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第二讲：书面表达提升
英语书面表达的本质：
把话说清楚！！！！！！！！
大家的问题：
1、想不出内容
2、好不容易想出来内容，句子造不出来
3、好不容易造出句子，结果错误百出
4、好不容易句子造对，结果非常低幼
5、好不容易句子升级，结果非常生硬
6、好不容易把句子造自然，前后没衔接
7、好不容易前后有了衔接，结果整篇文章没结构…..
最难的两件事：
1、想出简单/好写的内容！
2、造出简单/正确的句子！
【两遍翻译法】
Step1：把你看到的英语，逐句翻译成汉语。【阅读】
Step2：把你翻出的汉语，逐句翻译回英语。【写作】
Step3：用你写出的英语，和原文逐词比较。【语法】
I entered the hotel manager's office and sat down. I had just lost $50 and I felt very upset. 'I left the money in my room,' I said, 'and it's not there now.' The manager was sympathetic, but he could do nothing. 'Everyone's losing money these days,' he said.
I entered the hotel manager’s office and sat down. I had just lost $50, and I felt very upset. “I left the money in my room, and it wasn’t there now.” This manager was sympathetic, but he could do nothing.” Everyone’s losing money these days.” he said.
I entered the hotel manager's office. I had just lost 50 dollars and felt very upset. “I left the money in my room” I said, “and it's not there now.” The manager was sympathetic, but he could do nothing."Everyone is losing money these days" he said.
我进入酒店经理的办公室坐下来。我刚丢了50美元，感觉很upset。我把钱留在我的房间里，然后现在它不在了。这个经理是sympathetic，但是他什么都做不了。“这几天每个人都丢钱”他说。
I entered the hotel manager’s office. I had just lost $50 and I felt very upset. “I left the money in my room, and it is not there now.” The manager was sympathetic, but he could do nothing. “Everyone is losing money these days” ,he said.
（昨天）我看了场电影，它特别精彩。然后，我买了个彩票，并且赢了20块钱，这件事儿让我高兴。
Yesterday, I watched a movie, which was wonderful. Then, I bought a lottery and won 20 yuan, which made me happy.
1、要有主语
2、要有连词
3、要用代词
4、用词要精确
I entered the hotel manager’s room and sat down. I had just lost 50 dollars and I felt upset now .I left my money in my room, and it is no there now. The manager was sympathetic, but he could do nothing. “Everyone is losing money these days.”
He started (to complain) (about this wicked world) but was interrupted (by a knock) (at the door). A girl came in and put an envelope on his desk. It contained $50. 'I found this outside this gentleman's room,' she said. 'Well,' I said to the manager, 'there is still some honesty in this world!'
他开始去抱怨关于这个wicked的世界，但是被在门上的一个敲击interrupt。一个女孩儿进来然后放一个envelope在他的桌子上。它contain 50美元。“我发现这个在这个绅士的屋子外面，”她说。“好吧，”我说对着这个经理，“在这个世界上，仍然有一些诚实honesty。”
He started to complain about the wicked world, but was interrupted by a knock at the door. A girl came in and put an envelope on his desk, which contained $50. ‘I found this outside this gentleman’s room’. she said ‘well,’ I said to the manager, ‘there is still some honesty in the world.’
He started to complain about this wicked world, but was interrupted by a knock at the door. It contained $50. ’I found this outside this gentleman’s room,’ she said. ’Well,’ I said to the manager, ’there’s still some honesty in this world.’
He started to complain about this wicked world but was interrupted by a knock at the door. A girl came in and put an envelope on his desk. It contained 50 dollars. ‘I found this outside this gentleman’s room,’ she said. ‘Well’, I said to the manager, ‘there is still some honesty in the world.’
People are not so honest as they once were. The temptation to steal is greater than ever before -- especially in large shops. A detective recently watched a well-dressed woman who always went into a large store on Monday mornings.
人们不如此诚实了，像他们曾经。这种去steal的temptation是更大的比ever before – 特别在大商店里。一个detective最近盯上了一个well-dressed女人，她总是去进入一个大商场在星期一。
One Monday, there were fewer people in the shop than usual when the woman came in, so it was easier for the detective to watch her. The woman first bought a few small articles. After a little time, she chose one of the most expensive dresses in the shop and handed it to an assistant who wrapped it up for her as quickly as possible.
一个星期一，那儿有更少的人在这商店比平时，当这个女人进入的时候。所以，侦探更容易盯着她（这件事儿是更容易的，什么事儿呢？对侦探来说，去盯着她）。这个女人先买了一些小articles. 在一点儿时间之后，她选择了最昂贵的衣服中的一件 在这个商店里，然后递它给一个店员，她wrap它up为她，尽可能地快。
One Monday, there were fewer people in the shop than usual when this woman came in. So, it was easier for the detective to watch her. The woman first bought a few small articles. After a little time, she chose one of the most expensive dresses in the shop and handed it to an assistant, who wrapped it up for her as soon as possible
Then the woman simply took the parcel and walked out of the shop without paying. When she was arrested, the detective found out that the shop assistant was her daughter. The girl 'gave' her mother a free dress once a week!
然后这个女人仅仅拿着这个parcel然后走出这个商店没有付钱。当她被arrest的时候，这个detective发现这个店员是她的女儿。这个女孩儿“给”她妈妈一件免费的衣服每周一次。
Then the woman simply took the parcel and walked out of the shop without paying. When she was arrested, the detective found out that the shop assistant was her daughter. The girl gave her mother a free dress once a week
Then the woman simply took the parcel and walked out of the shop without paying. When she was arrested，the detective found the shop assistant was her daughter. The girl “gave”her mother a free dress once a week.
Then the woman simple took this parcel and walked out of the shop without paying. When she was arrested, the detective found the shop assistant was her daughter. The girl ‘gave’ her mom a free dress once a week.
One Monday, there were fewer people in the shop than usual when the woman came in, so it was easier for the detective to watch her. The woman first bought a few small articles. After a little time, she chose one of the most expensive dresses in the shop and handed it to an assistant who wrapped it up for her as quickly as possible.
Then the woman simply took the parcel and walked out of the shop without paying. When she was arrested, the detective found out that the shop assistant was her daughter. The girl 'gave' her mother a free dress once a week!

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