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(共19张PPT)
Unit 1
My name’s Gina.
Writing
大单元整合教学
My name’s Lily.
Her name’s Lily.
My name’s Joe.
Her name’s Lily.
His name’s Joe.
My name’s Cindy.
Her name’s Lily.
His name’s Joe.
Her name’s Cindy.
My name’s Grace.
Chain game
An ID card
What’s his first name
What’s his last name
What’s his telephone number
Junkai.
Wang.
138-0456-7892.
Qin Jian Middle School (中学)
First Name: Alice
Last Name: Green
Phone Number: 951-3397
Her first name is _______.
Her last name is _______.
Her phone number is _________.
She is in Qin Jian Middle School.
Alice
Green
951-3397
An ID card
Find differences：中西方姓名差异
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中国人：姓＋名，两部分的首字母都要大写。
西方人：名＋姓，
两部分的首字母都大写。
last name
姓
first name
名
first name
名
last name
姓
Alice Green
Wang Junkai
名为一个整体，
中间不空格。
You and your friend
Name First name Last name Age
Telephone
Han Yan Yan Han 38 8723516
Alice Green Alice Green 26 9625308
Hi, everyone. Nice to meet you.
I’m... My first name is ... My last name is ... I am... My telephone number is …
... is my friend. His/Her first name is... His/Her last name is ... She/He is...His/Her telephone number is …
That’s all. Thank you.
Make a report：
Fill in the chart about you and your friend, then make a roport.
Name First name Last name Age
Telephone
Writing Topic
Pre-writing
假如你是Li Hua, 你的初中生活开始了，新学期你一定认识了很多新朋友吧，为了大家更好地互相认识，请你介绍一下自己和你的朋友。
写作要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯；
3.字数不少于60词。
How can we write
a good article
Self-introduction
Name(first&last)
Phone number
Age
Favorite color
Personality
hobby
How to introuduce you and your friend --Content (内容)
food
drinks
subjects
...
school
Structure 结构
Para1:开篇问好 引起注意
Para2:具体情况 展开介绍
Para3:结束语
Hello,nice to meet you./I’m happy to see you.
First name
Last name
Age
school
Phone number
Favorite color
Hobby
...
I like to make friends with you.
Pre-writing
How to introuduce you and your friend --Structure (结构)
Body
Ending
Beginning
The first/three person
Tense(时态)
The simple present tense
Text(文体)
Details(细节)
Person(人称)
A passage
at least 8 points, 60 words
How to introuduce you and your friend --Writing (行文)
(I, My/ He, His/ She, Her)
(I am..., My name is.../
He is... His name is...)
Write a passage in 15 minutes
While-writing
假如你是Li Hua, 你的初中生活开始了，新学期你一定认识了很多新朋友吧，为了大家更好地互相认识，请你介绍一下自己和你的朋友。
写作要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯；
3.字数不少于60词。
Correction codes:
Wrong sentences
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
○
？
﹋
—
△
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Post-writing
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group
check Teacher’s assessment
Structure
and
content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have Shown greetings. (1 point)
Para : I have introduced myself. (4 points)
Para : I have showed my thanks and wishes.
(1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
3
1
1
1
2
4
3
1
1
Post-writing
Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense correctly. For example: My first/last name is...I like... (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses.
For example: My first name is ...because it means... My favorite color is...I like... (2 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
3
1
1
1
15
60
1
Post-writing
My Friend and I
Hello, nice to meet you.
I am Li Hua. My first name is Hua because my parents love China and Hua is from Chinese 中华. I’m from Boxing. My last name is Li. My friend is Bob. I like red best. His favorite color is red, too. My phone number is 18080738804. I like reading very much. I’m easygoing(随和的).
I want to make friends with all of you.
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