:——约翰,你穿那件黑色T恤看起来真的很酷。——谢谢。
考查形容词辨析。short短的;fat胖的;cool凉爽的,酷的;old老的。根据“Thank you.”可知,此处应是夸John很酷,故选C。
4.【答案】A
【详解】句意:看!比尔和本正在池子里游泳。
考查时态。根据“Look!”可知,要用现在进行时,结构为“be+现在分词”,故选A。
5.【答案】C
【详解】句意:数学课上我们需要一把尺子。
考查名词辨析。jacket夹克;cup杯子;ruler尺子;quilt被子。根据“math class”可知,数学课需要的是尺子。故选C。
6.【答案】C
【详解】句意:听!鸟儿在树上唱歌。
考查时态。根据“Listen! ”可知,时态是现在进行时,结构是:be doing。故选C。
7.【答案】D
【详解】句意:——看!谁在那边跳舞?——一定是丽莎。她正在练习水下舞蹈。
考查时态。根据“Look!”可知,时态为现在进行时,结构为be doing;主语为“Who”,be动词用is。故选D。
8.【答案】B
【详解】句意:他们不能出去野餐,因为现在正在下雨。
考查时态。rains下雨,第三人称单数;raining下雨,现在分词;rain下雨,动词原形;rained下雨,过去式。根据时间状语词now,可知时态用现在进行时be+doing。故选B。
9.【答案】B
【详解】句意:我们班由二十个女孩和二十个男孩组成。我们班的学生有四十人。
考查动词短语和主谓一致。be made of由……制成,可以看出产品的原材料;be made up of由……组成。根据“twenty girls and twenty boys.”可知,我们班由二十个女孩和二十个男孩组成。The number of…表示“……的数量”,作主语时,谓语动词用单数,be动词用is。故选B。
10.【答案】D
【详解】句意:——我需要记下电话号码。谁有钢笔?——给你。
考查名词辨析。mask面具;note笔记;bottle瓶子;pen钢笔。根据“I need to write down the phone number.”可知,需要用笔记下号码,故选D。
三、完成句子
1.他们正在使用电脑吗?是的。
they the computer Yes, they are.
2.Millie是我的表妹,她聪明而且友好。
Millie is my cousin, She is and .
3.杰克正在电视上看篮球比赛。
Jack a basketball game .
4.我们每天都在学校门口等他.
We him at the school gate every day.
5.那件衬衫是紫色的。
The is .
1.【答案】 Are using
【详解】“使用”use,根据“正在使用”及答句中are可知用现在进行时的一般疑问句,主语“they”前用be动词Are;其后动词用现在分词using。故填Are;using。
2.【答案】 smart/clever friendly
【详解】根据中英文对照可知,smart/clever“聪明的”,friendly“友好的”,形容词,作表语。故填smart/clever;friendly。
3.【答案】 was/is watching on TV
【详解】根据汉语意思可知用过去进行时或现在进行时均可,主语Jack后用be动词was或is;“观看”watch,其现在分词形式为watching;“在电视上”on TV。故填was/is;watching;on;TV。
4.【答案】 wait for
【详解】根据汉语提示可知此处缺少短语“等待”,译为“wait for”,根据“every day”可知,句子为一般现在时,主语是“We”,因此动词用原形即可。故填wait;for。
5.【答案】 shirt purple
【详解】shirt“衬衫”,是名词,作主语;purple“紫色的”,是形容词作表语,故填shirt;purple。
(一)
假如你是烙饼店(House of Pancakes)的经理,请根据下面的提示,写一则广告,介绍一下你的烙饼店。60词左右。
烙饼店
种类 价格 特色 价格
小号 4 yuan 卷心菜胡萝卜烙饼(小号) 3 yuan
中号 6 yuan 西红柿鸡蛋烙饼(中号) 4 yuan
大号 8 yuan 洋葱牛肉烙饼(大号) 6 yuan
House of Pancakes
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【答案】参考范文
House of Pancakes
Would you like some pancakes Please come to House of Pancakes.
There are all kinds of pancakes here, small ones, medium ones and large ones. The small one is 4 yuan, the medium one is 6 yuan and the large one is 8 yuan. We have some great specials. The small pancake with cabbages and carrots is just 3 yuan. The medium pancake with tomatoes and eggs is just 4 yuan. You can also try our large pancake with onions and beef for just 6 yuan.
Welcome to House of Pancakes. You will like the food here.
(二)
请你根据下面体育用品商店的促销信息,借助提示词,帮助店主写一则60词左右的广告。
Sports Store Sale
Things for sale Color Price
pants black 20
bags for sports black 30
T-shirts red, yellow, white 25
socks white 6
basketballs black and white 35
提示词: come, sale, good price, only, for girls, for boys
Sports Store Sale
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【答案】
Sports Store Sale
Come and have a look at Sports Store! We have all kinds of things for sale. Do you like pants
We have pants at very good price—only20! Do you need bags for sports We also have great bags for only 30. For girls, we have T-shirts in red, yellow and white for only 25. For boys, you can buy white socks for only 6 each pair! Do you like to play basketball The basketballs are on sale for 35. And that’s not all!
Come to Sports Store now!
【详解】1.题干解读:这是一篇材料作文。要求根据下面体育用品商店的促销信息,借助提示词,帮助店主写一则60词左右的广告。要包含所有要点,并适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文时态为一般现在时。写作时可分为两段来书写:第一段介绍店里的体育用品及其价格;第二段写欢迎大家到店选购。在写作时应该注意符合题意,同时注意语言的准确性和连贯性,可适当补充细节使文章连贯。
(三)
假如你是李华,圣诞节快到了,请你根据表格信息,为家人选择合适的礼物。
家庭成员 爱好
爸爸 看足球比赛
妈妈 去购物
姐姐 听音乐
要求:
1.不少于五句话,60个词左右。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.书写工整,要点全面,可适当发挥。不能出现真实校名及个人姓名。
Christmas is coming. I am going to buy some presents for my family. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Christmas is coming. I am going to buy some presents for my family. My father is a sports fan. He likes watching football matches. So I want to give him some tickets to football matches. My mother likes going shopping very much, so I would like to give a pair of shoes to her. My sister likes rock music, so I want to buy her a CD. I hope they will be very happy when they see these Christmas presents.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体指出圣诞节要到了,要给家人买礼物;
第二步,具体介绍不同的人的喜好,并打算买的礼物;
第三步,最后希望礼物家人们能喜欢。
[亮点词汇]
① buy sth for sb为某人买某物
② football match足球赛
③ a pair of一双
[高分句型]
① I hope they will be very happy when they see these Christmas presents.(宾语从句及when引导的时间状语从句)
② My sister likes rock music, so I want to buy her a CD.(so连接的并列句)
(四)
Write a passage of at least 50 words about the topic “A shopping experience (经历)”. (以“我的一次购物经历”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文。标点符号不计入总词数。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)
1. When did you go
2. Whom did you go with
3. Where did you go and what did you buy
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【答案】例文:
A shopping experience
Last Sunday afternoon, my mother and I went shopping together.
We went to a big shopping center. I saw two beautiful pictures and decided to buy them. It’s 200 yuan each. I tried to make a bargain with the shopkeeper. He refused at first. But when we were going to leave, he stopped us and said, “OK, you can have both of them at 300 yuan.” I bought both of them happily and we went home at last.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:考生可根据参考内容所给的三个要点进行写作,然后结合自身购物经历适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单介绍时间和人物。比如:什么时间、和谁一起去购物;
第二步,介绍地点并描写具体经过。从“地点、商品、价格、购物过程”等几个方面详细描写购物的经过。
[亮点词汇]
①go shopping 购物
②make a bargain with ... 和……讨价还价
③at last 最后
[高分句型]
① But when we were going to leave, he stopped us and said, “OK, you can have both of them at 300 yuan.” (when引导的时间状语从句)
② I bought both of them happily and we went home at last. (and连接两个并列句)
(五)
根据下面表格信息,写一篇短文,介绍你自己想要设计的服装,70词左右。
衣服描述 T恤衫 短裙 靴子
颜色 浅蓝色 灰色 白色
款式 看起来干净,与其他任何一种颜色都相配 不太长也不太大,看起来时髦,穿着舒服 轻便并且舒适,在年轻人中很流行
材质 丝绸 棉 皮革
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【答案】例文:
I want to design a T-shirt, a skirt and a pair of boots. I’m sure they will look cool on anyone. The T-shirt is made of silk and the skirt is made of cotton. I think they are very comfortable. The boots are made of leather.
The colour of the T -shirt is light blue because I think this colour makes the T-shirt look clean and it matches any other colour.
I’m going to design a grey skirt. It is not too long or too large. It looks fashionable and I want it to be comfortable to wear.
I’m going to design a pair of white boots. They must be light and comfortable. They will be popular among young people.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文写作,为材料作文;
②时态:时态以一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中想要设计的衣服的相关要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直入主题来引出自己想要设计哪几种衣服;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“衣服颜色、款色、材质”三个个方面重点介绍想要设计的衣服的具体情况;并给出自己的期许。
[词汇]
①a pair of一双
② be made of由……制成
③comfortable舒适的
④match使相配
⑤fashionable时髦的
[句型]
①The colour of the T -shirt is light blue because I think this colour makes the T-shirt look clean and it matches any other colour.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②It looks fashionable and I want it to be comfortable to wear.(动词不定式作补语)
(一)
我想要为我妈妈设计一条连衣裙和一双靴子。连衣裙是粉红色的,用丝绸制成。靴子是白色的,用皮革制成。我想她穿上会很好看的。
我想为我爸爸设计一件T恤衫和一条牛仔裤。T恤衫是蓝黄相间的,牛仔裤是蓝色的。T恤衫和牛仔裤都是棉质的。我想它们穿起来会很舒服的。
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【答案】One possible version:
I want to design a dress and a pair of boots for my mother. The dress is pink and made of silk. The boots are white and made of leather. I think she will look pretty in them.
I want to design a T-shirt and a pair of jeans for my father. The T-shirt is blue and yellow and the jeans are blue. They are both made of cotton. I think they are comfortable to wear.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,考生在写作时注意不要遗漏要点,注意主谓一致。
[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍为妈妈设计的衣服,具体包括衣服的颜色、材质,以及给出简单的评价;
第二步:介绍为爸爸设计的服装,内容包括服装的颜色、材质,并给出相应的评价。
[亮点词汇]
① a pair of 一双/对……
② be made of 由……制成
③ comfortable 舒服的
[高分句型]
① I want to design a dress and a pair of boots for my mother. (want to do sth. 想要做某事)
② I think they are comfortable to wear. (be comfortable to do sth. 做某事很舒适)
(二)
写一篇短文,70词左右,介绍Simon,内容要点包括:
1.Simon是阳光中学七年级四班一名学生。
2.他和他的同学正为希望工程(Project Hope)举行一次时装表演。
3.他身穿一件黄色衬衫,由棉制成。
4.穿一双黑色的皮鞋和一条白色裤子,与他的衬衫很配。白色与任何一种颜色都相配。他看起来既酷又摩登。
5. 他们为希望工程募集了很多钱。
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【答案】Simon is a student in Class Four, Grade Seven in Sunshine Secondary School. He is giving a fashion show for Project Hope with his classmates. He is wearing a yellow shirt. It’s made of cotton. He is wearing a pair of black leather shoes and a pair of white trousers. They match his shirt very well and white matches any other colour. He looks cool and modern. They raise a lot of money for Project Hope.
【详解】试题分析:这是一篇材料作文。写一篇给定材料的书面表达。主要根据信息介绍个人的有关情况,个人的姓名,所在的班级和学校,今天的活动,所穿的衣服类别,今天所进行的活动以及个人的心情。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。本文时态主要是一般现在时和现在进行时;写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。语言表达要符合英语习惯。同时应注重语言的准确性。
【亮点说明】:这是一篇比较优秀的作文,本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点;字数符合要求,没有拼写错误,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。
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根据要点写一篇短文,词数60个左右。不必逐词逐句翻译。
1.我的好友叫杰克,他十四岁,来自无锡。
2.又高又强壮,不戴眼镜。
3.喜欢打篮球,他空余时间常参加运动。
4.喜欢穿蓝色牛仔裤和运动鞋,认为牛仔裤和运动鞋适合于运动。
5.想做名篮球运动员,希望他的梦想成真。
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【答案】I have a good friend called lack. He is 14. he comes from Wuxi. He's tall and strong. He doesn't wear glasses. He likes playing basketball. He often goes for sports in his free time. He likes wearing blue jeans and trainers. He thinks jeans and trainers are fit for sports. He wants to be a basketball player. I hope his dream comes true.
【详解】短文要求介绍我的好友,英语作文要注意人称和时态,本片文章主要用第三人称,时态用一般现在时态,注意提供的观点、材料,要注意句子的完整性,谓语动词的正确形式,句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文,要忠实于材料,不必扩展,注意用好连词,多用非谓语,慎用较难的句型,一定不能写错句。

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