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高考英语读后续写语篇练习品德故事——贫困画家与违背诺言的女士之间的故事题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文A painter living by painting portraits was leading a poor life.One day, a woman came by. She liked the paintings very much and asked the painter to draw a portrait for her. They agreed on 2,000 dollars.Before painting the portrait, the woman asked the painter to draw more jewels. The painter curiously asked why, but the woman refused to explain. After a week, the portrait was done and the woman came to take the painting. At this moment, she hit on an evil idea of bullying the unknown young artist. She thought, “The portrait is me. If I don’t buy the painting, nobody will buy it. Why should I pay so much money ” So the woman said to the young painter, “I will only pay 200 dollars for it.”The young man was surprised, for he had never come across such an experience. He argued with her, expecting this woman to keep to the agreement.“I can only pay 200 dollars to buy the painting,” the woman thought she would win for sure.续写原文The young painter knew the woman broke her promise on purpose, so he felt annoyed. He said in a firm voice, “No, I would prefer to keep this painting rather than be humiliated by you. Today you break your word and some day you must pay 20 times for it.”“What a joke! 20 times will be 40,000! I won’t be stupid to pay 40,000 dollars to buy the painting!”“Well, we’d better wait and see,” the young artist shouted to the woman who left angrily. After the stimulation of such an incident, the painter moved out of this sad place, studied under acknowledged teachers and worked hard day and night. More than a dozen years later, he finally started a new way and became popular in the circle of art. However, the woman had forgotten the artist’s painting and words the next day.段首句Para 1：One day, that famous painter decided to hold an art exhibition.Para 2：The woman went there hurriedly, apologised a million times and promised that she would buy her portrait as soon as possible.Part 2题目分析点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个靠画肖像为生的画家过着贫穷的生活，他为一位女士画像，结果女士故意违背诺言，不按约好的价钱支付费用，让画家很生气。十几年后，画家终于在艺术界大受欢迎，决定举办一次艺术展，展览上画家把这位女士的画像挂出来，取名《小偷》，女士得知后赶到，给画家道歉，最终画家把画像还给了她，希望她能做一个诚实的女人。续写思路分析Para 1: One day, that famous painter decided to hold an art exhibition.由第一段首句内容“一天，那位著名的画家决定举办一次艺术展。”可知，第一段可描写画家把女士的画像挂出来，取名《小偷》，消息传开了，最后传到了那个女人的耳朵里。续写思路分析Para 2: The woman went there hurriedly, apologised a million times and promised that she would buy her portrait as soon as possible.由第二段首句内容“女子匆匆赶到，道了无数次歉，并承诺会尽快买下她的画像。”可知，第二段可描写画家是如何应对女士道歉的以及事情的最终结局。续写思路分析续写线索举办艺术展——挂出女士画像，取名《小偷》——女士得知消息——女士赶到——女士道歉——画家赠画续写素材可用词汇：行为类举办：hold /host侮辱：humiliate/insult意识到：it dawn on sb. that/ e to realize that情绪类匆忙：hurriedly / in a hurry无言：speechless / silent续写素材可用句型：【高分句型1】 Before the woman could pay, the painter explained that it was a gift for her, hoping she would be an honest woman without vanity. (运用了that引导宾语从句)【高分句型2】 With many visitors around, so embarrassed was she that she stood there awkwardly, feeling the blood rush to her face. (运用了部分倒装)Part 3范文呈现范文呈现One day, that famous painter decided to hold an art exhibition. Present in the exhibition hall were crowds of celebrities and artists. It was a feast in the circle of art. In the centre was a painting entitled “Thief”, priced at 40,000 dollars. Strangely enough, the woman in the painting looked just the same as the vain woman in reality. Word spread and finally it reached the woman’s ears. She recalled the incident and the painter. It dawned on her that the painter humiliated her in this way.范文呈现The woman went there hurriedly, apologised a million times and promised that she would buy her portrait as soon as possible. The successful painter turned his back to her, speechless. With many visitors around, so embarrassed was she that she stood there awkwardly, feeling the blood rush to her face. Then the painter turned around and handed her the portrait. Before the woman could pay, the painter explained that it was a gift for her, hoping she would be an honest woman without vanity. Anyway, for the painter, it was this incident that made him what he is today.范文译文一天，那个著名的画家决定举办一个艺术展。出席展览大厅的是一群名人和艺术家。这是一场艺术界的盛宴。中心有一幅名为《小偷》的画，售价4万美元。奇怪的是，画中的女人看起来和现实中虚荣的女人一模一样。消息传开了，终于传到了那个女人的耳朵里。她回忆起这件事和画家。她突然意识到画家以这种方式羞辱了她。范文译文这位女士匆匆忙忙地去了那里，道歉了一百万次，并承诺会尽快买下她的肖像。这位成功的画家背对她，无言以对。周围有很多来访者，她非常尴尬，尴尬地站在那里，感觉鲜血直流。然后画家转过身来，把画像递给她。在女人付钱之前，画家解释说这是送给她的礼物，希望她是一个诚实的女人，没有虚荣心。不管怎样，对于画家来说，正是这件事成就了他今天的样子。Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）Thank you!

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