2024届高考英语作文复习专项浙江新阵地联盟2024届第二次联考读后续写--一个超级忙碌的夏天讲义素材

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2024届高考英语作文复习专项浙江新阵地联盟2024届第二次联考读后续写--一个超级忙碌的夏天讲义素材

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I knew I would have a beyond-busy summer. I would be a junior teacher for the Little Dragons Karate (空手道)Camp. And I had to do summer swim team. And Ollie and I already had two customers for our dog-walking business."
You might be biting off more than you can chew,"my mom said with a warning glimpse when I talked to her about it and announced,"I want to do everything!"
"Don't worry."I grinned."I have strong teeth!
"My mom smiled back."In this case, it's your organizational skills, not your teeth, that need to be strong."I didn't take it to my heart.
And the first week really was no problem. My friend Ollie was out of town and karate camp hadn't started, so my swim stuff was all I needed to worry about. The next week was great too. I swam, and a Little Dragon at karate camp told me I was his favorite teacher ever!
I did learn, though, that staying organized with two activities was harder. My backpack was already stuffed with a towel and swim things, so I needed another for my karate clothing. Riding my bike from karate camp to the pool with two backpacks was a challenge. But I still had it under control until Ollie got back.
"We'relate getting our business together!" he said."We'll have to spend every spare minute preparing.”
"But I don't have any spare minutes!"I said.
"Did you forget we agreed to walk Alfie every Saturday And Muffin on Tuesdays at 4:00 "Ollie asked. I couldn't let Ollie down, so I took out a third backpack and filled it with dog toys, treats, and plastic bags. I thought I was all set.
But I was wrong! It didn't take long for my dog-walking stuff and karate stuff and swim stuff to get all mixed up, forgotten, or lost. One day, I forgot my karate backpack and had to borrow Emma's extra outfit, which was too tight. The next day, I remembered my karate stuff but forgot my swimsuit, so I had to help out in the snack shop and stay out of the pool all afternoon. And another time, when I reached into my dog-walking pack for plastic bags, all I could find were swim goggles (护目镜) and sunscreen.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:Worse still, I had to keep track of all the special times.
Paragraph 2:Luckily, I, with my parents, came up with a solution to get organized.
[参考范文一]
Worse still, I had to keep track of all the special times. I had to arrive early for the karate test on Monday. I had to stay later to help with swimming pool cleanup on Friday. I had to pick up Alfie 15minutes early on Saturday. I had to walk Muffin on Tuesday afternoons. I ran around like a chicken with its head off, on the verge of breaking down. It was then that I recalled my mother's warning.Although embarrassed beyond words, I worked up the nerve and walked to my parents, making a clean breast of my trouble and calling for backup.
Luckily, l, with my parents, came up with a solution to get organized. We started with a calendar,on which I marked all my tasks with a red marker. Then we found three bags respectively used for my dog-walking stuff, karate stuff and swim stuff. We also put a whiteboard in the kitchen to make sure that I took the right bag on the appropriate day. From then on, my beyond-busy summer was smooth sailing, during which I learned a valuable lesson: If you tried to use the dog's rope as your karate belt, it's time to improve your organizational skill.
词句赏析
l.Iran around like a chicken with its head off, on the verge of breaking down, 我像只无头苍蝇-样跑来跑去,快崩溃了。这里注意 like a chicken with its head off这里不能直译为鸡,而是用来形容某人乱窜乱窜,通常处于恐慌或困惑的状态。这个短语来源于鸡被砍头后的行为。它们的身体可以继续以一种疯狂的方式移动一会儿,即使已经死亡。on the verge of处于某种即将发生或非常可能发生的状态,break down 众多意思中有一个意思是崩溃。
2.Although embarrassed beyond words, I worked up the nerve and walked to my parents, making a clean breast of my trouble and calling for backup.尽管尴尬得说不出话来,我还是鼓起勇气走到父母面前,把我的烦恼一五一四地说出来,并请求支援。积累一下鼓起勇气 work up the nerve,近义表达还有 summon up/pluck up/gather up/screw up the courage; nerve oneself等等。
make a clean breast of坦白承认。
[参考范文二]
Worse still, I had to keep track of all the special times. I had to arrive early for the karate test on Monday. I had to stay later to help with swimming pool cleanup on Friday. I had to pick up Alfie 15minutes early on Saturday. My life was a catastrophe. Admitting I was wrong was never my favorite thing, but I knew I had to make a change.“Help!”I flopped onto the couch at the end of a particularly discombobulated day and cried,“Everything's everywhere and nothing's anywhere and I keep being late and messing up.”In this way I succeeded in catching my parents' eyes.
Luckily, l, with my parents, came up with a solution to get organized. We started with a daily pocket calendar that had room to write all my tasks. Then we found three drawstring bags that fitted into one big backpack, so I could keep my stuff separated but still in one place. We also put a white board in the kitchen with brightly colored reminders and a checklist to make sure I had everything I needed. From then on, my beyond-busy summer was smooth sailing. I learned an important lesson: If you tried to use the dog's rope as your karate belt, it's time to improve your organizational skill
词赏析
I flopped onto the couch at the end of a particularly discombobulated day and cried,“Everything's everywhere and nothings anywhere and I keep being late and messing up.”在一个特别混乱的-天结束时,我扑通一声躺在沙发上,哭着说:“到处都是东西,什么都没有,我总是迟到,搞砸事情。”
积累动词: flop v(因疲惫而)猛然坐下 eg.Exhausted,he flopped down into a chair他筋疲力尽,一屁股坐到椅子上。discombobulate v.使混乱。
2.From then on,my beyond-busy summer was smooth sailing.从那时开始,我原本非常忙碌的夏季变得非常顺利。smooth sailing 是一个常用的英语表达,意味着事情进行得非常顺利,没有遇到大的困难或障碍。
[巩固检测]
1.警示的一瞥
2.装满
3.组织能力
4.保持有条理
5.伸手进入
6.混淆;搞乱
句子翻译:
我的背包里已经塞满了毛巾和游泳用品,所以我还需要一个背包来装空手道服装
仿写:捐款箱里装满了衣服和玩具,准备送到当地的慈善机构去帮助那些需要帮助的人。(be stuffed with)
参考答案:
The donation box is stuffed with clothes and toys, ready to be sent to the local charity to help those in need.
参考范文三:
续写第一段:
Worse still, I had to keep track of all the special times. Keeping track of who needed to be where and when was becoming a blur. For instance, one Sunday(Saturday), I arrived to walk Alfie, only to discover that his owners were already home and had already taken him out for his walk. Then on Tuesday, I completely forgot about walking Muffin, who was left eagerly anticipating her customary afternoon walk. With each passing day, it became increasingly clear that my mom's advice had been correct. I was biting off more than I could chew, and my organizational skills were definitely not as strong as my teeth.
续写第二段:
Luckily, I, with my parents, came up with a solution to get organized. They assisted me in setting up a color-coded schedule on a daily planner APP, enabling me to access and review my schedule anytime, anywhere. Each activity had a different color: blue for swimming, black for karate, and brown for dog-walking. Now, I could see at a glance what I had to do each day, and what I needed to pack. Furthermore, I improved my packing system by maintaining distinct bags for each activity, each one marked clearly with labels for easy identification. While it wasn't flawless, it was indeed a beginning, and it significantly aided in managing my bustling summer schedule with less stress and more success.

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