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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
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本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了桑德罗父亲的投资失败了，全家破产，他的父母也被送进了监狱。不到16岁的时候，桑德罗被迫去英格兰东北部的纽卡斯尔和他的叔叔劳伦斯住在一起。桑德罗在新环境中遇到了很多困难。最重要的是，他没有朋友。初夏的一个傍晚，当桑德罗像往常一样独自放学回家时，体育老师埃迪从后面叫住了他。埃迪老师建议桑德罗参加学校下个月要举行的游泳比赛，虽然桑德罗游的很慢，但是在老师的建议下，他打算尝试一下。
Sandro was born and grew up in Milan. Until he was 13 years old, he never wanted to leave his hometown. But last year, Sandro’s father’s investment went bad, wiping out the family and sending his parents to prison. As a teenager under 16 years old, Sandro was forced to go to Newcastle in the northeast of England to stay with his uncle Lawrence.
Sandro had a lot of difficulties in the new environment. He didn’t like the food in England. Nobody could forecast the weather in Newcastle. He had to start learning the second foreign language in his new school. Pocket money was not enough as usual. Almost every subject was a challenge for him. Most importantly, he had no friends. It seemed nobody knew him and he knew nobody in the school.
On an early summer evening, when Sandro was going home alone from school as usual, a man called him from behind. Sandro turned around and saw Eddie, his PE teacher, standing in front of him.
“You know, the school will have a swimming competition next month. There will be all kinds of races. Will you participate ” Eddie asked.
Sandro took a look at Eddie with doubt and answered, “You sure Me No. I won’t. I can swim, but I’m slower than a snail.”
Eddie smiled and then said, “Yes. Indeed. You are, in breaststroke(蛙泳), in backstroke, and in butterfly, but not in freestyle. So join the freestyle race! 200-meter freestyle is the game suitable for you.”
Sandro was speechless at that moment. He had never known someone in the school was observing him and caring for him.
“I don’t think I can win anything,” Sandro was still a little puzzled.
“But you may get more recognition and consequently you can make some friends. That is more important than prizes,” Eddie responded immediately.
Having hesitated for a while, Sandro agreed to have a try.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Every afternoon for the next month, Sandro trained really hard.
Sandro dived into the pool confidently like other competitors.
【答案】One possible version:
Every afternoon for the next month, Sandro trained really hard. Starting position, starting dive, turning, pushing off, touching the timing pad, all details, he practiced them over and over. Whenever he was exhausted, Eddie’s words echoed in his mind and supplied extra energy to him. “Maybe I can’t be the champion of the game, but I can be the champion for myself.” He spoke in a low mumble to himself after he finished the last training. Finally, the day of competition arrived. With the sound of the starting gun piercing through the air, the race began as expected.
在接下来的一个月里，每天下午，桑德罗都非常努力地训练。起始位置，开始俯冲，转弯，推开，触摸计时板，所有的细节，他一遍又一遍地练习。每当他筋疲力尽时，艾迪的话就会在他的脑海中回荡，并为他提供额外的能量。“也许我不能成为比赛的冠军，但我可以成为自己的冠军。他在完成最后一次训练后低声喃喃自语。终于，比赛的日子到了。随着发令枪刺破空气的声音，比赛如期开始。
Sandro dived into the pool confidently like other competitors. He swam as freely as a fish. 150 meters covered, he was left behind by 2 competitors. In the last 50 meters, Sandro swam magnificently, with his arms pushing forward fast, his legs hitting the water hard. Finally, the championship was still out of his reach. When the result was announced that Sandro won third place, however, other players congratulated him, the audience in the stadium bursting into thunderous applause. As teacher Eddie said, he won the recognition and respect from others with his effort.
桑德罗像其他竞争对手一样自信地潜入游泳池。他像鱼一样自由地游动。150米，他被2名参赛者甩在后面。在最后50米，桑德罗游得很精彩，他的手臂快速向前推，双腿重重地撞在水面上。最后，冠军还是遥不可及。然而，当桑德罗获得第三名的结果宣布时，其他球员向他表示祝贺，体育场内的观众爆发出雷鸣般的掌声。正如艾迪老师所说，他用自己的努力赢得了别人的认可和尊重。
【详解】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在接下来的一个月里，桑德罗每天下午都刻苦训练。”可知，第一段可描写桑德罗刻苦训练的过程，虽然很辛苦，但是没有放弃。
②由第二段首句内容“桑德罗像其他选手一样自信地跳入游泳池。”可知，第二段可描写桑德罗参加比赛的过程，全力以赴，虽然没能赢得冠军，但是他的努力赢得了别人的认可和尊重。
2. 续写线索：刻苦训练——筋疲力尽——仍不放弃——参加比赛——全力以赴——比赛结果——赢得了别人的认可和尊重
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①回响：echo/resound
②完成：finish/complete
③到来：arrive/come
④赢得：win/gain/get
情绪类
①认可：
recognition/acknowledgment/identification
②尊重：respect/esteem/admiration
【点睛】
[高分句型1] With the sound of the starting gun piercing through the air, the race began as expected. (运用了with复合结构)
[高分句型2] He spoke in a low mumble to himself after he finished the last training.
(运用了after引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型3] When the result was announced that Sandro won third place, however, other players congratulated him, the audience in the stadium bursting into thunderous applause.
(运用了when引导的时间状语从句、that引导的同位语从句、独立主格结构)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ten-year-old Sami loved to visit his grandfather's house. The house was near the beautiful blue sea. At the seaside stood thick and tall palm trees with green coconuts hanging from them. When the coconuts fell down, Sami would break them open and drink the coconut water. It was always great fun to spend the holidays at Grandpa's place.
This winter vacation,Sami was surprised when he came to his grandfather's village. There were hardly any trees left. He saw houses built near the sea. People had cut down many palm trees and there was hardly any greenery left.
Grandpa's house was different. He never allowed his trees to be cut. He hugged each palm tree in his courtyard. He also named the two big trees near the front door-one was Petu, and the other Betu. They were tall and green and gave the sweetest, juiciest coconuts,
One night, Sami was awakened by a strange sound. He could not sleep. He tossed and turned(辗转反侧)in bed. Suddenly, the ground shook as if the earth was splitting. He sat up straight and then ran to Grandpa. He clung to(抓紧)his grandpa tightly, Grandpa cried out，”It's an earthquake!” They ran outside the house.
Suddenly, there was a loud sound; the earth was not splitting but the sea was roaring. People were shouting, screaming and cryiny, “The sea is rising!” The villagers started running away from the beach. Sami watched with fear.
The waves were rising higher and higher. Sami thought,”How big the waves are!” He went into the house again and saw water coming in from all sides. He was scared.
Sami remembered his mother telling him long ago, “You must always get out of the house if the floods come too near.” He ran outside the house with Grandpa. But the water came surging(汹涌) in.
Waves about twelve meters high came rushing in, drowning everything. Water was all around and everywhere.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Grandpa held Sami's hand tightly but a huge wave separated them.Now they were up in Petu.
【参考范文】
Grandpa held Sami's hand tightly but a huge wave separated them. Grandpa fought the waves and tried to catch Sami, but failed. Sami was drifted away! Sami struggled to keep his head above the water. The water pushed him ahead. Fortunately, he caught Petu in Grandpa's courtyard. He climbed up it and saw his Grandpa struggling near Betu in the violent water. He screamed out to Grandpa to encourage him to approach Betu, but the water was so wild that it was difficult for the old man to reach Betu. An idea occurred to Sami. He quickly broke off a branch of Petu and stuck it to Grandpa. With the help of the branch, he pulled Grandpa up the tree.
爷爷紧紧握住萨米的手，但巨大的波浪将他们分开。爷爷奋力搏击海浪，试图抓住萨米，但失败了。萨米被冲散了！萨米努力将头保持在水面上。水推着他向前走。幸运的是，他在爷爷的院子里抓住了佩图。他爬了上去，看到爷爷在贝图附近的汹涌的水中挣扎。他向爷爷尖叫，鼓励他接近贝图，但水势如此汹涌，老人很难接近贝图。萨米想到了一个主意。他赶紧折下一根佩图树枝，贴在爷爷身上。他借助树枝，把爷爷拉上了树。
Now they were up in Petu. Another wave came with terrifying speed and force, but they were safe thanks to the tree. They hugged each other, tears welling up in their eyes. They stayed there comforting each other, waiting the disaster to go away. After what seemed a long time, it was calm. Both Grandpa and Sami came down the tree and they hugged the tree with tears of gratitude. But for Petu, there would not be alive now. They knew Petu and Betu were part of their life.
现在他们已经到了佩图。又一波浪潮以可怕的速度和力量袭来，但多亏了这棵树，他们才安全了。他们互相拥抱，泪水在眼眶里打转。他们待在那里互相安慰，等待灾难过去。似乎过了很久之后，一切都平静了。爷爷和萨米都从树上下来，他们怀着感激的泪水拥抱着树。要不是佩图，现在就不会有人活着了。他们知道佩图和贝图是他们生活的一部分。
Living in the shadow of my two elder sisters at college who already had their lives planned out since they were little, I was always undecided about everything.
生活在我大学时的两个姐姐的阴影下，她们从小就已经计划好了自己的生活，我总是对一切都犹豫不决。
As a teenager, I was fickle（反复无常的). I would like one thing for a week and then hate it the next.
十几岁的时候，我是反复无常的。我想要一件事一周，然后就讨厌它。
But I was constantly searching for the beginning of the rainbow. Changing my dream from a vet to an astronaut, I thought there were various options available to me.
但我一直在寻找彩虹的起点。将我的梦想从兽医转变为宇航员，我认为有多种选择。
However, my parents would shake their heads and repeatedly asked me such questions as,“ why can’t you be more like your sisters What are you going to do with your life Aren’t you interested in anything at all ”
然而，我的父母会摇摇头，反复问我这样的问题：“你为什么不能更像你的姐妹？你打算用你的生活做什么？你对什么都不感兴趣吗？
After a couple of shrugs（耸肩）, my parents usually stopped talking. I was not sure if they gave up or anticipated my dull reactions. I often responded,“ I couldn’t answer all of your questions now. ”
耸了几下耸肩后，父母通常不再说话。我不确定他们是否放弃了或预料到了我迟钝的反应。我经常回答：“我现在无法回答你所有的问题。”
Actually, my parents just had high expectations that never seemed to be fulfilled. Plus, like other parents, they just wanted to give the best to me and expected me to achieve success. The arguments with my parents seemed childish. One day, my mother made her thoughts clear,“ your grades aren’t high enough. No schools are going to want you, dear. We didn’t pay so much money for nothing. ” Hesitating for a while, I said,“ No matter what you say, I believe I will enter a good college. ”still, I let my emotions control myself.
事实上，我的父母只是对我抱有很高的期望，但似乎从未实现。另外，像其他父母一样，他们只是想给我最好的，并期望我取得成功。我和父母的争吵看起来也很幼稚。有一天，妈妈明确表示了自己的想法：“你的成绩还不够高。”亲爱的，没有学校会想要你。我们付出这么多钱并不是白费的。” 犹豫了一下，我说：“不管你怎么说，我相信我会考上一所好大学。“尽管如此，我还是控制住了自己的情绪。
Certainly, I had never planned not to go to college. After another debate with my mom, I decided to make a change. No longer would I sit back and let my parents mistake me for a bad boy. It was time to take action.
当然，我从来没有打算不上大学。在和妈妈再一次争论之后，我决定做出改变。我不会再袖手旁观，让父母误认为我是坏孩子。是时候采取行动了。
I knew it was a crucial year at high school. Releasing my feelings, I began to collect all the knowledge I had learned and review it with all my heart. I didn’t argue with my parents anymore, but instead turned to my sisters for help and tried my best to study. Finally, I took the national college entrance examination with ease and confidence.
我知道这是高中的关键一年。缓解了自己的心绪，我开始整理自己所学的知识，用心复习。我不再和父母争论，而是向姐姐们求助，努力学习。终于，我轻松自信地参加了全国高考。
A few days later, I received a call from my school, saying my college acceptance letter had arrived. Then I hurried to the school with my parents. It was beyond my wildest dream till that moment. As a matter of fact, I doubted then whether I was in the dream. I normally dreaded the long walk to the school. But that day was different. There seemed to be something in the air, an electric current, connecting my body to the letter. When I got it, I was really afraid that the envelop was empty. But there was a white package inside. With my heart beating faster,I wondered whether it could really be what was expected.
My parents excitedly said behind me,"Well, open the envelop!"What I grabbed in my hands contained everything I had been waiting for. Slowly, I opened it and a flash of CONGRATULATIONS in bold bright letters caught my eyes. A feeling of happiness and relief rushed through my body. I was holding my first offer from a good college. Needless to say, it wouldn't have been possible if it weren't for the countless hours of studying and writing, but most importantly, my parents' constant reminders, in fact, were the best form of education for me."Thank you, Mom and Dad!"I said gratefully.

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