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I finally worked hard for my college
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Living in the shadow of my two elder sisters at college who already had their lives planned out since they were little, I was always undecided about everything. As a teenager, I was fickle(反复无常的). I would like one thing for a week and then hate it the next. But I was constantly searching for the beginning of the rainbow. Changing my dream from a vet to an astronaut, I thought there were various options available to me. However, my parents would shake their heads and repeatedly asked me such questions as, “Why can’t you be more like your sisters What are you going to do with your life Aren’t you interested in anything at all ” After a couple of shrugs(耸肩), my parents usually stopped talking. I was not sure if they gave up or anticipated my dull reactions. I often responded, “I couldn’t answer all of your questions now.”
Actually, my parents just had high expectations that never seemed to be fulfilled. Plus, like other parents, they just wanted to give the best to me and expected me to achieve success. The arguments with my parents seemed childish. One day, my mother made her thoughts clear, “Your grades aren’t high enough. No schools are going to want you, dear. We didn’t pay so much money for nothing.” Hesitating for a while, I said, “No matter what you say, I believe I will enter a good college.” Still, I let my emotions control myself.
Certainly, I had never planned not to go to college. After another debate with my mom, I decided to make a change. No longer would I sit back and let my parents mistake me for a bad boy. It was time to take action.
I knew it was a crucial year at high school. Releasing my feelings, I began to collect all the knowledge I had learned and review it with all my heart. I didn’t argue with my parents any more, but instead turned to my sisters for help and tried my best to study. Finally, I took the national college entrance examination with ease and confidence.
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A few days later, I received a call from my school, saying my college acceptance letter had arrived.
My parents excitedly said behind me, “Well, open the envelope!”
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A few days later, I received a call from my school, saying my college acceptance letter had arrived. Then I hurried to the school with my parents. It was beyond my wildest dream till that moment. As a matter of fact, I doubted then whether I was in the dream. I normally dreaded the long walk to the school. But that day was different. There seemed to be some-thing in the air, an electric current, connecting my body to the letter. When I got it, I was really afraid that the envelop was empty. But there was a white package inside. With my heart beating faster,I wondered whether it could really be what was expected.
My parents excitedly said behind me,"Well, open the envelop!"What I grabbed in my hands contained everything I had been waiting for. Slowly, I opened it and a flash of CONGRATULATIONS in bold bright letters caught my eyes. A feeling of happiness and relief rushed through my body. I was holding my first offer from a good college. Needless to say, it wouldn't have been possible if it weren't for the countless hours of studying and writing, but most importantly, my parents' constant reminders, in fact, were the best form of education for me."Thank you, Mom and Dad!"I said gratefully.
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A few days later, I received a call from my school, saying my college acceptance letter had arrived. At the exciting news, I, together with my parents, headed to the school for my admission letter, with my mind still wondering which university I had been admitted into. And I had no idea whether my last year of hard work at school would finally pay off as I had expected. When we arrived at the teacher’s office, what greeted me was my head teacher’s smiling face and sincere congratulations. He handed me the mail/package with my acceptance letter inside, There was no information of the college on the mail/package, which made me more curious about what was inside. Soon we left, with expectations and smiles written on our faces.
My parents excitedly said behind me, “Well, open the mail/package!” Cautiously, I tore it open and carefully drew the papers inside out. On it were the name of my dream university and the eye-catching letters “CONGRATULATIONS!” “I made it, I made it!” I murmured and then shouted. Unable to conceal my excitement, I embraced my parents and pressed kisses on their cheeks, tears of delight and gratitude streaming down my cheeks and wetting their shirts. “Thank you! Without your constant reminding and devoted help, I would have got nowhere.” I blurted out. Cuddling the admission letter closely to my chest, I started to envision the brand new life unfolding before me, determined to make my new blue print into a reality.
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It was a chilly Friday night, and I had just returned from climbing one of the red rocks of Sedona. My father telephoned me as I walked through the arches to my dorm room and told me that my mother had been in a terrible car crash and had been taken to the intensive care unit (重症监护病房) of a nearby hospital.
When I got to the hospital, my father led me down a wide hallway with machines all around. A strong smell of medicine brought a sick feeling to my already turning stomach. As I turned into my mother’s ward, the cadaverous (形容枯槁的) condition of her body shocked me. Her face had swollen, her eyes had huge dark bruise, and she had tubes down her throat and in her arms. Gently holding her cold swollen hands, I said “hi” in a calm voice, controlling my urge to cry out.
She kept looking at me as she pounded her hand against the bed, looking painful. I turned my face away from her, trying to hide the tears that were rolling down my face. That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother.
From that night on, my life completely changed. Up to that point, I’d had the luxury of just being a kid, having to deal with only the exaggerated melodramas of teenage life. As my mother struggled first to stay alive and then to relearn to walk, my sense of priorities changed sharply. My mother needed me. The trials and trouble of my daily life at school, which had seemed so important before, now appeared insignificant. My mother and I had faced death together, and life took on a new meaning for both of us.
After a week of treatment in intensive care, my mother’s condition improved enough to be moved to a regular hospital ward. She was finally out of danger but, because her legs had been crushed, there was doubt whether she would be able to walk again. I was just grateful that she was alive. Two months later, a sort of hospital suite was set up in our family room, and she was allowed to come home.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My mother’s return home was a blessing for us all, but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me.
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My mother’s reliance on me changed our relationship.
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My mother’s return home was a blessing for us all, but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me. I would feed her, bathe her and help her to the bathroom. It struck me that I was pretty much playing the role of mother to my own mother. The difficult part for me was trying to be always upbeat, and to keep my mother’s spirits up when she became frustrated with the pain and her inability to do simple things by herself. Looking after my mother wasn’t much fun, but it felt good to be there when my mother really needed me.
My mother’s reliance on me changed our relationship. In the past, we had more than our share of the strains of mother-daughter relationships. The accident threw us into a relationship of interdependence. To get my mother back, I had to help regain her strength and ability to resume an independent life. She had to accept my help as well as the fact that I was no longer a child. Since then, we have become the closest friends, genuinely listening to one another and truly enjoying each other’s company.
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My mother’s return home was a blessing for us all, but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me. Though my mother was out of danger, she was still unable to do anything by herself. It dawned on me that I must take on the responsibilities of looking after my mother and coping with what my mother used to take up. I almost devoted all my time to attending to her. I cooked dishes, washed clothes, prepared medicine and so on. I was often burnt out and exhausted, but I felt sweet deep in my heart since my mother’s condition was improving day by day. 86W
My mother’s reliance on me changed our relationship. In the past, I was a naughty kid who always bothered my mum and dad. I lived under my mother’s protection. What’s more, I was ignorant of responsibility. But now, because of the accident, I had changed totally. My mother witnessed my maturity and my growth. She gradually found the fact that I was no longer a kid. She always greeted me with grateful and satisfied smiles which made warmth surging within me. Since then, we have truly enjoyed each other’s company due to the love between a mother and a kid. 92W Tang Yuchen

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