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高考英语二轮复习：应用文提升训练汇编
作文题目：
假定你是李华。你的美国笔友Jack给你发来邮件，告诉你他参加了美国中西部“汉语桥”比赛（U. S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest），并获得了一等奖。他希望你继续帮他学习中文。请你给他回复一封电子邮件。要点如下：
1．祝贺他获奖；
2．希望继续向他学习英语，而你帮他学中文；
3．祝愿他能来中国参加决赛。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。


写作要点：
Para.1:说明祝贺事由、表达诚挚祝贺；
Para.2:围绕事件表述贺喜内容、表扬收信人；
Para.3:其他要求信息+再次表达良好祝愿。
注意：重点赞扬当事人的优秀能力和取得的成就、并展望他将来的发展前景。
常用套语：
Dear xxx,
I’ve learned with delight that you 祝贺事由 . I'd like to extend to you my utmost congratulations and pride as well. You must be 激动\高兴等 . And I feel very happy for your 所取得的成绩.
This is quite exciting news! I know this is surely owing to 被祝贺人过去的努力. It is a reward you richly deserve for your 被祝贺人的优点.
Kindly let me know when you咨询对方何时有空.
Congratulations in receiving the most prestigious and deserving award once again.I hope that表达自己的愿望and wish best of luck for all your future endeavors.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

学生优秀句式：
（一）开头句式：
1. It was exciting news for me to learn of....
2. Please accept my sincere\hearty\warm congratulations on...
3. It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on ...
4. I was delighted to learn of your success/ achievements in ...
5. Allow me to convey my congratulations on your promotion to...
（二）结尾句式：
1. We wish to share your honor and joy.
2. I wish you success and fulfillment in the year ahead\ following\to come.
3. All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future \successful career!
4. Every good wish to you for much health, happiness and prosperity!
（三）其他：
1. Good news travels fast!
2. It was a splendid performance/ a triumph.
3. Best wishes for your great success in all that you undertake.
4. It is with the greatest pleasure that I offer you my sincerest congratulations on your...
5. I am sure a talented person as you will make great achievement and live a fuller life.


优秀范文一：
Dear Jack,
I’ve learned with delight that you won the first prize in the U.S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest. Please accept my most sincere congratulations and best wishes for a good future.
I know how talented you are and how much hard work you’ve made to attain the goal. No one could be more deserving of the success. And I’m very glad to hear that you owe your success to my help and want to study Chinese with me as well. I’m surely willing to give you a hand. It’s such a great encouragement to me to see your efforts rewarded. I’m determined to learn English well, so can you do me a favor to help me learn English
I do hope you can take part in the final contest to be held in China and expect your further achievement. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
优秀范文二：
Dear Jack,
I have learned with delight that you got the first prize in the U.S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest. I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on your success. You must be both excited and delighted. And I feel very happy for you.
It is quite exciting news. I know this is surely owing to your hard work. It is a reward you richly deserve.Having you as a friend, I really feel both proud and lucky because I can learn so much from you. I wish you would continue to help me with my English,and meanwhile I would be willing to help you with your Chinese as well. As we all know,you are a hard-working and talented person,which is essential for making achievements. I am sure that I can learn much from you,for which I wish you can teach me English.
I hope that you can take part in the final contest to be held in China. I wish you would continue your efforts and gain further success in the future. Your success tells me that hard work will pay off in the end. And your example is a constant inspiration to me. I will struggle to catch up with you.
My best wishes to your further success. Congratulations again.
Yours,
Li Hua

优秀范文三：
Dear Jack,
Thrilled at hearing the news that you have won the first prize in the U.S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest, I'm writing to offer you my sincerest congratulations and admiration.
Never easy as it is to master a foreign language,you've proved your perseverance with sweat of hard work and constant exercise throughout the year.Consequently,I hold a strong desire to learn English under your guidance, and in the meanwhile I will be more than willing to offer my assistance in return to further your apprehension in Chinese. Being mutually beneficial, it is to my great confidence that our collaboration will enable you to stand out on a more superior stage and achieve your well-deserved performance in the final contest to be held in China.
Although the road lying ahead is tough, I hope you'll spare no effort to conquer all obstacles and eventually set foot on the acme of your language learning.Yours,
Li Hua
优秀范文四：
Dear Jack,
Having received your e-mail, I am delighted to learn that you won the first prize in the U.S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest.I'd like to extend my utmost congratulations on your achievement. As we are close friends, I feel proud and lucky to share your pride.
This is quite exciting news.Initially,your success is surely owing to your persistence and profound knowledge,which make you stand out in the contest.Moreover, the past few years have witnessed the time we spent together,dedicated to leaning English and Chinese from each other. And now your efforts pay off.Subsequently,thanks for your faith in me and I'm willing to continue to make every effort to teach you more various Chinese knowledge. I also hope I will learn more English culture from you. Definitely,we will achieve further progress with joint efforts.
I sincerely wish you greater success in Chinese learning. I hope you will be on the stage of the final contest in China.
优秀范文五：
Dear Jack,
I'm more than delighted to learn that you have gained the first prize of U.S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest. Your success is obviously owing to your hard work and you deserve the reward. As we are close friends, I am proud of you.
Your example is really a constant inspiration to me, from which I learn that working hard is where the secret lies. Aiming at making achievements together, it is a pleasure for me to help you learn Chinese and I hope you can set aside some time to teach me English as well. Learning from each other will enable us to make greater progress.
Hearing that you can come to China to participate in the final contest, I would like to express my sincere congratulations and best wishes. There is no doubt that your study in the past will pay off. Look forward to your favorable reply.
作文题目：
假定你是李华，你刚参加完本市组织的一场国际马拉松比赛，赛后应邀给组委会写一封邮件反馈自己比赛的感受并提出一些个人建议。
内容包括：
此次比赛办得好的方面；
此次比赛待改进的方面以及你的相应建议。

好句：
[Racing track + City transportation]
1. With many historical sites and modern buildings included, the racing track is a reasonable one, along whichnot only can I enjoy the fascinating and breath-taking city scenery, but also get more knowledge about the development and prosperity of our city.
2. So thoughtful and caring was the committee that they arranged a reasonable racing track, along which red flags and signs were set every 500 meters, enabling competitors to know how long they had run and got encouraged.
3. It was the reasonable racing track with charming city scenery that made the marathon particularly impressive.
4. Had it not been for the reasonable racing track, Iwouldn’t have had the chance to explore my city and see so much wonderful scenery, which was ignored and unnoticed in my busy daily life.
5. However, some participants were not satisfied with the racing tracking, explaining that the inconvenience it causedwas out of proportion to the benefits it brought because they had to make turns frequently.
6. The reasonable racing track allows participants to enjoy the beautiful scenery while skipping busy main roads so as to avoid messing up the city transportation.

[Audience]
1. Difficult as running a marathon is, I finally managed to achieve the goal I set with the encouragement of the enthusiastic audience.
2. Nothing was comparable to the cheers of the enthusiastic audience, which filled me with confidence and encouraged me to run fearlessly.
3. The audience being too enthusiastic, with some breaking the rules and crossing the line, the situation became a bit in disorder.
[Supply]
1. Given that the marathon is a long distance running, adequate supply such as salty water is a must, with which participants can get sufficient energy to move on.
2. This marathon will be better with adequate supply on account of a large number of participants and long competing hours, for which I suggest that you set up somefixed areas offering food and drinks.

[Other aspects]
1. However, some disadvantages need to be addressed.
2. Nevertheless, there remain unsettled problems that shouldn’t be neglected……………… -
3. In addition, this marathon being an international race with lots of foreign participants, bilingual volunteers should be there to offer help.
4. Had it not been for it, I wouldn’t have met with people sharing the same interest from different walks of life. As a result, I believe everyone has benefited from their enlarged interpersonal circle.

好段：
1. Filled with excitement and joy, I’d like to convey my sincere congratulations on the accomplishment of the marathon, which is one of the most marvelous ones I’ve attended, owing to the reasonably-designed racing track and the enthusiastic audience. Running on the track along with the spectacular city scenery provided us with a feast for eyes while cheers of the crowd motivated us to move on with high spirits.

优秀学生作文1：
Running in free spirits, I'm deeply impressed by the sponsored marathon this year. With reasonable racing tracks and adequate supply, the marathon was amazingly well-organized, enabling the city transportation to work smoothly. The thrilling race undoubtedly provided us with spectacular city scenery, adding to a lively and energetic atmosphere.
However, to promote activity, I also want to offer my personal opinions and humble suggestions. Initially, more health care stations should be set up along the tracks just in case any emergency would arise. In addition, we should promote the advertisement, appealing to people from all walks of life to participate in the marathon, which is of far-reaching significance to physical and psychological health, and equally to the tourism industry in the city.
优秀学生作文2
Overwhelmed by the joy of attending the international marathon organized by our city, I am really grateful for all your efforts. Initially, I should give the marathon credit for the broad city scenery alongside, without which we wouldn’t have relieved our physical tiredness and refreshed ourselves during the race. Additionally, the coordination between the city transportation and reasonable racing track made it comprehensively fit for marathon. What is the well worth mentioning is that the enthusiastic cheering audience undeniably made me appreciative, which inherited marathon spirits and appealed to more people. On balance, it's a second to none successful activity.
Moreover, I'd like to share a few points that are supposed to be improved. This marathon would be better with a more adequate supply on account of its large number of participants and long competing hours, for which I suggest that you set up more fixed areas supplying food and drinks.
The competition is highly appreciated by all people, andsets a role model for the next year’s competition.
优秀学生作文3
First and foremost, the reasonable racing track hasreceived wide praise among the competitors, which allows people to experience the exciting sports and enjoy the breath-taking city scenery to the fullest at the same time.What is also worth mentioning is the adequate supply of food and water. It is equally impossible to imagine a marathon without food and water supply. Thanks to your considerate support, all competitors have attained adequate energy to finish the marathon. Furthermore, nothing is comparable to the cheers from the enthusiastic audience, which made me brim with confidence and ran ahead fearlessly. All above makes the marathon almost brilliant. While the only flaw is the busy city transportation, for which citizens has suffered a lot during rush hours. I consider it desirable to arrange specific routes for drivers during the marathon.
By and large, so impressive is the marathon that I would cherish it from the bottom of my heart.
作文题目：
随着育华中学建校85岁华诞来临，学校决定将在2019年11月9日举行主题为“一日母校人，一世母校情”的建校85周年庆祝活动。假如你是育华学生李华，请你代表学校，向社会各界、海内外校友发出邀请。要点提示如下：
1. 活动主题，活动举办时间、地点；
2. 校庆活动安排（校友代表演讲、参观校园及其他活动）；
3. 表达诚挚邀请；
参考词汇：
85周年庆祝活动：the 85th anniversary celebration 校友：alumni (复数)
“一日母校人，一生母校情”: Once being in our school, our affection lives forever

同学佳作
1. Wandering around the campus may remind you ofsome special memories when you were teens.
2. In order to make this celebration interesting and unforgettable, we have made a series of thoughtful arrangements for you.
3. (Exciting) News comes that our school is launching the 85th anniversary celebration. On behalf of our school, I am writing to cordially invite you to get involved in the activity.
4. Falling on November 9th, 2019, the activity themed on “Once being in our school, our affection lives forever” will last for a whole day. ...... Moreover, .... Time permitting, you are also advised to take part in the interesting sports meeting together with other alumni.
5. It is through so many enjoyable and attractive activities that we can realize our profound love for our school.
6. With the combination of excitement and delight, I sincerely invite you to this celebration. Your presence and participation will be an honor for us.
7. Yu Hua Middle School, which is recognized as a cradle of the outstanding talents, will have its 85th anniversary celebration on November 9th with a theme of “Once being in our school, our affection lives forever”.
8. Nothing could be better than wandering around the campus while reviewing the sweet time you have spent here.
9. With the approach of the 85th anniversary celebration in Yu Hua Middle School, I'm here sincerely invite all the alumni around the world to the celebration.

优秀学生作文（一）
The celebration will be held in our school on November 9th. First of all, we'll arrange one of the alumni to deliver a speech. After the Speech, it's a good idea for you to have a walk to see the changes since you graduated. In addition, not only a variety of activities and gamesorganized by the students can you enjoy, but also some shows will be held for you to watch. What’s more, you can write you best wishes on cards and put it up on themessage board.
I'm firmly convinced that the celebration will go smoothly and won’t fail to meet your expectation
Once being in our school, our affection lives forever. I’llappreciate it if you would take my invitation into consideration.

优秀学生作文（二）
With the approach of Yu Hua Secondary School’s 85th birthday, an anniversary ceremony whose theme is“Once being in our school, our affection lives forever” will be held on November 9th, 2019 on campus.
On behalf of our school, I am writing this letter tocordially extend my invitation to alumni from all over the world to participate in this grand festival with us. As scheduled, the celebration will last for a whole day and begins at 8 a.m. in the main hall, where the opening speech will be delivered by the alumni representative. Following this, a campus tour will be organized to showcase the unique atmosphere and vitality of the school. Lastly, an evening party will be held in the concert hall, where students will give their well-prepared performances and interact with alumni from varied fields of the society.
With the joint effort of all the teachers and students, as well as our profound passion for the school, this promises to be a remarkable and meaningful day. Looking forward to your attendance.

优秀学生作文（三）
It is on Nov. 9th, 2019 that our school, Yu Hua Middle School is to hold the 85th anniversary celebration, whose theme is “Once being in our school, our affection lives forever”. Present at the celebration will be teachers, staff, students as well as alumni working at home and abroad. As scheduled, one or two representatives of alumni will deliver their speeches, which will trigger the celebration. Then, it will be free time for you alumni to wander around the campus, where you can witness the changes of our school in the past decades and recall the impressive moments you spent here as well as take part in some relaxing games special for you. Of course, never can an evening party be absent in such a great occasion.
So well-designed is the celebration that it will be worth your coming back. Therefore, I, on behalf of the whole school, am here extending our warmest invitation to you, hoping that you, our dear alumni, can spare time to enjoy this celebration with us. I am convinced that your attendance will make a difference.
Looking forward to your presence/participation.
作文题目：
假设你是学生会主席李华。你校将举行一系列活动庆祝第33个教师节。其中，展示教师形象的纪录片(documentary)需要拍摄外教Mr. Jenkins在你校工作和生活的片段，并对其进行采访。请你写一封电子邮件，并附上拍摄和采访方案，请求Mr. Jenkins对此给予支持并提出建议。


写作模式 + 星级句式
第一段：表明写信目的 (因何事；有何目的)
范文： I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. Our school is planning a series of activities to celebrate the 33rd Teachers’ Day, which falls on Sep 10th, 2017. The documentary featuring the teachers’ professional images, as a highlight, needs your participation and support.
1. 因何事：The 33rd Teachers’ Day is coming. Our school is planning some activities to celebrate it. We decide to make a documentary to show theteachers’ professional images.
星级句式1: With the approaching of the 33rd Teachers’ Day / With the 33rd Teachers’ Day around the corner, our school has planned to organize some activities,including filming a special documentary to demonstrate the teachers’ professional images.
星级句式2：Owing to the arrival of the 33rd Teachers’ Day, our school intends to hold a variety of activities to celebrate it. Among all these activities, the most important one is to film a documentary, which will show the teachers’ professional images.

2. 有何请求：I’m writing in the hope that you will accept our interview and give us support.
星级句式1: We would like to photo you about your life and work. Besides, we also want to interview you to make our documentary more interesting.
星级句式2: I’m writing on behalf of our school to extend an invitation to you to participate in the documentary about some teachers in our school.

第二段： 告知具体内容 (什么，如何……等等)
基本要点: 告知对方关于拍摄和采访的相关事宜
范文：A group of 10 distinguished teachers including you have been selected to star in the documentary. We hope to film some clips to demonstrate your work and life in our school. Besides, an interview of about three minutes with you will be conducted. The schemes of the video shooting and interview are included in the attachment and we earnestly expect your suggestions to make them better.
要点1: 拍摄
范文：A group of 10 distinguished teachers including you have been selected to star in the documentary. We hope to film some clips to demonstrate your work and life in our school.
星级句式1: Learning that you are one of the most popular teachers in our school, we are going to conduct a documentary about your work as well as an interview about your life.
星级句式2: To be precise, we will film your real life, including the section of…..in your spare time.
星级句式3: The documentary is intended to showcase the teachers’ images. Therefore, we need to shoot a short video about your work and daily life in our school.

要点2：采访
范文：Besides, an interview of about three minutes with you will be conducted.
星级句式1: This documentary aims at showing our teachers’ work and life , during which you will be interviewed.
星级句式2: In addition, we are going to interview you on your personal feelings of being a teacher and some interesting experiences in your work.

要点3: 附件；支持和建议
范文：The schemes of the video shooting and interview are included in the attachment and we earnestly expect yoursuggestions to make them better.
星级句式1: Attached are the shooting and interviewing arrangements, and we hope to receive your support and suggestions on the work.
星级句式2: Besides, I attach the schemes of the video shooting and interview to this e-mail , so you can know about the interview in advance.

第三段：表达感激并希望得到回复
范文：We would appreciate it if we can receive your reply soon and look forward to a pleasant experience with you on the production.
星级结构1: Wish you an unforgettable Teachers’ Day this year and we are looking forward to your early reply
星级结构2: We’ll be much obliged to you for your spending valuable time participating in this activity. Looking forward to your earliest reply
星级结构3: Many thanks and looking forward to your earliest reply.

学生范文赏析
【Version 1】
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. To celebrate the 33rd Teachers’ Day, our school will hold a series of activities, among which a documentary to be made requires your involvement.
The documentary is intended to represent the teachers’ images. Therefore we need to shoot a short video about your work and daily life in our school. In addition, we are going to interview you on your deepest feelings and thoughts of being a teacher and some interesting experiences in your job.Attached are the arrangements for shooting and interviewing, and we need your support and suggestions on the work.
We’ll be much obliged to you for your spending valuable time participating in this activity. If you have any questions or advice, please feel free to contact me. Looking forward to your earliest reply.

【Version 2】
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. Through our careful arrangement, a big celebrating event will be launched on the 33rd Teachers’ Day. In order to make full preparations, I am writing to extend an invitation to you to participating in a documentary about the teachers in our school.
This documentary aims at showing our teachers’ images and life, during which you’ll be interviewed. To be precise, we will film your daily life, including the clips of working, swimming or eating. It’s such a meaningful activity that you shouldn’t miss.
Enclosed are the specific timetable and interview scripts about the filming. I firmly believe that your participation willenlighten the documentary. Any inquiries and suggestions are welcome. Hopefully, you will take part in the filming andconvey your true thoughts in the video.

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