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M4作文整理
本模块的话题为: “Home alone”独自在家
写作要求：介绍自己独自生活的经历并表达感受
写作内容：
1、独自在家的原因
2、在家做的事情： 打扫卫生，做饭，玩耍， 写作业等
3、从独自生活中学到了什么，自己的感受又是怎样的
时态： 一般过去时
人称： 第一人称为主
例题：
你的父母因为工作原因，需要外出几天，接下来的时间你讲自己在家中度过，请根据以下提示写一篇文章描述一下自己独自在家的经历。
提示：
1、一开始感到很开心
2、 只会做简单的饭， 如：面条
3、 需要自己打扫卫生，洗衣服，非常累
4、做不到早睡早起
5、 可以按时完成作业
6、体会到了父母 父母的不容易，我们要学会独立。
短语储备：
1、sweep the floor拖地
2、on.business出差
3、wake up醒来
4、do housework 做家务
5、on time按时
6、look after/take care of照顾 12、on one's own靠自己
7、be proud of为…感到骄傲
8、worry about 担心
9、tidy up 整理
10、depend on 依赖依靠
11、have a chance to do sth 有机会做某事
12、on one’s own 靠自己
开头句： 开篇用一 句话点明主题
1、Every teenager wants to stay at home alone without parents, so do I.
2、Everyone may have an experience of staying at home alone without parents.
3、My first day at home alone was unforgettable/wonderful.
中间句：主体介绍自己一人 在家做了哪些事
When I was…, my parents had go away on business for…days.
I had to spend…days on my own.
I had to stay at home all by myself for…days.
There were lots of things to do when my parents aren't at home.
I had to clean the house by myself, I did…
I was unable to cook delicious food like my mom.
7、I could only cook simple meals, such as…
8、I could/couldn't go to be d early and get up early.
9、When they came back, they were happy to see …, they said they were proud of me.
结尾句：表达自己的感受学到了什么
We should learn to be independent.
2、We should thank our parents for their concern and love.
3、Don't always depend on our parents.
范文：
开篇点题 引起下文
Every teenager wants to stay it home alone, so do I. I had an experience of being home alone, let's talk about it.
介绍自己做了哪些事情，哪些没做好，穿插着表述自己的感受
When I was 10 years old,. ,my parents had to go away on business for a few days. I was very happy at first, because finally I had a chance to stay home alone. After they left, I found it was not easy to be home alone. I had to do the housework on my own. I swept the floor, watered the flowers and washed my clothes. I couldn' t cook delicious food like my mom, so I only cooked simple meals like noodles. I started missing my parents. Although my parents were out, I could finish my homework on time, because I always like studying. But I couldn' t go to bed early. When I finished my homework, I always went to the living room to watch TV and forgot the time. So the next day, I got up late and I was late for school. When my parents came back, they were very happy to see the house was so tidy, they said they were proud of me and they cooked a big meal for me.
感受：学会 独自，向父母表达感恩之情
After these few days, I learnt that we should thank our parents for their concern and love and learn to be independent.

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