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人与动物的故事——两个生物多样性救援人员半夜去森林救治野生象
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题目分析
读后续写
题目再现
范文呈现
努力方向
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Part 1
题目呈现
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续写原文
A Midnight Rescue
It was not uncommon to carry out tasks at night as rescuers. Harry and David were informed of their task when it was nearly midnight. It was urgent so there was no time to hesitate. They headed into the forest.
The forest was black and silent. A little way into it they reached a fork in the earth path. Harry and David took the left path. They walked in silence, their eyes on the ground, watching out for the traps like big pits（坑）set by the illegal hunters. Every now and then a ray of moonlight through the branches above lit a spot of scarlet（猩红的）blood on the fallen leaves.
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续写原文
David saw that Harry looked very worried, asking, "Could Unicorn be hurt that badly " Harry answered, "If we can't find it as soon as possible, it doesn't stand much chance to survive." Of course, Unicorn was not the animal in fairy tales but the nickname of a 3-year-old elephant, the last wild elephant in this forest. The nickname was given by the biodiversity rescuers who were protecting every member in this forest. They knew Unicorn was obedient and not afraid of human beings and that sometimes put it in danger. "Without it, the forest was not complete. Those illegal hunters should be thrown into prison." Harry thought, carrying his first aid kit（急救箱）on his back and walking forward with his flashlight.
It seemed that thick fog would come at any time, which would increase the danger. Harry hurried into the heart of the forest with David. They walked for nearly half an hour, deeper and deeper. There were blood splashes（血迹）on the roots of a tree, as though the poor creature had been struggling around in pain close by. "We must hurry up", said Harry.
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段首句
Para 1：However, it was really not easy for them to find it.
Para 2：Without delay, Harry knelt down to do first aid on its wound with David holding the flashlight.
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Part 2
题目分析
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点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；
点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；
点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；
点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。
情节构建的重点
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续写思路分析
本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了两个生物多样性救援人员哈利和大卫在半夜接到任务前去搜寻并营救森林里唯一的一头野生象的故事。
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续写思路分析
Para 1：However, it was really not easy for them to find it.
由第一段首句内容“然而，对他们来找到它真的并不容易”可知，第一段可描写搜寻大象的困难和看到大象受伤时的难过。
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续写思路分析
Para 2：Without delay, Harry knelt down to do first aid on its wound with David holding the flashlight.
由第二段首句内容“哈利毫不迟疑地跪下来对它的伤口进行急救，大卫拿着手电筒。”可知，第二段可描写对受伤的大象进行治疗和大象感谢人类。
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续写思路分析
续写线索
：起雾——艰难寻找——受伤——痛苦——急救——感谢
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续写素材
可用词汇：
行为类
①.覆盖：cover/blanket/envelope
②.线索：clue/sign/hint
③.冲：rush/dash
情绪类
①.哭：cry/weep
②.宽慰的：relieved/comforted
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续写素材
可用句型：
【高分句型1】They had to bend down to search for clues like blood splashes or footprints, which made them walk more slowly, ears sharper than usual.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】At this moment, the whole forest woke up, the moonlight fading while winds singing welcome to the dawn.（运用了while引导的时间状语从句）
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Part 3
范文呈现
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范文呈现
However, it was really not easy for them to find it. That’s because thick fog came, covering almost everything. They had to bend down to search for clues like blood splashes or footprints, which made them walk more slowly, ears sharper than usual. Suddenly, painful roars came to the rescuers and in front of them lay the young elephant. “Look! Unicorn!” Harry rushed forward, crying excitedly. It looked exhausted because a wound on its left front leg was bleeding badly.
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范文呈现
Without delay, Harry knelt down to do first aid on its wound with David holding the flashlight. Fortunately, everything needed was available in the first aid kit. Calmly and skillfully, Harry conducted an operation on Unicorn immediately, and it seemed more obedient than before. Therefore, it didn’t take much time for Harry to stop the bleeding as an experienced rescuer. And after a while, Unicorn was able to stand up and walked away. It was rescued! Waving goodbye to it, Harry and David felt relieved. At this moment, the whole forest woke up, the moonlight fading while winds singing welcome to the dawn.
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范文译文
然而，他们真的不容易找到它。那是因为大雾来了，几乎覆盖了所有的东西。他们不得不弯腰寻找血迹或脚印等线索，这让他们走得更慢，耳朵比平时更尖。突然，救援人员发出痛苦的咆哮声，小象躺在他们面前。“看！独角兽！”哈利冲上前，激动地哭着。它看起来筋疲力尽，因为它左前腿上的一个伤口流血不止。
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范文译文
。哈利毫不拖延地跪下来对伤口进行急救，大卫拿着手电筒。幸运的是，急救箱里有所需的一切。哈利冷静而熟练地立即对独角兽进行了手术，它似乎比以前更听话了。因此，作为一名经验丰富的救援人员，哈利没花太多时间就止血了。过了一会儿，独角兽站起来走开了。它被救了！哈利和大卫挥手告别，感到如释重负。这时，整个森林都醒了，月光渐渐淡去，风在歌唱着迎接黎明。
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Part 4
努力方向
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高级结构
名词性从句
高级结构
三连动
虚拟语气
形容词做状语
无灵主语
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定语从句
状语从句
（包含倒装句）
强调句
副词做状语
非谓语
（包括独立主格）
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