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The event ( that stands out in Tom’s memory ) happened one morning when Tom was only ten years old.He was at home with his elder sister Jane.Tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices. At first , he thought nothing of it [ since customers in the motorcycle shop directly below their flat often became loud], but he soon realized this time it was different.
“Quick ! Quick ! Remove the motorcycles from the shop.” Someone shouted. Then a thick burning smell filled the air. When Tom opened the front door of their flat to investigate ,(a thick cloud of ) smoke greeted him. The motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.
Jane , (who had been playing the violin in her room) , hurried to the living room. They rushed out of the door and along the corridor (走廊) through the smoke.
They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Jane suddenly stopped in her track. She turned around and headed back the way they came. Tom had no idea (what she was doing, but he followed her.)
Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s ( who lived next door to them), (who they /called/ Makcik.) Jane began banging on Makcik’s door, but got no answer. As the smoke thickened around them , Tom could see many of their neighbours---some still in their pajamas(睡衣)---running for safety. The thought of fear crossed his mind.
“She would have run for safety like everyone else !” Tom cried. However , Jane refused to give up. “I know Makcik’s still inside.” She said she was familiar with Makcik’s daily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping. She pounded against the door. “Go downstairs. Go now ! Go !”
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文本解读
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Character
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When
who
where
one morning
Tom & Jane(Tom’s elder sister)
Narrator
叙事者
“third person” perspective
第三人称视角
Tense : ________________
Simple past tense
Mom
文本解读
Setting
Character
a flat building in flames
Character analysis
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文本解读
...Jane suddenly stopped in her track. She turned around and headed back the way they came. Tom had no idea (what she was doing, but he followed her.)
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...... Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s ( who lived next door to them), (who they /called/ Makcik.).....
... she was familiar with Makcik’s daily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping. She pounded against the door. ...
Work out the conflict or the climax
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Climax /
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.The motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.
Remember to solve the conflict.
.Tom was at home with his elder sister Jane.He was doing his homework when he heard raised voices.
文本解读+创设情境
As the smoke thickened around them , Tom could see many of their neighbours---some still in their pajamas(睡衣)---running for safety. The thought of fear crossed his mind.
Plot
A. an emergency.
B. a fire.
C .Thoughtfulness and kindness in a fire emergency.
...Jane suddenly stopped in her track. She turned around and headed back the way they came..
....Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s ( who lived next door to them), (who they /called/ Makcik.) .
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Theme
【Paragraph 1】 Tom noticed the flame (火焰) was reaching up
根据第1自然段给出的首句，可以判定：火情危急，已由一楼冲至他们所居住楼层。
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Analyze the 2 given sentences and the original passage
Add some details by raising questions
【Paragraph 2】 .

Analyze the 2 given sentences and the original passage
Add some details by raising questions
[Luckily] , some neighbors (passing by) stopped and offered help..
根据第2自然段首句 可以判定：她们姐弟俩一直没下楼，所以，路过的邻居看到他们的举动后才会停下来并提供帮助。那么，他们在做什么呢？。可以朝着这个方向发散思维，构思情节，方能达到完美收尾效果。
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通过细节描写呈现出情节的________
跌宕起伏
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Use the descriptive techniques to enrich the details
创设情节
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【Paragraph 1】
Tom noticed the flame (火焰) was reaching up.[Frozen with fear] , he stood rooted to the spot. He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Jane’s hand tightly. Both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still ,[though they were probably there for only two or three minutes.] Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible.Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She kept pounding against the door. Tom burst out crying.
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【Paragraph 2】
[Luckily] , some neighbors (passing by) stopped and offered help.A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Jane’s mind. She told them Ms. Makcik must be still in the room. They forced the door open [with all their might].[ Sure enough] , Makcik was lying in bed , unconscious. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital , (where she finally came to herself. )People in the neighbourhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom were very happy.
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