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初中英语人教版九年级
写作课
How can we become good learners
Unit 1 Section B 3a-3b
学习目标
通过分析阅读文本，能够总结提取出文章框架并扩充内容，起草作文。
01
通过小组讨论，能够乐于与同伴分享自己的观点，接纳建议并修改作文，提高写作的自我效能感。
02
Let’s discuss and retell.
active
long
use
making mistakes
study hard
best
take notes
key words
mind map
every day
explain
asking questions
during
each other
something new
part of you
change you
wisely
well
How can you become a successful learner
Let’s think.
Q：How does the writer give advice
to encourage
to give ways to learn
to advise people to keep on
Let’s think and discuss.
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假如你是李华，已升入高级学校，现应邀回校向同学们介绍英语学习方法。请根据下列要点提示，以“To Be a Successful English Learner”为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。
要点提示:
1.兴趣方面：听英语歌，看英语影片等；
2.习惯方面：用词典查生词，写英语日记等；
3.素养方面：提升听说读写能力，学习中外文化等；
4.意志方面：不畏困难，勇于挑战等；
5. 个人观点
要求:
1.词数110词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；
3.不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语:
develop, improve, ability, culture, challenge
英语写作六字诀
誊写
查单词拼写、时态
主谓一致等
用过渡词(句)
连接句子和段落
审体裁、人称、时态
抓住要点
扩展要点
审
写作步骤: 1. 审
审体裁 _____________________
审人称 _____________________
审时态 _____________________
演讲稿
审
第一、二人称
一般现在时、现在完成时
Beginning
Development
Ending
outline
抓
写作步骤: 2. 抓
题干中：英语学习方法
2. 题干外：个人观点
抓要点
Make a list of ways to learn English and give your own opinions.
ways
interest
habits
ability
emotion
others
listen to English songs
watch English movies
look up words in the dictionary
keep diaries in English
improve English skills
learn Chinese and foreign cultures
face difficulties
be ready to challenge
…
写作步骤: 2. 抓
Beginning
outline
1.give greetings
2.give thanks
3.give the topic
4.encourage
1.ways to learn
English
2.own opinions
1.advise people to keep on
2.encourage
3.expectation
Development
Ending
扩
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Dear schoolmates,
1. I’m Li Hua. I’m honored to be invited here to share my ideas.
2. At first, I would like to express my thanks to ________, because ________.
3. Are you ________
Beginning
What’s the beginning of a speech
写作步骤: 3. 扩
写作微策略：
以读促写
（寻找相关话题的文章）
Which way do you like better Please give some examples.
写作步骤: 3.扩
Development
There are ________ways to ________.
I think you should ________.
If you do this, you will ________.
It is also a good idea to ..., because ...
You could try to improve your English by ...
This will help you to ...
写作步骤: 3.扩
Ending
Learning is a lifelong journey because________.
It is wise to keep ________.
I believe you can ________.
Thanks for ________.
never give up
Write down key words for your ending.
连
写作步骤: 4. 连
1. 按照题目要求顺序
2. 连词的使用
3. 逻辑连接词的使用
叙事的写作方法
写作步骤: 4. 连
1.To be a successful learner, ________.
2. Additionally, ________.
3. Most importantly, ________.
4. What’s more, ________.
5. However, ________.
What’s your experience
Development
查
写作步骤: 5. 查
Peer-evaluation checklist Yes No
1. Is it a speech
2. Can you find the way of learning English the writer wrote about
3. Does it have correct structure
4. Are there any spelling mistakes and punctuation errors
5. Are the verbs in proper tenses
6. Does it include all the information required
抄
写作步骤: 6. 抄
策略：
字母为首
间距为辅
压线保稳
倾斜最美
Let’s edit.
Dear schoolmates,
I’m Li Hua. I’m honored to be invited here to share my ideas. First, I would like to give thanks to my English teacher. My topic is about how to learn English well.
To be a successful English learner, we should have a good study habit and be good at thinking and solving problems. We can look up new words with the help of the dictionary. We can keep diaries every day to improve our English. It is wise to make full use of learning resources, such as reading newspaper, listening to English songs and watching English movies. Additionally, it is a good idea to improve our ability to read and learn English and foreign cultures. When you study English, it’s sure to meet all kinds of different problems. Most importantly, we shouldn’t feel afraid of them. We should try our best to solve these difficulties and challenge them.
Let’s edit.
In my opinion, we should read and write in English every day. The best way to achieve this level of fluency is to make some English-speaking friends and hang out with them in a social setting.
This will help you to make progress. I believe you can keep on learning because learning is a lifelong journey. Thanks for your listening.
Let’s check.
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能够分析阅读文本，总结提取出文章框架并扩充内容，起草作文。
能够与同伴分享自己的观点，接纳建议并修改作文。
Homework
Redraft your writing.
Choose a subject you has learned and write a passage about its learning.
Search more examples about ways to the subject learning.

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