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人教新目标（Go for it）版 英语八年级上册 Unit 2 How often do you exercise 写作 专练
1．书面表达。
同学们，“健康胜于财富”，良好的卫生饮食习惯，健康的体魄，充沛的精力会给我们的学习带来很大的帮助。那么你该怎么样保持健康呢？请你以“Keeping health”为题写一篇短文。要求：1.80词左右 2.. 书面干净整洁 3. 不得出现真实班级和姓名。
参考词汇：important, wash hands, fresh , fruit and vegetables,
be good for, do exercise, sleep, good habits, keep it,
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2．同学们，你们的周末是如何度过的？是看电视放松，是做运动保持健康，是帮助爸妈做家务，还是……？请以 My Weekends为题写一篇英语小短文，向大家描述一下你的周末生活吧。
要求：
1.书写规范，条理清楚。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名。
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3．作文
Mary给Linda写了一封信，向她询问如何保持身体健康。请你以Linda的名义并参照要点提示给Mary回信。可适当发挥。词数不少于60。
要点提示：①每天坚持锻炼。②多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃垃圾食品。③保证每天睡眠至少8小时。④少看电视。
Dear Mary,
Yours,
Linda
遣词造句 （共5小题；
请根据每题所提供的图片和提示词(要求全部用上)，写一个与图片情景相符的句子。
4．visit, next month _____________________________________________________
5．exercise, every day _____________________________________________________
6．be good for, health ______________________________________________________
7．play, last Sunday _________________________________________________________
8．should, clean _____________________________________________________________
9．书面表达。
Mary给Linda写了一封信，向她询问如何保持身体健康。请你以Linda的名义并参照要点提示给Mary回信。可适当发挥。词数不少于60。
要点提示：①每天坚持锻炼。②多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃垃圾食品。③保证每天睡眠至少8小时。④少看电视。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Linda
10．假设你是李华，Mike是你远在美国的朋友，请根据提示内容，给他写一封信，描述你上周末的活动。（60-80词左右）
提示: 1. When (on Saturday morning/afternoon/night...) 2. where to go 3.who you went with 4.how to get the place 5.how you felt
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li hua
11．今天是星期天，天气很好，你的澳大利亚朋友要来你家，你将带他参观你所居住的城市，一天会很忙碌，但会玩得很开心。
show…around the city, the center of, some interesting places, shopping mall, presents, have a good time, etc.
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12．假如你和你的同学玛丽(Mary)，在6月12日(星期六) 到敬老院(Old People’s Home) 慰问了老人，请把你们的活动情况用英语写一篇日记。
提示：1. When and how did you get there 2. What did you do there 3. What do you think of this activity
要求：1.语句通顺、逻辑连贯、语法正确；
2.包含所给信息提示，并可适当发挥；
3.不少于60词 (日记的格式及开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
June 12th, 2021 Saturday
Today my classmate Mary and I went to the Old People’s Home.
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13．英语课上，老师要求同学们介绍个人周末计划。假设下面表格内容是你的计划提纲，请根据表格提示的活动内容，写一篇发言稿，介绍你的周末计划，并在班上与同学交流。
要求：(1)发言稿须包括三个所列要点和一个补充要点；
(2)发言稿中四个要点都要适当发挥；
(3)发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名；
(4)词数：80个左右(已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数)。
Hi, everyone! Here’s my plan for the weekend. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14．书面表达：请你根据提示，以丽丽为名，写一张请假条，开头已给出。
提示词语：have a bad cold, doctor told me to stay in bed for two days, can't go to school today, tomorrow, hope, get well very soon, thank you.
Dear Sir,
I'm sorry to tell you that I'm not feeling well today.
参考答案：
1．Keeping healthy
Keeping healthy is important to everyone. But what should we do to keep healthy
We should have good living habits and healthy eating habits. We should wash our hands before meals and change our clothes often. We should open the window and keep the air fresh all the time. We should eat more fruit and vegetables. They are good for our health. We should do exercise often and sleep well. Don’t stay up late at night.
If we do so, we’ll have a healthy body. Let’s keep good habits to keep fit.
【详解】试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以Keeping healthy为题写一篇作文，告诉大家如何来保持健康。这是一篇开放式的作文，题目中并没有给出我们相应的写作提纲，所以短文的内容需要我们自己去充实。关于健康的这一话题是学生们比较熟悉的，在教材中也讨论过这样的话题，因此学生们在写作时是觉得有话可说的。如保持健康的身体，我们可以在平时多锻炼，exercise；还有就是吃健康的饮食，注意饮食习惯，eating habits等。当然还有其他的内容和方式，同学们可以发挥想象力，去把短文的内容补充完整。除此之外，通过分析我们可以看到，这篇作文写的时候，应该用一般现在时态，第一人称复数形式。这对每句话的动词形式的要求并不高，当然我们要尽量使用优美的词汇和短语，还要使用我们学过的句型，使整篇作文显得意思连贯，表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文，短文中作者对如何保持健康发表了自己的看法。首先作者先点明了保持健康是很重要的，Keeping healthy is important to everyone，这句话中作者使用了动名词形式做主语的结构，非常准确。然后用一个文句的形式引出接下来要讨论的话题，起到了承上启下的作用。第二段是整篇短文的中心段，在这一段里，作者给我们提出了很多好的建议，如We should have good living habits and healthy eating habit、We should open the window and keep the air fresh all the time、We should eat more fruit and vegetables. They are good for our health.、We should do exercise often and sleep well等。这些建议都非常的实用，很符合题目所给的情景。这里作者使用的短语也比较多，如keep 的复合结构、be good for、stay up等。整篇短文表达非常完整，意思也很连贯，使用句型、句式和短语较多并且很准确，是一篇很好的作文。
考点：话题作文。
2．例文
My Weekends
Hi, I’m Wang Lei. I always have a happy weekend. I don’t like to get up early on weekends. After I get up, I usually do my homewok on Saturday morning. In the afternoon, I usually watch TV or play computer games. On Sunday morning, I usually help my mother clean the house. In the afternoon, I often play basketball with my friends. I like my weekends.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“我的周末”为题，描述自己的周末生活是怎样的。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。先简单介绍自己，再描述周末生活。写作时要保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
3．Dear Mary,
I'm glad to hear from you. In your letter, you asked me about how to keep healthy. I think it's not difficult to keep in good health.
First, you may exercise every day. If your home is not very far from school, you may walk to school. You know walking is very good for your body. Second, you should eat a lot of vegetables and fruit. Do not eat junk food too much. Third, you should have at least 8 hours' sleep every night. In addition, don't watch TV too much.
I wish you good health.
Yours,
Linda
【详解】试题分析：这是一封回信，是 Linda给Mary写的，关于如何保持身体健康，要点有四个，写作时不能遗漏要点，遗漏要点会丢分的，要使用一些自己熟悉的句式和短语，避免因使用高级句式而出现语法错误，注意上下文的衔接。
写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：hear from sb收到某人的来信；keep healthy保持身体健康；be good for对……有益；far from远离；高级句子：I think it's not difficult to keep in good health. You know walking is very good for your body.用了宾语从句；If your home is not very far from school, you may walk to school.用了if引导的条件状语从句。First, Second, In addition是衔接过渡的词。
4．I am going to visit Beijing next month. 5．Ann does exercise in the gym every day. 6．Washing hands often is good for our health. 7．He played soccer last Sunday. 8．We should clean our classroom every day.
【解析】4．根据next month是一般将来时的时间状语，故答案是I am going to visit Beijing next month..
5．根据every day可知用一般现在时，故答案是Ann does exercise in the gym every day.。
6．根据be good for, health故填Washing hands often is good for our health.。
7．根据last Sunday可知用一般过去时，故填He played soccer last Sunday.
8．根据should后加动词原形。故填We should clean our classroom every day..
考点：遣词造句
9．Dear Mary,
I’m glad to hear from you. In your letter, you asked me about how to keep healthy. I think it’s not difficult to keep in good health.
First, you may exercise every day. If your home is not very far from school, you may walk to school. You know walking is very good for your body. Second, you should eat a lot of vegetables and fruit. Do not eat junk food too much. Third, you should have at least 8 hours’ sleep every night. In addition, don’t watch TV too much.
I wish you good health.
Yours,
Linda
【分析】写作分析：这篇写作的写作目的是给Mary的回信，主要告诉她如何保持身体健康，具体要点已经给出来了，①每天坚持锻炼。②多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃垃圾食品。③保证每天睡眠至少8小时。④少看电视。写作的时候要注意正确使用短语的英文表达，注意要有适当的补充，使得信件结构完整，内容充实。
【详解】写作亮点：首先确定这是一封信件，要注意信件的格式，使用的比较好的句型有I’m glad to hear from you.（我很高兴收到你的来信），然后要简单说一下写回信的原因you asked me about how to keep healthy.（你问了我关于如何保持健康的问题），接下来另起一段来阐述保持健康的要点，相关的短语有exercise every day每天锻炼，walk to school步行去学校，eat a lot of vegetables and fruit吃大量的蔬菜和水果，eat junk food吃垃圾食品，watch TV看电视，In addition另外。最后一段是结尾段I wish you good health.（我祝愿你能健康），总体来说分了三段，每个段落写作目的明确，短语运用准确，完成了既定的写作任务。
10．例文：
Dear Mike,
Last week I had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I did my homework at home. And I finished all the homework. On Saturday afternoon, I went to the park with my brother. We went there on foot because walking can make me keep healthy. And we played football. We were excited. On Sunday morning, I went to the supermarket with my mother by bike. We bought a lot of delicious food. I was very happy. On Sunday afternoon, I visited my grandparents with my family by car. We had a good time there.
What a busy weekend! What about your weekend

Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍有一个忙碌的周末；
第二步，具体介绍周末的一些活动安排情况；
第三步，最后总结文章并询问对方的周末情况。
[亮点词汇]
① on foot步行
② by bike骑自行车
③ have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
① We went there on foot because walking can make me keep healthy.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② What a busy weekend!（What引导的感叹句）
11．例文：
It’s a fine day today. I’m happy that my friend Jack from Australia will come to visit me. I will show him around the city. We are going to visit some interesting places and I will tell him some interesting stories about the interesting places in English. We will go to the biggest shopping mall in the center of the city and I will help him choose many presents for his friends in Australia. We will have lunch in a Chinese restaurant. I think Jack will enjoy Chinese food a lot. We must be tired today but we will have a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中星期天计划做的事的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明具体的日期、天气和人物；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，重点讲述和朋友计划要去的地方和做的事；
第三步，总结，表明自己对计划的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①show…around参观
②the center of the city市中心
③some interesting places一些有趣的地方
④shopping mall购物中心
⑤have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I’m happy that my friend Jack from Australia will come to visit me.（“that”引导的原因状语从句）
②I think Jack will enjoy Chinese food a lot.（“I think”后是宾语从句）
12．例文
June 12th, 2021 Saturday
Today my classmate Mary and I went to the Old People’s Home.
We arrived there by bus at 9:00 p.m. First, we cleaned the house and washed clothes for the old people. Then, we talked with the old people. At last, we sang and danced for them. They liked us very much. At about 5:30 p.m. we came back.
We were a little tired, but we were very happy to help the old people.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作。要求学生根据提示信息完成一篇去敬老院慰问老人的日记。注意语句通顺、逻辑连贯、语法正确。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称及一般过去时来叙述。日记可以分为三个段落，第一段交代清楚周六活动。第二段具体说明什么时候、如何去的敬老院以及做了什么事情。第三段简单评价这次的活动。适当使用关联词及表示顺序的副词，使句子之间的衔接和过渡更自然。
13．例文
Hi, everyone! Here’s my plan for the weekend.
On Saturday morning, I’m going to watch TV to relax myself after a long week’s study. I like watching comedies and cartoons. On Saturday afternoon, I’m going to the bookstore to buy some books. Reading is one of my hobbies.
On Sunday, I’m going to visit my grandparents because I miss them very much. I’ll help them do some housework. After I come back, I’ll do my homework to get ready for the next week.
That’s my weekend.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇给材料的讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体指出这是自己的周末计划；
第二步，具体介绍周末两天自己的计划，每天的具体活动；
第三步，最后总结这就是自己的周末。
[亮点词汇]
① watch TV看电视
② one of……之一
③ help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
① I’m going to visit my grandparents because I miss them very much. (because引导的原因状语从句)
② After I come back, I’ll do my homework to get ready for the next week. (after引导的时间状语从句)
14．Dear Sir,
I'm sorry to tell you that I'm not feeling well today.I have a bad cold.The doctor told me to stay in bed for two days so I can’t go to school today and tomorrow.I hope I can get well very soon.
Thank you.
Xiaoli
【详解】本题要求以丽丽为名，写一张请假条，人称为第一人称。注意根据提示词语加上主语，适当地使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。提示词必须都包括。注意请假条的书写格式，短文最后一定要署名。
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