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高考英语满分应用文写作之建议信
目录
Catalog
1 考纲解读
2 建议信写作“八步走”
3 达标测试
4 总结
PART 01
考纲解读
考纲解读
Exam Outline Interpretation
假如你是李华........
爱找麻烦的“困难华”
PART 02
建议信写作“八步走”
Exercise
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to hear that you are lonely in your new school. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.
First of all, don’t be too worried. Everyone may have such bad times when they move to a new environment. Second, you should greet your teachers and classmates when meeting them on campus. It is always easier to make new friends when you show your friendliness first. Third, it would be a good idea if you often take an active part in class activities, which is a good way for others to learn about you.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful and begin to make new friends as soon as possible.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
Exercise
1. The letter belongs to the letter of ________________
A. invitation B. apology C. advice
2. The letter consists of ____3_____ paragraphs.
3. What is the tense
A. the present tense B. the past tense C. the future tense
4. The letter is mainly written in ______________________.
A. the first person B. the second person C. the third person
Warming up
根据下列要求和提示，完成审题谋篇、遣词造句、连句成篇等写作过程。
假设你是李华，最近收到了一封来自美国好友Chris的信，信中Chris表达了自己在学校中人际关系的问题，因此他向你询问处理人际关系的方法。请根据以下要点给他回复一封邮件：
1.Chris表示在学校很难与他人交流，感到孤独
2.你建议他应积极参加学校活动，多倾听他人说话，随着时间的流逝，就能结交到很多朋友。
答题步骤
第一步：审题
思考的问题 person 第二人称
writing style 一封信
topic Chris在交友过程中遇到了困难，给其建议
order 说理逻辑性
when 一般现在时
答题步骤
第二步：确定结构
Para1 background and purpose
Para2 advice
Para3 proper ending
Attention: be polite.
答题步骤
第三步：适当运用模板
Dear Chris,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips for you.
First, why not……，which can….（运用定语从句等结构使简单句变成复杂句来提升语言等级） Secondly, it also helps to .If you do this,…. Thirdly, it should be a good idea to . That way,…. (此三句不同的句式提出建议并陈述理由)
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
答题步骤
第四步：搜索相关词组
1. 词汇：
(1).很难与他人交流
have trouble/difficult in communicating with others
(2).感到孤独
feel lonely
(3).采纳下面的建议
take the following advice/suggestions
(4).了解他人的兴趣
learn about their interest/hobbies
答题步骤
第四步：搜索相关词组
1. 词汇：
(5).积极参与
be active to take part in…/actively take part in…
(6).耐心听他人说话
be patient to listen to others
(7).随着时间的流逝
as time goes by/ with time going by
(8).和…交朋友
make friends with
答题步骤
第五步：句式练习/一句多译
(1).你在信中说，你与别人交流时有困难。
In your letter, you said you were not good at communicating with others.
B. In your letter, you said you had difficulty/trouble in communicating with others.
C. In your letter, you said it was hard to communicate with others.
答题步骤
第五步：句式练习/一句多译
(2).我相信你可以克服的，只要你能遵循一下几点建议。
A. I believe you can just overcome it so long as you can adopt the following advice .
B. I think you can get over it_ so long as you can follow/take the advice .
答题步骤
第五步：句式练习/一句多译
(3).在班级举行讨论的时候，你要积极参加，并且积极表达自己的观点。
In a class discussion, you’d better actively take part in it and express your views/opinions actively.
B. When taking part in a class discussion, you should take part in it and tell others what you think actively.
C. You should participate in the discussion positively and make your voice heard actively.
答题步骤
第五步：句式练习/一句多译
(4).这样你就可以结识更多的人。
In this way, you can make friends with more people.
B. Then you can make acquaintance with more people.
答题步骤
第五步：句式练习/一句多译
(5).必要时给别人以帮助也是个好主意。
A. It will also be a good idea to help others when necessary.
B. It is also a good idea that you can help others when necessary.
答题步骤
第六步：添加逻辑关联词
1. 表示总结/归纳的过渡词或短语:
in a word, all in all, to sum up, in conclusion, in short
2. 表示递进/ 增补的过渡词或短语
moreover ; what’s more; besides; in addition;
apart from; furthermore; not
only…but also…; and ; neither…nor…;
both … and…
答题步骤
第六步：添加逻辑关联词
3. 表示转折/让步的过渡词或短语:
but; however; yet; although; even if;
whatever...; however...
despite; in spite of; regardless of; while...; on the
one hand, … but on the other hand, …;
4. 表示原因的过渡词或短语:
because, since, as, for, now that, because of,
thanks to, due to（由于）, owing to;
答题步骤
第六步：添加逻辑关联词
5. 表示结果的过渡词或短语:
so, thus, therefore, consequently, as a result
6. 表示条件的过渡词或短语:
if, unless , as long as, once...
7. 表示时间的过渡词或短语:
(and) then, after that, next, finally, eventually, later, in the end, recently, at the same time, meanwhile
8. 表示论述顺序关系的过渡词或短语:
first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, first of all, to begain with, last but not least, lastly
答题步骤
第六步：添加逻辑关联词
9. 表示解释说明的过渡词或短语:
in other words; that is (to say); namely; ..., which means
10. 表示进行举例说明的过渡词或短语:
for instance, for example, such as, like, take... for example
11. 表示比较对比的过渡词或短语:
instead; instead of; on the contrary; different from...; as... as...; on the one hand, … and on the other hand, …;
答题步骤
第七步：整理合成
Dear Chris,
In your letter, you said you are not good at communicating with others and often feel lonely. I think you can just make it so long as you can follow the advice below.
First, you should learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. Second, you should take an active part in the discussion held in your class and show your own opinion actively, and at the same time, learn to listen to others patiently. Then you can make friends with more people. Third, it will be a good idea to help others when necessary.
With time going on, people will know you better and like to make friends with you if you can do the above.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
注意
第八步：书写要领
1.字母要圆润且大小要一致
2.横平竖直，无勾勾弯弯
3.用0.7mm的黑色签字笔
4.首段空出4个字母
5.单词间隔1-1.5个字母
注意
书写范文
PART 03
达标测试
Exercise
假定你是李华，你校图书馆最近新设了一个英语阅览室，很受学生欢迎。请用英语给阅览室管理老师Peter写封信。信的主要内容包括：
1．阅览室给学生带来的好处（至少两点）；
2．阅览室仍需改进的建议（至少两点）；
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Exercise
Dear Peter,
Recently the library of our school has set up an English Reading Room. We students can read English novels as well as English newspapers and magazines here. The reading room becomes increasingly popular because it benefits us a lot. _________________________________________________________________（一方面，它给我们带来了便利。通过阅读，丰富了我们的生活并拓宽了我们的眼界；另一方面，它也培养了我们学习英语的兴趣。）
Exercise
__________________________________________________（除了它带给我们的好处以外，我还想提几点建议）Have you considered opening it all weekdays, instead of just on Friday afternoon Besides, the limited number of books available is better to be enlarged.
____________________________（我希望您觉得这些建议有用，并感谢您抽空阅读这封信。）
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Exercise
Dear Peter,
Recently the library of our school has set up an English Reading Room. We students can read English novels as well as English newspapers and magazines here. The reading room becomes increasingly popular because it benefits us a lot. On the one hand, it is convenient for us to enrich our lives and broaden our minds by reading; on the other hand, it helps develop our interest in studying English.
Despite the good it has done to us, I’d like to make some suggestions. Have you considered opening it all weekdays, instead of just on Friday afternoon Besides, the limited number of books available is better to be enlarged.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful and thank you for your time.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
PART 04
总结与诊断反馈
Summary
First impression is very important.
Practice everyday
Make progress everyday.
Everyone can do it !
Diagnosis

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