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专题07 读后续写
情感细节描写
素材积累（词-句-文）
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《2024年高考英语读后续写高分宝典》系列精品课件
CONTENTS
01--情感细节描写——紧张
02--情感细节描写——喜乐
03--情感细节描写——惊恐
04--情感细节描写——吃惊
05--情感细节描写——激动与兴奋
06--情感细节描写——感激与感动
07--情感细节描写——焦虑与担忧
08--情感细节描写——生气和愤怒
09--情感细节描写——悲伤、沮丧和孤独
PART ONE
01
情感细节描写——紧张
一、情感细节类词汇
1.形容词/副词： nervous, uneasy, tense, anxious, nervously
2.名词/动词：tension, anxiety, tremble, shake
3.固定短语：
①one's heart be/fly into one's mouth 心提到嗓子眼　
②a flood/wave of tension 一阵紧张　
③with/have butterflies in one's stomach 心里发慌　
④tremble with anxiety 焦虑不安
二、按要求完成句子
1.当我站在后台的时候, 我紧张极了。
When I was standing backstage, nervousness/tension came flooding over me. (无灵主语句)
2.当叫到我的名字时, 我感到心里忐忑不安。
When my name was called I could feel butterflies in my stomach．(名词＋介词短语)
3.我颤抖着双腿来到了舞台上。我手心冒汗, 心跳加速。
My trembling legs brought me on stage, and I could feel my palms sweating and heart racing.(无灵主语句)
4.挤满观众的大厅让我更加紧张起来, 我的心扑通扑通地好像要跳出来了。
The hall crowded with audience made me even more uneasy. My heart was pounding/thumping hard, as if it were about to pop．(夸张的修辞手法)
5.我紧张地站在那里, 喉咙发紧, 不知道下一步怎么办。
I stood there so nervously that I felt my throat tight, wondering what to do next.(so...that...)
三、用合适的衔接过渡词将上面各句连句成文
When I was standing backstage, nervousness came flooding over me. When my name was called I could feel butterflies in my stomach. My trembling legs brought me on stage, and I could feel my palms sweating and heart racing. However, The hall crowded with audience made me even more uneasy. My heart was pounding/thumping hard, as if it were about to pop. I stood there so nervously that I felt my throat tight, wondering what to do next.
PART TWO
02
情感细节描写——紧张
一、情感细节类词汇
1.形容词/副词/名词：joy, joyful, joyfully, pleased, pleasant, pleasure, glad, gladly, enjoy, enjoyable, happy, happiness, happily, delight, delighted, cheerful, cheerfully, overjoyed, merry, merrily
2.短语：to one's delight/joy/happiness/pleasure, be seized by joy, be overcome with happiness, be wild with joy
二、按要求完成句子
1.得知孩子们的主意, Mrs Meredith非常高兴, 她笑得很灿烂。
Learning the children's idea, Mrs Meredith was so pleased/ glad/happy/delighted/cheerful/overjoyed that she smiled brightly. (so...that)
2.孩子们开始高兴地准备爆米花。
The children got down to preparing popcorn happily/ cheerfully/joyfully/merrily.(副词)
3.他们带着一篮子爆米花, 兴高采烈地前往Bernard家告诉他这个好计划。
With a basket of popcorn, they left for Bernard's house cheerfully to share with Bernard the good plan.(副词)
4.听到他们的话, Bernard高兴地几乎跳了起来, 热泪盈眶。
①Hearing what they said, Bernard was so glad/ delighted/happy/pleased/cheerful that he almost jumped up and tears filled his eyes．(复合句)
②Hearing what they said, Bernard was so delighted/glad/happy/pleased/cheerful that he almost jumped up, with tears filling his eyes．(with复合结构)
5.看到那篮子爆米花, 他的父母也欣喜若狂。
At the sight of the basket of popcorn, his parents were also seized with happiness/wild with joy．(介词短语)
6.令他非常高兴的是, 爆米花很好吃, 很快就卖光了。
Much to his delight/joy/happiness/pleasure/To his great delight/joy/happiness/pleasure, the popcorn was so tasty that it soon sold out.(介词短语)
三、用合适的衔接过渡词将上面各句连句成文
Learning the children’s idea, Mrs Meredith was so overjoyed that she smiled brightly. Then, children got down to preparing popcorn joyfully. With a basket of popcorn, they left for Bernard’s house cheerfully to share with Bernard the good plan. Hearing what they said, Bernard was so delighted that he almost jumped up, with tears filling his eyes. At the sight of the basket of popcorn, his parents were also seized with happiness. Later, much to his delight, the popcorn was so tasty that it was soon sold out.
PART THREE
03
情感细节描写——惊恐
一、情感细节类词汇
1.形容词：afraid, alarmed, scared, scary, frightened, frightening, fearful, panicky, terrified, terrifying
2.名词/动词：fear, scare, fright, frighten, terror
3.短语：
①shake/tremble with fear/terror 吓得发抖　
②scare/frighten...to death 把……吓死　
③be scared out of one's wits 吓得魂不附体　
④freeze/be frozen with fear 吓呆/吓傻　
⑤stand rooted to the spot with fear 吓得呆若木鸡　
⑥be seized with panic 惊慌失措　
⑦be dead with fright 吓得要死
二、按要求完成句子
1.你无法想象北极熊向我们逼近时我们是多么的恐惧。
You could hardly imagine how frightened we were at the approach of the polar bear．(形容词)
2.我吓呆了不敢动弹。
A burst of horror held me entirely in its power, and I was unable to move an inch.(无灵主语句)
3.我惊恐不已, 我觉得两腿发抖, 手心冒汗。
Extremely frightened, I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating.(形容词作状语)
二、按要求完成句子
4.我的妻子在我旁边吓呆了。
Beside me was my wife, who was rooted to the ground, frozen with fear．(短语)
5.看着北极熊的血盆大口, 她几乎要吓死。
At the sight of the polar bear's bloody mouth, she was nearly dead with fright．(短语)
6.阵阵恐惧涌上我们的心头。我们喉咙发紧, 膝盖发软。
Waves of fear welled up in/swept over/seized/flooded over us. Our throats tightened and our knees felt weak.(无灵主语句)
三、用合适的衔接过渡词将上面各句连句成文
You could hardly imagine how frightened we were at the approach of the polar bear. A burst of horror held me entirely in its power, and I was unable to move an inch. Extremely frightened, I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating. Beside me was my wife, who was rooted to the ground, frozen with fear. At the sight of the polar bear's bloody mouth, she was nearly dead with fright. Waves of fear flooded over us．Our throats tightened and our knees felt weak.
PART FOUR
04
情感细节描写——吃惊
一、情感细节类词汇
1.形容词/副词：astonished, amazed, surprised, shocked, astonishing, amazing, surprising, shocking, surprisingly, amazingly
2.名词/动词：shock, astonishment, surprise, amazement, amaze, astonish
3.短语：
①to one's shock/surprise/amazement令某人震惊/吃惊/惊异的是　
②in surprise/shock/amazement 吃惊地/震惊地/惊异地　
③in disbelief 难以置信地　
④come as a shock to sb……让某人很震惊　
⑤gasp in astonishment 吃惊地倒吸一口冷气
二、按要求完成句子
1.使人们震惊的是, 龙卷风袭击了附近的一个小镇。
To people's shock, a tornado occurred in a small town nearby.(介词短语)
2.听到这个坏消息, 玛丽呆住了, 动弹不得。
At the bad news, Mary froze with shock, as if rooted to the ground.(动词短语)
3.玛丽把这个消息告诉了孩子们, 问他们是否愿意和那些不幸的人分享他们所拥有的东西。
Mary shared the news with her children, and asked if they would like to share what they had with the less fortunate people.
4.令她惊讶的是, 孩子们都愿意捐赠一些东西。
She was amazed/surprised/astonished that all the children were willing to donate something.(形容词)
二、按要求完成句子
5.当安妮把她最喜欢的玩具放进盒子里时, 她哥哥脸上闪过一丝惊奇。他瞪大眼睛看着她。
When Anne placed her favorite toy in the box, a spark of surprise flashed across her brother's face．He stared at her with wide eyes.(无灵主语句)
6.他一言不发地回到自己的房间, 拿着他最喜欢的玩具跑回客厅。
Without a word, he went back to his room and ran back with his favorite toy to the living-room．(并列句)
7.玛丽惊讶地意识到他也明白了她的举动意味着什么。
Astonished/Surprised/Amazed, Mary realized that he had also recognised what her action meant.(形容词作状语)
三、用合适的衔接过渡词将上面各句连句成文
To people's shock, a tornado occurred in a small town nearby. At the bad news, Mary froze with shock, as if rooted to the ground. Then, Mary shared the news with her children, and asked if they would like to share what they had with the less fortunate people. She was amazed that all the children were willing to donate something. When Anne placed her favorite toy in the box, a spark of surprise flashed across her brother's face．He stared at her with wide eyes. Without a word, he went back to his room and ran back with his favorite toy to the living-room. Astonished, Mary realized that he had also recognised what her action meant.
PART FIVE
05
情感细节描写——激动与兴奋
一、情感细节类词汇
1.形容词/副词/名词：excited, thrilled, exciting, thrilling, excitedly, excitement, thrill
2.高级短语词块：
①to one's excitement/thrill 令某人激动的是　
②flush with excitement 激动得满脸通红　
③contain one's excitement 抑制内心的激动　
④with/in excitement 激动地
二、按要求完成句子
1.在去往湖边的途中, 妈妈兴奋得不能自已。
On the journey to the lake, a wave of excitement took hold of/seized/flooded over/swept over Mom．(无灵主语句, 表激动的名词作主语)
2.妈妈坚决要求我们在下一个村庄露营, 她的眼中闪着兴奋的光芒。
Mom insisted that we go camping in the next village, and her eyes glittered/twinkled with excitement．(动词＋介词短语)
→Mom insisted that we go camping in the next village, her eyes glittering/twinkling with excitement．(独立主格结构)
3.我们一到露营地, 妈妈就迫不及待地冲了出去, 兴奋地催促我们搭帐篷。
The moment we arrived at the camping place, Mom couldn't wait to storm out and excitedly urged us to put up the tent．(动作描写＋副词)
4.妈妈朝湖边走去, 然后传来一阵兴奋的尖叫声。
Mom walked towards the lake, and then came an excited scream/then came a scream of excitement．(名词短语作主语＋倒装句)
5.妈妈欣赏着美景, 兴奋得难以自已。
Enjoying the beautiful view, Mom could hardly contain her excitement．(名词)
6.因为这是第一次帮爸爸在户外做饭, 我和哥哥也感到很兴奋。
As it was the first time that we had helped Father cook food outdoors, my brother and I also felt thrilled．(形容词)
7.我们呼吸着新鲜的空气、闻着饭菜的香味, 兴奋地上蹦下跳。
Breathing the fresh air and smelling the delicious food, we jumped up and down with excitement．(动作＋介词短语)
三、用合适的衔接过渡词将上面各句连句成文
On the journey to the lake, a wave of excitement swept over Mom. Mom insisted that we go camping in the next village, her eyes twinkling with excitement. The moment we arrived at the camping place, Mom couldn't wait to storm out and excitedly urged us to put up the tent. Then, Mom walked towards the lake, and then came an excited. Enjoying the beautiful view, Mom could hardly contain her excitement. Certainly, as it was the first time that we had helped Father cook food outdoors, my brother and I also felt thrilled. Breathing the fresh air and smelling the delicious food, we jumped up and down with excitement．
PART SIX
06
情感细节描写
——感激与感动
一、情感细节类词汇
1.名词/动词：gratitude, appreciation, thank, move, touch, appreciate
2.形容词/副词：thankful, grateful, moved, touched, thankfully, gratefully
3.固定短语：
①shed tears of gratitude 流下感激的泪水　
②be moved to tears 感动得落泪
③have a deep gratitude towards 对……深怀感激　
④with gratitude/appreciation 感激地
⑤owe sb a lot/a great deal 非常感激某人　
⑥be deeply moved/touched by...被……深深感动
二、按要求完成句子
1.彼得差点撞上一辆过路的汽车, 这时一位过路人把他推到了安全地方。
Peter was nearly knocking into a passing car when a passer by pushed him to safety．
2.他眼里含着感激的泪水, 哽咽着感谢这个过路人, “太感谢你了！”
With grateful tears/tears of gratitude hanging in/flooded with/welled up in his eyes, he thanked the passer by with a lump in his throat, “Thank you so much!”(with复合结构)
3.但路人只是温和地笑了笑。彼得在寒冷的天气里, 感到一阵暖意, 他开始相信处处有善良。
But the passer by just smiled warmly. A feeling of warmth swept over Peter on the cold day, and he began to believe there was kindness in every corner.(无灵主语句)
二、按要求完成句子
4.看到陌生人之间这般彼此关照, 实在令人感动。
It was very moving/touching to see how much strangers could care for each other.
5.人群深受感动, 大声鼓掌。
Touched/Moved deeply, the crowd clapped their hands loudly.(非谓语动词作状语)
6.知道事情的经过后, 彼得的母亲流下喜悦和感激的泪水。
Knowing what had happened, Peter's mother shed tears of joy and gratitude．
三、用合适的衔接过渡词将上面各句连句成文
Peter was nearly knocking into a passing car when a passer by pushed him to safety. With grateful tears welled up in his eyes, he thanked the passer by with a lump in his throat, “Thank you so much!” But the passer by just smiled warmly. A feeling of warmth swept over Peter on the cold day, and he began to believe there was kindness in every corner. It was very touching to see how much strangers could care for each other. Moved deeply, the crowd clapped their hands loudly. Later, knowing what had happened, Peter's mother shed tears of joy and gratitude.
PART SEVEN
07
情感细节描写
——焦虑与担忧
一、情感细节类词汇
1.形容词/副词：anxious, worried, worrying, helpless, hopeless, concerned, anxiously
2.名词：anxiety, worry, helplessness, hopelessness, concern
3.固定短语：
①with anxiety 焦虑地　
②be concerned about 担忧　
③be worried about 担心　
④full of anxiety 焦虑不安　
⑤feelings of anxiety and concern 焦虑和担忧的感觉
二、按要求完成句子
1.他们在山里迷了路, 只好焦急地等待救援。
Lost in the mountain, they had nothing to do but wait for rescue anxiously．(副词)
2.随着夜色渐深, 他们越来越担忧。
As the evening wore on, they grew increasingly/more and more worried．(形容词)
3.托尼无助地站在那里, 皱着眉。
Tony stood there helpless, frowning.(形容词, 简单句)
二、按要求完成句子
4.树林开始起雾了, 他们周围的一切都被黑暗吞噬, 这无疑使他们更加无助。
①Fog began creeping into the forest. Everything around them was swallowed by the darkness, which undoubtedly left them even more helpless．(非限制性定语从句)
②Fog began creeping into the forest. Everything around them was swallowed by the darkness, undoubtedly leaving them even more helpless．(分词短语作状语)
5.玛丽既担心又害怕, 几乎要哭了。
Mary was close to crying with anxiety and fear．(介词短语)
三、用合适的衔接过渡词将上面各句连句成文
Lost in the mountain, they had nothing to do but wait for rescue anxiously. As the evening wore on, they grew increasingly worried. Even worse, Fog began creeping into the forest. Everything around them was swallowed by the darkness, which undoubtedly left them even more helpless. Tony stood there helpless, frowning. Mary was close to crying with anxiety and fear.
PART EIGHT
08
情感细节描写
——生气和愤怒
一、情感细节类词汇
1.形容词/副词： nervous, uneasy, tense, anxious, nervously
2.名词/动词：tension, anxiety, tremble, shake
3.固定短语：
①one's heart be/fly into one's mouth 心提到嗓子眼　
②a flood/wave of tension 一阵紧张　
③with/have butterflies in one's stomach 心里发慌　
④tremble with anxiety 焦虑不安
二、按要求完成句子
1.汤姆最近的行为总能让史密斯老师火冒三丈。
Tom's recent behavior would always set off Mr. Smith's anger/make Mr. Smith burst into anger/burn with anger/explode with anger．(名词)
2.史密斯老师发现他的作业又没完成, 愤怒地大叫了一声, 眼里闪烁着恼怒的光芒。
Finding his homework was unfinished again, Mr. Smith let out a cry of anger, with his eyes shining with annoyance．(名词＋with复合结构)
3.史密斯老师的耐心被消磨光了, 给他的父亲打电话愤怒地抱怨。
Mr. Smith, whose patience had worn thin, called his father to complain angrily．(副词)
4.当汤姆的父亲得知他的儿子表现如此恶劣时, 他无法控制自己的愤怒, 用拳头猛捶桌子, “你最好解释一下到底怎么回事！”
Learning his son had been so badly behaved, Tom's father felt so angry that he slammed his fist on the table, “You'd better explain what's going on！”(形容词)
5.汤姆垂头不语。父亲脸色突变, 一股怒火像乌云一样笼罩着他的脸。
Tom hung his head and said nothing. His father's color came up, and a heavy rage came over his face like a dark cloud．(比喻)
6.父亲再也无法控制自己的愤怒, 气得冲出房间, 狠狠地摔上门。
Unable to contain his anger, his father stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.(形容词短语作状语)
三、用合适的衔接过渡词将上面各句连句成文
Tom's recent behavior would always make Mr. Smith explode with anger. Finding his homework was unfinished again, Mr. Smith let out a cry of anger, with his eyes shining with annoyance. Mr. Smith, whose patience had worn thin, called his father to complain angrily. Learning his son had been so badly behaved, Tom's father felt so angry that he slammed his fist on the table, “You'd better explain what's going on!” However, Tom hung his head and said nothing. His father's color came up, and a heavy rage came over his face like a dark cloud．Eventually, unable to contain his anger, his father stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.
PART NINE
09
情感细节描写——悲伤、沮丧和孤独
一、情感细节类词汇
1.形容词/副词：sorrowful, sad, depressed, frustrated, lonely, upset, depressing, sadly
2.名词：sorrow, loneliness, sadness, depression
3.短语：
①a sense/wave of loneliness/sadness 一阵孤独/悲伤　
②be numb with sorrow/sadness 难过得麻木
二、按要求完成句子
1.教室里的每个人都在愉快地聊天, 而简却一个人坐在那里不知所措。
Everyone in the classroom was chatting happily while Jane sat alone, at a loss.(对比修辞法)
2.悲伤和孤独的气氛笼罩着她。
An air of sorrow and loneliness settled over her. (无灵主语句)
3.简感到被冷落, 孤独使她感到绝望。
Feeling left out, Jane got desperate with loneliness. (非谓语动词作状语)
二、按要求完成句子
4.她从学校慢慢地骑车回家, 心难过得麻木了。
She rode home from school slowly, numb with sorrow．(短语)
5.她把自己锁在房间里, 沉浸在悲痛之中。
She locked herself in her room, abandoning herself to great sadness．(非谓语动词作状语)
6.她很伤心, 不知不觉哭了, 眼泪止不住。
She felt so sad that she found herself weeping, unable to hold back her tears.(so...that...)
三、用合适的衔接过渡词将上面各句连句成文
Everyone in the classroom was chatting happily while Jane sat alone, at a loss. An air of sorrow and loneliness settled over her. Feeling left out, Jane got desperate with loneliness. Then rode home from school slowly, numb with sorrow. She felt so sad that she found herself weeping, unable to hold back her tears.
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