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高考英语二轮复习：应用文提升训练汇编（三） 有答案
写作（1）
（提纲类作文）假如你是李华，你的笔友 Peter 听说高考即将来临，想了解一下你们如何备战高考，请你回一封邮件，说明相关情况，内容包括：
1.想方设法掌握知识；
2.保持精力充沛
……
注意：1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I am more than delighted to hear from you.
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Looking forward to your early reply!
写作（1）文章范例：
Dear Peter,
I am more than delighted to hear from you. I am willing to share with you what we are doing in preparation for the approaching college entrance exam. Here comes some detailed information.
To begin with, it is compulsory for us to go over all the subjects and have a good command of the knowledge required in the curriculum. Besides, the high spirits really matter, which means keeping a good mood and remaining energetic at school. It’s not wise of us to stay up too late now. Last but not least, taking good care of ourselves mentally and physically is a must. Only when we are in good condition, can we develop our full potential.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
范文解析：第二段三个连词“To begin with”，“Besides”和“Last but not least”的使用恰当合理，凸显了句子间的结构。同时作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，第一段第二句使用了宾语从句what we are doing in preparation for the approaching college entrance exam. 将写作目的表达地清晰明了。第二段首句 it is compulsory for us to go over all the subjects and have a good command of the knowledge required in the curriculum使用了it作形式主语，第二段第二句使用了定语从句which means keeping a good mood and remaining energetic at school. 第二段最后使用了倒装句式 Only when we are in good condition, can we develop our full potential.
写作（2）
假设你叫李华，你的美国笔友Joe对中国新农村建设中正在实施的“厕所革命”很感兴趣。因此，他写信向你咨询。请你给他写一封回信，就相关问题作一番简单的回答。内容包括:
1. 什么是“厕所革命”；
2.“厕所革命”的意义；
3. 具体措施有哪些。
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:“厕所革命”(“toilet revolution”)改造(transform)排(水)(drain)
Dear Joe,
I’m so glad to hear from you again after so many days.
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写作（2）答案解析：
Dear Joe,
I’m so glad to hear from you again after so many days. In your letter, you say you are curious about the “toilet revolution” in China, so I’d like to cast some light on it. The so-called “toilet revolution” is a term used to refer to some measures carried out in rural areas to transform the toilets. You may not have a clear concept about the structure and design of these toilets. The fact is that most of them are unscientific. With the development in China, our government has begun to attach significance to the environment and the well-being of the people. We realize the toilet is a symbol of civilization and a key factor to the beauty of the rural areas. Consequently, we are making a great change in the design of the toilets. For instance, we focus on how to drain away waste water into some centralized places and then we deal with the water in case it will flow at random. Hopefully my letter may clarify your puzzlement.
写作（3）
作文题目：
假定你是李华。你校外籍教师Peter计划在暑假期间回国，他想送给母亲可以代表中国文化的礼物。请你给他写一封邮件，向他推荐礼物。内容包括：
1. 推荐礼物：旗袍、中国结等；去
2. 推荐原因；
3. 表达祝福。

精彩段落
背景介绍
1. Hearing that you are to have a journey back to your country during the summer vacation and desire to know what to choose as a present which can represent the Chinese culture for your mother,I’m writing to express my regards to your mom and in response to your inquiry.
2. Previously informed that you’ll return to your country during the summer vacation, I’m writing with the aim of offering some suggestions in regards to your inquiry about an appropriate present representing the Chinese culture to your mother.

3. News reaches me that you plan to go back to your motherland during the summer vacation, and intend to present your mother a gift representing Chinese culture. I feel honored to make some recommendations as follows.
4. Overwhelmed with delight and joy, I am writing to offer some advice in answer to your inquiry to help you pick up a gift featuringChinese culture to your mom.
旗袍推荐
5. In reference to the presents, which can feature the most special and wonderful culture in China, Chinese Qipao and Chinese knots can never been ignored. These two kinds of traditional Chinese crafts existing for a long history, are always the speakers telling Chinese stories to every generation.
6. Qipao, Chinese traditional clothes, is greatly welcomed among Chinese women in that it fully shows a woman’s charming figure. Besides,it’s a symbol of beauty and elegance.Given that your mother is a beauty and fond of fascinating clothes, it’s a wise choice.

7. As a representative of Chinese traditional custom, Qipao is always highly praised for its delicate cutting, its splendid employment of color and its perfectly selected name which signifies “Qi Kai De Sheng”, the same meaning as “winning” and“victory” in Chinese.
8. Qipao, with its root in Chinese traditional culture andabsorbing modern elements, with its various styles and fancy looking, has gained popularity among the elderly and the young domestically and internationally.

9. Admittedly, China, possessing a profound history, has a large amount of treasures with their deep roots in Chinese culture, among which I prefer Qipao and Chinese knot for your alternatives most. Initially, what should be highly recommended is Qipao, which combines beauty and historic meaning in the same time. Its fascinating appearance and softness also contribute to the preference.
10. There’s no denying that Qipao is the best choice of all. It is widely acknowledged that a woman wearing Qipao is elegant, educated and well-behaved. With delicate and fancy designs, Qipao is honored to be a sign of Chinese clothes reforming from traditional to modern pattern.

中国结推荐
11. Chinese knot can be a wise alternative, too. Characterized by a complex procedure and an appealing red outlook, Chinese knotsare widely acknowledged as a symbol of Chinese culture and gain ground all over the world. Chinese people use Chinese knots as decorations, owning a meaning of the arrival of happiness and good luck.
12. As for Chinese knots, such an ordinary thing as it is, it’s meaningful, because of a sense of togetherness it boards and a wish of family union it expresses, both of which are highly recommended.

13. Meanwhile, the Chinese knot carries some good wishes. Its red color is regarded as a symbol of happiness, the form of knot indicating solidarity. Chinese people prefer to hang up the Chinese knot in their houses hoping that their family can be filled with harmony and joy.
14. Apart from this, Chinese knot is bound to gain your favor. The wishes of union and togetherness are deeply conveyed through thousands of red threads knitted neatly.

优秀作文(一)
News reaches me that you plan to go back to your motherland during the summer vacation, with the intention to present your mother a gift featuring Chinese culture. I feel honored to offer you some recommendations as follows.
What comes first is Qipao, a kind of Chinese female clothes, which features both the beauty and figure of anyone who dressed herself with it. Also, the Chinese knot, a decoration you can see almost everywhere especially on festival occasions, is worthy of being regarded as an appropriate alternative, which means union. It being inviting and meaningful, I assume your mother will adore it.
Last but not least, I sincerely anticipate what you choose will take her fancy. It is my sincere hope that you will adopt my recommendations. Best wishes for your family reunion!

优秀作文(二)
Hearing that you are to have a journey back to your country during the summer vacation and desire to know what to choose as a present which can represent Chinese culture for your mom, I’m writing to express my regards to your mom and in response to your inquiry.
China boasting a long and profound history and covering a vast land, various cultures have been stimulated, which shows the wisdom of Chinese people. What I recommend to you to choose as an initial gift is Qipao. Given that women commonly take a fancy tobeing dressed beautifully, Qipao should be a good choice without doubt, which helps show your mom’s good figure and spirit.
Chinese knot can be a wise alternative, too. Characterized by a complex procedure and an appealing red outlook, Chinese knotsare widely acknowledged as a symbol of Chinese culture and gain ground all over the world. Chinese people use Chinese knots as decorations, owning a meaning of the arrival of happiness and good luck.
Remember me to your mom! I’d appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration. Hope you have a pleasant journey!

参考答案
Dear Peter,
I am more than pleased to know that you are planning to bring home gifts representing the Chinese culture for your mother, and so I am writing to offer my humble suggestions.
My first suggestion is Qipao, a fine and exquisite piece of traditional Chinese clothing with its unique and exceptional design. I am sure your mum will look absolutely stunning and gorgeous in it, combining her western fashion with exotic oriental elegance. Besides Qipao, the Chinese knot also comes highly recommended because it represents unity and attachment in the Chinese culture, a proper gift to demonstrate your deep love and strong emotional bond towards your mother. I am sure your mom would love it, once she understands the profound meaning behind the Chinese knot.
It is my sincere hope that your mom will love your presents and I wish you a happy summer vacation!

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